Hmmmmm,...
wth was that ending???? Lol, Like there are cliffhangers and then there are abrupt endings. I should have a review or something first then I would have known to be prepared, lol. I seriously thought my kindle had broke. Sigh......
As far as the story goes, I was very intrigued. I seem to love these stories where the character comes home and someone was where they came from the whole time anyway. However sometimes it did feel a little rushed, like that whole insta-love thing. You know what im talking about. One minute sloppy joes, next minute telling secrets she wouldn't even tell her boyfriend of 2 years about and planning forever. Sometimes that works, sometimes it doesn't. It's not really that it didn't here, I just felt like whoooosh time has gone by, right? Wait, what? No? Wow, lol.
Sometimes I loved Blaise. (Which I think that name is so hot!!) next minute he sorta went beyond alpha to stalker ish, possessive ass whole, and then the next he's crying?? He kinda swung into the emotions to far for me which made him come across sometimes as an ass, and I didn't want him to be that I wanted him to be THE GUY! Ya know? Most of the time he worked it, but if I was a girl, and I had just decided to date a guy, and another guy that I'm just a friend with walked up to check on me and new guy throws him down...? I'm running the other direction. Just saying. That was ummm some insta-possessiveness. And I want my restraining order now type stuff, lol. I also felt there was some underlying story between Blaise and Gabe. Anybody else feel that??
Speaking of Gabe, he drove me crazy. He wants to date Alex so bad, and he can come off as a total jerkoff after the fallout, but he also came across to me as the gay best friend too.....?? Weird, maybe it's just me, lol. Danielle, I actually think I wanted Evan to really come and just take care of her already. My gawd! What oh what is it that we dont know about her yet that is such a big secret??? And then paul,....sorry, I just don't believe him. IMO, if that's all that went down he could've explained that at the beginning of the book and then maybe she wouldn't have left in the first place, just saying. And the way he twisted things n the end to make the whole breakup her fault, gosh I hate that in real life.
And of course Alex. I have no idea what any of these guys see in her, seriously. Over dramatic, completely untrusting, which I get to a point, but come on, and then at the end, she let Paul talk her into apologizing for what she did to him when he did what he did.
I really want to read more, seriously. I think maybe if this arc had a little more editing. Maybe a little more character development and instead of the abrupt cliffy just combined the two or however many, into one it could really be a good story. I was drawn in sometimes to the point you couldn't have pried my kindle out of my hands but also sometimes, maybe one of the characters did something a little out of character (Blaise crying, guys I know guys cry but I have him pictured all badass alpha and I don't want my alphas crying, sorry just my opinion) or maybe the story would drag a little and I would lose touch a little. This whole Paul thing is going to drive me mad. I want her with Blaise and only him. Yes with possibly a restraining order, I kid , I kid, but seriously they both are going to have to get their stuff right. Blaise is going to have to be the man that all real life men are and throw the clinger out and Alex is going to have to grow up a bit and stop being a drama queen. Can't wait for more!!! :)