A Betrayal That Can’t Be Forgiven...And A Totally Unlikeable Harem!!
I actually really wanted to like this book, I didn’t want to give it 2 stars, but honestly I was grappling with the decision to give it 1 star. It got 2 because the creativity of the world Boruff writes is well done, and I enjoyed the unique spin on the vampire mythos and origin. However, frankly, in the end there was just too much intrinsically (and “morally”) wrong with this book to garner anything other than a few stars in my mind.
**possible spoilers**
Riley is happily married and has 2 beautiful boys. One day she comes home to find her husband and sons GONE! Their stuff is gone and it is as if they erased their presence from her life entirely! For 5 years Riley suffers until a man claiming to be an FBI agent comes to her home and her world is upended again!! Riley runs to share the craziness (of these new revelations) with one of her closest friends, who is also her trainer—Eli. This is where the story goes from a “mystery” to a full out wackadoo mish-mosh of a paranormal/fantasy/horror/mystery. And although the creativity is there (Boruff does not lack talent) there is just TOO MUCH going on that it often feels (IMO) that the book doesn’t know “what” it is. But that is not even the largest problem/issue - the biggest problem with this book is in the reverse Harem aspect of the reverse Harem. To have a successful reverse Harem you have to have men (be they human, shifters, or in this case, vampires/Supay) that CONNECT with the female protagonist, they also have to make you CARE for them, and root for their relationship with the heroine. They can be brooding, dark, alpha, or all three, heck they can even be an anti-hero, but they MUST be relatable in as much as you root for their love and relationship with the female to succeed etc. In Supay Eli (Riley’s best friend) and eventual lover, is well, detestable. He does something that frankly IMO cannot EVER be forgiven, and even though Anthony (fake FBI guy) was in on the deceit/betrayal of Riley, it’s Eli that truly is the culprit. You have to understand, as a mom, this betrayal is unforgivable!
**BIG SPOILER** do not read the next section if you don’t want to know.
Eli (having grown up with Michael—Riley’s missing/runaway husband) knew AND helped him disappear WITH THE KIDS from his wife’s life. After tragedy befalls Michael yup, he bites the dust, Eli does something so despicable, that I’m STILL furious at him!! He gives the kids, at the time only 1, and 6 to his infertile sister to raise AS HER OWN!! 😡 He literally (instead of even trying to figure out a way to return them to Riley - a woman he claims to love) just hands them over to his sister, who naturally doesn’t want to relinquish them, and claims them 100% as the children of her heart. But it gets worse!!! He then decides, hey my friends dead, I’ve given his kids to my sister, soooo yeah let me keep watch over his wife, but nope, I’ll go a step further, I’ll totally INTEGRATE myself into her life, thus eventually becoming her confidante and best friend...all the while KEEPING HER CHILDREN FROM HER!! And honestly that’s not even the most horrifying part of the book—no—the horrifying part is that Riley FORGIVES him, not only forgives him, but sleeps with him, and although she feels betrayed by him and does tell him how angry she is at him, she continues to lust after him, sleep with him and ACCEPT the situation. She literally says “Hey, I’m hurt by what you did, but ohh I need to FEEL alive again, and I need s*x it has been a long time...so let’s sleep together.” 🙄🙄😖 Are you kidding me? WTH?! And frankly the rest of the men aren’t much better, but at least they didn’t “gift” her kids to their sister *huge eye roll inserted here* By this point, I was so disgusted by his actions and enraged by Riley’s behavior and decision to jump in the sack with him that I had to FORCE myself to read the rest of the book. Then we have Anthony who continues to use the explanation *ahem—try cowardly flimsy excuse* that the big bad Supay council could hurt us (us being him Eli and Michael) if they learned that we talked to you, or God forbid told you hey your kids aren’t dead...oh but we’ll just “stalk” you for five years ummmmm stalker creepy anyone? In Eli’s case integrate himself into her freaking life! Disgusting!
Then there is the reason that Michael her “devoted” hubby took off with the kids - Boruff tries to make it into a big mystery/who dunitt, but this fails as well — fails because all it does is paint Michael as selfish, SO SO SO COWARDLY, and an awful EVIL guy, as he takes his kids away from their mother!!!!! See the recurring theme here? Yup AWFUL men that you want to hit really hard rather than root for.
Suffice to say I found Supay: A RH Novel to completely overwhelmingly FAIL as a Reverse Harem! I’m honestly as I finish writing this thinking I should have given it its 1 Star. Nope, this was one of the most frustratingly annoying and yuck non romantic RH I’ve read in a long time. 😖🙄