This review is from eighth grade, so please forgive the bad writing.
In many science fiction/fantasy books, the main characters have to go through a series of trials to reach the ending conclusion. “Trial” means “test” or “hearing” or “ordeal.” In many forms of fiction, a trial is a boulder a character has to overcome or an event a character has to get through to move on with the story.
For instance, the ancient Greeks told myths about Hercules going through trial after trial, gaining more strength after every trial. In The Hunger Games, Katniss is challenged again and again by series of obstacles threatening her very existence. Aluna of the Coral Kampii has to fight a clone, save an Equian condemned to death, befriend an outcast horse, deal with her growing tail, and constantly keep her best friend safe in Jenn Reese’s Mirage.
Jenn Reese is a published writer of three books—Jade Tiger (a romance for adults), Above World, and Mirage, the sequel to Above World. Mythology always has inspired Jenn Reese, and it was mythology that drove her into writing Above World. The character Aluna was built on Jenn’s love for martial arts, “especially kung fu, tai chi, and traditional weapons.” (Reese, back book jacket flap of Mirage). Jenn lives in Los Angeles, where she studies martial arts, plays video games, writes, gets stuck in traffic, and dreams of rain.
Aluna and Hoku of the Coral Kampii have journeyed to Equian territory in the desert along with winged Calli and Equian exile Dash in the hopes of warning High Khan Onggor about the vicious Karl Strand. Unfortunately, Scorch—one of Karl Strand’s clones—has gotten there first. Scorch has convinced High Khan Onggor to join Karl Strand and his campaign to take over all LegendaryTek communities. She has turned the great city of Mirage into a war zone and made false promises. She has acted without mercy.
As they neared Mirage, Aluna’s brain worked its way through the illusions. The city flickered less and less until finally it blinked into view and stayed, solid as a stone. A layer of soot coated the inside of the dome, making it difficult to see the details. Dark figures patrolled just beyond the entrance gate, their pikes and swords reflecting the sunlight in sharp bursts. She glanced at Dash and saw his eagerness fade, his jaw clench. ‘What’s wrong?’ she asked. He stared straight ahead at Mirage, his brown eyes searching. ‘I do not know,’ he said quietly. ‘Maybe nothing. But perhaps…everything.’ (Reese, 8)
Aluna, Hoku, and Calli are sent stay with Dash’s tribe, Shining Moon, while Dash is put on trial for breaking his exile. New friends are made, including an Equian born without her humanity and an Upgrader more metal than flesh. New enemies are discovered, including a murderous word-weaver mad at Dash for kissing his daughter years back. It is soon realized that the only hope of overthrowing Scorch is finding some way of winning the sacred annual Thunder Trials, a series of competitions for the title High Khan. The chances seem slim, especially now that Aluna’s ability to fight will be challenged at the prospect of her growing mermaid tail. Will Aluna, Hoku, Calli, and Dash succeed?
Jenn Reese uses complex words, fragments, and varying sentence length. She tells the story in third person, often switching from Aluna’s point of view to Hoku’s. Every once in a while, Jenn explains what a person is, so that if someone started the book at Chapter 18, the characters would explain themselves. For example, she calls Dash “the horse boy” to show he’s an Equian and calls Calli “the winged girl” to show she’s an Aviar. She uses lots of detail, but not direct detail such as, “Aluna was a Kampii who needs action.” Instead, Jenn might say, “Aluna felt the urge to keep moving; never stopping, never looking back.” (Warning! This is not something she actually wrote! I made it up!)
I thought that Mirage style-wise was just as good as Above World. Character development, structure, and detail was all there. The idea was fantastic. I was hooked in, and I read every page without skimming. However, Above World had a constantly churning plot, building more and more excitement. Mirage, like many other “second” books, just didn’t have a lot happening that related to the plot introduced in Book 1. Mirage was a book that could stand alone and do fine. I loved Above World, and I was disappointed how Mirage didn’t connect well to that first book. Maybe in the third book the plot will connect better. After all, Aluna does say, “It’s taken us a long time to find one another, but now we have. Together, we’re strong. Strong enough to fight, and strong enough to win…We’re going to find Karl Strand.” (Reese, 356).