Kaine shot Chris who stayed on life support until he was taken off the ventilator. It’s so sad what happened to Baby Belle and how her mom just left her with an irresponsible man. Lisa was a real piece of work for unaliving Jalani and trying to unalive Caine too. We didn’t get to read what Lisa sentence was nor if she had actually poisoned their father. Also didn’t get to read what happened with CoCo’s living arrangements neither. I am glad that Kaine and Treasure got their own HEA with a baby girl on the way that we didn’t get to read about nor her name.
I’m not sure who was in charge of this book, but they really did the author dirty. This book felt childish, rushed, and underdeveloped. I can appreciate an author not dragging things out, but I can’t stand halfway storytelling.
Problem 01: Kaine called the cops on himself TWICE for murder/attempted murder, and other than going to the station once, NOTHING IS DONE. Please, come on!
Problem 02: The mother scheming and plotting on everyone's demise on behalf of her daughter needed better development. If you're saying she did all this because of her failed beauty queen dreams, it’s not enough. Killing folks and plotting on them for your daughter because you couldn’t make it there? What?
Problem 03: Coco was a hater, but what’s next for her? Did she go to jail? Was she on probation? What’s happening? This story started out very promising, but the wrap-up felt sloppy. Instead of a closed case, we got some loose ends to tie up and sent it on its way. Idk what the mood board or the moral for this story was supposed to be but this really made me never want to touch another story from this author. Like did Chris die? Where’s is his weird dad. Like idk it just felt like Treasure was constantly a victim and disliked but we never got solid reasoning. I guess it’s just like that sometimes and like sure she was shallow and a little dumb but I don’t think she warranted all this hate and hostility.
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Chris should have asked about Kaine before he rolled up on him. Coco is so spiteful but a lot of what she went through/is going through is her karma. Chris's dad was out of line for coming at Treasure the way he did. Lisa was a piece of work. I couldn't believe how far she went to accomplish her dream.for her daughter. She didn't even consider how Treasure felt or.would feel about her actions of "protection" smh. Deion has to be one of the dumbest criminals 🔥😂 Coco had Rob sprung that boy cutoff game is strong 😂 Kaine does not hesitate to protect who he loves from any and everybody.
This series is so lit. Tressure is catching hell from her momma. Her momma only wants to have all that girls attention, but she weep was she sow cause all that background stuff she was doing caught up. And her sister Coco stuff came back on her for her drugging her sister cause she was jealous of her. But I'm glad my babies got their happily ever after. U did good on yet another book and I'm looking forward to reading more of them. Sitting here patting my feet while sipping on Pepsi and while eating popcorn while waiting on the next book to read
It's crazy how Lisa was still trying to be in control of Treasure's life. Kaine showed how much he changed by not going about his usual retaliation methods all because of his love for Treasure. It sucks CoCo let her jealousy ruin her and Treasure's relationship when Treasure genuinely loved her, but I do applaud Treasure for standing her ground. Now she can truly live life for herself and love as she pleases
Yes ma’am thanks again for giving us another banger I wish treasure would’ve told kaine the truth and let him decide if he still wanted to be with her and I know it’s going to eat her up I rather tell the truth then live a lie and her mama is your topical pageant mom and love the limelight and living through their child and coco and her mama but why would you let a lie go so long how can you spilt twins up like that just sad
This was a great story, just loved how it flowed, the author writes like people actually talk. I just had one problem, no follow up on Megan after finding out her baby was gone, and they never connected she was the same girl that said Kaine was her baby's father first, but overall it was really good. Lesson learned if you didnt see them pour it dont drink it, trust no one not even family!!!! 💯
I feel as though a lot was left unsaid, and I hate that feeling. I felt like Kaine should have really got closure with the Jalani situation. He should've known that Chris, Lisa, and Deion were all a part of that. I couldn't stand Coco, but I would've liked to know what happened between her Rob and Franky. It was just so much going on, and if you didn't keep up, you would've missed something. I felt like this could've been a better ending (my opinion).
This finale was all that and more. Happy Treasure found out the truth about her cousin drugging her, she may have been hurt but it was about time she stood up for herself and took control of her life; that mother of hers was indeed a viper snake I feel she may have killed her father and she is where she needed to be. A must read series
I’m glad Treasure finally grew up and realized everyone doesn’t have your best interest at heart even when you have theirs. Coco was trifling and really had a jealous and mean streak. I hope she was really done being grimy. Deion and Lisa got their karma too. Glad Treasure and Kaine got their HEA. Good read.
I like the way the story ended. I would have loved a more detailed reconciliation between the sisters, but I understand it’s a novella. Maybe they’ll be a part three who knows. Good job Black Lavish keep writing.
Omg I knew the finale was gone be great. Again you characters and storyline be off the chain. I love Kaine and Treasure. Them snakes Coco Deion and Lisa needed to be dealt with. A great finale 💥💥💥. Can't wait for your next read you are a phenomenal writer.
A great ending of a well written story with a drama filled storyline. With likeable characters that were going through so much. From jealousy to secrets, to a few more twist. I enjoyed this read and can't wait to see what this author brings next.
Omg I loved this. Treasure was too trusting but that made me love her and Kaine was everything. Ma’am you did it again when I say this was well worth the wait. I loved this
The ending was lack luster. There was many things that needed closer like coco story and Chris and his parents. Yes it was nice that Treasure and Kaine got married but the book still felt like it was missing something like kaine finding out who was involved in his ex girlfriend’s death.
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I loved it. Treasure and Kaine won at the end. Deionre and Treasure mom were actually the dumbest criminals I've ever seen. Coco has a chance to fix her ways for Dream. She better do right by her for sure. This was a good read.
Lisa got exactly what she deserved. Kaine should have killed her. Chris was stupid for leaving that baby in the car and the momma was even dumber for placing that baby on someone's door step.
This was a pretty good book to read. It was short but to the point. I was glad Kaine did not find out who killed his ex completely. I think that would have made him feel a certain type of way towards treasure. I enjoyed reading this book.
Another great series by Black Lavish! I hate that this series is over. But is it? One thing that was left out was Treasure's knowledge of the first murder for hire by her mom.
Beautiful read. I just wish Kalani know that Lisa was involved in Jalani’s murder too. Coco just spiteful along with Lisa. I am happy that Treasure is living the life she wanted and now what her mother wanted.
This book was full of suspense and drama. This author has kept you wanna know what's gonna happen next. I couldn't put this book down Read more books from this author
It had some mistakes. This could have been one book. It should have been deeper development of the characters. I did love Kaine and Treasure. Coco was foul. But overall it was a good quick read.
Ian even gone lie. I skipped the last review and just gave it a 5 star just to get to book 2. This my rating for BOTH! Gah damn you put your foot and soul in boffum. Had me wheezing at work!
This was a great story her sister needs therapy herself her aunt an mother were wrong how they did those twins So happy for my Girl new life thanks for a great read
What an ending to this series. Black Lavish did her thing. Karma is something else. Everyone got what the desired. I would have like to see what became of Rod and Coco