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They call her… The Babymaker,

I call her MINE.

This book is a ridiculously sweet and smutty romp with a serious and MASSIVE mountain man and the small, curvy, free spirited, young woman of his dreams.

For fans of the Milk & Honeymoon group incident — this is Vince’s story.


— gets instantly hard
— falls instantly in love
— is instantly obsessed with the cutest little family in town, who just so happen to be short of a daddy…

Single mom?
Not for long.

Big Vince has found his new home… he just needs to make sure he’ll fit.

~

OMG this book was a fr!ckin JOY to write. Vince is DEFINITELY in the running for Father Material of the Year — his devotion and adorability ratings are off the charts, and he’s not at all shabby in bed either… or on the table or under the stars. There is so much stretching, milking, and breeding going on in this book, guys. I can’t even…

216 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 8, 2024

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1,737 reviews187 followers
August 8, 2024
Elena Dawne is known for her shmilky shmink books, but her MMCs are also big boys—large in stature and large in the other thing. In “Milk and Cookie,” rightfully titled, Vince has been alone for a long time. He was always shy about his size and not able to find a special somebody who would be able to accept him and handle him as well. Vince and Fred (Frederica) have the most interesting, comical meet-cute. Fred is straightforward and even points out his physical response to her, but there is no hiding that one—Vince is a big guy.

Once Vince and Fred get over the initial hurdle, Vince finds that Fred is a single mom by choice and wants to have more kids. But Vince loves kids and wants to be involved if he is to have them with her. “Milk and Cookie” was a light and fun read full of spicy scenes and funny moments. Overall enjoyable.
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349 reviews
February 6, 2025
How would I explain this to a Victorian child?
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4,595 reviews62 followers
August 18, 2024
Milk & Cookie is Book 5 of Spice in the Mountains. It's a steamy, instalove, OTT, age-gap, opposites-attract, curvy girl gets her mountain of a mountain man romance with lots of smutty, kinky, milky fun.

I have been dying for Vince's book, and it did not disappoint. Vince is a 44 year old massively huge (in ALL areas 😉), hunky, private investigator with a heart of gold and longing for love. Frederica "Fred" is a 24 year old sweet, sassy, curvy single mom and baker. She is a hippy free spirit with 3 daughters and a mother who is anti-men after suffering in an abusive marriage.

Vince is visiting a friend when he meets his curvy goddess doing yoga at the gym. Fred is just as attracted to him and pulls no punches when she approaches him. At first, she thinks Vince could be her next baby daddy, but Vince shows her he wants it all and is not just a sperm donor. He wants to breed her with his babies and live in bliss with his girls as a real family.

These two were just so sweet together. I laughed so many times and seeing Vince with her daughters...OMG... we went from ovary tingles to full-on exploding ovaries. Morrissey and Luna are the cutest. He is just a completely swoon-worthy, drool-inducing, panty-melting man. The chemistry and sexy times between these two was a bonfire inferno, and we get the happiest of happy endings. Gail was a tough cookie to crumble, but even she fell for this gentle giant of a man eventually. I loved his persistence.

I just love everything Elena writes. She combines lots of romance and laughs with amazing characters you can't help but fall in love with. Add panty-soaking, hot and steamy, kinky, and smutty fun, and you have quite the story!! I loved it!!

My favorite has always been her Mountain Man Beast (Ash and Gussie are to die for), but Vince and Gunnar's stories are right up there for me.

