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Daughters of His Kingdom #1
So Fair a Lady
Boston, MA 1773: Shards of Eliza Campbell's life crash to the ground when she discovers a devastating secret: her father was a spy for the Sons of Liberty. Determined to uncover the truth--at any cost--not even a marriage proposal from the dashing British Officer Samuel Martin can dissuade her. When rescued from British capture by handsome patriot Thomas Watson, Eliza discovers what her father risked his life for and yearns to know more. But will her budding attraction to this courageous patriot damage her already wounded heart?
After years of being blackmailed by Officer Martin, Thomas plans to start a new life in the small town of Sandwich. However, when his actions place Eliza and her sister in danger, he must act quickly to protect them from falling into enemy hands. If the three of them are discovered, their lives will never be the same. Now, not only must he protect Eliza, he must protect his heart from a love that is sure to wound him far greater than any British soldier ever could.
After years of being blackmailed by Officer Martin, Thomas plans to start a new life in the small town of Sandwich. However, when his actions place Eliza and her sister in danger, he must act quickly to protect them from falling into enemy hands. If the three of them are discovered, their lives will never be the same. Now, not only must he protect Eliza, he must protect his heart from a love that is sure to wound him far greater than any British soldier ever could.
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First published April 14, 2014
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February 2, 2018
Historical Romance
I really enjoyed this story! I love American history and romance and this book has both! I plan to read the next book in the series.
I really enjoyed this story! I love American history and romance and this book has both! I plan to read the next book in the series.
January 2, 2015
So Fair a Lady is a novel for those who crave a lot of romantic moments in their historical fiction. Though the plot focuses primarily on the romantic aspect of the story, the historical aspects were well-done. I loved the little nuances about their daily life – nights talking & reading by the fire, days spent baking, working as a printer and intricate gowns worn by the ladies. The language, mannerisms, dress and descriptions all spoke to the colonial period.
My favorite parts of the story were the talks about the political temperature in the colonies; I actually wanted more of that. One of the scenes includes a high-tension rally among the patriots, which really drew me in. To be honest, I found Dr. Nathaniel Smith, leader of the rally and an important secondary character in the book to be the most fascinating character of all – not that I didn’t enjoy Eliza and Thomas’s story – I just wanted more of the tension between the colonists and the royalists to be more present in the story as those aspects were fascinating when present.
I found the antagonist to be a bit flat. He was certainly a villain through and through, but I wasn’t sure where the motivation for his obsession with Eliza originated. They had a long history together, of course, but for me the question was what in his past triggered his behavior toward her? Most villains don’t start out as horrible people, but rather become misguided along the way. I did find him to propel the plot in a realistic way, but I wished to know a bit about his past, etc. to get a better idea of his motivation.
Amber Perry’s style of storytelling reminds me a lot of Julie Lessman’s writing – I can see fans of her gobbling up this novel for sure. It has some very romantic moments (no worries, all is clean!), with a lot of drama thrown in the mix, that are reminiscent of Lessman’s style, but Perry has her own distinct style in this debut. I look forward to reading more from her in the future.
I recommend So Fair a Lady for readers looking for a romantic historical, swoon-worthy kisses, hurried rescues and all – swoon-seekers certainly won’t be disappointed here! I think the second book is about Eliza’s sister, Kitty, and Thomas’s friend, Nathaniel, which I think will make a fascinating story!
My favorite parts of the story were the talks about the political temperature in the colonies; I actually wanted more of that. One of the scenes includes a high-tension rally among the patriots, which really drew me in. To be honest, I found Dr. Nathaniel Smith, leader of the rally and an important secondary character in the book to be the most fascinating character of all – not that I didn’t enjoy Eliza and Thomas’s story – I just wanted more of the tension between the colonists and the royalists to be more present in the story as those aspects were fascinating when present.
I found the antagonist to be a bit flat. He was certainly a villain through and through, but I wasn’t sure where the motivation for his obsession with Eliza originated. They had a long history together, of course, but for me the question was what in his past triggered his behavior toward her? Most villains don’t start out as horrible people, but rather become misguided along the way. I did find him to propel the plot in a realistic way, but I wished to know a bit about his past, etc. to get a better idea of his motivation.
Amber Perry’s style of storytelling reminds me a lot of Julie Lessman’s writing – I can see fans of her gobbling up this novel for sure. It has some very romantic moments (no worries, all is clean!), with a lot of drama thrown in the mix, that are reminiscent of Lessman’s style, but Perry has her own distinct style in this debut. I look forward to reading more from her in the future.
I recommend So Fair a Lady for readers looking for a romantic historical, swoon-worthy kisses, hurried rescues and all – swoon-seekers certainly won’t be disappointed here! I think the second book is about Eliza’s sister, Kitty, and Thomas’s friend, Nathaniel, which I think will make a fascinating story!
