Sometimes when I read a book that is a bit of a mess with its pacing and structure, I try to look past that to see the potential of the great story that we could have had. But unfortunately here, it was so messy that it was extremely difficult to look past it at all.
(Apologies in advance if I spell any of these names incorrectly, I listened to it on audiobook)
Maya is a student at Princeton in the far future. The child of settlers of a different world, she has a complicated relationship with Earth, who often see her people as simply colonists who view Earth as their true home, while settlers actually take pride in their identity separate from Earth. As a child, Maya was infected with a virus spread by another octopus like alien race, the Fremroe. While this infection killed many humans and aliens alike, Maya survived, and has residual abilities as a result of it, such as being able to mentally connect with other Fremroe or other infected beings, as well as dreaming of both the past and the future. While Maya truly is a graduate student at Princeton, her motivations are really in finding more information on a lost alien artifact, the Stardust Grail, which is said to be the only device that will allow the Fremroe to reproduce, something that is becoming critical as their numbers dwindle. Specifically, she is trying to help her best friend Uncle, a Fremroe and her right hand as they thieve and pillage stolen artifacts across the galaxy, returning them to their rightful owners. They can travel across the galaxy using gates that were created by the Fremroe, but due to the strange nature of Fremroe memory and a kind of hivemind culture, they don't all remember the specifics. So Maya and Uncle set off in a chase to track down the Stardust Grail, joined by Will, a disgraced soldier fighting for the pro-Earth faction, and her med-bot who is trying to become more human. Conflict after conflict, the group gets themselves into dangerous situations as they try to save Uncle's species, but also perhaps the entire galaxy.
Okay so what's to be said about this. Firstly, I want to say that I loved The Deep Sky so much, and I was really looking forward to that quality of a story here, but this is nothing like that. While The Deep Sky is a mystery wrapped in a sci-fi setting, this is Indiana Jones wrapped in a sci-fi setting. And I think the struggle with maintaining both the action and the intrigue was ultimately what made this book suffer. After the first act of the story when Maya and the crew leave Earth, it kicks off a seemingly endless cycle of "go to place to steal something, run away. go to place to steal something, run away. go to place to steal something, run away..." ad infinitum. But to keep it fresh, towards the end it just gets, frankly, absurd. As if a child is coming up with the next story beat, desperately trying to dial up the action and stakes in every paragraph to the point that it seems ridiculous. Get attacked in the temple, someone gets hurt, but actually they're okay. Oh there's a big monster that grabs someone, but they kill it. But they encounter a plasma wall! But they get through it. They leave the temple and face the deadly flora and fauna! But they kill it. Actually they go back into the temple now. Robots!!
It was all just too much, and it ended up feeling like a slog. At about the 50% mark, I couldn't believe that the story was still going, but also not getting more interesting. They had the same goal the whole time, and they just limped along to get to it rather than the story shifting and winding its way to the conclusion. Add to this that I feel the author was really trying to create a Becky Chambers Wayfarers-esque dynamic amongst our characters. That is, make everyone lovable and complex and create dynamic relationships between characters in a very character forward story, but the nature of this story really didn't allow for that. All relationship development was surface level at best, and at worst felt forced.
I don't know, this became exhausting fast and I really wanted to like it. I'll still read anything from the author, but if you really liked The Deep Sky, temper your expectations when you pick this up.
Also the nonbinary character was named Pickle, and I can't get over how nonbinary that name is.