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The Genesis of Change: A Philosophical Prequel

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A weird, brutal, philosophical series. The kind where eldritch gods rule the world from the shadows, and everything is a quest for alchemical knowledge.

Élan; the chaos-tamer, the record-breaker. Verve; the one behind the rise and fall of thousands of civilisations. Two alchemists, each sent on a mission by the leader of The Orders—The Rector.

Élan must shatter their mentee’s humanity to train her as an alchemist, while Verve must define the unexplainable existing within a respected healer. When their missions reveal clues that could reformulate alchemy, they’ll edge closer to fathom The Rector’s goal while facing an endless conundrum—to remain as is, or to learn and adapt.

The genesis of change is near.

Not for the faint of heart, and neither for those who want a quick read. Maybe for those who wonder what lies beyond it.

130 pages, Paperback

Published July 16, 2024

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Livia J. Elliot

3 books27 followers
Livia J. Elliot writes literary speculative fiction that fuses political theory, psychological depth, and philosophical horror. Her work is written for readers who read to solve.

She’s currently releasing two series: Records of The Orders (a literary speculative fantasy,) and Tales of the Bookshelves (psychological fairy tales for adults). Livia is also the host of the award-nominated podcast Books Undone, offering thematic analyses of literary speculative fiction. Finally, she’s the lead writer of Unearthed Stories, a mobile app publishing interactive speculative fiction.

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Author 6 books83 followers
September 21, 2024
philosophical novella

Fascinating read. I’ll admit I was throughly confused for a good chunk of the novella, but that’s a me issue more than anything else. The prose is excellent, and the philosophical conversations will be wonderful for those looking for more a thinker’s story
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1,510 reviews
July 16, 2024
This review was originally published on Before We Go Blog

Elliot shatters conventions and expectations in The Genesis of Change, a mind-bending standalone prequel novella to the visionary Records of the Orders series. Filled with ancient shapeshifting eldritch alchemists, philosophy-based alchemical magic, boldly experimental storytelling, and deeply thought-provoking themes, this dark philosophical fantasy very aptly feels like it could be the genesis of change for the fantasy genre.

The Genesis of Change tells the story of two extremely powerful alchemists, Élan and Verve, who are each sent on their own inexplicable mission by the enigmatic leader of the Orders, the Rector. Élan takes on a new apprentice in the labyrinthine Towers whose humanity must be crushed to transfigure into an alchemist, while Verve must examine and define an unexplainable phenomenon within a respected healer’s mind. Though unclear about the Rector’s goals, they throw themselves fully into their missions and start gaining answers that could alter their entire reality; will they stay content with the comfortable status quo, or embrace the chaos of change?

Now, every once in a while, you come across those rare stories that are so above and beyond anything you have ever read that it simply feels impossible to do them justice in a review; The Genesis of Change is the prime example of that. No, I can’t sit here and pretend that this was an easy or comfortable read all the way through, but that only made me love it all the more.

Even though my brain was cracking more times than I’d probably like to admit, Elliot’s engrossing and strong prose just sucked me in and made this narrative unfold in the most organic way possible. In a way, this novella almost feels like two separate stories in one, alternating between Élan’s and Verve’s personal missions. Yet in the final few pages, Elliot works her storytelling magic and lights up the red thread that weaves these two journeys together into one awe-inspiring and magnificent whole.

While I am usually much more of a character-driven reader, I quickly found myself absolutely spellbound by the rich themes, ethereal atmosphere, and imaginative sociological and philosophical elements in The Genesis of Change. There’s a certain alluring air of mystery and intrigue permeating every aspect of this story, and I found it fascinating to explore and discover this world through the eyes of such enigmatic, larger than life protagonists.

Seeing how far both Élan and Verve were willing to go to fulfil their missions was just morbidly fascinating to me, especially because their morals are more than questionable. The way that they each view and interact with their human ‘subject’, if you will, gave this story a certain level of suspense that I found infinitely more thrilling than any type of epic action scene you could imagine, and I honestly could not stop turning the pages.