I can't wait for Daryl's book!!!.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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310 reviews9 followers
January 13, 2025
My man🫶
This book is so wild in so many ways but the way you feel the chemistry with these characters🤌🏻
Insta love is so not usually my thing but daaaaaaaamn if it got me this time.
The way these two met each other EXACTLY where they were at in life AND accepted each fully. Perfecto.
These books are tropes are not for everyone but this has been my favorite in this series.
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593 reviews27 followers
July 27, 2024
ARC
Not my favorite story by this author. It was equal between enjoying some things and some things not so much. I loved that the MMC was a gentle giant and fell in love since being in the kindergarten and wanted to be a dad. The FMCs kids were so funny, I really wished for more of them. How one of them eat a worm? Hilarious 😂 It wasn't hot as I hoped. Book 1 and 2 are still my favorite regarding hotness. The big sized dick sounded kind of unbelievable. First she can't get the half of his cock head in and then suddenly she sits halfway on it without being ripped... But I went with it. What I really really disliked was the grovelling he had to do and a tiny mistake or misbehaving led to mistrust on her mom and her. That felt kind of wrong considering his calm nature and being nothing but kind right of the start. Overall it was a pleasant read.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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6,283 reviews89 followers
August 8, 2024
Private investigator Vince (H44) feels out of place in the city, and longing for the simpler life the mountains have to offer, he decides to visit his friend Daryl, who has his own unique style of waking his friend. Vince heads to the gym where he instantly falls for small, curvy Fred (h24), a single mom with a unique family setup, in a hilariously sexy meetup that leaves Fred with no doubts as to his interest in her. Vince wants someone to take that chance with him and love him, but he his size from top to bottom just sends women running, unable to see that he's a gentle giant looking for that special one. Fred's life choices have been giving to others, but until Vince she's never been fulfilled and valued as a desirable woman. Vince has so many concerns about their size difference and his place in her world, but she's determined to convince him that after having multiple babies she's ready to take him on and eagerly pursues him. The heat between these two in some unexpected locales, as Vince and Fred explore breeding and lactation kinks. Daryl’s wake-up method definitely had an impact on things and pushed the two into moving their physical relationship along. Vince's journey from feeling lost to finding love and purpose with Fred and her kids is so amazing and I loved that the kids were such an integral part of their relationship. Fred's openness and boldness perfectly balance Vince's tenderness, sensitivity, and protectiveness. Fred's mother, Gail, initially distrusts Vince due to her own past experiences, and her treatment of Vince seemed really rough at times, and you just wanted her to step back and realize how much happiness he brought to Fred and the girls. However, Vince's genuine love for Fred and his commitment to their family gradually win Gail over. Sweet and ultra-spicy, as always from Elena Dawne, erotic romance with size difference, breeding, and lactation kink, exploring love, trust, family, and devotion.
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453 reviews166 followers
July 27, 2024
Elena Dawne returns to her Spice in the Mountain series with Vince's story and I couldn't be more than ecstatic about it! I had been highly anticipating his story and it did not disappoint. Vince and Frederica's story felt like a smutty fever dream and I absolutely loved it. Although it was personally missing the angst factor for me, I almost didn't care because these two were so adorable. They had that instant connection and it didn't take long for Vince to decide that she was the one. Fred was known as the "baby-maker" in town and I loved that Vince had no problems with it. She was a single mom who always wanted a big family—with or without a man in the picture. Once Vince came into the picture, Fred realized that she wanted a family with him.

“I'm in love… It's everything I've wished for, and nothing's going to stop me from this dream come true. I'm all in. I'm moving to town and making her mine.”


In the end, this was another winner by Elena Dawne and I was so happy with how Vince's story turned out. Vince and Fred's relationship was so incredibly sexy, passionate, and instant. Fans of the breeding kink will be happy with this one. Daryl absolutely cracked me up in this book and I can't wait for his story with the town's innocent librarian—Cadence Malone. I'm sure that it's going to be another incredibly sexy and fun one because he was unfortunately known as the "ass-fucker" in town, which made me laugh so hard. I highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a sexy small town romance with plenty of spice and heat between an adorable mountain man and his precious heroine.

*This ARC was generously provided by the author for an honest review*
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163 reviews7 followers
January 13, 2026
⭐ 100-Star Review ⭐
Milk & Cookie (Spice in the Mountains #5)
by Elena Dawne

I loved everything about this book. It was ridiculously sweet, deeply caring, and wrapped in exactly the kind of cozy-filthy mountain man energy I didn’t know I needed. Gail annoyed me a little at first, but she absolutely came around, and by the end I was fully sold on her.

I usually have mixed feelings about insta-love, but this one worked beautifully. The connection felt natural, the devotion was instant but earned, and Vince? Whew. Father-material, husband-material, obsessed material. This was soft, spicy, and comforting all at once — with zero boredom and zero skimming.

📊 Total Book Experience: 10/10
• Plot / Storyline (Structure): 10/10
• Writing (Errors): 10/10
• Characters: 10/10
• Again-able (Re-read Value): 10/10
• Emotion: 10/10
• Book Cover: 10/10
• Visual / Illustratable Quality: 10/10
• Addictiveness: 10/10
• Threshold Quality: 10/10
• Uniqueness: 10/10




If you’re wondering whether or not you should read this…

THE ANSWER IS YES‼️‼️

Sweet ✔️
Smoky ✔️
Mountain man devotion ✔️
Comfort read with spice ✔️

Put it on your TBR. Immediately.
348 reviews5 followers
August 10, 2024
The book description gives you a good idea of what you are getting yourself in for, reading this book - and also, if you have read other books by Elena Dawne, that will give you a pretty good indication too.

