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The Flying Kite
Sam Hale decided long ago that love was not for her. The past holds too much pain to risk her heart again. And despite agreeing to sub in as a teacher at the Rhode Island School of Design, she's determined to keep both her life—and her art—away from prying eyes.
But while helping her best friend set up an exhibition featuring the famous Emmanuelle Renaud, Sam runs into the beautiful French painter herself. Literally. Despite her success, she isn't as unapproachable as Sam pictured her to be. She's kind, clearly devoted to her art, and more disarming than anyone has any right to be. Of course, Sam would feel drawn to a person like that, despite her fears and past trauma. Regardless, Sam is determined to just be a good friend. Because Emmanuelle is straight, completely unattainable, and not even planning to stay in Providence. Or is she?
Between her quirky grandfather's antics, a student's infatuation, and the dilemma of revealing her art to the world, can Sam find the courage to open up again? And what's more, is the chance of true love worth losing her heart?
But while helping her best friend set up an exhibition featuring the famous Emmanuelle Renaud, Sam runs into the beautiful French painter herself. Literally. Despite her success, she isn't as unapproachable as Sam pictured her to be. She's kind, clearly devoted to her art, and more disarming than anyone has any right to be. Of course, Sam would feel drawn to a person like that, despite her fears and past trauma. Regardless, Sam is determined to just be a good friend. Because Emmanuelle is straight, completely unattainable, and not even planning to stay in Providence. Or is she?
Between her quirky grandfather's antics, a student's infatuation, and the dilemma of revealing her art to the world, can Sam find the courage to open up again? And what's more, is the chance of true love worth losing her heart?
360 pages, Paperback
Published June 3, 2024
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Jasmin Joachims
7 books38 followersJasmin Joachims is a poet, writer and author of Despite Distress, Despite Duty, and The Flying Kite. Previously working as an IT consultant, she now prefers to put words onto the page and dabble in a plethora of genres that include science fiction, romance and post-apocalyptic dystopia. One of her passions is to create gripping LGBTQ+ novels and trying to write the kind of stories she would have loved to be able to read while she was growing up. Her second passion is ice cream. No, sorry, it's dogs. Okay, she can't decide. Let's call them her other two second passions and be done with it.
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May 17, 2024
That was a nice surprise !
August 28, 2024
I’m going to parrot other reviewers and say that the book is a wonderful surprise. Sam Hale is a heck of a character, damaged in heart and soul from early trauma, but also an individual who resolutely puts one foot in front of the other to push forward. Part time teacher and landscaper, full time artist, she is someone who experiences the world in raw honesty. But being constantly fearful and guarded all the time is no way to live. When she falls for the French artist, Emmanuelle Renaud, the world begins to open in new ways for Sam and she can’t help but be all for Elle.
If you enjoy your stories hot and heavy, angsty, and with character growth, the Flying Kite is for you. The book gets a little soapy towards the last third but I bought into the drama because it’s that kind of story. Throughout the book, Sam struggles with dark moments which are tough to read but which feel authentic. I also thought the author created really likable supporting characters including Sam’s grandfather, Frank, who is a hoot and her rock.
4.5 stars rounded up. I see this author writes in other genres so I’m picking up her dystopian novella that releases soon.
If you enjoy your stories hot and heavy, angsty, and with character growth, the Flying Kite is for you. The book gets a little soapy towards the last third but I bought into the drama because it’s that kind of story. Throughout the book, Sam struggles with dark moments which are tough to read but which feel authentic. I also thought the author created really likable supporting characters including Sam’s grandfather, Frank, who is a hoot and her rock.
4.5 stars rounded up. I see this author writes in other genres so I’m picking up her dystopian novella that releases soon.
May 30, 2024
Wonderful book, beautifully written and a fantastic cover. 5 ⭐️ are not enough. Highly recommended.
It was amazing to read about the healing both of the MCs had to go through to get their HEA.
Sam and Elle had to open their hearts to love and a fulfilling relationship as the story unfolds. It wasn’t an easy read because of the past trauma, anxiety and mental health problems, especially Sam had to go through. But so worth it in the end. I was rooting for her.
The second characters were also very lovely and supported the two MCs.
I’ll check out more work from this author and I’ll definitely read this book again in the future.
It was amazing to read about the healing both of the MCs had to go through to get their HEA.
