Reading method: Advanced Kindle copy
Stars: 3/5
Pacing
To be completely honest, some things that were necessary happened off page or were brushed over without much more explanation to it, so the book felt rushed. And there was nothing driving the plot. It felt kind of like this: they don't like each other for whatever reason, but they're attracted to each other, but now they like each other, then they date, then they get some pushback but not much, then something causes Rilla to be anxious, but it's okay because it gets resolved partially off page, then the end.
Spice
It was okay. I found myself skipping over parts and not really being too involved in that aspect because it felt forced and sort of awkward.
Thoughts
First off, this is my second read from K.M. Gillis. I read part of Running Into You (which is the first book in this interconnected series), and I liked it. Which is why I was really excited to be given the chance to read this ahead of time.
Now, because I read part of that book, I was introduced to Rilla Pine from Betty's perspective, and I immediately did not mesh with her. I had high hopes that she would improve during her book (The Write Off), but I fear it did not happen.
Right off the bat, Rilla is introduced to be stubborn and rude. I assume it is supposed to show her as strong, but it just makes her seem petty and childish. She is supposed to be meeting with her editor (whom she vehemently talks crap about), but she is almost purposely making herself late. And when she gets there she outright refuses to accept the edits he's given her. It's unprofessional and does not make me root for her at all. I was hoping she would have some professional consequence so that she got her stuff together instead of fighting Logan over the stupidest of things. But she doesn't and we are left with a FMC who has anxiety over her book not doing well but refuses to take aid from the people who have more industry experience than she does.
Logan himself was fine. He was such a softie, and I did like him a lot, but I think the quickness with which he fell for Rilla despite her having little to no character growth was the most fantastical part about this. That, and the fact that it was technically fraternization because he is her editor. Josh (Rilla's brother) made a decent point that it was weird and unprofessional. nothing else he said about her being a f*ck up was correct though like come on dude I really loved that Logan was involved with helping his sister-in-law and his niece and nephew because it let me connect with him more. It was kind of funny to see him throw his clout as an editor around at the end because it kind of matched his personality but kind of didn't, which was really weird but also added a bit more depth.
Overall, there was very little pushback or problem in the plot. Yes the last 20% touched on something, but it wasn't really driving the plot. All the issues that seemed to crop up were not worth being brought up, and I felt nothing towards Rilla and Logan because their relationship was such a 180 from the beginning. There was no relationship development or spark that caused Rilla to shift her view of him. It basically happened off the page and lead to some disconnect between reader and book.
I was hoping for something I would reach for again because the idea was fun, but I definitely found myself skipping parts. It could have used a little more time with plot development because everything felt surface level, no actual depth or growth.
In other news, I am taking a break from romance books because I feel romanced out. Until next book friends.