It is fun, smutty, breedy, milky, size difference, age-gap, sweet (with a hint of secrets / escaping from a dark past) goodness, Vince and Fred (Frederica) are made for each other, there is an instant (and funny) connection at their first meeting, though due to her mother's influence and their lifestyle, Fred isn't initially sold on Vince's desire to form a family with her and her children. Fred's girls are super cute (and hilarious), and the way in which they came about and Fred's label in the town as "the Babymaker" is pretty unique - I enjoy reading storylines I haven't come across before (and this was new to me).

I have read the other books in this series, you could easily read Milk and Cookie as a standalone but I highly recommend the others too. I can't wait to see how the next book in this series plays out.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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439 reviews5 followers
July 29, 2024
🥕ARC Review💍

Milk & Cookie by Elena Dawne is the equal parts §ẅėėṭlƴ romantic, ägë-gäp & lü§tƴ brėėɗịṅg ƙịṅƙ 😏 (and mịlƙƴ füṅ...🤍) insta-love story for the Spice in the Mountains Series. It is Vince & Fred's journey. Vince is in town on vacation visiting his friend Daryl (definitely looking forward to his story next) and goes to the gym. He instantly falls in love & lust with the other gym occupant, Fred - Frederica. She notices him just as much & boldly flirts with him. Vince has been heartbroken in the past due to his very large size & habit of falling in love fast. He is adorable & caring & swoon-worthy in how he approaches Fred & how he treats the girls. Fred is a free spirit, local baker (which Vince loves her garlic cheesy twists) has 3 beautiful daughters and is everything that Vince wants. Fred & Vince balance each other out, reading how they do that made this book so enjoyable. The sex was insanely hot!! 🥵🔥💋 This story has everything in it. Loved it all. 🥰

...aaaaannnnddd basically every time Vince helped relieve Fred's pressure 🥛😉 will live rent free in my mind...
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2,326 reviews10 followers
August 24, 2024
Just so sweet and adorable

This is book five in the series and it was just so sweet and wonderful. I like all the gentlemen of this series. Some are a bit odd, quirky, strong, old fashioned, but all of them treat their ladies well. I like that the author always mentions Ben, the original guy, from book one and another friend from the guy group. This book features Vince, who is built like a giant in all the places. Vince has always wanted to be a husband and father but since he is built like a giant, most women are reluctant. Vince takes some time off to visit one of the guys, Daryl, in a small town that he has settled in. This town and people are hilarious because they give people nicknames, LoL! Vince is written like a dream in how he treats the lady of his affection. I am glad this book popped up in my alert to read. Read On!
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140 reviews
September 21, 2024
I think I'm addicted to TikTok books/authors now. Like, I know they won't be any good, but I read them anyway.
I knew I was in for insta-love, but this book is long enough to not have it.
Fred and her mother got on my nerves. The kids were unnecessary to the plot. I dont like the writing style or how the characters spoke at all, really.
There isn't much to say besides this was a let down, as expected.

Update: Something else I forgot the address, the smutty scenes weren't even that good! The authorVinceso focused on Vincent's size and Fred's boobs.
Lastly, I was beginning to suspect Vince and Daryl were gay, tbh. Their communication was TOO open for my liking.
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489 reviews13 followers
August 5, 2024
The hero was unbelievably perfect and fell hard in the insta-love, he was obsessed but in a level-headed way and he embraced everything about the heroine and her family fully. I loved that. Their first meeting was sweet and hot and as usual for Elena Dawne, the breeding and the lactation kink are out in full force for this one.

I'm super excited about Daryl's book, he was hilarious in this, or rather his reputation as the local freak.

Thanks to Elena Dawne and Booksprout for the review copy and this is my honest review.
550 reviews16 followers
December 24, 2025
This was honestly HARD to rate. on one hand it reads like a fever dream and the dialogue and characters are very unique and over the top. on the other hand the smut is super hot and detailed and by the end you can't help but root for the leads and their family.

I honestly would have rated this higher bc the smut is so good but the ML was really odd. he's this weird mix of super innocent and simple minded, but at times, really sharp and in control? it works but it was an odd thing to read a grown man who seems to have the social skills and wherewithall of a teenager.
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45 reviews
July 27, 2024
I’m obsessed with everything Elena Dawne writes and Milk & Cookie does not disappoint!
Vince is a giant cinnamon roll mountain of a man who desperately wants to love and be loved. He might be my favorite of all the mountain men in this very milky series! Fred is a no nonsense lady and his perfect match. There’s a whole lot of insta love, natural remedies, and of course breeding. So much breeding.
1,661 reviews27 followers
July 28, 2024
Elena writes some of the hottest yet sweetest books I've ever stumbled across so when I saw there was an opportunity to get an ARCA for this I jumped at the chance.

