This series started strong, but by Book 3, it completely lost its way. The plot is barely holding together, and any sense of world-building is non-existent. For a fantasy novel with a supposed journey/quest structure, there’s shockingly little depth to the world, the Fates, or the stakes. Instead of organic storytelling, major plot points are just handed to us before they even unfold, killing any potential for suspense or excitement.
The romance subplot is just as frustrating. The relationships feel forced, inconsistent, and devoid of chemistry. Eli’s sudden shift from romantic to purely platonic made no sense, and Mendax, once a compelling character, is reduced to being pushed around by a protagonist who can’t seem to make up her mind about anything. Speaking of which—Caly’s indecisiveness and lack of development make her one of the most aggravating leads I’ve encountered in a long time.
By the end, I found myself more confused than invested. The character arcs are a mess, the stakes feel meaningless, and the story meanders with no clear direction. I genuinely don’t understand the five-star reviews or the excitement for the next book.