The Genesis of Change is not the type of story you come to for some fun light escapism, but a story you come to if you want to be challenged and confronted. At its core, it’s a quietly powerful and deeply introspective narrative that examines knowledge, bias, progress, prejudice, morality, identity, humanity, and raw emotions in the most nuanced ways. And then add to that an incredibly inventive magic system that combines alchemy and philosophy, resulting in an extremely rich and multi-layered novella that just demands to be pondered on and revisited time and time again.

If this is what Elliot can accomplish in a novella, then I am truly beyond excited to see her sheer brilliance on full display in the upcoming full-length novels in the Records of the Orders series. Though this is truly unlike anything I have ever read, I think fans of Vita Nostra or The Book That Wouldn’t Burn would find much to love in the settings, vibes, and themes that Elliot offers here. So, if you are looking for a short yet unforgettable fantasy novella that is equal parts mind-bending, soul-stirring, and deeply thought-provoking, then I can’t recommend The Genesis of Change highly enough!

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484 reviews59 followers
July 12, 2024
Excellent novella. Fans of philosophical fantasy and even hard sci-fi would love this. I only wish it had been a full length novel.

More thoughts to come on my channel.

PS: thank you to the author for sending me a copy. This did not impact my reading experience or my review.
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199 reviews165 followers
August 12, 2024
4/5 Stars

I received a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.

Thought provoking, evocative, mesmerizing. Livia J. Elliot weaves philosophy, human nature and dark fantasy into a captivating exploration of discovery, time and identity.

First and foremost, this standalone prequel novella caught me off guard. I was not expecting such complexity from a short read that was beautifully articulated. I found myself in moments of wonder, shock, heartache, and utter fascination throughout a complex world filled with possibilities.

The story follows the POVs of two alchemists, as they are sent on individual tasks given to them by the leader of the Orders, the Rector. Élan must take on a mentee and train them into an alchemist and Verve must define an unexplainable phenomenon occurring with a respected healer. Despite their missions taking them on different paths, Livia J. Elliot brings their stories together seamlessly.

Most surprising is the unique perspectives the alchemists have; their views of the world, morality and humanity are complex. They’re driven by knowledge and discovery no matter the cost. These alchemists come across as scientific mages if you will, where humans are the lab rats. This leads to intriguing character developments and thought-provoking philosophical themes.

As a result, the worldbuilding and magic are equally stunning in their depictions. The usage of time, their impacts on the characters and the concept of the Towers where the alchemists reside left me in awe at the sheer scale of it all.

The prose flows beautifully, articulating complexity with thoughtful intent while being woven into an engrossing story. It’s rare to find a book that blends philosophy, fantasy and storytelling with such ease. This paired with the many unknowns added an enticing thrill and curiosity I couldn’t shake.

For these reasons, The Genesis of Change is not a lighthearted or quick read despite its short page count. This novella will make you think, it will challenge you as a reader and is best savoured throughout the experience. With themes of knowledge, bias, human nature, influences of the world, time, morality, and growth, it’s filled with questions to contemplate along the way.

While this does have progression to the characters developments, it does feel more like a plot driven story with focus on thematic storytelling.

As this is a prequel novella, it does set the stage for continuation within the Record of the Orders series, and I am eager to see what else this author has in store.
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855 reviews149 followers
July 15, 2024
Review originally on JamReads

The Genesis of Change is a prequel novella part of the Record of the Order series, written by Livia J. Elliot. A dark fantasy novella that does a deep dive into philosophical themes, creating a mind-breaking experience, an experimental read that invites to think and reflect while following the story.

Two extremely powerful alchemists are sent by the enigmatic leader of the Order, the Rector, in their own inexplicable mission. Élan is tasked with preparing a new apprentice in the Towers, devoid her of her humanity in order to transfigure into a new alchemist; and Verve is sent to investigate the unexplanaible mystery regarding a healer's mind, which is deemed by the Rector as the key.
Both character convictions will be tested and especially, we will see how they will have to choose between keeping their high status, or embracing the change that can take them in uncertain paths.

