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Magic In Me
Small town, big problems.
I arrived in Whispering Pines to find my father's killers and punish them. I succeeded in the first part of my mission, but when it came to the second part, I hit a wall.
How do you punish a demon spirit? From everything I'd learned so far, that's what killed not only my father but also my powerful mother all those years ago.
My mother was the only one who could destroy the spirits. I wished I knew how she did it.
Looking for clues, I searched the house for her grimoire, hoping she had one. But the clue arrived in a more alluring form than I’d expected.
A rude but also maddeningly enticing demon showed up on my doorstep to tell me that it was all my fault.
Mom protected this town from the spirits. No one had seen them for twenty-five years, and I was the one who let hell loose.
Though, there was a silver lining. He promised to teach me how to stop the disaster I created.
But he never promised I would succeed. And if I didn't, there would be no one to blame but myself.
I arrived in Whispering Pines to find my father's killers and punish them. I succeeded in the first part of my mission, but when it came to the second part, I hit a wall.
How do you punish a demon spirit? From everything I'd learned so far, that's what killed not only my father but also my powerful mother all those years ago.
My mother was the only one who could destroy the spirits. I wished I knew how she did it.
Looking for clues, I searched the house for her grimoire, hoping she had one. But the clue arrived in a more alluring form than I’d expected.
A rude but also maddeningly enticing demon showed up on my doorstep to tell me that it was all my fault.
Mom protected this town from the spirits. No one had seen them for twenty-five years, and I was the one who let hell loose.
Though, there was a silver lining. He promised to teach me how to stop the disaster I created.
But he never promised I would succeed. And if I didn't, there would be no one to blame but myself.
196 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 12, 2024
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Lana Melyan
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September 8, 2024
This book picks up where the first one left off. The author has Keira discovering her destiny and takes you into her life with action, suspense, surprises and a hot chemistry growing between her and Aaron. It's an interesting story, is well written, moves fluidly and is a terrific read. It does end on a cliffhanger.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book. All opinions in this review are my own and are freely given.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book. All opinions in this review are my own and are freely given.
September 11, 2024
I'm a first time reader of Lana Melyan and Magic in Me is an immersive continuation of the Queen of Gates series that expertly weaves together small-town mysteries, family legacies, and dark magic and kept me glued to the pages. If you're someone who loves a story packed with high stakes, gripping supernatural challenges, and a strong protagonist battling her inner demons—both literally and figuratively—this book is a must-read.
The story picks up with our heroine, who arrives in Whispering Pines with a singular focus: to avenge her father's death. But what she uncovers is far more than she bargained for. Melyan does a fantastic job portraying the frustration and determination of a character who’s out of her depth, especially when the enemy she’s after is not flesh and blood, but a demonic spirit. This struggle to understand and combat her family’s deadly past keeps you turning the pages, eager to discover what secrets Whispering Pines holds.
One of the most engaging aspects of Magic in Me is the exploration of the protagonist’s family legacy. Both her father and her mother were caught in this dark magical world, and Melyan delves deep into the mystery of how her mother once kept the town safe from these spirits. It feels like a race against time as she tries to unearth her mother's secrets, making the search for the grimoire both personal and urgent.
Enter the demon—rude, frustrating, and undeniably alluring. I love how Melyan gives us this complex, morally gray character to add tension and unpredictability. His arrival not only challenges her mission but also her emotions. He’s the one holding the knowledge she needs to stop the spirits, and their dynamic crackles with tension. He holds power over her, not only with the information she seeks but in the way he gets under her skin. Their interactions are magnetic, and I found myself eagerly anticipating each scene they shared.
Melyan also manages to craft a rich, atmospheric setting in Whispering Pines, a town where danger feels ever-present and the boundaries between the supernatural and real world are tantalizingly thin. It’s a place where history weighs heavily on its inhabitants, and the idea that one misstep can unleash hellish forces adds an ominous layer to the story.
The book masterfully balances moments of action with introspection. The protagonist’s internal struggle—knowing that she might have been the one to cause this catastrophe and the burden of fixing it—is beautifully woven into the narrative. You feel her sense of responsibility, her fear of failure, and the burning drive to succeed where her parents couldn't.
