These three things are true: 1) Harry Potter wants to father a baby, and he's found the perfect anonymous man to help (Candidate 222 in the male fertility program). 2) Every time Candidate 222 is chosen in the male fertility program, he is rejected once his identity as Severus Snape is revealed. 3) Snape pines for Potter but will never, ever, under any circumstances admit it. Because why would Potter ever want him back?
This was actually really well written! I devoured it in a day basically (I started it before bed, and finished the next morning). I am actually playfully annoyed at myself. I had said no more fanfiction for a while, and I would have been fine if not for a facebook group posting about this. It caught my eye, so I go into the book to see if I should save it to read later. Next thing I know, chapter 1 is done and I hit the next chapter button...25 chapters later, with a good ending and here we are. Seriously I have got to stop reading these for a while! This was addictive and the characterization was pretty darn accurate and believable. Except Snapes' weird love/hate he has ALWAYS had with Harry. Please tell me this didn't go back to him being a young student...It never did clarify that for me but that goes a bit far for my taste. I can handle a lot but not that. Luckily it does not get elaborated on so I will just take it as a generic care on his part. There are a few things like how St Mungo's is ran and especially this CoPolutation program works that felt to modern/muggle to belong but otherwise this sits as part of the wizarding world. Not sure about how the author described Harry's physic though. Guess he works out A LOT. Definitely not a Daniel Radcliff image lol. A fun romp, one part even had me burst out laughing for a couple minutes. I do love my angst between these two apparently, no matter what the role they play toward each other.