rating : 1.5 stars.
elly if u see this click OFF im telling u now this will not be nice . do it for me just click off . i havent done a rant review in AGES my anger has been simmering for so long i just cannot hold it back 😞😞 BACK AWAY ELLY ‼️ all other stans stay cuz i need yall to assess ur priorities and why u like shitty books cuz no way no way no way . fuck me anyways
not only was this book unbelievably boring , a lot of shit and a lot of PEOPLE [!!] pissed me off 😁😁 so good luck to ur faves because i fucking hate all of them because i enjoy life actually 🤔 lemme start 😵💫
writing.
writing and writing style
- pota sasabihin q na lang to sa tagalog kase di ko gustong maoffend ang mga tanginang gago dito pero PUTANGINA buong librong ito nagbibigay ng kuto FJDSKFNDJN swear before i didnt and now i,,, i wont speak nalang okay 😞😞 i dont even know if thats proper grammar filipino writing is not my strongest suit BUT YK WHOSE WRITING IS ALSO NOT THE STRONGEST ?? these fucking sisters yup what a segway . either the writing is pretentious or lily speaks like a fucking movie caricature cuz the way she speaks… is it ever rlly that deep . like these bitches are so corny u are in college . no one speaks like that . shut the fuck up . like the writing is so unpalatable not because its good but because the use of adjectives is so fucking excessive that u have no idea whats happening cuz knb really wanna sound smart 😍😍 stop it . u sound dumb . i cant read 8 more books of this if the writing stays static because i might kms 👍👍 also forgot to put this in but the authors dont know subtlety at all every line and every nuance is spoonfed to us come on is that not annoying like,,
dialogue and scenes
- i hate to tell the sisters this and all but,,, no normal person says anything the characters are saying . like they are not real . maybe i just dont know rich people but everything they fucking say is just so stupid like theyre so art thou and yes like what this is not shakespear were in pennsylvania 😭 or something idk its not the most fun to read about white privilege lol it kinda makes me wanna fucking die so that was fun that was really fun . ill talk about that more below cuz trust me i have thoughts 🙏👍 when do i not tho FKJSNFKDJNJK
random filler/idk where to put this shit
- the white privilege in this is fucking insane . the class privilege too but well u can only be this exorbitantly rich and willfully ignorant if u are white of course , so lets discuss it 😵💫 i understand people find fiction as a manner of escapism , itd be stupid of me to denounce that as i do the same . i just find it kind of uncomfortable how much shit all these people get away with because ik theres only one way they could get away w it . separate fiction from real life , i get that , but its kind of hard when the stories portray real life struggles , no ? if it was a fantasy , thats fine , thats a whole different world . if its dark romance , thats fine too ! cuz most dark romances are spaces for random sexual fantisies , not to reflect real life issues . books like these though , books that grasp to be a source of comfort for people who have serious problems , will inevitably be harder for the lines to be kept completely separate . here , take this line . “Hell, I wouldn’t have been accepted to Princeton or the University of Pennsylvania without my family’s prestige." rn , im trying so hard to convince my parents to let me into this big international school that costs so fucking much because i want to study abroad , specifically in the states in one of the ivy leagues . my family has to work for that fucking money , bro . i have to work to be the best because i dont have the resources to just fucking get in . and thats a reality ill have to experience because if i do achieve my dreams , if i do get into an ivy league like ive always wanted , what of the expenses ?? im from the philippines , there isnt that much fucking money here . and once im in that school , privileged people like lily calloway who have rich families will always remain because they have fucking connections and money . that fucking sucks bro . " her family chose that life not her " is that supposed to make me fucking feel any better ??? fuck off really just fuck off . another thing that pisses me off about this whole thing is that all the characters act like theyve really been through the brunt of it . like yeah sure u have trauma but to act as if ur the most unfortunate person on this earth then strutting into galas wearing a gown that could pay for my tuition crying your eyes out because u didnt want to be here GOD . lily acknowledged that privilege once because she was deflecting her problems , not because she actually cared . everything about their money and their whiteness and their refusal to accept accountability and their selfishness and them acting as if no one could ever have it worse than them,,, its such a slap in the fucking face
plot.
overall plot, premise, and random shit
- this is a like novella or something so its more character driven but that doesnt exempt it from being bad 😭😭 " this is a novella its not gonna be state of the art quality " no one cares assess ur reviewing priorities because they do not sound quality 🙏 overall the book was just boring like god i love boring shit but this was just,,,, not good . the first book started out so strong and then,,,,
characters.