Poor Vince has a complex about his size and has been knocked one to many times because of it so when Fred enters the picture he can't believe someone so tiny would be willing to step up to the task...but Fred is all to egar to see what he has in store😂

This was sweet, over the top and very fun

4/5 stars
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2,769 reviews6 followers
August 10, 2024
This was a perfect blend of steam, kink and sweetness. I don't think I've ever read a hero before that yearns so strongly to be a dad and take care of a family and not be an overly protective alpha male. Vince was the perfect man that more women should be craving - not the alpha holes that want to dominate and be all bossy.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,415 reviews15 followers
August 19, 2024
What's not to love about Vincent. He's big lovable protective and Uber hot. Fred is young but knows what she wants she wants to have a lot of kids. I wanted to be angry with her mom for the deception and for raising her to be so mistrusting of all males. But after completing the story you can't help but understand why she did what she did. But this was a super hot super sweet instead of book.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,451 reviews20 followers
August 30, 2024
This is a fun, lighthearted but very spicy story about a man named Vince, who is a giant of a man. And a woman named Frederica who is a single mom but wants to have more kids. Vince thinks he is just the man for the job. He also wants to be a dad to her other kids. Vince and Frederica explore many kinks together and seem like a match made in heaven. I truly have enjoyed all of Elena's books that I have read.
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2,666 reviews81 followers
October 29, 2024
★ Lush & sweet tale ★

The fifth installment in this amazing series! The crazy chemistry Vince and Fred/Frederica (aka “Angel Girl”) cannot be denied, and things are so good, that it makes dreaming a reality. The only real big douse of cold water, however, could be the one person who has supported Fred this whole time, for one instance. Fred’s kids are freakin’ adorable to boot. Another lush and sweet tale - very much looking forward to the last story (Daryl and Cadence).
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68 reviews4 followers
July 30, 2024
I think I got a cavity reading this book! Vince is the full package 😉 and Frederica is just funny/crazy enough to to balance him out. The kink, the love, the spice… it’s hot 🥵 Then mix in cute kids and sweet banter, you have a great book all around.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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860 reviews
August 3, 2024
Loved Vince. He is the best part of the book. The sexy times are oh so good. Dirty talking as always oh so good. Certain things got on my nerves. Fred’s mom was a hypocrite and lied to her daughter. The kids were cute and Vince’s interactions with them made my heart melt.

Received a copy from BookSprout.
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83 reviews1 follower
August 9, 2024
WOW! Read this because it was a recommendation from a Book Group on FB. The spice was NOT disappointing. A few scenes weren't exactly my cup of tea, but I could see where the author was going with it and appreciate it. If you are into age-gap, breeding kinks, massive schlongs, and lactation, this is one for you.
47 reviews1 follower
August 9, 2024
Wasn’t really into this one. Vince came off kind of weird. I thought the premise was alright but felt a little off? I’m not sure. The size thing was interesting but felt it was a little drawn out I guess?

Overall, the first two books of this series were the best but the rest have fallen off a tad for me which kind of stinks because Elena’s books are generally quick, fun dirty reads.

Don’t worry though, I’ll still continue reading them every time a new one drops 🤣🤣🤣
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29 reviews5 followers
August 12, 2024
loved every second of this!

I loved every second of this book so much! Vince is an absolute sweetheart despite his size and Fred definitely packs a punch! This book was funny and perfectly smutty! Highly recommend.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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12 reviews4 followers
August 13, 2024
I loved this flipping book, and the hero was Chef Kiss. How obsessed he was with the heroine even more chef kisses Elena Dawne my girl you did your thing with this book.

And the girls are so damm cute I just enjoyed this so muchhhh.
359 reviews1 follower
January 23, 2025
I like that he's protective of her because of her past and because of who he is as a man. I love watching them bond and start their own little family. I love watching them bond and start their own little family. I also thought that there was a good bit of humor in there that made me laugh.
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815 reviews
August 17, 2024
If you've come this far and read the rest of the series, you'll love this too.
1,378 reviews3 followers
August 20, 2024
Vince is a VERY large man who has some confidence issues and Fred is a woman who loves babies but has trust issues. Their path to a relationship is somewhat funny and heartfelt. This book does have lactation kink (duh….milk!) and the author integrates it well into the story.
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