Sam and Elle had to open their hearts to love and a fulfilling relationship as the story unfolds. It wasn’t an easy read because of the past trauma, anxiety and mental health problems, especially Sam had to go through. But so worth it in the end. I was rooting for her.
The second characters were also very lovely and supported the two MCs.
I’ll check out more work from this author and I’ll definitely read this book again in the future.
June 29, 2024
What a gem…. A surprisingly pleasant read for yours truly.
The Flying Kite is a beautifully emotionally written romance. A slow burn with just the right amount of pace to keep you going and not throw in the towel.
The story delves into the challenges of dealing with trauma and navigating guilt and fear through the two main characters, Sam and Emmanuelle.
Sam wrestles with inner turmoil stemming from trauma and self-reproach, while Emmanuelle's struggle revolves around the fear of inadequacy and an inability to trust others. Both find comfort in their common struggles and develop a deep trust in each other, providing mutual support along the way.
The secondary characters in the story are fantastic, such as the quirky grandfather, the supportive mentor, the friendly neighbour, and various friends and family members. Even the character Lacie grew on me over time. There were also some unpleasant characters in the story, feature albeit briefly, who still made an impact.
The Flying Kite is a beautifully emotionally written romance. A slow burn with just the right amount of pace to keep you going and not throw in the towel.
The story delves into the challenges of dealing with trauma and navigating guilt and fear through the two main characters, Sam and Emmanuelle.
Sam wrestles with inner turmoil stemming from trauma and self-reproach, while Emmanuelle's struggle revolves around the fear of inadequacy and an inability to trust others. Both find comfort in their common struggles and develop a deep trust in each other, providing mutual support along the way.
The secondary characters in the story are fantastic, such as the quirky grandfather, the supportive mentor, the friendly neighbour, and various friends and family members. Even the character Lacie grew on me over time. There were also some unpleasant characters in the story, feature albeit briefly, who still made an impact.
May 14, 2024
4.5 Stars
I cannot explain how or why I am so taken by this story. I’ve read a few Artist stories before but this one seemed to hook me in the feels. I reckon it’s the way the main character Samantha was depicted. She seemed easy to love and root for? Emmanuelle on the other hand played the mysterious artist perfectly. By the way I cried, I surmise the author did their job well.
I cannot explain how or why I am so taken by this story. I’ve read a few Artist stories before but this one seemed to hook me in the feels. I reckon it’s the way the main character Samantha was depicted. She seemed easy to love and root for? Emmanuelle on the other hand played the mysterious artist perfectly. By the way I cried, I surmise the author did their job well.
April 18, 2024
Wow. I don't even know where to start with this one, or what to say so I don't spoil this amazing book. The Flying Kite may end up being my book of the year, which I was not at all expecting when I set out to read it.
It's the story of Sam Hale, an artist who is a bit awkward and holds everything close to her chest, including her art. She (literally) runs into Emmanuelle Renaud, an artist whose work she admires, and as their friendship develops her walls slowly start to come down. The story is told from Sam's perspective, but both women are beautifully written. The care and respect they have for each other is so lovely, and their chemistry is palpable.
The side characters are just as wonderful, between Sam's grandfather (who she lives with), their neighbor, Sam's best friend, Emmanuelle's brother and friends, and even Lacie, a student who pushes limits and Sam's buttons, all feel like real people even when their appearance is brief.
I will warn anyone who wants to dive into this book that it is an emotional rollercoaster. I found myself in tears several times throughout the book, but there were also joyful parts, and it was so worth it. If you have triggers please check them, because there are a few.
I received a free ARC from the author, but my review is unbiased.
It's the story of Sam Hale, an artist who is a bit awkward and holds everything close to her chest, including her art. She (literally) runs into Emmanuelle Renaud, an artist whose work she admires, and as their friendship develops her walls slowly start to come down. The story is told from Sam's perspective, but both women are beautifully written. The care and respect they have for each other is so lovely, and their chemistry is palpable.
The side characters are just as wonderful, between Sam's grandfather (who she lives with), their neighbor, Sam's best friend, Emmanuelle's brother and friends, and even Lacie, a student who pushes limits and Sam's buttons, all feel like real people even when their appearance is brief.
I will warn anyone who wants to dive into this book that it is an emotional rollercoaster. I found myself in tears several times throughout the book, but there were also joyful parts, and it was so worth it. If you have triggers please check them, because there are a few.
I received a free ARC from the author, but my review is unbiased.