Magic in Me is perfect for readers who love a blend of dark magic, family mystery, and a protagonist learning to harness her power in a world fraught with danger. Lana Melyan’s skill in creating tension and building a complex supernatural world is evident in this second book, making it a satisfying, edge-of-your-seat read. If you’re a fan of stories where legacy and magic collide, this book will leave you eager for more.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The story picks up with our heroine, who arrives in Whispering Pines with a singular focus: to avenge her father's death. But what she uncovers is far more than she bargained for. Melyan does a fantastic job portraying the frustration and determination of a character who’s out of her depth, especially when the enemy she’s after is not flesh and blood, but a demonic spirit. This struggle to understand and combat her family’s deadly past keeps you turning the pages, eager to discover what secrets Whispering Pines holds.
One of the most engaging aspects of Magic in Me is the exploration of the protagonist’s family legacy. Both her father and her mother were caught in this dark magical world, and Melyan delves deep into the mystery of how her mother once kept the town safe from these spirits. It feels like a race against time as she tries to unearth her mother's secrets, making the search for the grimoire both personal and urgent.
Enter the demon—rude, frustrating, and undeniably alluring. I love how Melyan gives us this complex, morally gray character to add tension and unpredictability. His arrival not only challenges her mission but also her emotions. He’s the one holding the knowledge she needs to stop the spirits, and their dynamic crackles with tension. He holds power over her, not only with the information she seeks but in the way he gets under her skin. Their interactions are magnetic, and I found myself eagerly anticipating each scene they shared.
Melyan also manages to craft a rich, atmospheric setting in Whispering Pines, a town where danger feels ever-present and the boundaries between the supernatural and real world are tantalizingly thin. It’s a place where history weighs heavily on its inhabitants, and the idea that one misstep can unleash hellish forces adds an ominous layer to the story.
The book masterfully balances moments of action with introspection. The protagonist’s internal struggle—knowing that she might have been the one to cause this catastrophe and the burden of fixing it—is beautifully woven into the narrative. You feel her sense of responsibility, her fear of failure, and the burning drive to succeed where her parents couldn't.
Magic in Me is perfect for readers who love a blend of dark magic, family mystery, and a protagonist learning to harness her power in a world fraught with danger. Lana Melyan’s skill in creating tension and building a complex supernatural world is evident in this second book, making it a satisfying, edge-of-your-seat read. If you’re a fan of stories where legacy and magic collide, this book will leave you eager for more.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 31, 2024
Magic In Me was as good as the first book in this series which must be read first, because this book picks up where that one left off. A stranger has shown up on Keira's doorstep but with his arrival, he brings knowledge. Knowledge of who her and her mother truly are and what they share. Keira finds out why the pond is so important and the role she played with the water drying up. The pond losing water is more than just a pond drying out and with that it brings threats. Threats Keira isn't ready to fight, because she and the people in the town are already being attacked at all angles, and the real threat hasn't even arrived. This story is full of suspense, fighting, threats, deaths, laugh out loud moments, surprises, wonderful characters and more. It ends with a heck of a cliffhanger and I'm more than excited to read the next book in this series just to get more of Keira, Penny, Riven and Aaron. Readers that enjoy a good action-packed paranormal story should not miss out on this story.
October 19, 2024
When our heroine looked into her parent's murders, she discovered a whole lot of secrets. She also unwittingly unleashed some really bad things and now she has to figure out how to put them back where they came from. Our hero might be able to help, but they are going to have their work cut out for them just learning to work together.
This is book two of the series. It works pretty well as a standalone with all the essential bits being covered early on.
This is an urban fantasy story with all the usual races. The story is well written and easy to read with a well developed setting that has lots of secrets to be discovered. I always enjoy exploring a new world and this one was no exception. The characters are also well done, particularly our heroine who is tough and smart, but still has plenty to learn. The plot moves at a good pace with a nice blend of action and intrigue. Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I look forward to more in this series.
Highly recommended.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This is book two of the series. It works pretty well as a standalone with all the essential bits being covered early on.