May 14, 2014
So Fair A Lady is the main reason why I do not just read books from major publishing companies. there are so many diamond reads from independent publishing and this book is one of those. I loved Amber Lynn Perry's characters, location, and story. She definitely knows how to write. Her writing reminds me of two of my favorite authors, Laura Frantz and Jody Hedlund. What a fantastic debut! I can't wait to read book 2 of the series. I love love love this book. It's definitely a keeper. Way to go, Amber!
5 plus more stars.
5 plus more stars.
July 29, 2016
I loved this book so much I was so sad it ended. I fell in love with all the characters and how they interacted with each other. It starts out with the main character, Eliza confused to find out that her father was a patriot and not a loyalist. Her father always told her to stay true to the king but he was against the king so who should she be loyal to? While she is torned between what side she is ment to be on she meets a handsome patriot named Thomas Martain. Now she has to make some big decisions that will change her life forever.
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May 30, 2017Honestly, I ended up skimming at the end. Among other things, there was content that I did not agree with/was uncomfortable with.
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June 28, 2019
So Fair A Lady by Amber Lynn Perry is the first book in the Daughters of the Kingdom series.
Against a rich historical backdrop of Boston in 1773, Amber Lynn Perry spins a tale of secrets and patriotism.
Eliza and Kitty’s father has died and unbeknownst to them he was a Patriot, not a Tory, as supposed. Eliza is almost betrothed to Samuel, a Redcoat. But is Samuel loyal to the king or just obsessed with Eliza? Thomas, a student of Eliza’s father, sets out to warn the girls about imminent danger and leads them to supposed safety.
Travel back to the founding of our country and see what a masterful tale Ms. Perry conceives. Lush with descriptions of old Boston and an exciting, dangerous tale of conflicting loyalties. The characters truly search for what God wants for a budding Nation.
*I purchased this ebook from Amazon. I was not required to give a review. All opinions are my own. *
Against a rich historical backdrop of Boston in 1773, Amber Lynn Perry spins a tale of secrets and patriotism.
Eliza and Kitty’s father has died and unbeknownst to them he was a Patriot, not a Tory, as supposed. Eliza is almost betrothed to Samuel, a Redcoat. But is Samuel loyal to the king or just obsessed with Eliza? Thomas, a student of Eliza’s father, sets out to warn the girls about imminent danger and leads them to supposed safety.
Travel back to the founding of our country and see what a masterful tale Ms. Perry conceives. Lush with descriptions of old Boston and an exciting, dangerous tale of conflicting loyalties. The characters truly search for what God wants for a budding Nation.
*I purchased this ebook from Amazon. I was not required to give a review. All opinions are my own. *
March 10, 2016
I have loved reading novels set in the Colonial time period since I picked up Ann Rinaldi's Time Enough for Drums as a teenager. There is something about the political birth of our country and the patriots that affected change that is so powerful. This book is especially dynamic since Eliza begins loyal to the King of England, but as she follows the prompting of her father to search for the truth, she comes to an understanding that the true King to whom her loyalties belong is God.
The relationship Eliza has with her sister Kitty is sweet and also grounding since they don't know where their future will take them, but they are strong for each other. The chemistry between Eliza and Thomas is palpable, and the restrained passion creates a wonderful romantic tension. It was interesting to read Officer Martin's point of view as well, since he doesn't appear to be a villain to Eliza and Kitty, and his decisions stem from a real worry for Eliza.
The pacing of the novel is well-done, with a good balance of action and apprehension as well as pondering and growth. The ending wraps this book up, however there is another novel in the series with Kitty as the main character, and I am excited that it will be releasing this summer! I definitely recommend this book to fans of Jody Hedlund's writing. Amber Perry's debut novel has been not only a pleasure to read, but also thought-provoking and inspiring.
(ARC provided by the author for unbiased review)
The relationship Eliza has with her sister Kitty is sweet and also grounding since they don't know where their future will take them, but they are strong for each other. The chemistry between Eliza and Thomas is palpable, and the restrained passion creates a wonderful romantic tension. It was interesting to read Officer Martin's point of view as well, since he doesn't appear to be a villain to Eliza and Kitty, and his decisions stem from a real worry for Eliza.
The pacing of the novel is well-done, with a good balance of action and apprehension as well as pondering and growth. The ending wraps this book up, however there is another novel in the series with Kitty as the main character, and I am excited that it will be releasing this summer! I definitely recommend this book to fans of Jody Hedlund's writing. Amber Perry's debut novel has been not only a pleasure to read, but also thought-provoking and inspiring.
