MINISERIES PREMIERE The year is 2450. Earth is dying. The human species has gone down two different evolutionary paths. One used cybernetic augmentation to adapt to space travel. The humans left behind used genetic manipulation to adapt to earth’s worsening climate. For earth to survive, civilizations need to collide.
Dude – drop us INTO the action. Reveal the world and its history through your storytelling. Go read some Remender, the current master of the technique (at least in the comics medium).
It's an interesting premise but there's way too much exposition to start with, and ongoing there is too much dialogue or too much poorly written dialogue. It doesn't flow or seem Iike natural conversation. Art changes from fine to okay.