The Prince’s Heart is a clumsy yet, at times, endearing story about a prince forced to choose between duty and desire. This book centers around Darien, the prince and second-in-line for the throne of a small kingdom. He meets Tag, a lower-status relative of a neighboring kingdom’s royal family, and the two fall desperately in love. However, Darien is forced to choose between a life with Tag and an arranged marriage which will help secure his kingdom’s safety after tragedy changes his life forever. This book is charming yet overall fails to establish the tense atmosphere necessary to make the conflict in this book impactful.
The biggest positive thing about the book is that it is a sweet story. This book is relatively short for a romantasy, and this makes it a quick and fun read. The romantic pairing is sweet, and it's easy to root for them throughout the novel. There’s also a really fun collection of side characters—Darien’s siblings have fun interactions with him and are characterized well for being such a quick read.
The biggest shortcoming of this book for me was that the main romantic relationship was insta-love. It was the kind of romance where the point-of-view character sets eyes on the future love interest for the first time and is instantly smitten. It only takes a few conversations for the pair to get together. As someone who enjoys reading about the yearning in a romance plot, this wasn’t a satisfying romance story to me. Furthermore, it lowers the stakes of the novel as a whole—if the pair could fall head-over-heels in love after a few conversations, certainly the potential loss of this love isn’t a huge deal, as it doesn’t even feel like the pair know each other that well. Throughout the book, lip service is paid to the idea that the couple won’t work out for a variety of reasons, but even during these scenes it never really feels like the relationship is under threat. This may be less of a negative for readers who enjoy insta-love as a plot, but it didn’t work for me and this took away a lot from the conceit of the novel.
The dialogue in this book is also often very clunky. This problem is twofold: first, when it comes to exposition, characters just say things to serve the plot rather than because it makes sense. For example, there was an instance where Darien said to Samis, who is crown prince of the kingdom, (I'm paraphrasing here) “You remember how the kingdom was founded by our great-great grandmother who found to free us of the empire, yes?” as a way of introducing the political history of the region. This is just clumsy, because yes, Samis should know this, and this happens repeatedly. There are a ton of facts dropped this way, and they all feel out of place. Given the novel is first-person POV from Darien’s perspective, I feel like a lot of this could be communicated with narration and not have the break the believability of the book (especially since Darien is a huge history nerd, and thus could be charactered by the way he gives narration if he goes out of his way to think about the impact of the nation’s history on current events). The second problem is that the narration often fails reflect much of a character’s emotional state. A lot of the dialogue is surface-level and somewhat repetitive and feels shallow as a result. For example, when Darien is dealing with major life tragedies, the start and end of what Tag has to say to him is “It’ll be okay.” It just feels like super shallow support to give to someone dealing with major life tragedies. A lot of the dialogue is on this level, and it makes the characters feel immature.
There’s also a major lack of logic in how things work. I can’t give any of the egregious examples without spoiling the ending, but a minor example will suffice. At one point, Samis and Darien need to talk in secret. They decide that, in order to be secret and avoid being overheard, they should leave the royal palace (where they have private rooms and the ability to tell servants to leave them alone) and instead go to a public tavern (which is described as being full of people). You know, so no one hears what they’re talking about. This sort of logic is pervasive throughout the book, including in how the major conflict is resolved. There are a ton of assumptions that just don’t make sense or plans that hinge on very specific things happening that always just work out perfectly despite it. I understand that the point of the book is the conflict in Darien’s heart, not exactly how plans are executed, but becomes very distracting throughout the book.
In the end, while this book is overall sweet and charming, I just struggled to feel the weight of the relationship and found both dialogue and plot to be on the clumsy side. This together made the book a less-than-impactful read for me. I would recommend it to readers who like a short and satisfying romantasy, particularly to readers who like it when the couple gets together quickly, and the tension instead revolves around whether or not they can choose their relationship over other obligations in their lives.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me a free eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.