(ARC provided by the author for unbiased review)
November 4, 2018
I'm 35% through and I just don't think I can finish this book. In 35% there has been a misuse of your vs. you're, unbelievable immediate attraction (from a girl who had previously discussed marriage multiple times with another guy who is the villain), a traitor who is pitied instead of punished, several instances of "personal revelation" where God just bypasses Scripture to tell this girl that some strange man is the best ever, and rather surprisingly, a near death visit from her father's "spirit" where he intercedes for her and gives a message from God. Ugh. There were also several instances of the whole world fading away due to the nearness of the love interest...after knowing each other for 3 days...while they're fleeing from bad guys...while walking 20 miles a day... hmm.
Scripture alone speaks God's word to us. Jesus alone mediates our relationship with the Father. Dead people's spirits don't come talk to you from heaven. This is how unbiblical ideas creep into the church!
Scripture alone speaks God's word to us. Jesus alone mediates our relationship with the Father. Dead people's spirits don't come talk to you from heaven. This is how unbiblical ideas creep into the church!
November 17, 2015
The author has promise but this book frustrated me. There were a few noticeable misspellings and grammar mistakes, so the book could have used a good editor. The story was interesting and that's what held my interest through the end. The romance, however, drove me insane. I don't read purely romance novels because of lines like this -
"His name sent a burst of flower petals showering down her skin."
"The closeness of him almost untied the laces of her willpower."
Yuck!!
If the romantic thoughts are toned down and the next book is edited better, I'll be happy to continue reading this author because I do think she has promise. But I can't stomach more of the same.
"His name sent a burst of flower petals showering down her skin."
"The closeness of him almost untied the laces of her willpower."
Yuck!!
If the romantic thoughts are toned down and the next book is edited better, I'll be happy to continue reading this author because I do think she has promise. But I can't stomach more of the same.
April 24, 2017
I'm revising this review, on further reflection, after a friend remarked how it saddened her that I didn't care for it much.
What happened was I was listening to this first book, and, although the narrator is a really good reader, the melodrama with which she reads it, in my estimation, changes the tone of the book. All along I was thinking how I didn't like the over the top writing, but I now think much of my opinion was based on how it was read. Narrators can make or break a book. When I listened to the second book, I found I couldn't take the drama, so I switched to reading it. MUCH better. Here's the original review, but bear in mind, I now don't feel quite as strongly about all the eye-rolling I did.
So... I purchased all 3 Kindle books of this series AND the Audible versions to go with them... assuming that, with an average rating of about 4.2, they would be pretty good. Well, this one isn't off to the best start. Reasons below...
Story:
The year is 1773. Eliza Campbell and her sister Kitty are at their father's bedside when dies, leaving a cryptic letter behind, requesting she not share any part of it with her 17 year old sister. In it she's shocked to read his explanation of his being a part of the Sons of Liberty; a movement working to get out from under King George (patriots vs loyalists). She had no idea her father was anything but truly loyal to the King. Also, he describes how she should not trust Samuel, who happens to be a "Red Coat" and someone she's grown to care for very much, and could see herself marrying. What was she to think? What she doesn't know is he's been blackmailing a gentleman close to her father for information of sedition from the colonists.
She meets this same man by a fluke one day. That evening he comes banging on her door crying that she and her sister Kitty are in grave danger, that soldiers were after them. This is the beginning of Eliza, Thomas and Kitty being on the run for weeks, hiding from the very man who had just asked her the day before to marry him.
The story was a good one, and the pre-revolutionary war history was interesting, including the Boston Tea Party. My problem isn't with the story as much as how it was told. The author wanted to let the readers know how much Thomas was attracted to Eliza with no less than seven times bringing up her luscious, flawless, perfect, gentle curves, and the word pictures about how they felt at the other's touch were just over the top. In my progress update I wrote, "...phrases like, "His name sent a burst of flower petals down her skin". Laughable and sad at the same time. It's ruining a perfectly wonderful book." Romance/attraction can be told by an author in such a way that the reader deeply "feels" it, rather than having it thrown in their faces, so to speak.
Ah well, still, good story, so I'll give her that. On to the next one.
What happened was I was listening to this first book, and, although the narrator is a really good reader, the melodrama with which she reads it, in my estimation, changes the tone of the book. All along I was thinking how I didn't like the over the top writing, but I now think much of my opinion was based on how it was read. Narrators can make or break a book. When I listened to the second book, I found I couldn't take the drama, so I switched to reading it. MUCH better. Here's the original review, but bear in mind, I now don't feel quite as strongly about all the eye-rolling I did.
So... I purchased all 3 Kindle books of this series AND the Audible versions to go with them... assuming that, with an average rating of about 4.2, they would be pretty good. Well, this one isn't off to the best start. Reasons below...