The way this novel is structured can remember to The Realm of Prophets series written by E.J. Doble, using the story as a pretext to discuss different complex philosophical concepts, such as identity and pain; however, in comparison, this one is a much darker story, especially as Elliot does an excellent job adopting the voice of her characters, which are powerful entities, ignoring human suffering and using it as a medium for their goals.

This is not an easy read, as it will invite you to think about the themes shown, and is not afraid of portraying suffering; but at the same time, is a really satisfactory experience. You can see and experience the potential on Livia's stories, so hopefully this is just the first of many more.

Note: you can get the ebook for free subscribing to Livia's newsletter.
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Author 1 book89 followers
January 4, 2025
This is the type of hard hitting philosophy filled novella that demands you take your time.

Elliot has created an incredible deep magic based on the philosophy of our own internal beliefs and lifelong transformations.

Following the alchemists, it is hard not to walk away from this a changed person.
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Author 7 books80 followers
August 19, 2024
This review was originally posted on SFFINSIDERS.COM

The Genesis of Change by Livia J Elliot is one of the most unique and intellectually-charged fantasy books I’ve ever read. It combines the prosaic beauty of authors like Neil Gaiman and Patrick Rothfuss with the high-concept worldbuilding and plotwork that can only be attributed to SFF heavyweights such as NK Jemisin or Jenn Lyons. And though the book may at first present as something with a narrower appeal, I beg to differ: I think this is one of the most important pieces of intellectual SFF I’ve ever read.

The Genesis of Change follows two alchemists, Élan and Verve, on their journey to what is known as the fifth transfiguration, a transcendental state whereby the creationary controls of all alchemical roles are combined into one. Though I found the characters of the alchemists themselves deeply fascinating, I definitely felt this was more of a plot-driven and idea-centric story, rather than a character-focused one. The main ideas here, however, are stark and challenging, and for any of you philosophy buffs, you’ll love this book.

The concept of Stoicism finds itself thoroughly explored by the character of Verve, one of the central alchemists we follow in the story. They are investigating the way that a human doctor, Iurden, responds to his patients. Their discoveries uncover the finer details of stoic philosophy in a way that not only engages the logic necessary to study it, but also pulls on your heartstrings. Several scenes from Verve’s point-of-view were especially gut-wrenching, and not in the way you might think. On the other hand, Élan’s story follows them as they teach a human named Áurea about alchemy, allowing Áurea to transfigure. This storyline is predominantly Elliot’s way of analysing transcendental idealism, and I even caught a hint of Platonic Form in the story too, which piqued my interest quite a bit.

Ultimately, it’s really hard to explain why I loved this book as much as I did without going into significant spoilers, but if any of that conceptual stuff has you asking more about the book, I’d say it’ll be a winner for you. Themes of trauma and identity reminded me of other fantasy books such as Prince of Nothing by R Scott Bakker, for example, though the worldbuilding, and the alchemists in general were nothing short of unique. And if annotating or recording quotes from books is part of your reading process (it certainly is for mine), then The Genesis of Change has the most quotability for the length that it is. This might be a novella, but it’s meaty, fraught with existential debate, and highly intellectual. I could see this being a barrier to some readers, but if you’re willing to persist with the story and its overarching themes and philosophies, I think you’ll remember this story as a diamond in the rough for years to come.

Lastly, the author has written an impressive set of notes at the back of the book that only serve to deepen and enrich the rest of the story. I say this simply to encourage readers not to skip that part!

Overall, The Genesis of Change is a thought-provoking, challenging, and beautifully written story set in a wholly unique world. I cannot recommend it enough, and am excited to leap into its interactive companion novel, Mien sometime later this year, which you can download for free as part of the Unearthed Stories app on iOS and Android. Right now, Livia J Elliot is one to watch.
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Author 1 book34 followers
August 24, 2024
A breathtaking experience. A work of vividity. The Genesis of Change takes a paintbrush to the mind's eye and smears it with impossible colours.

Truly exceptional. My full review is published on SFF Insiders.
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17 reviews5 followers
September 4, 2025
This was quite a novel experience. I've probably said this for the last couple of books I've read but it seems the universe intends to keep blessing me with stories that whisper 𝑛𝑒𝑤𝑛𝑒𝑠𝑠 in both their narratives and thematic essence.