February 22, 2025
3.5 rounded up
I really enjoyed my first book by Jasmin Joachims! The Flying Kite was an easy, engaging read with likable characters, smooth writing, and great pacing.
The romance between Sam and Elle was especially sweet—I loved how the author took a slow-burn approach that felt more mature, given their past traumas and the personal growth they had to go through to become a happy couple.
The balance of dry humor and drama kept me hooked the whole way.
I'm looking forward to reading more from this author in the future.
I really enjoyed my first book by Jasmin Joachims! The Flying Kite was an easy, engaging read with likable characters, smooth writing, and great pacing.
The romance between Sam and Elle was especially sweet—I loved how the author took a slow-burn approach that felt more mature, given their past traumas and the personal growth they had to go through to become a happy couple.
The balance of dry humor and drama kept me hooked the whole way.
I'm looking forward to reading more from this author in the future.
May 15, 2024
What a wonderful book! I can honestly say that this is a slow burn romance that you do not want to miss. It is beautifully written and keeps you engaged throughout. The storyline is well thought out, and it is an all-round wonderful read. Jas truly brings the book to life with her writing, and I am eternally grateful to have received this ARC.
The book is written from Sam's perspective. She is a remarkable individual, and I have developed a slight affection for her. Sam and Emmanuelle seem destined to be together. Their connection is undeniable, and the gradual development of their relationship is beautifully crafted. As Jas said to me, "The beauty of a slow burn is when it finally explodes." and I wholeheartedly agree. It is absolutely worth the wait.
I also enjoyed the supporting characters. Casey, Sam's best friend, owns an art gallery and is always there for Sam, providing positive energy and pushing her in the right direction. It would be remiss of me not to mention Casey's lively, energetic, and rambunctious cat, Rambo, who provided much amusement.. Frank, Sam's grandfather, is a hilarious character who had me laughing a lot, from his kitchen escape to his chicken purchase.
Emmanuelle possesses an extraordinary allure, and I hold great admiration for her quintessential French charm. Sam and Emmanuelle are a perfect match for each other, and their blossoming relationship is a delightful sight to behold.
This book is truly exceptional. The intricate plot, with its numerous ups and downs and unexpected twists and turns, captivated me to such an extent that I found it impossible to put the book down. I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone who derives pleasure from reading.
Star rating. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice rating. 🔥🔥🔥
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The book is written from Sam's perspective. She is a remarkable individual, and I have developed a slight affection for her. Sam and Emmanuelle seem destined to be together. Their connection is undeniable, and the gradual development of their relationship is beautifully crafted. As Jas said to me, "The beauty of a slow burn is when it finally explodes." and I wholeheartedly agree. It is absolutely worth the wait.
I also enjoyed the supporting characters. Casey, Sam's best friend, owns an art gallery and is always there for Sam, providing positive energy and pushing her in the right direction. It would be remiss of me not to mention Casey's lively, energetic, and rambunctious cat, Rambo, who provided much amusement.. Frank, Sam's grandfather, is a hilarious character who had me laughing a lot, from his kitchen escape to his chicken purchase.
Emmanuelle possesses an extraordinary allure, and I hold great admiration for her quintessential French charm. Sam and Emmanuelle are a perfect match for each other, and their blossoming relationship is a delightful sight to behold.
This book is truly exceptional. The intricate plot, with its numerous ups and downs and unexpected twists and turns, captivated me to such an extent that I found it impossible to put the book down. I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone who derives pleasure from reading.
Star rating. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice rating. 🔥🔥🔥
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
May 17, 2024
A nice surprise! The story may not be something new but it is beautifully written and brings out all the feelings. The main characters and supporting characters are wonderful and likeable. I highly recommend the book.
4.5 Stars
June 12, 2024
The characters remind me of Milena McKay's The Delicate Things We Make.
The Flying Kite is an exceptionally well written book. The inner thoughts of Sam always cracks me up, and there are some parts in the book that tear me up. Don’t miss this book!
The Flying Kite is an exceptionally well written book. The inner thoughts of Sam always cracks me up, and there are some parts in the book that tear me up. Don’t miss this book!
May 3, 2024
Letting go of grief and loss to make space for a love you’d never thought would capture your heart. A painful, mesmerizing journey that will show you a way through trauma towards happiness. Trigger warning: this story contains emotional abuse and mental health trauma.
