School festival time rolls around and even poor Io Sakisaka, queen of shojo drama, admits that she’s having a heck of a time coming up with new booths for her classes to indulge in.
Still, the one she crafts here, which is basically a haunted house combined with a heart rate monitor that disqualifies you if your heartbeat gets too amped up, is incredibly clever at being used to cause the sort of entanglements her manga thrive on.
Poor Saku can’t catch a break this volume, as she’s being pursued by two guys now, but the one she’s really after doesn’t seem to be meshing with her like he should. I definitely buy her putting way too much stock in that quiz that goes disastrously wrong, at least.
The real problem with Saku is that she spends the entire volume assuming everything and always in the way that it would be the most torturous for the story. Some of this is allowable, but she makes so many wrong assumptions and has the worst takes every time this volume. It becomes annoying in a way I don’t enjoy.
Poor Haruki (they have more in common than it seems!) is being so obvious that he could hardly be any more blatant short of using advertising or a flash mob to get his point across. He might be generically nice, but he clearly likes Saku a lot and that does make him a bit more than trophy boy, although his own development this volume isn’t great.
Meanwhile, the overly prickly Iryu steps up his rival game. I really liked the flashback we got to his first meeting with Saku. Who would have thought candy to be so formative? Both he and Haruki make lots of fun trouble for Saku, if you like that sort of thing.
And then there’s Kotono, set adrift with her own feelings towards Saku. She’s got her own struggles to work through, since she’s watching all this play out without even being in the running.
Still, my radar is up on this plotline and her relationship with Mitoshi, who is looking after her while she’s in a funk. It’s not that he’s a bad friend, more like I have a sneaking suspicion that we might be in for straight-up (pardon the term) queer erasure with this. I hope it gets more nuanced and at least hits bisexuality, but we’ll see.
It’s a mostly solid volume with some very fun set pieces and the usual Sakisaka excellence. Where it falls down a bit is with Saku, whose terrible assumptions make her come across as very dense at times rather than a tortured heroine. I like her character a lot, but this isn’t the best she’s been written.
Similarly, that entire side plot with Haruki and a girl he used to know in some capacity could have been entirely jettisoned and nothing would have been lost. Presumably this will become more of a thing later, but in this volume it’s a big old nothing.
It’s kind of a lesson in how great ideas can’t always save you from a couple of bad decisions and the ones chosen for the plotting here really alternate between strong and utter duds. Throw in some character work that doesn’t and it really becomes my main takeaway from the volume.
3.5 stars - I’d give this four, but Saku really does whiff it a little too much here and some of our plots are not quite there for me yet. It’s terribly enjoyable at times, but the consistency isn’t quite what we’ve had before this.