Content:
Profanity: None.
Violence: Mild. There is dragon fire and off-screen injuries from it, as well as a moment where it's obvious a character has been 'roughed up' by others. He limps.
Sexual: Mild. There are a few chaste swoony kisses, but nothing steamy.
Content: This does have mild references to religion. They pray and ask the "Maker" for help in distressing moments.
2.5 star rating.
This. Was. Rough.
I nearly stopped reading at least four times. The idea was interesting on plot, characters, and dragons, but it was soooo not ready for publication. This felt like an early draft. So much depth was missing.
In the early chapters there were page breaks that typically indicate a scene change or time lapse, but they started up directly where the last sentence left off. Leaving me ornery because the scene should've just continued, but my brain was ready for a scene change and then having to break, back-peddle, and start again. At least three of them. Annoying.
This being a 12 dancing princesses retelling was a bit misleading. Besides the princesses actually dancing at a ball they didn't want to go to, there was little to show this as a retelling. I would say it's more of a 'inspired by' than a true retelling. By a long ways.
And the romance. Insta-love for no reason at all. Confiding deep personal secrets after two days and no real provocation to do so, and I still have no idea why the two are attracted to each other. There was a lot of, 'oh he's handsome' and 'he might be able to help me' but that was it on Emelia's end. Since we don't get a POV for Merrick, his is even more vague. They basically stare at each other, she blushes a lot, he tells her his tragic backstory (even though it made no sense why he would trust her with it), and then they're just...in love? It was eye-roll territory for me. I scowled at this "romance". It could've been so cute if the story were fleshed out better.
The dragon language was also frustrating. It's a bunch of random letters randomly lower case and capitalized smushed together. I skimmed because there's no way to read it. How do you read something like CyWitYidEfy? That's what it was. Not a great choice. Halted the flow exponentially.
There was potential with the story, but it fell so flat on every level I can describe. It had hints of something fun, but it didn't get fleshed out before the author just decided to publish. Was there a deadline? I don't know. The thing I do know? I'm disappointed, and annoyed because I could've been reading something else. I have another book by this author in my Kindle, and I honestly am considering just deleting it. Too many books, too little time! I don't want to waste mine again.
UPDATE: I just read that other book by this author that I mentioned owning on my kindle (fully intending to DNF and delete with prejudice) and really enjoyed it! It must be just this book for some reason. Go figure?