I received an advance copy for free and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Sam Hale is going through life behind walls of grief and pain. Losing her parents in a horrific way when she was just fourteen has left her hiding away from the world. The abusive relationship with her dad has made Sam feel inadequate and insecure. She has never found the strength to let anyone see all of her. Working with her grandfather in the family’s landscaping business and teaching art history as a sub, she has few people that she can rely on. Her best friend Casey owns an art gallery and secured a very high profile artist for a showing. Sam does everything in her power to help Casey with this monumental event. The artist in question is the French-American Emanuelle Renaud. Sam is instantly drawn to this charismatic and beautiful woman. Somehow Emanuelle breaks through all of Sam’s barriers, but can Sam stop her past from dictating her future?
The Flying Kite is not a breezy read. It depicts the effects of emotional abuse and grief in a very raw way. As the story is told in first person POV you get an intimate look into Sam’s trauma and the effects it has on her mental health. Jasmin Joachims has succeeded very well in describing the emotional pain and struggling that comes with dealing with a traumatic past.
The relationship that develops between Sam and Emanuelle is one where they are both really seen for the persons that they are. Their connection is love in its truest form, complicated, authentic and earth shifting. Emanuelle sees Sam exactly like she is and supports her in gentle ways to show her true self to the world and the people in it. Sam does the same for Emanuelle. As an artist living with the burden of being part of a world renowned artistic family, Sam sees Emanuelle as an individual not as a name. The effect of this connection is profound.
This a story that deserves to be read. It’s heartbreaking and raw but it’s also beautiful and shows the possibilities that open up when you stop letting a painful past dictate your future.
I received an advance copy for free and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Sam Hale is going through life behind walls of grief and pain. Losing her parents in a horrific way when she was just fourteen has left her hiding away from the world. The abusive relationship with her dad has made Sam feel inadequate and insecure. She has never found the strength to let anyone see all of her. Working with her grandfather in the family’s landscaping business and teaching art history as a sub, she has few people that she can rely on. Her best friend Casey owns an art gallery and secured a very high profile artist for a showing. Sam does everything in her power to help Casey with this monumental event. The artist in question is the French-American Emanuelle Renaud. Sam is instantly drawn to this charismatic and beautiful woman. Somehow Emanuelle breaks through all of Sam’s barriers, but can Sam stop her past from dictating her future?
The Flying Kite is not a breezy read. It depicts the effects of emotional abuse and grief in a very raw way. As the story is told in first person POV you get an intimate look into Sam’s trauma and the effects it has on her mental health. Jasmin Joachims has succeeded very well in describing the emotional pain and struggling that comes with dealing with a traumatic past.
The relationship that develops between Sam and Emanuelle is one where they are both really seen for the persons that they are. Their connection is love in its truest form, complicated, authentic and earth shifting. Emanuelle sees Sam exactly like she is and supports her in gentle ways to show her true self to the world and the people in it. Sam does the same for Emanuelle. As an artist living with the burden of being part of a world renowned artistic family, Sam sees Emanuelle as an individual not as a name. The effect of this connection is profound.
This a story that deserves to be read. It’s heartbreaking and raw but it’s also beautiful and shows the possibilities that open up when you stop letting a painful past dictate your future.
April 28, 2024
A beautiful love story between two troubled but extremely talented young artists. Sam, the shy introvert art teacher is suffering from grave family tragedy, so she shut down the world around her to protect her fragile heart. Elle, the rising star of the art world, also has her own baggage and insecurity. It was instant love for the couple, but it takes a near death scare for them to finally realize their deep love for each other. Reading this book is like watching a brilliant family drama, with beautiful leads, great supporting casts and many unexpected plot twists that keep me on my toes until the last page.
June 5, 2024
Another exceptional read. I can't really believe my luck at finding two romances that just blew me away and all in a matter of a week (The Piano in the Tree). 5 stars.
May 14, 2024
The Flying Kite by Jasmin Joachims is a fantastic exploration of the heart's resiliency. The story is told from first person POV, Sam, though both mains have past trauma complicating their attraction to one another. They seem to suffer from PTSD; Sam's is specifically related to childhood abuse and the death of her parents. We experience her loss and grief. She has bottled up her feelings and committed to not letting anyone get close to protect herself.
Both mains are artists, and the story revolves around an art show at a Rhode Island gallery. I love how art is the center of this world and how very personal the creations are to the characters, and that is something they can bond over.
I usually do not prefer first-person POV, but this was so well done I enjoyed it. I had no issues with the perspective, writing style, or editing. It was easy to follow and immersive.