Story:
The year is 1773. Eliza Campbell and her sister Kitty are at their father's bedside when dies, leaving a cryptic letter behind, requesting she not share any part of it with her 17 year old sister. In it she's shocked to read his explanation of his being a part of the Sons of Liberty; a movement working to get out from under King George (patriots vs loyalists). She had no idea her father was anything but truly loyal to the King. Also, he describes how she should not trust Samuel, who happens to be a "Red Coat" and someone she's grown to care for very much, and could see herself marrying. What was she to think? What she doesn't know is he's been blackmailing a gentleman close to her father for information of sedition from the colonists.
She meets this same man by a fluke one day. That evening he comes banging on her door crying that she and her sister Kitty are in grave danger, that soldiers were after them. This is the beginning of Eliza, Thomas and Kitty being on the run for weeks, hiding from the very man who had just asked her the day before to marry him.
The story was a good one, and the pre-revolutionary war history was interesting, including the Boston Tea Party. My problem isn't with the story as much as how it was told. The author wanted to let the readers know how much Thomas was attracted to Eliza with no less than seven times bringing up her luscious, flawless, perfect, gentle curves, and the word pictures about how they felt at the other's touch were just over the top. In my progress update I wrote, "...phrases like, "His name sent a burst of flower petals down her skin". Laughable and sad at the same time. It's ruining a perfectly wonderful book." Romance/attraction can be told by an author in such a way that the reader deeply "feels" it, rather than having it thrown in their faces, so to speak.
Ah well, still, good story, so I'll give her that. On to the next one.
August 1, 2017
Nice story, but one big issue.
Entertaining, but... There were 2 things that took away from it for me though...I didn't quite get why Samuel thought the girls were kidnapped to their harm when he gave the orders to arrest the families of rebels, and he knew the father was a rebel, and also the one who supposedly took them was a rebel. What would be his motivation? The other issue relates to faith, and faith is always a serious business. While the characters were God-honoring and there were even Biblically influenced phrases, I can't conclude that this would be a Christian story. A character had a near death experience in heaven where her family greeted her, but where was Jesus? He wasn't there. Later she hears a whisper of someone in her ear, but it's not the Holy Spirit doing it, it's her father. And earlier in the story it mentions her father watching over her. As one who can measure these instances up against truth, I was able to enjoy the historical and entertainment aspects of the story. But when faith expressions can influence the beliefs of thousands who don't know any better, a writer needs to be more careful. The best Christian writers will use their God-given creativity to impart clear truths to their readers. The faith issue is why I had to mark it down.
Entertaining, but... There were 2 things that took away from it for me though...I didn't quite get why Samuel thought the girls were kidnapped to their harm when he gave the orders to arrest the families of rebels, and he knew the father was a rebel, and also the one who supposedly took them was a rebel. What would be his motivation? The other issue relates to faith, and faith is always a serious business. While the characters were God-honoring and there were even Biblically influenced phrases, I can't conclude that this would be a Christian story. A character had a near death experience in heaven where her family greeted her, but where was Jesus? He wasn't there. Later she hears a whisper of someone in her ear, but it's not the Holy Spirit doing it, it's her father. And earlier in the story it mentions her father watching over her. As one who can measure these instances up against truth, I was able to enjoy the historical and entertainment aspects of the story. But when faith expressions can influence the beliefs of thousands who don't know any better, a writer needs to be more careful. The best Christian writers will use their God-given creativity to impart clear truths to their readers. The faith issue is why I had to mark it down.
September 1, 2016
I had to come back and add to my review of this book.
So Fair a Lady has a fantastic villain. Eliza has two love interests, and one of them is the villain...but she doesn't know he's the villain. He has a lot of redeeming qualities, yet he's still utterly despicable and believable all at the same time. She did a great job on him.
A very well written and absorbing story...the only reason for the critical rating is...I found it a bit too "passionate" for my taste of Christian literature. For this reason, I didn't finish it.
So Fair a Lady has a fantastic villain. Eliza has two love interests, and one of them is the villain...but she doesn't know he's the villain. He has a lot of redeeming qualities, yet he's still utterly despicable and believable all at the same time. She did a great job on him.
A very well written and absorbing story...the only reason for the critical rating is...I found it a bit too "passionate" for my taste of Christian literature. For this reason, I didn't finish it.
August 24, 2016
I never know what to expect when I read a new author, so I was really surprised when I fell in love with this one! The descriptions made me feel like I was actually involved in the story, and I couldn't put it down. Definitely picking up book #2!