➷ lily
- god this review will be so long cuz i have so much to day but LILY my girl do u want elly to murder me 😭😭 work with me and shut the fuck up please 😞 bc my ass will be dead by tomorrow im sure of it anyways lets start !! lily , as im sure u hear awhile ago in my white part , she isnt my fav KJSFJDNK . but even disregarding that and pushing it to the back for a second,,, shes kind of annoying yall like sorry 😭 shes always mentioning that shes a nerd and that shes different and while her feeling invisible is valid , her saying shes a nerd every two seconds is fucking annoying . pabebe ass DO U GO TO ATENEO ANSWER QUICK 😟😟 its like knb put one interest for her and its just : nerd . her life revolves around being fucking whipped for media this is why we shouldve never stopped bullying nerds 👎 like im obsessed with books dont get me wrong but it isnt all i talk about cuz im not a loser ????? like pleek HELLO ?? also more serious topic now , how she acted to ryke being molested ?? god she can die . both her and lo . LAUGHING ???? i understand the person who SNUCK INTO RYKES BED AND STARTED GROPING HIM AND WAS INTENDING TO DO MORE WHILE HE WAS FUCKING ASLEEP is a minor , but at 15 u know not to fucking do that . fuck lily for laughing and for calling him ridiculous. the fact that she was almost sa'd as well but when it happened to ryke she laughed and called him names,,, the double standard is insane . that wasnt okay thats never okay its kind of funny to me actually how people never bring that up and are like if u hate lily calloway ur a loser !!! do u lack a moral compass answer quick . god i am physically incapable of liking her . do yk how terrible that is ? telling someone about something that happened to you and being called names for it ? god . this girls needs to get a fucking life
➷ lo
- and fuck u too loren hale . he was my favorite cuz he wasnt here to talk and cause mess but uhm “The part where Ryke is scared of a high school girl. What a pussy,” he says with a laugh. like he needs to get jumped bad . this is why everyone hates u . lily and lo soulmates 😍 invalidating someones sa experience 😍 “I can handle you. I have a greater chance of getting raped outside this room. “You honestly believe they’ll rape you?” He’s being ridiculous. they have one friend and its each other . god thats insane just patheticism . anyways lo is kinda vile and terrible and mean but yk what its funny i had a laugh
➷ ryke
- ryke is no less of a freak than the other two . just evil people all around just terrible !! daisy is fifteen this entire novel . fifteen . god shes a CHILD and hes flirting with her , making comments about her boobs , talking to her viscerally about sex
EVEN AFTER
lily was like shut the fuck up . hes fucking insane climb rocks and never come back please 👍 Ryke leans forward on his chair a little. “Then whoever fucked you didn’t do it right, sweetheart.” GOD shes fifteen fuck get it through ur thick ass skull . i understand he doesnt intend to flirt , and thats really his personality , but when there are kids around maybe fucking change ur attitude u sick fuck . god . PLUS HES SO NOSY ???? NONE OF THESE PEOPLE HAVE FRIENDS ASIDE FROM EACH OTHER AND IT SHOWS CUZ ALL THESE BITCHES R JUST PATHETIC LOSERS 👎👎
➷ daisy
- daisys annoying . sorry ! sorry . She nods with a goofy smile. “Some fashion lines like the quirky thing. You know, the bushy brows, gap-tooth sorta look.” … “I kinda wish I had a cooler signature trait.” its so hard being conventionally attractive omg… also cmon does that not sound motivated somehow LIKE IDK shes just annoying . shes supposed to be the girl with mental health issues so i was like omg shes so me but wow the ignorance really just permeates through every fucking character its laughable
➷ rose
- no one likes rose . " shes an ice queen " is this fucking avatar the last airbender ?? rose as white katara guys #REAL . please . “His therapist is also his ‘best friend.’ So no, we do not have that in common. I actually have people close to me that I love. Like you and Poppy and Daisy…” u see how not a single friend that isnt her family was mentioned ?? what a lewser . u suck rose . no friends , no nothing . i hope shakespear wrote somewhere that u should get that stick out of ur ass hmph
➷ connor
- connors a guy who has a cat so i would like him but he encourages rose to be herself and thats not something i want so fuck connor too
➷ samantha
- samantha calloway is so delibirately obtuse and such a fucking 3d villain its laughable . im pretty sure people like her exist but cmon shes just pathetic . the writing for her is so poor give her motivation or something fuck ??? like drama for drama for real . “Women like us have a figment of power. In the end, we’re all marionettes to men...” white feminism always just rattles my bones i hate it when white women speak like im so serious . i dont even think hcing these characters as filipino could fix them . just terrible .
romance.
➷ lilo
- lilos cute i fear . although theyre both terrible people , the couples kinda cute 😒 THE FIRST PHONE CALL ☹️☹️☹️ CUTENESS !! funny thing that happened tho : "I’m trying to be better about it, but some things still make me uncomfortable. Especially since Lo isn’t here to help ease me into this new, terrifying social world.” like lo would deliberately make it worse ive seen it before . ive finished one book and ik that for sure just embarassing 😭 the first book made it seem as though theyve only seldom touched each other but no theyve BEEN touching i was like woah
➷ cabolloway
- i wished u guys murdered each other during one of ur debates im tired of the both of u #justice4sadie
➷ raisy
- walk in a jail cell ryke , yeah ? then never come out . better yet die doing something u love , climb a mountain then fall violently to the ground 🙌
final thoughts.
my lip started bleeding during a sex scene . dont know why . thought that tiny bit of information would be more interesting than anything that happened in this book . also did not proofread gn 😋