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236 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 5, 2024
His journey was filled with challenges.Oh was it? Name one. Name one single challenge. Show me anything remotely challenging. Here is the full passage so you can see how empty the whole thing is:
His journey was filled with challenges. The forest was dense and alive with the rustling of creatures unseen. He moved with the grace of a deer, his senses attuned to the subtle changes around him.Oh you fucking did, did you? When? When did you learn any of that shit? We just read the entirety of the "journey" and none of that fucking happened. "Filled with challenges," my ass.
Days turned into nights, and just as Tahote's hope began to wane, he stumbled upon a glade bathed in golden light. At its center stood a figure, tall and radiant, with a crown of flowers and vines entwined in his hair. His eyes sparkled like sunlight on water, and a warm smile spread across his face.
"Adekagagwaa," Tahote whispered, awe-struck.
The spirit turned, his voice as melodious as the birdsong. "Welcome, young hunter. I have been expecting you."
Tahote bowed low. "Great Spirit, I seek your blessing for my people. The winter has been long, and we are in need of your warmth." [I note that at the story's opening, everything was already warming up, flowers were blooming, they're fine.]
Adekagagwaa's laughter was like a breeze rustling through the leaves. "Rise, Tahote. The warmth you seek is already on its way. But tell me, what have you learned on your journey?"
Tahote thought for a moment. "I have learned patience, perseverance, and the value of hope. I have seen the resilience of the forest and the beauty of nature's balance."