February 20, 2018
Can I just start by saying that Amber Lynn Perry is a new favorite in the historical romance genre on my bookshelf! One of the hallmarks for me of a good writer is that he or she draws the reader into the action making them a part of the story. Perry not only successfully accomplishes this with the action and danger unfolding throughout the plot, but also takes her writing to the next level by drawing the reader straight into the depths of the emotions the characters are experiencing. I did not perceive that I was a simple spectator observing the characters around me, but rather Perry wrote in such a way that I felt Thomas and Eliza's longing for one another, suffered his torture at having to keep his affections restrained, cried with Eliza as she felt rejected by Thomas again and again, and experienced the unease of Samuel's disturbing psychosis. And the romance! Mercy! The longing Thomas and Eliza had for one another was just barely contained beneath the surface as they struggled to navigate their feelings. But when they both finally relented and released their pent up love for one another- the pages were smoking! (Those kisses! I think the edges of my book are singed a little!!) A compelling plot and deep-rooted love story that kept me turning the pages well into the night, this one has landed on my "favorites" shelf to be enjoyed again and again! As a matter of fact, I enjoyed it so much I've already started book #2 in the series!
This review contains my own thoughts and opinions regarding this literary work. I have not been compensated by the publisher or author in any way.
This review contains my own thoughts and opinions regarding this literary work. I have not been compensated by the publisher or author in any way.
January 30, 2020
Ok. This started out as OK fluff. ALMOST an actual historical fiction. Halfway through, I realized it wasn't really historical. It was a soap opera. I kept hoping something would happen to change my mind...oh the cheesiness.
Of course the main characters were incredibly beautiful and handsome...and there was smooching and lots of pressing bodies together. Ok, enough please. It got very old. I had visions of days of our lives characters floating through my head- (although i haven't watched a soap for probably 20 years) OH! And could there be any more flushing of faces? I think not!
The history? nah. there were a couple mentions of things going on in the time period, but that's it. Not to be too harsh to the author- I thought she was a good writer. I would possibly pick up another of hers, as long as the cheese isn't so bad.
So why did I finish? I'm still wondering that myself.
Of course the main characters were incredibly beautiful and handsome...and there was smooching and lots of pressing bodies together. Ok, enough please. It got very old. I had visions of days of our lives characters floating through my head- (although i haven't watched a soap for probably 20 years) OH! And could there be any more flushing of faces? I think not!
The history? nah. there were a couple mentions of things going on in the time period, but that's it. Not to be too harsh to the author- I thought she was a good writer. I would possibly pick up another of hers, as long as the cheese isn't so bad.
So why did I finish? I'm still wondering that myself.
June 18, 2017
Got bored not going to finish
May 31, 2014
In So Fair a Lady, the first book in the Daughters of His Kingdom series, we are swept back in time to the beginning of the American Revolution. In both its detail and storytelling, this book is superb.
From the first pages, the pace is stunning. Within the initial few chapters, the main characters lose an anchoring force in their lives and find themselves on the run from the British. As the story progresses, we learn more about Eliza’s father and Thomas’ mentor, Robert Campbell, culminating in a beautiful passage towards the end of the novel about his dreams for the two, though they had never met until after his passing.
I loved the rich historical detail. One particular instance that sticks out in my mind was when one of the characters referred to a British soldier as a “lobster.” It makes sense to the reader, but wasn’t the typical “redcoat” reference and I really enjoyed the accurate change-up that drew me further into the story and the time period in which it takes place. It was very interesting to me to get the colonist’s perspective on events of the day through their words and thoughts. The author showed us what happened and how the people of the day felt about the events they were experiencing rather than just telling us about it.
The characterization was excellent. Primary characters were fleshed out remarkably well, and even secondary characters were given a rounded personality with both positive and negative aspects. The villain of the novel was a truly evil character, but even he had moments that softened his harshness early in the book. Towards the end, he became even harder, but this was believable as events changed him and caused his actions to become more extreme. The contrast between the hero and the villain was stark in their treatment of Eliza, especially in regards to her intellect. Thomas encourages her to ask questions and form her own opinions; Samuel reminds her politics is not her appropriate sphere and that he will do her thinking for her.
I enjoyed the honest treatment of the moral issues involved in fighting for freedom. Lying, endangering those you loved, spying for the enemy and more were addressed and easy answers aren’t present here, which added to the realism. One part I especially liked was where Eliza is questioning how her father could have been involved with the Sons of Liberty and some of the more radical acts they committed. Thomas pointed out to her that, as with any growing group, there would be some who held the same political beliefs that would commit acts many others in that same group might find horrible. He didn’t excuse or condone behaviors such as tar and feathering someone, and he made sure Eliza knew her father hadn’t approved of it either.
The spiritual content in this novel was excellent. I appreciated that the characters’ struggles were grounded in reality. Kitty’s tearful questions about God’s presence in hardship rang true and pulled me further into the story: “Aren’t we supposed to feel His strength in times of trial? I don’t feel anything but sadness. Where is He, Liza?” A good question many believers ask in the midst of deep struggle. The main characters rely on God to make decisions and direct their paths and Eliza frequently sacrifices her desires for those around her and gives her all to protect those she loves.
My only complaint about this novel is the too-frequent errors missed by the editor. This story deserved to shine brightly, but especially towards the last third of the text, wrong words were inserted (their instead of there and other similar examples) which jolted me out of the narrative. Without those mistakes, this book would have earned five stars from me.
