this was such a miss for me i’m actually devastated.
i LOVED heavenly bodies — it was one of my favorite reads of 2024, and i've been clamoring all year to get my hands on the sequel after the massive cliffhanger we left off on from book one. and while it definitely delivers on answering some important questions, this fell flat for me in almost every other regard — almost to the point that it makes me wonder if i even liked heavenly bodies as much as i thought i did, because surely this isn't the same story???
the plot here felt disorganized, meandering, and a bit clumsy. the chapter to chapter reading experience felt more like an endless chain of scooby doo episodes, where The Gang jumps from insane situation (a circus dream hellscape!!!) to insane situation (a giant crab monster!), and then resolving it right away without letting things breathe. the narrative impact and writing style that i loved in heavenly bodies is nowhere to be seen in this sequel - it feels disjointed, overly complicated and underexplained, and so packed full of Dire Situations that they start to lose meaning altogether. there's also a line borrowed from a famous emily dickinson letter that, while tonally appropriate for the situation, felt kind of weird to recognize in the context of a fantasy novel.
i think this is proof that less is truly more when it comes to storytelling. there are so many POVs and storylines here it makes it messy, and they're all so overinflated with stakes-for-the-sake-of-stakes that it cheapens the emotional connection to the characters and the plot. heavenly bodies was so well done because it all felt intentional. it was relatively narrow in scope, letting characters and plot twists breathe. fallen stars had none of that artistry, and while i was thrilled to see new sides of the world (the waterfall scene!!!!!!), i wish it all felt more meaningful.
what i did enjoy here was the spice! A+++ spice, and a few quotes that were packed full of romantic yearning, but i felt so little connection to any of the characters (even ones i loved from book one!) that it all felt a bit silly to me by the end — which is also, ironically, the strongest part of this book. without spoiling, the end was FUN and twisty in ways that make perfect sense within the context of the story, but it's truly the only part of the story that had me excited to flip the page.
thank you to random house canada for the chance to read this early! crossing my fingers i enjoy book 3 a lot more.