Hermione’s not sure when it happened. There wasn’t a moment when she stopped and thought: wow, I really fancy him! The thought must’ve crept into her mind and she allowed it to stay there because it seemed harmless at the time. But that thought slowly grew, taking over her attraction to other men until he was the only one she thought of any longer.
But then she accidentally floos to Grimmauld and when the soot settles she blinks at the sight of Sirius staring at her with raised eyebrows and…something else filling his face. The apology is nearly out of her mouth when she notices a petite body at his feet. There was a naked woman kneeling at his feet and her only accessory happened to be…was that a collar?
It had some really good moments, but sometimes the choices of words used took me out of the moment. I also thought the pet name he called her was a bit cringy. But it’s still pretty good, worth the read.