I thought the cover was lovely before reading it, but even more so after.
Several unexpected things happen throughout to propel the plot and keep it interesting.
The cast is rounded out with a quirky grandfather, caring friends, and some unsavory characters.
This is my first read by Joachims and I would happily recommend.
#firstpersonPOV #PTSD #mentalillness #childhoodabuse #deathofalovedone #grief #anxiety #comingout #artist #thirdactbreakup
I received a free copy from the author. This is my honest opinion.
Both mains are artists, and the story revolves around an art show at a Rhode Island gallery. I love how art is the center of this world and how very personal the creations are to the characters, and that is something they can bond over.
I usually do not prefer first-person POV, but this was so well done I enjoyed it. I had no issues with the perspective, writing style, or editing. It was easy to follow and immersive.
I thought the cover was lovely before reading it, but even more so after.
Several unexpected things happen throughout to propel the plot and keep it interesting.
The cast is rounded out with a quirky grandfather, caring friends, and some unsavory characters.
This is my first read by Joachims and I would happily recommend.
#firstpersonPOV #PTSD #mentalillness #childhoodabuse #deathofalovedone #grief #anxiety #comingout #artist #thirdactbreakup
I received a free copy from the author. This is my honest opinion.
May 5, 2024
ARC Review ✨️
☆A truly breathtakingly beautiful love story♡
I almost don't know where to start this review. I'm still very emotional from reading this book🥹🥹 Sam and Elle are very relatable and strong FMC. They both have their own insecurities to work on, as well as past trauma. It's obvious they a conncect to one another but their past gets in the way. Ultimately, the unexpected trials of life strike, and they quickly realize how life can change in a matter of seconds. The Flying Kite was written so beautifully, and some of it was almost like reading poem🥹🖤 Their love really proved how life has a crazy way of bringing people together💕 This book also had some amazing supporting characters and I'll definitely be re-reading in the future🙌🙌
☆A truly breathtakingly beautiful love story♡
I almost don't know where to start this review. I'm still very emotional from reading this book🥹🥹 Sam and Elle are very relatable and strong FMC. They both have their own insecurities to work on, as well as past trauma. It's obvious they a conncect to one another but their past gets in the way. Ultimately, the unexpected trials of life strike, and they quickly realize how life can change in a matter of seconds. The Flying Kite was written so beautifully, and some of it was almost like reading poem🥹🖤 Their love really proved how life has a crazy way of bringing people together💕 This book also had some amazing supporting characters and I'll definitely be re-reading in the future🙌🙌
May 17, 2024
Charming story
I really enjoyed this book, it was filled with interesting characters, beautiful description of the area and of course the two main protagonists. They both had back stories leading to the reasons they found it difficult to open up to each other, it was heartbreaking to discover the truth. A most enjoyable read and would love to re visit them in the future.
I really enjoyed this book, it was filled with interesting characters, beautiful description of the area and of course the two main protagonists. They both had back stories leading to the reasons they found it difficult to open up to each other, it was heartbreaking to discover the truth. A most enjoyable read and would love to re visit them in the future.
May 18, 2024
god i love romances like this
May 29, 2024
I was charmed
An enjoyable romance. I rarely leave reviews but this gave me hours of entertainment and I needed to thank the author.
An enjoyable romance. I rarely leave reviews but this gave me hours of entertainment and I needed to thank the author.
August 4, 2024
An absolutely beautifully written slow burn, and easily one of my favorite books of the year. Sam and Emmanuelle are both beautifully complex characters, navigating through their traumas, guilt, and insecurities through their connections with one another. The side characters are charming and dynamic, helping to balance out the weight of Sam and Emmanuelle's personal journeys. I was absolutely captivated, and couldn't put this one down from start to finish. Absolutely recommended.
May 18, 2024
That was a sweet love story. I don't seem to come across too many first person POV romance novels and I enjoyed this one. For me, first person can make a story feel a little more heartfelt in such a personal way and this one did a great job, especially as the MC is navigating how to heal from loss, grief, and past traumas.
I thought the writing was beautiful in the way it 'paints a picture' for the reader and I enjoyed learning a little about art history, too! The story carried well and MCs were cute together.
I thought the writing was beautiful in the way it 'paints a picture' for the reader and I enjoyed learning a little about art history, too! The story carried well and MCs were cute together.