This is an urban fantasy story with all the usual races. The story is well written and easy to read with a well developed setting that has lots of secrets to be discovered. I always enjoy exploring a new world and this one was no exception. The characters are also well done, particularly our heroine who is tough and smart, but still has plenty to learn. The plot moves at a good pace with a nice blend of action and intrigue. Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I look forward to more in this series.
Highly recommended.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 12, 2024
Magic In Me
I love the concept of Lana Melyan, “Magic In Me,” it was very well written and thought out. I love how in this book by Lana Melyan we pick right back up where book one “Hunter In Me” left off at with the demon just entering Keira house and turning everything that she thought that she knew upside down. Keira just found out that everything that she knew about her mom was a well crafted lie that her mom left behind and that there is was more to the magic that runs through her body. But is Keira able to accept and fully grasp her the full impact of her magic and will she be able to fully grasp it in enough time to prevent an apocalypse from happening? I guess that you will have to read “Magic In Me” to find out what happens. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I love the concept of Lana Melyan, “Magic In Me,” it was very well written and thought out. I love how in this book by Lana Melyan we pick right back up where book one “Hunter In Me” left off at with the demon just entering Keira house and turning everything that she thought that she knew upside down. Keira just found out that everything that she knew about her mom was a well crafted lie that her mom left behind and that there is was more to the magic that runs through her body. But is Keira able to accept and fully grasp her the full impact of her magic and will she be able to fully grasp it in enough time to prevent an apocalypse from happening? I guess that you will have to read “Magic In Me” to find out what happens. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
September 15, 2024
Magic In Me is the first book in the Queen of Gates. Magic In Me follows the story of Keira and Aaran. Magic In Me is quite an interesting and intriguing paranormal romance story. When I first read the overview for Magic In Me, I knew that I had to see what was going to happen to the main characters and I'm thrilled to say that this book did NOT disappoint in anyway whatsoever. In fact Magic In Me kept my attention and interest from the very beginning and held it all the way to the last page of the book. Author Lana Melyan, in my opinion she's a fantastic storyteller and writer. I would certainly recommend this amazing book for anyone else to read. I'm looking forward to see what happens in the next book of this series.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 17, 2024
Wow – this was fantastic!
I absolutely loved the first book, and I had been highly anticipating this one – which did not disappoint. It kicks off right where the first book ends – with a demon in her house. Keira now has a HUGE problem on her hands… something that happened a while ago has broken the spell and is now causing her demon side to come out – AND causing the pond to reduce which is actually hiding a portal to hell.
Keira and the demon (Aaran) have to work together to figure out how to stop the demons that are now coming to the town and possessing people AND learn how to use her demon magic quickly before literally all hell breaks loose. Her mother’s background is now going to create a huge issue for her – in what she was and what Keira inherited from her.
This book was sooo good, and I can’t wait to see what the next book has in store.
I absolutely loved the first book, and I had been highly anticipating this one – which did not disappoint. It kicks off right where the first book ends – with a demon in her house. Keira now has a HUGE problem on her hands… something that happened a while ago has broken the spell and is now causing her demon side to come out – AND causing the pond to reduce which is actually hiding a portal to hell.
Keira and the demon (Aaran) have to work together to figure out how to stop the demons that are now coming to the town and possessing people AND learn how to use her demon magic quickly before literally all hell breaks loose. Her mother’s background is now going to create a huge issue for her – in what she was and what Keira inherited from her.
This book was sooo good, and I can’t wait to see what the next book has in store.
September 12, 2024
I loved reading Magic In Me. The characters are well developed and wonderful to read, both the ones from the first book and those new to this one. I especially enjoyed watching Keira and Aaran's relationship develop. The story picks up exactly where the first book ended. There are secrets, drama and twists as Keira learns more about her mother, her heritage, and the Gate. I can't wait to see what happens in the next book! I highly recommend this book for readers who enjoy fantasy with action, vampires, werewolves and demons. Just be sure to read the first book in the series to get the most out of the story.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 11, 2024
This series is great so far!
