Their Perfect Luna

by Angel Ann

Hi, my name is Eva Sliverfoot, the daughter of the Alpha of the Silverfoot pack. Being the Alpha’s daughter has never helped me in life. I have known great heartache and struggle. All my hopes and dreams are about to be crushed and I will face the ultimate betrayal. Life won’t always be hard for me but unfortunately it is only going to get worse before it gets better. Thankfully, I won’t be alone. I will have my three alpha mates as well as my loved ones to help me get through everything the Moon Goddess decides to throw my way.

Genres: Dark Romance, Ebooks

188 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 18, 2024

Reviews

[Sarah McArthur · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF. I have no idea why this book has such high reviews. It. Was. Terrible. I felt like I was reading smut written by a 10 year old!

There are several instances where the author put something into the book that felt spur of the moment and not at all premeditated and it made the book so confusing.
2 examples of this: 1. When the King and his brothers arrive to check out their pack, her dad and everyone else in the pack is on good behavior trying to suck up to the royal alphas. But when the king is looking for his mate the FL’s dad leaves the feast, goes to where he’s locked her up, and SA’s her. This had never happened before and up to this point he’s always called her trash and less than him and everyone else so it made no sense that out of nowhere this just happened. Especially when the alpha king is there! Like why??
2. Apparently the pack healer is the FL’s bio mother. We had never even met this woman before, but then she just tells the FL that’s she’s been trying to protect her behind the scenes all these years, but was brutally beaten and SA’d for it all the time. Ummm ok. That information would have been nice to know before instead of just randomly throwing it in there for kicks and giggles.

As mentioned before, the writing style just felt elementary for me. Every one of the alpha mates tried to sexy talk her I just cringed, it was not at all attractive to me. And the FL meets the moon goddess at one point and you’d imagine that a goddess, who has been around for millennia would have refined speech. No. She describes something as “super important”. As an adult woman, the only time I ever use the word “super” anything is if I’m talking to my toddler.

Lastly, we quickly learn that the FL has not one but 3 alpha mates and I had so many issues with their relationship. Besides the cringy sexy talk. 1. Height difference. Let me just say that I have no issues with height difference when it makes sense. At the beginning of the book it states that she is 4’3”. Now I’m hoping that was a typo, but when this girl has been malnourished her entire life, so probably has no curves to speak of, and is the same height as a child. That just feels wrong when these tall (over 6 ft) alphas are telling her how sexy she is! She looks like a child! There are so many things I don’t think the author thought through when she made this height for the FL. She has a younger half brother who is 7 almost 8 and she carries him around like a baby all the time. How? He’s probably the same height as her! Not to mention all the times she got on her tiptoes to kiss one of her mates. Like did she reach his peck by getting on her tiptoes, because she’s definitely not reaching his mouth. There’s literally a 2 foot height difference here! 2. All three alpha mates have the exact same personality. And I know they’re triplets, but they’d be different people. I stopped reading at 53% and I still couldn’t tell them apart by their personality. Just the cringy nicknames they gave her. That was the only thing different about them.

[Meredith Maville · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book is hard to put down. It captures you and invests you into wanting to see the happy ending! I am not a huge avid reader but honestly couldn’t put the book down! There are some twists and turns to the happy ending, but definitely gives you that happily ever after feeling. And wanting more!

[Salima · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book. Eva is awesome. Such a strong, courageous, kind, independent Luna. She has been through such a horrible childhood and she came out so much stronger in the end. Her mates are so protective over her. They are perfect for her. So supportive of Eva. I don’t want to spoil the story. I hope the author decides to have this book as part of a series with other characters from the book. Would love to read their stories. Will definitely read more from this amazing author Angel Ann

[Tiffany Willis · Rating 5 out of 5]

The book is amazing my first book I read from start to finish without loosing interest in the book

[Ashley Hicks · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was amazing! Loved every second of it it was such and easy read!

[tina maisonette · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed this book very much! It's got a little bit of everything in it! It kept me up reading all night! It's about a king who goes to find his mate but he has a secret of his own! I don't want to give too much away it's a good read!

[Lily Baz · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF. Stopped the book after the FL dad brutally SA’s her. Felt like the book was written on watt pad by a 13 year old, then published.

[George V · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amazing back story with great plot twists wasn't able to put it down. Craving more

[Julie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved this read! Amazing characters! I love all things paranormal and this book didn’t disappoint. If you love mates, wolves, romance, intrigue and so much more go read this book! Highly recommended!!

[Melissa Willis · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amazing read, couldn't put it down. I read it in 2 days. Left me wanting more.

[Nyssa Bryant · Rating 1 out of 5]

Don’t waste your time. This was awful!

[Sam Banks · Rating 1 out of 5]

Now, I’m not usually one to write a bad review, but this book made me laugh and cringe throughout and not in a good way.

I finished it, I felt it did get better and to be honest, I’d probably read the series because that’s the sort of person I am, and I quite like the premise of the story, but be prepared to feel like you’re reading teenage porn.
There seems to be no planning? Things are dropped in with seemingly no thought.

I finished it through sheer will and don’t think it should be rated so highly on the writing style. There are a number of spelling/ grammar errors and often uses “super” to emphasis stuff which is just basic. There is one point where she’s having a very serious conversation and it says super important and I just thought, why could she not write vital? Or incredibly important?

Anyway, sorry to the author, please don’t read this review. Well done for writing a whole book, get better editors next time.