Overall, this is an excellent story told well and true to history. I would recommend it to any fan of Christian Fiction, but especially to those interested in the Revolutionary time period.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for my honest review, which I have gladly shared.
From the first pages, the pace is stunning. Within the initial few chapters, the main characters lose an anchoring force in their lives and find themselves on the run from the British. As the story progresses, we learn more about Eliza’s father and Thomas’ mentor, Robert Campbell, culminating in a beautiful passage towards the end of the novel about his dreams for the two, though they had never met until after his passing.
I loved the rich historical detail. One particular instance that sticks out in my mind was when one of the characters referred to a British soldier as a “lobster.” It makes sense to the reader, but wasn’t the typical “redcoat” reference and I really enjoyed the accurate change-up that drew me further into the story and the time period in which it takes place. It was very interesting to me to get the colonist’s perspective on events of the day through their words and thoughts. The author showed us what happened and how the people of the day felt about the events they were experiencing rather than just telling us about it.
The characterization was excellent. Primary characters were fleshed out remarkably well, and even secondary characters were given a rounded personality with both positive and negative aspects. The villain of the novel was a truly evil character, but even he had moments that softened his harshness early in the book. Towards the end, he became even harder, but this was believable as events changed him and caused his actions to become more extreme. The contrast between the hero and the villain was stark in their treatment of Eliza, especially in regards to her intellect. Thomas encourages her to ask questions and form her own opinions; Samuel reminds her politics is not her appropriate sphere and that he will do her thinking for her.
I enjoyed the honest treatment of the moral issues involved in fighting for freedom. Lying, endangering those you loved, spying for the enemy and more were addressed and easy answers aren’t present here, which added to the realism. One part I especially liked was where Eliza is questioning how her father could have been involved with the Sons of Liberty and some of the more radical acts they committed. Thomas pointed out to her that, as with any growing group, there would be some who held the same political beliefs that would commit acts many others in that same group might find horrible. He didn’t excuse or condone behaviors such as tar and feathering someone, and he made sure Eliza knew her father hadn’t approved of it either.
The spiritual content in this novel was excellent. I appreciated that the characters’ struggles were grounded in reality. Kitty’s tearful questions about God’s presence in hardship rang true and pulled me further into the story: “Aren’t we supposed to feel His strength in times of trial? I don’t feel anything but sadness. Where is He, Liza?” A good question many believers ask in the midst of deep struggle. The main characters rely on God to make decisions and direct their paths and Eliza frequently sacrifices her desires for those around her and gives her all to protect those she loves.
My only complaint about this novel is the too-frequent errors missed by the editor. This story deserved to shine brightly, but especially towards the last third of the text, wrong words were inserted (their instead of there and other similar examples) which jolted me out of the narrative. Without those mistakes, this book would have earned five stars from me.
Overall, this is an excellent story told well and true to history. I would recommend it to any fan of Christian Fiction, but especially to those interested in the Revolutionary time period.
I received a complimentary copy in exchange for my honest review, which I have gladly shared.
July 3, 2019
At first this book was really intriguing, I like books set in the colonial period and the book started off with some interesting conflicts. However the last 60% of the book proved this was more of a romance that could have been set at any time period and nothing would have changed. The spiritual storyline with finding a testimony of the revolution was a bit bland, and the characters in general were boring and annoying. Eliza was dumb and didn't grow up or learn much at all, other than what she was "supposed to learn" about the revolution. The two love interests were both controlling and not very good people. The "good guy" Thomas was so annoying and having to hear his inner conflicts with his hormones was disturbing and unrealistic. The overall thing that ruined the book for me was the theme of Eliza being so "innocent and alluring" that she "did things" to the men without realizing it. She made them want to assault or ravish her just by a simple turn of the neck...seriously it got a little rapey to me.
Examples:
"It took all his strength not to pull her forward and kiss her right there. If only she knew how completely bewitching she was. Her innocence and caring was enough to make any man turn mad."
"The way her lips moved when she spoke, the way her chest pushed up and down as she breathed, acted like an opiate in his blood. All he could think about was the imprint of her body against his, the scent of her hair and the taste of her sweet lips. She had no idea what she was doing to him."
"She parted her lips and her eyes closed. She was his for the taking! Thomas smoothed his hands around her warm waist and leaned so close he could feel her breath on his mouth."
"If he were to be that close to her again, the pull of her nearness might prove too much to resist."
This wasn't romantic to me at all, more toxic than anything. Thomas actually completely ignored her for weeks after their first kiss because he had to "protect her" from his inner passions (inner rapist?idk). Gross and not normal or healthy. Guys aren't that out of control of their bodies and minds to the point that they can't even treat a girl like a human being.
