A Memory of Song by Scott Palmer is well-written and structured, with compelling protagonists; a slick, fast-paced plot; a visceral, uncompromisingly gritty tone; and delightfully immersive worldbuilding.
The cultural and tribal identities of its wider cast are recognisable and distinct – which is important to me as a fantasy reader – and the world has a lived-in feel. It is something supported by the fact that every major character – every moving piece – is shown to have agency and motivations of their own. There is a verisimilitude that comes with the sense that there are lots of other stories to tell in this world, and that these other characters, as well as the world’s deeper history and lore, do not exist solely to facilitate the mechanical demands of this particular story’s plot.
In starting his story with his setting in the grip of a magically-induced, slow-death apocalypse, Palmer creates and sustains a grimdark tone throughout, evoking the cruel and unrelenting wilderness of a dying world. The gritty, unhygienic horror of prolonging one’s meagre existence in such a context comes through very well, and the ambience of malaise that this creates in one’s mind as one reads is both grimly enthralling and immersive.
If I were to nit-pick, I personally believe that whenever a fantasy author blights a wondrous magical setting and essentially makes their story a post-apocalyptic one, the author should aspire not only to evoke a sense of horror at the desolate wasteland the characters currently inhabit, but also, in equal measure, sustain a sense of their loss, and how they mourn the failing wonder of their dying world. This shouldn’t need to feel like a trade-off, in fact the two things can and should be mutually supporting. After all, for me, the attachment and deep love characters have for the wondrousness of their fantastical setting is an important itch that fantasy scratches: it restores our own sense of magical wonder for blessings in our real-world environment that can otherwise be taken for granted.
In this regard, Palmer clearly has made an effort, and occasionally with great success. In particular, Wulfee’s breakdown upon beholding a symbolic flower that stubbornly survived the drought struck an emotional chord with me. However overall, I didn’t get an impression that most characters felt a strong reverence for the wondrous world they inhabited, or a sense of their gratitude for how it used to sustain them - even as they quested to restore it to its former glory! Instead, these considerations were almost always subordinated to something else – the value of saving the world, even among those characters who cared to save it, often seemed limited to the satisfaction of immediate physiological needs (hunger, exhaustion, etc.), and Palmer’s priority in description was usually to heighten the aforementioned tone of horror at the suffering that takes place in the apocalypse, rather than evoking a sense of tragedy and nostalgia for what has been lost. It is emblematic of this that Maggie, the Arwen-esque love interest who most signified the beauty of the old world, and who was thus perhaps best-placed to mourn its death, was rendered through her sickness incapable of articulate speech – and thus, I felt, her voice was largely side-lined despite appearing in several flashbacks - for the majority of the novel. Perhaps this is all simply a matter of highly idiosyncratic personal taste, but I felt it was a shame that Palmer did not spotlight more often and more prominently the reverence the people of Ardura had for their homeland, before it died. This was, for me, the only slightly misshapen puzzle piece in what was otherwise a very strong work of genre fiction: an exciting story that had characters with real heart, and which I enjoyed a lot regardless.
Overall, this is a very solid novel with lots to praise. It gripped me, sustained my interest, and I remain interested in what comes next in terms of sequels. I heartily encourage any fantasy fan to try it out, and especially if you are a fan of grimdark or post-apocalyptic fantasy.