If anyone told me that a 148 paged novella would contain ideas so vast and numerous as the stars, presented and executed seamlessly to the point they tear right into your soul to plead your understanding, I would've offered a bewildered and mocking look to that person knowing fully well the amount of words, narratives, and structural components one would have to weave to achieve that — especially when the ideas include evolution, transfiguration, change, growth, identity, nonduality, cognitive bias and much more than I can name.

Not only does this work touch these ideas, it expounds on them via the non-gendered pov characters referred to as Alchemists — beings that transcend mortal frameworks and have learning and knowledge as their only goal in sight.

In a philosophically charged narrative, Livia uncovers how cognitive bias limits growth and progress. How it gives a false — or in her own words, a fluid — sense of identity. Ideas, things, people and all we interact with shape what we think of ourselves. But essentially are those what we really are? Who are you without your certificate? Without the national framework or the environment that "birthed" you. The narrative uncovers to an extent the illusive idea of what we claim as our identity and pushes the thought that they could be more to ourselves. More that we have not yet uncovered. And sometimes we unconsciously know that, but the lure of the familiar and the fear of the unknown keeps us bound and away from discovering and growing.

There is so much to this novel that I have not yet said and I feel further speaking would just be equivalent to me revising and reducing it from what it is. So I heavily recommend this if you like fantasy works that pushes past its boundary of wish fulfillment and delves into what would make you ask real questions. This is the most perfect novella I've read and I'm very eager for the series it's about to herald. The prose is a quite dense — well the author is a Gene Wolfe fan so that ticks 😅 — but not in a way that is entirely off putting. I really enjoyed this and I hope everyone that sees this review and picks it up does enjoy it as well.

There is also a standalone work set in this universe that immediately follows after the events of this story titled Mien. But it can only be accessed from Unearthed Stories — an app I believe belongs to the author. You can get it from play store and app store. I plan to get to it after I clear up my other reads.
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Author 5 books117 followers
July 16, 2024
This is a standout novella that blends beautiful prose with unique, thought-provoking concepts. Known for her masterful use of language (check out her Unearthed interactive stories!!), Elliot doesn't disappoint, creating a story that is as intellectually engaging as it is emotionally resonant. I mean, shit, this is no light read. But it is so worth it.

This prequel to the Records of the Orders series introduces us to two alchemists, Élan and Verve, on their distinct but interwoven missions. At times, their POVs read like two separate stories, but they are skillfully woven together by the end. Élan's task of preparing a new apprentice in the Towers and Verve's investigation into a healer’s mysterious condition explore deep philosophical themes, but not in a way that makes you want to skim over it. Honestly, it's just masterfully done. These missions force our characters to confront their beliefs and consider the chaos and potential of change versus the security of their established roles.

I loved the originality of this story, especially the inclusion of non-human, non-gendered characters, which adds a refreshing layer of complexity to the narrative. The world-building is rich and immersive, and Elliot's exploration of ideas like Stoicism and transcendental idealism is both challenging and rewarding.

Though the novella is more plot-driven and idea-centric than character-focused, it's not done at the expense of good character work, and the themes of trauma and identity are powerful and compelling. The narrative isn’t afraid to delve into the darker aspects of these ideas, making for a thought-provoking read that stays with you long after you've turned the last page.

If you're a fan of philosophical fantasy or hard sci-fi, The Genesis of Change is a must-read. It’s a novella packed with quotable moments and profound reflections, leaving you wishing it was a full-length novel (spoiler: there will be more to come in this world!). This book challenges and confronts, offering a rich, multi-layered experience that demands to be revisited.

Livia J. Elliot as an author to watch. I highly recommend this story and look forward to diving into the rest of the series. You can get this for FREE by signing up for her newsletter, and don't forget to check out the interactive stories, Unearthed, too!
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Author 7 books40 followers
August 22, 2024
The Genesis of Change.

