3 ⭐️ An interesting dystopian concept but won't continue the series
**This review does contain spoilers**
She stepped inside to meet her own dark captor from a fairytale. The warlock who had led her off her path.
WHAT TO EXPECT:
✨ dystopian urban romantasy
✨ NYC setting
✨ loose Beauty and the Beast retelling
✨ she’s a gifted human thief
✨ he’s a dangerous monster
✨ enemies to lovers
✨ heist plot
✨ “you work for me now”
✨ forced proximity
✨ 2/5 🌶️ (open door)
✨ “touch her a die”
✨ age gap
✨ roommates
✨ training
✨ found family
✨ Celtic mythology and lore
✨ single, third person POV
✨ TW: past lover, violence, gore, human trafficking, physical abuse (past), parental neglect (past), wealth disparity, potential love triangle
My Thoughts:
It was honestly a fine romantasy. There were some interesting elements to the story that held my interest but there were some things that bothered me. However, even though I had a lot of problems with it, I didn't have any strong feelings of dislike for it and I appreciate the overall story and world, so I don't want to give this less than 3-stars. But, I’m not invested enough to continue the series.
What I liked:
The interesting dystopian world. I don't think I've really read a story where monsters and humans coexist in a dystopian Earth, so that was a fresh concept to me. I thought it was cool that there were a lot of different 'monsters', which really I'd say they're more creatures than monsters. The story has vampires, werewolves, nymphs, trolls, ghouls, wraiths, shifters, goblins, druids, succubus, mermaids, witches, and warlocks. Pretty much any sort of monster/paranormal creature you have ever thought about, they exist in this world.
Kierse's friendship with Ethan and Gen. All three have been through a lot, but this trio really has each other's backs and are there for one another through thick and thin. Their love and loyalty to one another is sweet.
I liked the magic system and lore. We learn that magic isn't something known to most, and it's kept a secret by those who wield it. But each witch or warlock has their own unique power and it was really cool seeing that magic interact in this story. I also liked the lore about the Oak and Holly king, but I would have liked to have learned more about both the magic and lore. I'm sure all that's coming in book 2, which is a bummer because I probably won't be reading it.
I enjoyed the last few chapters even though they were predictable. The 'reveals' at the end were the most interesting part of the story. And while it was obvious what would happen, I felt a sense of relief that everything was finally out in the open.
What I didn't like:
The foreshadowing was so obvious from the start. There are so many instances where the characters will have these strange feelings or feel a tug, and it's meant to alert the reader that something more is going on, but the abrupt way it's done just felt like bad writing. Also, there are stories told that are clearly about the characters, but you're not really supposed to guess that. However, it's presented in such an obvious way, that by the time the reveals happen, they're not shocking.
These phrases "Like met like. Power met power" and "Like calls to like" are used. This whole concept of power drawing close together has been used so many times in fantasy stories that it's not an original idea. And even if someone wants to use it, isn't there a more creative way to say so than using the most popular one's found in stories like Shadow and Bone by Leigh Bardugo or A Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J Maas.
There's a few parts of the story that feel like mashups of stories in this genre. For example:
- Throne of Glass. Kierse, the FMC, has a relationship with a toxic mentor who abuses her. She was an orphan and he took her in to train her to become his protege and she became the best and was hated by everyone in the guild because of it.
- A Court of Mist and Fury, Fourth Wing, or any fantasy story where the girl makes a bargain or has an agreement with the love interest to train her to become stronger so she can protect herself.
- A Court of Mist and Fury - Under The Mountain / Court of Nightmares. Kierse and Graves go to a party that's basically a drunken orgy and she has to pretend to be his pet and Grave's dresses her in a completely see-through dress. There is also a punch that Kierse is told not to drink because it makes you lose yourself to carnal desires, just like the faerie wine.
- Twilight. Just like Edward can't read Bella's mind, Grave's can't read Kierse, and he likes that about her.
- Six of Crows. Graves wears gloves like Kaz Breaker. This is also a heist plot, which I know people have compared it to, but I will say, it is very different.
The romance came out of nowhere. It had a lot of potential with the enemies-to-lovers vibes and forced proximity, but at the end of the day, it was introduced abruptly and I never could quite understand why they liked each other. So it all starts during a dinner after Kierse is living in Grave's house when she randomly starts to have thoughts about how hot Grave's is and should stop thinking about that because they're not on a date and they're working together. That's how the attraction/lust is introduced to the readers and then from there on, she keeps thinking about how hot he is. There just wasn't any finesse to it. And then later, Grave's, who is a strait-laced and uptight guy who never gets attached to anyone, starts to come undone for her. Why though??? I don't know. This change of behavior doesn't make sense with what we know about him.
The main heist plot, which was the reason for the entire book, is wrapped up so quickly and ended up not even being the biggest conflict in the story. Everything about King Louis being this big bad villain was a let down as well. Why was there so much build up to it?
Kierse getting mad at Graves for not being 100% truthful at the end was stupid. It wasn't even a breach of trust. He just withheld info. Get over it girl. Plus, he's said since the beginning that he will always have secrets. This conflict felt really contrived.
There isn't an established love triangle, but it seems like that's where this is headed. And that's just not my cup of tea.
This was a small thing, but I was annoyed at the past lovers aspect. I already don't like in stories when characters have interactions with their exes that incites jealousy, so when this happens, I was irritated. But mostly I found it to be unnecessary.
Overall, the story was interesting enough for me to finish, but I think the obvious foreshadowing and unconvincing romance are what really affected my enjoyment. I do think there will be plenty of people who will really enjoy this story though, so if the tropes I listed at the beginning sound interesting to you, maybe check it out to see if it's for you.
Thank you Red Tower Books for providing an e-ARC copy in exchange for an honest review! As always, all opinions are my own.
Favorite Quotes:
"The destruction hadn't only made monsters appear; it had made monsters of everyone."
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"I'm not a delicate flower that you should fear crushing in your palm."
"No, you're delicate like a bomb."
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"She was immune to his magic but not him."
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"That's not my home."
"It could be."
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"You smell so good. Let's find out what you taste like." 🥵
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"He's a monster. But he's my monster."
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Men could be just as much monsters as the ones with claws and teeth.
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"You're my wren."
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Both liars and monsters and murderers.
Both capable of love and laughter and light.
No heroes.
No villains.
Just people blessed and cursed with magic.
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