OK, first, I'm not interested in crooked cops and the mob as the main vehicles for a story line. Some people are; not me. So that was strike one. However, there were other things about this book that I really didn't like, and I found this very surprising given the rave reviews (in the front of the book - OK, I should have been suspicious) from people whose writing I greatly admire (e.g. George Pelacanos).
For one, I kept checking to see if I had the "abridged" edition (I didn't) since the plot and characters seemed so ill-formed. I felt like the story line was rushed. He does a nice job of tying it all up at the end, but at that point I thought, "come on, who really cares?" The victims aren't that interesting - a drug dealer, who we don't know at all, and then the chief of detectives who we meet only once at a party (who of course has an adoring (why?) wife (beautiful of course).
I think the book is supposed to propel itself on the strength of the protagonist's character, but while he's a likable enough guy, moral, and all that, he's not that compelling. None of the women characters, who have the potential to be very interesting, are well-developed, and the main female character is, of course, gorgeous, tough, and troubled. Please - can we move beyond the stereotypical female cop? Thank you.
There's quite a lengthy afterword about the author's struggle with this book and the publication process, which as someone who's tried it myself, knows it's incredibly difficult and soul-searing. But the end product should be about the art, right, not the author's angst? I got the impression that Moe Praeger (protagonist) is the author's alter-ego, struggling with acceptance and his place in the world. Absolutely can buy that and sympathize, but ignoring the other characters makes it less credible. Fleshing them out more, spending more time with how they fit into the plot (maybe how they feel about stuff going on - there's an idea). The writing structure, metaphors, style, etc., is strong. Coleman's a good craftsman, and seems like a sensitive, nice guy. I feel bad for dissing his book. But I think he can do better.