June 4, 2024
The Flying Kite is a beautiful story about finding the bravery to break out of the ghost of the past, not only for the people she loves but also for herself.
Sam is an artist who is also working as a substitute professor because of her mentor’s request. One day, while helping her friend with an exhibition at the art museum, she runs into the exhibition’s main artist, Emmanuelle Renaud. Sparks flying, these two form a connection, but Sam’s past trauma is still holding her back from setting herself free. It was better to play safe than to do something new. However, her mentor’s death makes her change her mind; to try the shade of red and brown in the shade of blues. She slowly starts to open up to others, and along with it blooms her relationship with Em. But happiness is not forever. If an inevitable choice looms, forcing them to choose between the two things they love the most, would their relationship survive? Was it not meant to be in the first place?
This story, in one word, is about being brave. Sometimes it is easy to stay inside the ghosts of the past rather than to break out of it. And when someone knows how powerful pain itself can be, they choose to remain in the pain they know rather than the fear of the unknown. So Sam tries to stay inside her world. And yet, for the people she loves, she realizes that she must break out of the guilt that shouldn’t be hers in the first place. But Sam is not the only one who is in pain here. While Sam’s pressure is from the trauma and guilt on the inside, Emmanuelle’s pressure is from the outside, fearing that she might not be enough. Not being able to trust others, and fearing someone would hurt her. They are so different and yet share the same pain. So, they understand each other more. They trust each other. And I believe that was the most beautiful element in the story. Not extravagant confessions of love, not mind-blowing sex, but how they trust each other and complement each other as a whole. And that should be the most important thing in a relationship, I believe.
I received a review copy from the author for an honest review.
Sam is an artist who is also working as a substitute professor because of her mentor’s request. One day, while helping her friend with an exhibition at the art museum, she runs into the exhibition’s main artist, Emmanuelle Renaud. Sparks flying, these two form a connection, but Sam’s past trauma is still holding her back from setting herself free. It was better to play safe than to do something new. However, her mentor’s death makes her change her mind; to try the shade of red and brown in the shade of blues. She slowly starts to open up to others, and along with it blooms her relationship with Em. But happiness is not forever. If an inevitable choice looms, forcing them to choose between the two things they love the most, would their relationship survive? Was it not meant to be in the first place?
This story, in one word, is about being brave. Sometimes it is easy to stay inside the ghosts of the past rather than to break out of it. And when someone knows how powerful pain itself can be, they choose to remain in the pain they know rather than the fear of the unknown. So Sam tries to stay inside her world. And yet, for the people she loves, she realizes that she must break out of the guilt that shouldn’t be hers in the first place. But Sam is not the only one who is in pain here. While Sam’s pressure is from the trauma and guilt on the inside, Emmanuelle’s pressure is from the outside, fearing that she might not be enough. Not being able to trust others, and fearing someone would hurt her. They are so different and yet share the same pain. So, they understand each other more. They trust each other. And I believe that was the most beautiful element in the story. Not extravagant confessions of love, not mind-blowing sex, but how they trust each other and complement each other as a whole. And that should be the most important thing in a relationship, I believe.
I received a review copy from the author for an honest review.
May 1, 2024
To say that The Flying Kite is a beautifully appealing and artistic story is to absolutely fail at giving it the praise it deserves. It is a story of personal growth, of courage and of letting go, told in such flowing, evocative prose that I was captured by the heart and mind and tied completely to the characters for it's 300 pages.
I have to say that the cover is stunning! The artwork is gorgeous and hints at several elements of the story. It is peaceful to look at, yet the colours and clouds also allude to disturbances and distress.
The author's writing style is the perfect vehicle to build and carry this story. Her use of descriptive language is never overdone, yet turns simple sentences into gorgeous word pictures. Ms Joachims' wordcraft skills are wonderfully showcased in Sam's courting of Elle when she says "You are at once both the peace and chaos of my heart.". She has subtly built her characters into fascinating, well rounded people, using layers of internal discourse, social interactions, memories and plans for futures, and readers benefit immensely from that by almost living this elevating and satisfying story.
I loved spending time with Sam. Her shy awkwardness and self-deprecating humour were endearing. Her bonds with friends and family and her willingness to listen to their advice with an open heart showed her maturity and intelligence. I really liked the candid nature of Sam and Elle's relationship - there was never drama for drama's sake or the convoluted miscommunication used to build tension by some authors.