[Ashley Strother · Rating 1 out of 5]

This one was rough. I’m not one to have triggers or limits when it comes to things I read. I’ve yet to find something that was too much to make me DNF but the detailed rape made me consider it. It was uncomfortable and seemed so random and out of place.
A lot of this story seemed random and out of place. Rushed in places. There were times when I thought it needed way more scene setting and got none and other times when there was too much random scene setting that literally didn’t need to be there. I got started on my wolf shifter journey way back, scouring wattpad for the most entertaining ones that weren’t just smut. There were parts of this story that really seemed like they were yanked right out of a few different wattpad stories I’ve read before. And it was a lot of fluff no filler. I mean I don’t know if there’s such a thing as too much smut but man,this seemed like it was trying too hard. Overall,it was a wattpad wannabe that didn’t live up to my expectations.

[sycokittykat - Stefanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

From abused to blessed

Eva Silverfoot is the daughter to the alpha. Due to an unfortunate run in with rogue wolves when she was younger she lost her mother and brother. When they were killed her father was never the same. When he came home with a new wife everything just got worse. Once it was time for her to transform for the first time her life was nearly forfeit.

However, once her mate came into the picture things were going to change in more ways than she would ever expect. Her life would finally not be all pain and hiding.

This was a wonderful story of survival and finding out just how important you are to the right people. I loved all the little surprises that showed up. This is a fast paced and spicy read.

[Patricia Howard · Rating 5 out of 5]

An awesome book of shifters and harems. First off this is a new to me author and trust she delivered in this story. These are two of my favorite troupes which had me not walking away from it.
The Luna, is a very important image/person within the wolf society. She is the embodiment of love and is a caring soul. Because of this it takes a very special person to be a Luna.
Her mate discovers her at a routine visit to a lower pack. Littlw does she know that she will mate with 3 souls.
This book is one that I will recommend to everyone.

[Mirra Mitchell · Rating 4 out of 5]

I recently read an amazing book about shifters and harems by a new author. The story features two of my favorite themes, which kept me hooked. The Luna holds great significance in the wolf society and embodies love and kindness. It's a special role that requires a unique individual. When her mate finds her during a visit to a lower pack, she learns that she will have three mates. I highly recommend this book to everyone! It has a little of everything in this book, perfect for your first book Ann. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with.

[Micki-D · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a quick read with a good plot and back story some great plot twists it will take you on an emotional roller coaster ride. The charters development for Eva the MFC was great.

A story of survival, loss, trauma, love, hope and so much more

Eva: has been broken, abused tormented. An unwanted she wolf that suffered so much pain and trauma. Until her mates find. Only then does she learn who she really is and the power she hold inside of her. And become a strong, kind, courageous Luna

[Leah Barkoff · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was a DNF for me. The characters are flat and the lack of editing finally took its toll. Storyline has potential though. There were a lot of spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors. Run it through grammarly, love! Or have a trusted person do a read through. I hate giving a bad review but hope this will help the author to continue to grow with their writing. Also, include TW’s. I might have missed them which would be my bad.

[Eli · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short and steamy read

Perfect short shifter read!
Please read the trigger warnings if needed.
I love the actual shifting in the book! This book has all the feels. Happy, angry, sadness, angst! You name it.
MFC has had a rough life but finds her HEA with her 3 mates.
Totally recommend this book. Some scenes were difficult but totally worth it to keep pushing for that HEA that everyone deserves!

[Nita · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was not expecting the emotional roller coaster this book took me on. The first few chapters ripped my heart out and stomped on it with all the horrible things Eva went through. Once she found her triplet mates Archer, Arrow, and Bo the story put my heart back together and made me absolutely swoon. I would love a book about their kids' 20 years later.

[Blake · Rating 4 out of 5]

While this was a unique story, there were strong abusive and SA scenes that were uncomfortable to read. However, after a certain point this became a cute feel-good story with both steamy and action scenes. It was a bit repetitive at times, and I wish some parts had been more detailed. Overall it turned out to be a pretty good book.

[Mary Covey · Rating 4 out of 5]

I honestly love this little short story at first I was really upset and I was really sad at the beginning and then as I started reading I started Loving how it was turning out and the ending was just perfect I can't wait to read the second book the first book was really good it was also my first time reading a shifter romance and it was pretty interesting

[Samantha Watson · Rating 4 out of 5]

If you want a good fairy tail pnr then this book is the one. Reading through this book had me feeling all giddy inside. At some point I started to lose the interest but then it kicked back up. Poor Eva, she lived an awful life, that is until all 3 of her mates came along. They gave her the life she deserved.

[Amber · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is so cringey and had me putting it down to say "what" multiple times, but somehow, I love it anyway?

If you just want some cringey werewolf mates with decent smut, read this. If that's not the vibe you're going for, pass on it.

[Cali · Rating 1 out of 5]

I could not make it past 27%. It was really that bad. The writing was like something being narrated rather than experienced. There was barely any dialogue and the things the antagonists said were cartoonishly evil.

[Kurtins R · Rating 3 out of 5]

I'm not sure if I liked this story. Felt a little rushed and a little to much info too fast. I lost interest at times. But not to bad a story,

[Redrum Redrum · Rating 5 out of 5]

Slow burns are usually hard for me to read, but this one was delicious!

[Candace Mellinger · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great Book!

Eva's story is heartbreaking. Her mates are amazing and loving her through her healing. The book kept my attention and the storyline flowed.

[Alexis Smith · Rating 4 out of 5]

Once you pick this up you won’t put it down! It’s good the plot is good there are a few quirks but over all I loved it! SPICYYYY

[Katy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very ppc ish

This reads like a pay per chapter book, very basic and very dramatic not really my cup of tea tbh nothing wrong with it per se.