I really enjoy reading this story so far. The characters are great. I love how it’s going. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I wish book three was out already so I could read it asap. This kind of genre is totally my favorite. I’m so hooked. Also since I’m a hopeless romantic at heart I am rooting for our main character and a certain someone who shall not be named incase of spoilers. They are perfect for eachother. And our resident ghost is such a sweet heart too! I love her character as well.
I really enjoy reading this story so far. The characters are great. I love how it’s going. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I wish book three was out already so I could read it asap. This kind of genre is totally my favorite. I’m so hooked. Also since I’m a hopeless romantic at heart I am rooting for our main character and a certain someone who shall not be named incase of spoilers. They are perfect for eachother. And our resident ghost is such a sweet heart too! I love her character as well.
September 12, 2024
Kiera is still sorting out who she is and adjusting to what her role is in Whispering Pines. Then Aaran shows up, claiming to have known her mother and to willing to help Kiera figure out her powers. Is he who he claims? Can he help her? I loved this addition to this intriguing series, I enjoyed all the characters and their interaction, and the banter between Kiera and Aaran. I'm hanging out to find out what happens next.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 13, 2024
A hot demon and a shocking heritage! ❤️🔥
So, now we know who the mysterious "he" is... and damn if he's not hot as h3ll, literally! 😂
With his appearance, we get to know what the devil is going on and all about Kiera, her mother and her legacy... It’s a lot to process! 😱🤯
The bad thing is, she doesn't have time to sit and think about all of this, she needs to learn to use her powers stat to stop the end of the world, no pressure there! 😪🙈
Can't wait to read the next book, it's going to be EPIC! 🖤
So, now we know who the mysterious "he" is... and damn if he's not hot as h3ll, literally! 😂
With his appearance, we get to know what the devil is going on and all about Kiera, her mother and her legacy... It’s a lot to process! 😱🤯
The bad thing is, she doesn't have time to sit and think about all of this, she needs to learn to use her powers stat to stop the end of the world, no pressure there! 😪🙈
Can't wait to read the next book, it's going to be EPIC! 🖤
September 3, 2024
Magic In Me by Lana Melyan second book in the Queen of Gates Series.
Book two is a good as the first if not better. Magic In Me is full of suspense, surprises, great Characters and is action packed with a love interest. Keira discovers her destiny as her mother’s heir and the keeper of the gate. The chemistry between Keira and Aaron is heating up. Ends on a cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next book.
Book two is a good as the first if not better. Magic In Me is full of suspense, surprises, great Characters and is action packed with a love interest. Keira discovers her destiny as her mother’s heir and the keeper of the gate. The chemistry between Keira and Aaron is heating up. Ends on a cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next book.
September 12, 2024
Demon? Me? What do you do when you find out not only are you a demon, but you’re royalty as well? This book is a must read. It’s book 2 in the Queen of Gates series. It has everything. Keira discovers secrets kept from her and is determined to figure out how to fix it. Aaron promises to help her fight the devil himself. With the clock ticking down will Keira be able to stop him? I can’t wait to find out.
September 13, 2024
Fun story with interesting characters! Keira is having to really step up to help those in town when some not so nice things start happening. Dangerous situations afoot! Keira has been sort of thrust into a world she wasn’t fully aware; those pesky secrets causing problems. Add in demons and you have an entertaining story! I’d recommend reading book one first and warning! We have ourselves a cliffy here. Looking forward to the next one!
September 13, 2024
This is the second book in the series and starts right where the first book left off. There were so many unexpected surprises and tense moments in the story as Keira learns shocking truths about herself and her mother. I love the snarky banter between her and Aaran as they try to rile each other up. Sadly, Riven mostly takes a backseat throughout most of the book.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 16, 2024
I LOVED this book. The story caught my attention from the beginning and kept it the whole way. Action, intrigue, romance and paranormal beings all in a very readable story. It's not a short story either, it is a good length novel. Definitely worth reading. The ending completely surprised me and has me even more excited to watch the author and see what is next!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 25, 2024
This is the 2nd book in this series and follows on from where the first book ended.
It was great to see Keira learning more about who / what she is and finding out more about her mother.
I was quickly engrossed in the story line there is plenty going on to keep you interested and I am now waiting for the next book in the series.
