I’m sad I didn’t enjoy it as much as I thought I would. Llywelyn is an amazing writer, but something just didn’t click for me with this one. It’s written for children, and naturally the writing is simplified, but that’s not what bothered me necessarily. It’s just that, somehow, I failed to connect with the characters in the way that I expected. It sits in a weird place: too simple for adults, too complicated for children. I’ve always loved history, but when de Clare enters his marriage and widowhood, it fails to touch a young person, I think.
Speaking of widowhood, it’s a little strange to me that there is a first wife of Richard and that the children of Aoife are attributed to her. I would’ve liked it better if it stuck to history: Aoife was his only wife and they had two children together, Isabel and Gilbert. Instead, Aoife has “sons,” when a much interesting and true story is that of her daughter Isabel de Clare who married William Marshal and has a beautiful wooden statue in Wexford. Instead, in the novel she is misplaced, forgotten, an unimportant daughter from another marriage, left in England because Richard doesn’t care that much for his children.
I also thought Aoife’s character was less developed than that of Richard. It was a little weird and confusing because on one hand, Aoife is a young girl who receives a little more freedom to play, she is given an education and more free will, and she is written to be of equal importance to Richard as a child, but then we switched to his POV and he says that women belong to men, his sister belongs to him, and he will marry her off at one point and she will belong to her husband. I suppose it is pretty challenging to write a book like this for children that doesn’t completely twist their ideas about life, while still being historically accurate. A difference is made between the “Irish way,” meaning to value women in society and give them a choice, and the “Norman way,” where Richard associates Aoife with a cow. I suppose a different approach to this would’ve been better, maybe a little emphasis on Richard changing his mind?
I wish Morgan Llywelyn wrote a book about them for adults. I would’ve loved to see if she’d approached certain themes differently and how.