I would have been fine just staying in the real world following Noelle's life as she learns to stand on her own, ditch her abusive mother, and get into a healthy relationship with Alejo (by the way, you can tell the authors are american when they try to be inclusive and add a latino character but don't know that Alejo is short for Alejandro), but no, instead, we got yet another insispid, nonsensical and cringe inducing urban fantasy YA, that sets to assasinate Noelle's character almost as soon as it's stablished.
What I found most irritating about her is how all she has to do to overcome her odds is to think of something and it comes to her. For example, she decides she needs allies and on the next page someone starts talking to her and offers to help her. She doesn't need to go look for someone, they find her. She needs a weapon and next scene a convenient prison fight breaks out and she is able to easily get ahold of said weapon (it literally lands on her feet) It's always like that. Everything is so convenient, it's almost as if the moment she makes a decision, the stars align and whatever she needs falls on her lap with no real effort.
The authors seem to think that just because she experiences physical pain sometimes that equals to her struggling to survive, but her struggles are unrelated to the quest. What does having a skin rash have to do with her plan to escape? Nothing. They just didn't know how to keep her sympathetic so they kept getting her hurt for no real reason.
I also think that the authors spent a long time revising the first half of the book, but rushed the second half to get it over with. You can tell by the increasing amount of typos, continuity errors, and the increasing amount of coincidences they had to shoehorn in to advance the plot.
It really does feel like two people wrote this story and they couldn't commit to one vision. Noelle changes personality from one paragraph to the next depending on who was writing at the time. Like one author wanted Noelle to always be helpless and insecure, and the other one wanted her to be a badass girl boss who don't take no shit from no one.
The ending is so absurd, you can guess it from a mile away. As a matter of fact, the book cover (at least the version I have) SPOILED THE WHOLE ENDING! I have no shame in admitting I skipped the whole battle royal sequence and read only the last three pages, and still was left unsatisfied. The authors thought it was so clever to end the book in a cliffhanger, yet they still were dumb enough to type THE END after the cliffhanger, and then add a note to tell you that, in fact, it hasn’t ended, and the sequel will be written based on feedback. Top professionalism, am I right?
Anyways, 2 stars for the few good sentences scattered here and there and for the intro chapters which were actually very good, minus 3 stars for the nonsensical fantasy YA portion.