This is a compelling love story, pure in it's concept and telling. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and can see myself doing so again and again. Highly recommended.
I have to say that the cover is stunning! The artwork is gorgeous and hints at several elements of the story. It is peaceful to look at, yet the colours and clouds also allude to disturbances and distress.
The author's writing style is the perfect vehicle to build and carry this story. Her use of descriptive language is never overdone, yet turns simple sentences into gorgeous word pictures. Ms Joachims' wordcraft skills are wonderfully showcased in Sam's courting of Elle when she says "You are at once both the peace and chaos of my heart.". She has subtly built her characters into fascinating, well rounded people, using layers of internal discourse, social interactions, memories and plans for futures, and readers benefit immensely from that by almost living this elevating and satisfying story.
I loved spending time with Sam. Her shy awkwardness and self-deprecating humour were endearing. Her bonds with friends and family and her willingness to listen to their advice with an open heart showed her maturity and intelligence. I really liked the candid nature of Sam and Elle's relationship - there was never drama for drama's sake or the convoluted miscommunication used to build tension by some authors.
This is a compelling love story, pure in it's concept and telling. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and can see myself doing so again and again. Highly recommended.
April 25, 2024
We all love a French seductress, and one that’s also a successful artist? Of course I ran to read it, I did love the characters and the general base of it, but it just fell a little flat for me.
Nicely done, casual writing style, that pulled me in immediately but lost a little consistency. The writing could use some smoothing out and overall it doesn’t quite feel finished, a character death and the injuries right at the end particularly lacking some emotion and authenticity.
The aftermath and grief is really nicely done though, especially throwing herself into drawing and not noticing it getting dark/time passing until she physically can’t see— been there!
Absolutely love Sam and her anxious tendencies, her fear and discomfort at being in social situations and having people perceive her work, whether art or music or anything else. Also how she feels constantly drained by people, yet she is always offering to help and put herself in these situations to help others.
I love a lot of the moments, scenes and the general characters and meaning of the story, but it just didn’t feel complete or smooth to me.
I found the beginning was bumpy and it felt quite long, with the pacing/time passing and developments in plot/characters a little choppy as well.
I wouldn’t recommend if you want an amazing read, but this was nice and with some editing has potential to be great.
Nicely done, casual writing style, that pulled me in immediately but lost a little consistency. The writing could use some smoothing out and overall it doesn’t quite feel finished, a character death and the injuries right at the end particularly lacking some emotion and authenticity.
The aftermath and grief is really nicely done though, especially throwing herself into drawing and not noticing it getting dark/time passing until she physically can’t see— been there!
Absolutely love Sam and her anxious tendencies, her fear and discomfort at being in social situations and having people perceive her work, whether art or music or anything else. Also how she feels constantly drained by people, yet she is always offering to help and put herself in these situations to help others.
I love a lot of the moments, scenes and the general characters and meaning of the story, but it just didn’t feel complete or smooth to me.
I found the beginning was bumpy and it felt quite long, with the pacing/time passing and developments in plot/characters a little choppy as well.
I wouldn’t recommend if you want an amazing read, but this was nice and with some editing has potential to be great.
June 9, 2024
Wow! Just wow! I loved this book so much! Not only is the story incredibly moving, it’s also beautifully written. The author’s use of imagery and detail combine to make the story almost a sensory experience. I felt like I was about to feel the dreary Providence weather or look up and see a lighthouse.
I think this book includes a very accurate portrayal of depression, PTSD, and social anxiety. I cried several times, not only when the characters were sad, but also during times when the subject matter made me feel seen and understood. I love when I can relate to characters to such an extent. I feel like this is a testament to how good of a writer the author is.
The relationship between Elle and Sam is full of love and understanding. It’s clear from the beginning that each of them needs what the other has to offer a partner. They fit together like a puzzle, their lives intertwining seamlessly. The side characters are also perfectly woven into the story in ways that are funny and heartwarming.
I will definitely be reading this book over and over in the future. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys the hurt/comfort trope and enjoys reading about artists. This is the first book I’ve read from the author and I can’t wait to read more from her.
I think this book includes a very accurate portrayal of depression, PTSD, and social anxiety. I cried several times, not only when the characters were sad, but also during times when the subject matter made me feel seen and understood. I love when I can relate to characters to such an extent. I feel like this is a testament to how good of a writer the author is.