This novella is essentially a high concept philosophical exploration of the human condition disguised through a magical, fantasy, experimental lens. The Alchemist’s observe and experiment on unaware humans, stoking emotions to discern understanding. Very cool and unique.

There isn’t much dialogue here, which I struggled with at first, but once I found myself easing into the philosophy more I had a better time. Going in with that expectation will definitely help.

Livia’s prose is dense, but superb. Which is astounding considering english isn’t her first language. I freely admit a lot seemed to go over my head, or I was lost at points, but thats just me not being able to keep up with her philosophical jousting of concepts and answers. This is a story that I believe will suit a reread to fully comprehend everything that happened.

Thank you so much Livia for sending me a copy, I really appreciate it and I look forward to reading more from you!
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Author 4 books17 followers
August 9, 2025
This review was originally posted on r/GrimDarkEpicFantasy by u/SoullessEddie.

So, is it any good? No, it is not good. It is great! Though be warned, the story carries a certain psycho-social undertone that may not jive with everyone. It may also be a more intellectual endeavor than the average Grimdark fan is used to. And, indeed, the offering is rather on the slimmer side. Nonetheless, this book offers everything you could ask for, as far as a prequel novella goes. Moreover, there is a whole interactive world out there, you just gotta be brave enough to look.

Now, let Eddie tell you why this book is worth your time without spoiling anything major...

Let me prefix the review with: this is not the kind of comfy, cozy book that you read to wind down after a hard day’s work. This book surfaces more as a group project where you are the sole person who actually cares about its completion, while other participants lounge around doing the bare minimum or nothing. But since you care, you do the work. You go to the library, you negotiate the research, and you connect the dots because you wish to understand. All this to say, reading the Genesis of Change is more work than play, but the kind of work that is deeply rewarding in its own right if you’re so inclined.

0.80 | Themes — The Genesis of Change delves deeply into existential and philosophical themes that elevate it beyond typical grimdark fantasy fare. Central to the narrative is the tension between longevity/immortality and mortality, reminiscent of timeless human quests found in the Epic of Gilgamesh or the lore of Nicholas Flamel. The story probes the fragility of the human mind, addressing madness, susceptibility to manipulation, and the precarious nature of sanity. These themes invite readers to reflect on what it means to endure and change across vast timescales, confronting the psychological cost of near-eternal life. While this intellectual depth is a major strength, it may also narrow the book’s appeal, as its dense philosophical undertones occasionally create a barrier to emotional connection or straightforward enjoyment, making it feel more like a cerebral exercise than a leisure read.

0.80 | Characterization — The characters in this novella are distinctive and thought-provoking, particularly the gender-neutral, immortal alchemists who serve as both protagonists and guides through the story’s complex moral landscape. Their motivations, ranging from pursuit of arcane knowledge to fulfilling the enigmatic Rector’s will, are layered and ambiguous, highlighting conflicts between knowledge, power, and ethical boundaries. These scions of knowledge carry a mix of cold pragmatism and moral ambiguity, which enriches the narrative’s intellectual appeal. However, this subtle characterization sometimes leaves the characters just beyond full emotional reach. Their distance and inscrutability, while thematically appropriate, can limit reader empathy and investment compared to more traditionally fleshed-out characters.

0.75 | Plot — The plot is concise and mission-driven, revolving around the alchemists’ efforts to break and transform their charges according to their objectives. The story alternates perspectives effectively, maintaining tension and thematic coherence, but it is more conceptual and philosophical than action-packed, which is fitting but may feel slow or foggy at certain points. The motivations behind some actions are deliberately elusive, inviting readers to engage with the abstract layers of the narrative rather than conventional plot beats. While this approach makes the story feel fresh and intellectually stimulating, it also means that those seeking a more straightforward or emotionally gripping narrative might find it lacking in immediacy and clarity.

0.70 | World-building — the Tower is intriguing, I wish we got to see a bit more, just a few glimpses. The background setting is there, and the author makes sure to show off the decorated scenes before playing them out. I enjoyed the complex concepts of Alchemy, however, I found myself flipping to the glossary more often than I would have liked. Because to truly understand the abstract, philosophical nuances, one has to first swallow their pride and learn alongside the protagonists. When it comes to indies, I primarily look for new ideas, and am quite forgiving when it comes to execution as long as the stories feel fresh and original. This book delivers.

