It’s been a few years since I read Kazune Kawahara’s High School Debut, which was one of the first shojo I ever read. I didn’t venture very far into the genre at the time, but I’ve come a reeeeally long way.
Kawahara, however, after scoring a pretty popular hit with that series, followed up with My Love Story and another series as well. The former was also very popular and is still running, though I didn’t get around to it.
When a new series launched, however? Heck yes, in theory. And we start out with the taller, larger Sae, who is very self-conscious and conspicuous due to her size. Suddenly, the possibility of another I Wanna Do Bad Things With You seemed likely. Or even a Lovely*Complex, if you want to go farther back.
But not so much, unfortunately. Oh, I like Sae, a lot, as a character. She’s got confidence issues to overcome and having her childhood friend Koki suddenly back in the frame means that things are going to get teenage awkward as they figure themselves out.
Seeing Sae being there for Koki when he was young was a really fun starting place and a nice way to show how she liked him and why he just might like her (a possibility that’s left pointlessly vague; Sae’s confidence will keep them apart long enough). She’s kind of a badass during that dodgeball scene.
No, Sae is not the problem. Koki is. He is apparently attractive, but the art is cripplingly wonky at times and he has the personality of a damp saltine with the salt removed. That’s a one-two punch that the manga suddenly introduces and cannot get past - his smile feels ghastly by the end of the book.
He’s a little shy and pretty kind and fiercely loyal, but there’s nothing about him that makes me at all interested in learning more about him. I kept trying, Sae sees something in him after all, but it just never clicked.
The supporting cast is largely a big nothing as well, except for that one stone-faced girl that enters their friend group. She is the best part of the whole volume; she delivers a line about bears that had me in stitches it was so deadpan.
Otherwise it’s the annoying guy who goes too far ragging on Sae so he gets put in his place by Koki, and the super attractive girl in class who follows the least interesting path by immediately going after Koki.
It’s almost too traditional. Combined with cardboard boy and the really ungainly art at times, it just doesn’t make me half as pleased with it as I was hoping. I was so excited, but ultimately rather let down. It’s decent, but you’d have no trouble at all finding a variety of shojo that do this same thing, or at least various parts of it, but way better.
3 stars - I’ll give this a second volume out of respect and because there are some bright spots here and there. Also, Sae is a great hero who probably deserves better. I hope next time she gets it.