Rise Headless and Ride, Jason Crane, Book 1
by Richard Gleaves
I'm a little conflicted by this novel.
On the good side, the proofing and editing was excellent, I don't think I saw any errors. The plotting was fine, and there certainly was a lot of action. I imagine it was a YA book (I didn't check that out when I purchased it), so there was a lot of teen-age angst to shift through, and I did not fail to notice that although there were teen characters who weren't painted as being goody goody, the real villains were all adults. However, the characters were well drawn. You disliked the baddies instinctively and liked the good guys immediately. Creative treatment of a modern telling of a well-known story. Lots of spookiness befitting a novel based on Irving's Legend of Sleepy Hollow.
On the bad side, I thought the novel was a bit over-dramatic in places, especially in Jason's escape from the Horseman. The result of that escape was almost anti-climactic, leading to that most hated of my complaints, the non-ending ending. Very frustrating to read a book just to discover that the ending isn't that at all, that there is no resolution, but that if you want to know how one of the main storylines play out, you have read the next book. It feels like the author decided the book was getting too long, so better stop and make it two books. And why introduce the grandfather character and then have him play no real role in this novel. Perhaps he will in the next, although in what capacity I cannot imagine. As I can read the next book for free as a Prime member, I will -- if I had to pay even a penny for it, I wouldn't, simply on the principle of a novel needing to be stand alone, even if it is in a series. Certainly if that second novel also has a non-ending, I will not be reading any more in the series that the author may decide to write.
So, conflicted to say the least.