There's this apparently"romantic" scene where he's being pretty mad and violent with her and yanking her around and then he kisses her and proposes and she's all happy because he was "only mad because he was worried for her safety." Toxic masculinity that reminds me of those old 50's movies where the woman is yanked around by the man who apparently loves her. It's not his fault he's angry and lashing out, he just "loves her too much" or something. Not ok!
And all throughout it it's her "alluring" body that "makes" him react this way. Totally not his fault at all. Icky. I struggled to finish this book and won't be reading any more of this author. Overall a disappointing romance and not much else in terms of plot. Like they literally hide in a house alone for most of the book. Boring!!!
Examples:
"It took all his strength not to pull her forward and kiss her right there. If only she knew how completely bewitching she was. Her innocence and caring was enough to make any man turn mad."
"The way her lips moved when she spoke, the way her chest pushed up and down as she breathed, acted like an opiate in his blood. All he could think about was the imprint of her body against his, the scent of her hair and the taste of her sweet lips. She had no idea what she was doing to him."
"She parted her lips and her eyes closed. She was his for the taking! Thomas smoothed his hands around her warm waist and leaned so close he could feel her breath on his mouth."
"If he were to be that close to her again, the pull of her nearness might prove too much to resist."
This wasn't romantic to me at all, more toxic than anything. Thomas actually completely ignored her for weeks after their first kiss because he had to "protect her" from his inner passions (inner rapist?idk). Gross and not normal or healthy. Guys aren't that out of control of their bodies and minds to the point that they can't even treat a girl like a human being.
There's this apparently"romantic" scene where he's being pretty mad and violent with her and yanking her around and then he kisses her and proposes and she's all happy because he was "only mad because he was worried for her safety." Toxic masculinity that reminds me of those old 50's movies where the woman is yanked around by the man who apparently loves her. It's not his fault he's angry and lashing out, he just "loves her too much" or something. Not ok!
And all throughout it it's her "alluring" body that "makes" him react this way. Totally not his fault at all. Icky. I struggled to finish this book and won't be reading any more of this author. Overall a disappointing romance and not much else in terms of plot. Like they literally hide in a house alone for most of the book. Boring!!!
July 8, 2017
Loved it!!! Full review coming soon!!
May 17, 2014
So Fair a Lady is a great debut novel by a very promising new author. The novel is a terrific story that catches the reader’s attention and holds it throughout the book. The plot gets a grip on the reader immediately, and the suspense pulls one along at an excellent pace.
Set in Boston, Massachusetts in 1773 the story details the turmoil and conflict going on at that time. The per-Revolutionary period was a volatile time and very few escaped the political intrigues. I enjoyed the historical detail in the novel and the nice job Ms. Perry did presenting the confusion of the people at that time over the historical events that were unfolding.
Eliza and Kitty Campbell are two young women raised as protected, well loved daughters of a dedicated Tory doctor, loyal to the King. At only 50 years of age, Robert Campbell dies leaving his daughters alone. Right before his death, Robert hands Eliza a mysterious letter to be read only by her and not her younger sister, Kitty. Eliza reads the letter and her life is changed forever.
Thomas Watson, a young printer, is a devout Son of Liberty and strong patriot. Although Eliza had never met Thomas prior to her father’s death, their lives become entwined along a journey to save themselves. Thomas, Eliza, and Kitty, along with the help of Thomas’s good friend, Dr. Nathaniel Smith, manage to flee Boston and hide over the course of several months.
Eliza experiences a transformation from protected daughter to a knowledgeable young woman well versed in the political rhetoric of the time. Thomas and Eliza find adventure, romance, and suspense along the way. The characters grow and develop nicely throughout the story and a pleasing ending is achieved leaving plenty of room for growth and development in the coming story of Kitty and Nathaniel. If you enjoy Christian historical fiction, read the story of Eliza and Thomas and life in pre-Revolutionary Massachusetts. Very appealing read!I would actually give it a 4 1/2 star rating if I could.
Purchased copy from Amazon.com.
Set in Boston, Massachusetts in 1773 the story details the turmoil and conflict going on at that time. The per-Revolutionary period was a volatile time and very few escaped the political intrigues. I enjoyed the historical detail in the novel and the nice job Ms. Perry did presenting the confusion of the people at that time over the historical events that were unfolding.
Eliza and Kitty Campbell are two young women raised as protected, well loved daughters of a dedicated Tory doctor, loyal to the King. At only 50 years of age, Robert Campbell dies leaving his daughters alone. Right before his death, Robert hands Eliza a mysterious letter to be read only by her and not her younger sister, Kitty. Eliza reads the letter and her life is changed forever.
Thomas Watson, a young printer, is a devout Son of Liberty and strong patriot. Although Eliza had never met Thomas prior to her father’s death, their lives become entwined along a journey to save themselves. Thomas, Eliza, and Kitty, along with the help of Thomas’s good friend, Dr. Nathaniel Smith, manage to flee Boston and hide over the course of several months.
