1.5 stars
The first glaring problem is Series Side Character Overload Syndrome (is that what it's called? I'm spacing on the phrase), there are 8-10 side characters that are basically side mains.
This is the first MM book in an MF series, and the first third of the book is confusing because every side character is given ample page time, and I **do not know who they are.**
My next problem was with the writing style and maturity levels of the nearly 30-year-old physiotherapist who is intelligent and successful yet turns into a bumbling mess when around one particular baseball player.
Why would you take a job with a pro baseball team if you can't speak or act professionally around the players? It made absolutely no sense to me. The first baseman is over 30 and was also written in a juvenile way, in fact (and I feel comfortable saying this since I just read four pro-baseball books before this one) everyone in the book was immature and silly. Pranks, fighting, umm these men are aiming for the World Series? Yeah, no.
The book starts 10 weeks before the World Series, and everyone is acting like they wouldn't even be on a Little League team.
Then in the third act, we get a totally random Mafia subplot, LOL. The baseball player's brother is a mob guy and the player used to dispose of dead bodies or something?! Just what? That wasn't enough Drama, so the other MC had to reveal a sudden explanation for his anxiety or isolation, spoiler >!a friend died in a car crash, driving because he was too high to drive, and the guilt made him antisocial!< which not only made zero sense, it did nothing to further the "plot" or the romance.
Sadly, all the tags and tropes sound great, but the dirty talk was so awkward and unnatural, and the sex scenes were uncomfortable, I wanted to see what happened and pushed until the end. And then my least favorite sports romance thing happened, after having very little on-page game time, of course, a miraculous win.
It's possible this would be good for someone who doesn't want sports in their sports romance and is going to read the other books first...
MC Names: Elliott & Matthew
Tags: Sports romance, baseball, injured player/physical therapist,
part of an MF series, series side character overload, anxiety, mafia, past trauma, praise, degradation, mutual pining, secret crush, found family, FWB "sex training/exploration", kink-exploration, phone sex, audio sex recordings, awkward flustered MC