0.95 | Prose — I’d be remiss not to point out the attention and the care given to the exactness of the prose in this book. Every paragraph, every sentence weighed and thought out several times over. The author’s time-sunk and deliberation on the precise manner in which these scenes are presented speaks back to me. Of course, every author does their best to translate their vision to words, but few in the indie world achieve this level of excellence. The only minor thing that bugged me was the occasional density of the philosophical exposition, which can slow the pace and make the narrative feel a bit heavy-handed at times. While this depth is part of the book’s unique charm, it may challenge readers who prefer a more fluid or action-oriented story.

This is a clever book for attentive fans who like to spend their time thinking about not only what is written, but also what the author is trying to convey by penning down these stories. Admittedly, the barrier to entry is a lot higher than your usual leisure activity, and you may be confronted with a few ideas that make it less fun and more work-like. But that takes us to the fundamentals: what are books or stories even for? Is it to pass the time, to learn or experience something one would miss out on otherwise, or is it to challenge us, our way of thinking, and show an alternative? Does it even matter as long as you enjoy the time spent reading? It is in your hands, after all, and you’ll find more than enough food for thought in the Genesis of Change.

Running Total: 4.00 / 5.00 — A Grim Outlook at Life’s Externalities
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March 8, 2025
Why I Read This:
The Genesis of Change has received high accolades and I was interested to find out more about this work of philosophical fantasy.

My Impression:
The Genesis of Change is refreshingly unique and thought provoking.
The tone is highly intellectual and abstract, arranging and dissecting concepts of belief, creation and personhood.
When I read Frank Herbert’s God Emperor of Dune, I was struck by how well he conveyed the outlook of a being who is no longer bounded by space, time or identity. Eliot develops multiple beings of this kind and works delicately to explore the relationship between past, present and future selves that simultaneously exist, collecting these variations under a “perennial attitude” that constitutes the essence of the alchemist.
The alchemists observe and manipulate ingredients that include human behaviours and emotions, making them ethically cold and divorced from the morality of embodied personhood.
After reading the first half of the novella, I had a strange dream about a house with many levels inhabited by beings like those from a Remedios Varo painting. The alchemists are fascinatingly surreal and if Varo yet lived, she would be the one to bring these slender, feathered gods to life.

Craft-Related Notes:
-Elliot’s language is pleasantly mesmerising but also crystal clear when it comes to the representation of complex ideas.
-The Genesis of Change presents a metaphysical order with intricate rules. The ‘magic system’ is concerned with the nature of being. As such, we observe human stories, but we do not inhabit them or experience them directly. The alchemists are archetypical beings on a universal stage. It is almost as if there is a spotlight on the scene, and all else is shrouded in darkness. This reminded me a little of Luke Tarzian’s The Worldmaker Parable.
-Beware, the author’s note at the end of the novella will decode the whole thing. It is a bit like when you finish a film and the ‘making of’ immediately starts up. If you want to know these details, you will not be disappointed, but for me, the pleasure of reading is to guess at those underlying meanings myself. If you choose not to read that section, the important takeaways are that Elliot has an awesome podcast, newsletter and interactive story app that you should definitely check out. The Records of the Orders series, of which The Genesis of Change is part, continues with Mein, a 'book with choices' that has two alternative endings:
https://liviajelliot.com/books/uneart...
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January 2, 2026
Sometimes the “Genesis of Change” is described as a fantasy book, which may be misleading. This work is not about dragons, elfs and epic quests. We follow alchemists, which are entities transcending time and living (or in the author’s words “existing”) uniquely to pursue the burning quest of knowledge. Alchemists interact with the human world, presented in the fantastic setting of the city of Carbona, in several ways. Human apprentices can be trained to become alchemists themselves and, to some extent, alchemists are involved in human political affairs. This book is essentially about the pursuit knowledge. Elliot presents how this journey can be exciting, exhilarating and even intoxicating. Alchemists do not refrain from human sacrifices, as they appear to be a negligible loss in the great scheme of unravelling novel knowledge. A paradox concerning acquiring knowledge is lively described by the author: As more and more knowledge is already accumulated, bias and boundaries are developed. Elliot essentially presents the Zen idea of the “expert mind”, which differently from the “beginner mind”, is close to many possibilities. This is not the only philosophical excursus of the author. A very fascinating and solid argument about desire and fear being the two original emotions, from which all other are derived, appears in the book. While the desire for a change can cause frustration, the fear of change can be paralysing. From this condition it follows that “life is a struggle”, as elaborated in details by one character of this novella.

