Deceitful Lies by Brook Wilder (Barinov Bratva Book 2)
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I feel like readers who complete this novel have a torture kink—because genuinely why was Paige so unnecessarily stubborn? And why did we stick around for it?
Deceitful Lies begins right where we left off, Paige Geraldnova has been kidnapped by Andrei’s jealous ex and Andrei Vasilyevich is left reeling with the many secrets now uncovered by the once innocent Reyes’ family. Moreover, Igor Karamazov continues to retaliate and threaten the lives of the Barinov family. With numerous kidnapping attempts and a conniving cousin—the second instalment is as turbulent as the previous novel.
I desired for a more contemporary approach to the second instalment. The first novel was filled with sonnet-like dialogue and articulation written poetically that it was difficult for the reader to empathise with the characters as human beings. Unfortunately, this writing style continues for this book and it did build a wall between the audience and the characters. Every reader’s desire is to be emotionally connected and enthralled by a book, and when the pen of an author is too strong, it can mitigate that.
Contrary to the first instalment, this novel had a lot more filler information and waffling. Further, it questioned if there was even a plot at all. Whilst I understand it may have been intended to keep readers on their toes. As an audience, it genuinely felt like we were being thrown the same information over, and over again—with no new discoveries to be entertained by. Emma’s relentless annoyance by Paige, a new love interest amongst the Bratva soldiers, Talia’s crazy antics, and the secrets by Andrei’s mother and father-in-law, all overwhelmed the entire novelty of this mafia romance.
Overall, the plot seemed very unfocused. Characters continued to make choices that were unfounded, and the audience is not provided a reason behind why Paige is adamant in leaving the Barinov estate? Why she continues to hold on hope for her father? It was a very confusing experience as a reader and did not facilitate any empathy for the plot at all. Not a single character evoked relatability or enjoyment within me, each personality exhibited manipulation, gaslighting and a neglect to the seriousness of the war (with exception to Andrei).
‘Deceitful Lies’ truly adhered to its name but not in the greatest ways. Whilst the plot is intriguing at face value, the overwhelming amount of manipulation and lies was too much to digest in such a short form. Especially, when it is not articulated at pace that is ‘readable’. I desired for patience within this novel, a new contemporary take. Instead, characters were purely evil, taking chances on other’s lives and it truly was just a piss-take at the end. Unfortunately, after the extreme turbulence of this novel, I cannot stomach the third instalment.