The relationship between Elle and Sam is full of love and understanding. It’s clear from the beginning that each of them needs what the other has to offer a partner. They fit together like a puzzle, their lives intertwining seamlessly. The side characters are also perfectly woven into the story in ways that are funny and heartwarming.
I will definitely be reading this book over and over in the future. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys the hurt/comfort trope and enjoys reading about artists. This is the first book I’ve read from the author and I can’t wait to read more from her.
April 16, 2024
Had the honour of reading an early copy of this and I can quite honestly say I've never read a romance book with such depth. Following Sam's journey as she learns and discovers more about herself is so thought-provoking and relatable. The way the themes of the story are interwoven, the use of art and imagery, every little detail contributes and truly means something. And then when she , you can't help but fall in love along with the story.
And I haven't even started on the side characters. Of course, Emmanuelle is amazing, but every single other characters is important and has their chance to shine. I found myself loving not just the main characters, but everyone they came across as well, lauging at , crying when . I would love to be able to read it for the first time again.
And I haven't even started on the side characters. Of course, Emmanuelle is amazing, but every single other characters is important and has their chance to shine. I found myself loving not just the main characters, but everyone they came across as well, lauging at , crying when . I would love to be able to read it for the first time again.
July 25, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Hot, angsty, and beautifully written
The Flying Kite by Jasmin Joachims took me by surprise in the best way. I usually shy away from homodiegetic narrators, but Sam Hale’s voice pulled me in from the first page and didn’t let go. She’s an incredible character, raw, real, and powerful in her vulnerability. I adored her. She made the emotional weight of the story hit that much harder.
The writing is absolutely beautiful. The yearning and tension are perfectly pitched, very hot, very angsty, and utterly addictive. I found myself aching right along with the characters.
Toward the end, the plot does veer into slightly soapy, but honestly? I didn’t mind. The emotional payoff was still there, and by that point, I was fully invested. This is one of those rare books where I felt every beat of longing and hurt. A truly moving read.
The Flying Kite by Jasmin Joachims took me by surprise in the best way. I usually shy away from homodiegetic narrators, but Sam Hale’s voice pulled me in from the first page and didn’t let go. She’s an incredible character, raw, real, and powerful in her vulnerability. I adored her. She made the emotional weight of the story hit that much harder.
The writing is absolutely beautiful. The yearning and tension are perfectly pitched, very hot, very angsty, and utterly addictive. I found myself aching right along with the characters.
Toward the end, the plot does veer into slightly soapy, but honestly? I didn’t mind. The emotional payoff was still there, and by that point, I was fully invested. This is one of those rare books where I felt every beat of longing and hurt. A truly moving read.
June 21, 2024
Very healing, tender, and an all-around sweet book.
The development between Sam and Emmanuelle was so well done. I loved how the growth and trauma were incorporated into the story and how their relationship helped them through it. It was a well thought out book, but the plot devices were a little too obvious, like the multiple injuries that happened throughout the book, which i feel was a bit too unbelievable.
The writing was top-notch and is a major reason why i liked this book.
Overall, 4 stars.
The development between Sam and Emmanuelle was so well done. I loved how the growth and trauma were incorporated into the story and how their relationship helped them through it. It was a well thought out book, but the plot devices were a little too obvious, like the multiple injuries that happened throughout the book, which i feel was a bit too unbelievable.
The writing was top-notch and is a major reason why i liked this book.
Overall, 4 stars.
May 6, 2024
This was beautifully written, I really enjoyed every second of it. It was, however, quite painful and very full of angst and drama. However, it's not unnecessary drama, and it all added nicely to the plot. It's not your feel-good romance for a nice afternoon, rather a deep scope into the brain of a trauma ridden person. I, for one, absolutely love a deep, sombre tale of overcoming trauma, so this ticked all the boxes.
June 20, 2024
A beautiful story of two women healing and finding their HEA. The characters were easy to fall in love with and root for. Both Elle and Sams friends' families kept me entertained and wanting to know more about them, especially Frank. Both women go through a journey to let go of the fears stopping them from living the life they want with the person they want. There were a few things at the end that felt a bit abrupt but overall great book.
September 11, 2024
Is it a major cop out to just say "what the other reviewers said." I don't feel eloquent enough to add more than the beautiful reviews that came before me. This was delightful and hit all the right highs for me. I truly enjoyed Sam and Emmanuelle's journey together. The only slight negative was how....much....happens to Sam. Give this lady a break, holy jesus reading a kobo. But it didn't detract my rating.
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