This is a great book that I can highly recommend.
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC copy of this book.
It was great to see Keira learning more about who / what she is and finding out more about her mother.
I was quickly engrossed in the story line there is plenty going on to keep you interested and I am now waiting for the next book in the series.
This is a great book that I can highly recommend.
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC copy of this book.
September 27, 2024
Enjoying This Series
After reading Hunter in Me, I was anticipating what was going to happen in Magic in Me and Lana didn’t disappoint. She continued to create characters that just suck you in with a story that just keeps you on edge. Picking up right where the first one ended Keira learns more about her mother and what is going on with the town. This was well done and I cannot wait for the third book as I am rooting for Keira.
After reading Hunter in Me, I was anticipating what was going to happen in Magic in Me and Lana didn’t disappoint. She continued to create characters that just suck you in with a story that just keeps you on edge. Picking up right where the first one ended Keira learns more about her mother and what is going on with the town. This was well done and I cannot wait for the third book as I am rooting for Keira.
September 6, 2024
I really enjoyed this book. I’m usually mostly just the gentry of paranormal vampires but I’m expanding my reading and reading about witches and magic is really interesting. It was a definite page Turner and I finished a book very quickly and I would recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 12, 2024
That is a bad thing to do. Bad girl (Ha Ha) Well Keira is learning things she needs to know. Plus she now has a very good looking young devil to help and teach her things. Things are getting real bad though. I hope they can find a way to stop things. Very good story. I received a complimentary review copy of the book and I am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
September 14, 2024
Keira is back and she runs into trouble and drama. A demon shows up and she learns more about what might be going on. Some drama, action, surprises and learning more about her past. A bit of mystery and so much more that had me laughing at times and reading to the end. Enjoyed the story and the characters.
September 16, 2024
The dark has a lot of secrets. As Keira continues to discover her family past, more mysteries appear. Now she has Aaran to help her but he is also tempting her. Can they save the world? Will she become what her destiny fore told?
This dark mystery romance is a slow burn but an intriguing view of the dark side.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This dark mystery romance is a slow burn but an intriguing view of the dark side.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 18, 2024
Magic In Me is the second book in the Queen of Gates trilogy and is a great continuation! This book is just as good as the first one and must be read in order as this picks up where book one Hunter in Me left off. I can wait to see how this trilogy winds up, so excited!.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 6, 2025
Magic In Me (Queen of Gates Book 2)
Magic In Me (Queen of Gates Book 2) What a spectacular book!! The author picks right where she left off. Keirau has a lot to learn and figure out. This book truly well written and the story line is the amazing. You will not be disappointed because I definitely recommend this series!!!
Magic In Me (Queen of Gates Book 2) What a spectacular book!! The author picks right where she left off. Keirau has a lot to learn and figure out. This book truly well written and the story line is the amazing. You will not be disappointed because I definitely recommend this series!!!
September 9, 2024
This picks up were the first book left off. I feel like this book was better than the first book. The chemistry was much better.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 11, 2024
Please read Book 1 first as this one continues where it left off. A must read, page turner, full of suspense story that ended all too soon. This book leaves off with a cliffhanger and I am so excited to see what Book 3 brings.
September 11, 2024
So, book two in the series and it’s as good if not better than the first. What on earth (pun intended) is going to happen in the next one. This series is one of those you don’t want to end, but you know it will, probably sooner than we think. Highly recommended.
September 12, 2024
It does end on a cliffhanger which would make you want to read the next book. The charters are good you have a ghost who is a sweet heart, a sarcastic demon, vampires, witch’s, wolfs the best of the supernatural world.
September 13, 2024
Great series
Loved these books, full of action,supernatural good stuff, all the things I love. A little romance, mystery, and loads of action, you won't be disappointed,can't wait for the final book.
Loved these books, full of action,supernatural good stuff, all the things I love. A little romance, mystery, and loads of action, you won't be disappointed,can't wait for the final book.
September 14, 2024
Keira is learning things about herself and her mother. She has a handsome companion to help her. When bad things happens in town and they might be the ones to put a stop to it.
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I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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