"I should have been there, Cass. You shouldn't have had to deal with that on your own." He choked the sharp words out.
"It wasn't your responsibility."
"Bullshit."
"What makes you think I need to take care of my problems?" she demanded, pulling away from him. "You're not my boyfriend."
The smell of roses intensified as she struggled a bit before he finally let her go. "That may be true, but I would've enjoyed it."
This book has problems. It starts off with an interesting premise: Cass is throwing Gwen a bachelorette party. She and Gwen are handcuffed together. Cass has hired a stripper, real name Eric Reeves, stripper name Dalton Chase, as entertainment. He is a CEO by day, and a stripper by night. Okay. This sounds interesting.
Now, I'm not into strippers. I don't care whether a man or woman is stripping, the whole thing just makes me sad and doesn't turn me on at all. But this idea of a man who is a corporate suit during the day but takes his clothes off at night for money because he is broke is a fascinating one and I thought it could make a really interesting book.
PSYCHOLOGY
And it does, at least for that psychological angle. The most interesting parts of the book are when Eric Dalton struggles with his identity and his choice of night-time profession. He feels a deep shame and guilt about stripping, and he has a huge chip on his shoulder about it. He's always reading hidden meanings into Cass's words, looking for possible insults related to his choice of profession. She has no idea he's a suit and only knows him as a stripper.
It also leads to some wonderful psychological analysis when Eric Dalton interacts with other people. For instance, his 22-year-old brother, who Eric Dalton practically raised up, wants to become a stripper. Eric Dalton does everything in his power to talk his brother out of stripping. He thinks it's "beneath" his brother and tells his brother that this is not what Eric Dalton fought so hard for - to give his brother choices in life so that he wouldn't have to do things like strip in order to make ends meet.
Another great psychological aspect is Cass's internal conflict regarding dating/having sex with a stripper. She is herself a CEO of a corporation, and she is terrified people are going to find out that she and Eric Dalton are together. So she goes to some lengths to hide him from anyone important in her life. But she feels like shit about it. All this is very interesting.
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THE DARK SIDE
And then we have the darker side of this book. Initially, I liked Eric Dalton. He seemed like an okay guy. During the first chapters he was edgy, but relatively benign, showing mercy occasionally and acting like a reasonable man.
This quickly degenerates. It seems like Eric Dalton is flirting with I'm-an-abusive-asshole-which-some-misguided-people-call-alpha. Let's run through a few examples:
1.) He's always grabbing on to Cass and not letting her go, even when she struggles or asks to be let go. I'm not talking about in bed, I'm talking about in real life. This is instant-dump behavior in my opinion... Cass obviously doesn't agree.
2.) He's always putting his hands on people's necks and throats. Notice I said "people." Yeah, it's not just Cass he does this to - he also engages weaker males this way in order to show dominance. I was like: o.O I'm not on board with this. I don't mind having a man's hand on my neck, but he's a little too aggressive with this and I was unhappy. Again, I don't feel like we were in full-blown "I own you, bitch" territory here, but we were getting close enough that I was upset. (Dalton isn't the only one who does this. An older woman, a mother-figure, puts her hand on the back of Dalton's neck and squeezes in a show of dominance. An I'm-the-mom-you're-the-pup,-watch-your-tone-young-man kind of thing.) Reading over this paragraph you'd think this was a novel about werewolves. Seriously creepy.
3.) Okay, now here we have this little gem, someone makes a crack about Cass when she's with Eric Dalton in a subway tunnel.
"Take a deep breath, Cass. He was only playing."
"Sure."
"I mean it." He hooked a finger through her belt loop and pulled her to a stop. "Look at me."
She glanced back, wary of his quiet surety.
"If he had been disrespectful, I would have put a stop to it."
OK. Let me get this straight: Cass doesn't get to decide when she's insulted or hurt by what someone says to her - YOU get to decide if she's been insulted or hurt. Because... you own her? If any form of this conversation had gone down in any relationship of mine the guy would be out the door so fast he wouldn't even realize what had happened. I can't stand this proprietary shit. Not even touching the fact that he regularly talks about and wants to beat other men up for her.
4.) What Cass calls "demanding and commanding." This is when Dalton gets bossy and domineering in bed and out. Cass clearly doesn't like it. She asks him on four separate occasions to cut that shit out. Yeah, that's three times too many in my opinion. What a fucking inconsiderate asshole. Your woman's trying to communicate with you and you just steamroll right over her, because you are a fucking prick, Eric Dalton.
All of this *gestures to this whole section of the review* is a huge warning flag. Abuser - run! Now, like I said before, he doesn't get into really nasty territory - trust me I've seen much worse - but that doesn't make it any better. You may think from reading this section that this book is very... BDSM-flavored with dominance and power-plays being a main focus - it's not. Instead, it's much more insidious. This treacherous vein is just a small part woven into the over all story, poisoning the whole thing.
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SEX
No matter what his skill-level is, I can't enjoy sex with a jerk who doesn't respect the woman he's with.
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Tl;dr - A fascinating premise and good basis for a story which is ruined by the hero's bullying tactics.
1 REAL STAR, 1 ROMANCE STAR