TO ADDRESS THE COMMENTS: I'm just going to add this here rather than responding to them separately for the sake of being concise.
My entire point of the review below was this: There are TOO many similarities. As I stated below, I'm definitely not usually someone to nitpick parallels between books, because truly unique ideas don't exist and that's okay. However, what I have laid out below, the sheer AMOUNT of near identical plot points, definitely FAR exceed that. This is also the one and only time I've ever compared two books side by side, because they were THAT much alike. You're entitled to disagree, of course, but it's not like I made these parallels up. This isn't my opinion, this is beat for beat written in print. I invite you to check the parallels yourself if you're curious.
Also, yes, the name "Nepheli" might be of Greek origin. I'm not fighting anyone on that. However, two things can be true at the same time. It doesn't change the fact that "Evangeline" and "Nepheli" are directly reminiscent of each other, even more so if you put it in context with all the other 3475 parallels I meticulously laid out below.
If you enjoyed this book, I am happy for you. I do not wish to take that away from you, nor should you let my review affect that. I didn't enjoy it, because, for me, the start of it read like a direct copy of a book I have already read, and I couldn't look past it. And that's okay.
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The book starts in a nearly identical way to Once Upon A Broken Heart, by Stephanie Garber. Both books open with a chapter from the perspective of a curiosity shop, owned by the soft girl main character, trying to warn said main character that something bad is going to happen. There’s even a line where the shop angrily jingles its entry bell as a warning, which also happens in Once Upon A Broken Heart (henceforth abbreviated as “OUABH”.). And in both books, the soft girl main character ignores the shop’s warnings because they’re both starry-eyed, incurable optimists.
(I will be mentioning details from the OUABH trilogy in this review, but I will stick to non-spoilery information just in case.)
At first I thought I’m making a big deal over nothing, but the longer I thought about it, the more alarming similarities I found. For example, OUABH’s main character’s name is Evangeline. This book’s FMC’s name is Nepheli. Evangeline. Nepheli. Evangelism. Nephilim. “Evangeline” even has “angel” in the name, drawing an easy connection to “Nepheli”. So, not only do both girls have odd and unnatural hair colors, the same exact character disposition, and a magical, sentient shop of curiosities, but they also both have very closely related names.
Also, this book series is titled “Tales from the Faraway North” and in OUABH, there is a plot significant region called “The Magnificent North” where magical stories (dare I say tales) hail from. The author didn’t even pick a different cardinal direction.
But that’s not all. Nepheli has a deck of magical oracle cards and ends up picking the one titled “The Stranger”. The card then proceeds to warn her that The Stranger will come into her shop that day, and that she shouldn’t entrust him with her heart. And if that’s not enough, not TWO paragraphs later, Nepheli reads in the newspaper how the, I quote, ”Prince of Broken Hearts” is soon to return. Anyone who has read the beginning of OUABH knows that newspaper clippings are a big part of the story, and Evangeline first finds Jacks through a newspaper article in the first place. Jacks, a Fate, who used to be trapped in the oracle card Prince of Hearts, titled so because he notoriously breaks girl’s hearts.
It will surprise absolutely no one when I say that this book’s love interest has a practically identical personality to Jacks, if Jacks wasn’t limited to a PG 13 rating. What’s worse is that his name is Apollo. Which, yes, is the name of yet another character from OUABH. And if you’ve read A Curse for True Love, then you know how ironic that name choice is.
There’s more! This book also has secret, magical doors, that lead different places than they realistically should, just like in Howl’s Moving Castle. Even including the little dial at the door.
The street on which Nepheli’s shop is located on is called “Diagonia Alley”. DIAGONIA ALLEY. Come on, seriously? Even Harry Potter wasn’t safe.
I picked all of that out from chapter 1 ALONE. If there are any further similarities, I don’t know them, because I DNF’d this book after the first chapter.
I think inspiration is fine and I don’t normally pick out similarities from book to book. I’m definitely not one of those people who preach that every book has to have a unique, never-been-done-before story. But there’s a difference between being “inspired” and directly copying pieces of a different book. Renaming them doesn’t change that. That’s like writing a book whose main love interest is named Roar Penwyvern, and he has a wandering townhouse and a little, talking radiator. All that to say, I would’ve been fine with it had Iris Lake taken all of these little things and made them uniquely her own, rather than just taking them nearly one for one, simply altering the name a bit. There’s an abundance of cozy books with magical curiosity shops and soft female main characters that DON’T make me feel like I’m reading blatant EvaJacks fanfiction.
I honestly can’t even recommend the book aside from all that, because, despite this being adult fantasy romance where the FMC is a 23 year old grown woman, the overall tone is extremely juvenile. It reads like very young YA. I can tell that Iris Lake was trying to go for a whimsical, quirky, funny tone, but it reads as immature. Nepheli thinks and sounds like a 14 year old. And I’m sorry if that sounds mean, especially after everything else I’ve already said, but it’s true. It honestly reads like this SHOULD have been YA, but Iris Lake wanted to write spicy scenes and raunchy banter, so she aged the characters up without adjusting their mental maturity accordingly.