The “Genesis of change” was for me a breath of fresh air. I loved the mix of fantastic elements and philosophical ideas which, despite not being new (as the author herself explains), are presented in a very lively and easy-to-grasp manner via convincing and well-developed characters. It left me wishing to read more, which is good as this novella is the prequel of the “Record of the Orders” series.

The writing style deserves a mention. Elliot is extremely talented and skilled. Her prose is poetic in parts of the novella. With her words she paints scenarios, especially the city of Carbona and the Towers marking the entrance of the Alchemists’ world, which become alive through the pages. Characters are presented in details, especially their psychology and thought-process. Even the discussion of complex philosophical concepts is so masterful that the reading experience is enjoyable and straightforward. The variety of her prose is also impressive, which makes this book so accessible and engaging. The only minor remark is that the aesthetics of her prose, which is nothing short of shining, sometimes (especially in Verve’s chapters) took the main stage. I found myself focused more on the beauty of the prose than on the characters and the story.
All in all, the Genesis of change is a beautifully written engaging novella, which set the stage for a series in the same universe. I am definitely looking forward to read the first instalment of the saga, the “Omens of War”.
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September 5, 2024
In The Genesis of Change, Livia J. Elliot presents a dark, philosophical fantasy where two alchemists, Élan and Verve, face missions that test the very foundations of their craft and humanity. Élan, renowned as a chaos-tamer and record-breaker, is entrusted with the daunting task of stripping away their mentee’s humanity, transforming her into an alchemist. Concurrently, Verve, whose influence has shaped the rise and fall of countless civilizations, is challenged to define the undefinable within a revered healer. As their paths unfold, they begin to unravel secrets that could revolutionize alchemy itself. Every step brings them closer to understanding the elusive goals of their leader, The Rector, while they grapple with a profound dilemma: should they cling to their unchanged selves or embrace the power of learning and adaptation? The genesis of change looms near, threatening to alter the very fabric of their world.

Elliot’s novella stands out as a turning point in the fantasy genre, defying conventional storytelling with its deep dive into the complexities of human nature and the mysterious art of alchemy. The narrative skillfully explores themes of transformation, power, and the heavy cost of knowledge, all woven together with elegant prose that is both intellectually stimulating and emotionally resonant. The characters, especially Élan and Verve, are meticulously crafted, embodying the tension between order and chaos, tradition and innovation. Their journeys are not merely physical or magical; they are deeply philosophical, inviting readers to introspect on their own beliefs about change and the essence of humanity. The Genesis of Change is more than just a story—it’s an experience. This novella challenges readers to think, question, and look beyond the surface, offering an experimental narrative that pushes the boundaries of dark fantasy. Elliot’s work is a powerful testament to the strength and vulnerability of the human spirit, all set within a richly imagined fantasy world where the divine brushes against the imperfect, revealing their true nature.

For readers seeking a narrative that breaks away from the ordinary and delves into the mind-bending possibilities of dark fantasy, The Genesis of Change is a must-read. It captures the struggles and triumphs of humanity through a story that is as thought-provoking as it is captivating.
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Author 5 books18 followers
October 2, 2024
Dark philosophical fantasy with beautifully crafted prose.
The characters are unique and incredibly intriguing.
A short read that will leave you ready for more, and I can't recommend it enough!

For those that prefer audiobooks, Sarah Kempton narrates this one and does an excellent job, I found myself going back and forth between reading/listening.
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