Eliza experiences a transformation from protected daughter to a knowledgeable young woman well versed in the political rhetoric of the time. Thomas and Eliza find adventure, romance, and suspense along the way. The characters grow and develop nicely throughout the story and a pleasing ending is achieved leaving plenty of room for growth and development in the coming story of Kitty and Nathaniel. If you enjoy Christian historical fiction, read the story of Eliza and Thomas and life in pre-Revolutionary Massachusetts. Very appealing read!I would actually give it a 4 1/2 star rating if I could.
Purchased copy from Amazon.com.
October 14, 2016
I can tell that this novel is a debut novel. It feels very formulaic and is easy to see where things are going. I hope the author has come into her style a bit more by the second novel. I do like the two main characters, Eliza and Thomas. I think they are very believable characters. I love Nathaniel and Kitty, so I am very excited to read their story next. The historical setting is very interesting. When the author discussed actual events, I think those were some of the best moments in the book, and I kind of wished she would have delved a little deeper into those moments.
Spoiler alert: If you continue reading this review, you may learn some things about the characters you may want to save for your own reading of this book.
Here is my problem, and what keeps this book from a 4 or 5 score. The bad guy was the bad guy. You knew if from the very beginning. The good guys were the good guys. You knew it from page 1. There was a little character change in Eliza as she learned what the Sons of Liberty were all about. BUT, other than that little change, all of the characters were totally flat. So, I did get a little bored. Also, if this author once wrote for soap operas I would not be shocked. This book read like a soap opera. Even the scene changes felt like a soap opera scene change. It was strange. And, I am not a fan of the three-person point of view. If I got to understand why Samuel, the villain, became the monster he did, then maybe his point of view would be worth knowing, but we don't get anything on Samuel other than he is going crazy. I guess I am supposed to believe that it is because his love for Eliza has become obsessive, but even that doesn't really work for me in this book. And, finally, my last issue is the editing. Whoa! So many errors. It was frustrating. Words missing. Too many words added. Words misspelled. Very frustrating.
Spoiler alert: If you continue reading this review, you may learn some things about the characters you may want to save for your own reading of this book.
Here is my problem, and what keeps this book from a 4 or 5 score. The bad guy was the bad guy. You knew if from the very beginning. The good guys were the good guys. You knew it from page 1. There was a little character change in Eliza as she learned what the Sons of Liberty were all about. BUT, other than that little change, all of the characters were totally flat. So, I did get a little bored. Also, if this author once wrote for soap operas I would not be shocked. This book read like a soap opera. Even the scene changes felt like a soap opera scene change. It was strange. And, I am not a fan of the three-person point of view. If I got to understand why Samuel, the villain, became the monster he did, then maybe his point of view would be worth knowing, but we don't get anything on Samuel other than he is going crazy. I guess I am supposed to believe that it is because his love for Eliza has become obsessive, but even that doesn't really work for me in this book. And, finally, my last issue is the editing. Whoa! So many errors. It was frustrating. Words missing. Too many words added. Words misspelled. Very frustrating.
May 9, 2014
A spectacular debut novel by Amber Perry! Breathtaking and gut-wrenching scenes fill this wonderful pre-Revolutionary War story about two courageous Americans; whose faith and patriotism motivate them to seek truth above all else, and whose love of country and each other push them toward ultimate sacrifices.
Eliza Campbell's sheltered life disintegrates when her beloved father dies and leaves behind the discovery of a well-kept secret; one that he desperately wishes Eliza to know and understand. Abruptly driven from her home by British forces, she and her sister Kitty escape from Boston with a virtual stranger, Thomas Watson. Thomas has secrets of his own and vows to protect the beautiful daughters of his beloved mentor by sheltering them in obscurity, within the walls of his own home. Also pursuing both Eliza and Thomas; for totally different reasons, is British officer Samuel Martin, who demands love from Eliza and vengeance from Thomas. Both realize the horrific consequences of being found; not only for themselves but for the cause they support.
The ensuing chapters of this book are filled with tender moments and glimpses of historical events; events that should challenge those of us who enjoy freedoms afforded by the valiant efforts of those who bravely secured them, to be very thankful. Perry's characters are well developed; the scenes in this book are neither under-written or over-written and the reader leaves its pages with a deepened understanding of the value of serving one's heavenly King above all else.
It was tempting to banner this novel with five stars and I would have, except that I think Amber Perry is only going to get better, and the rest of this story is just waiting to be told in its upcoming sequel.
It was a pleasure to receive this novel from the author and act as an early influencer.
Eliza Campbell's sheltered life disintegrates when her beloved father dies and leaves behind the discovery of a well-kept secret; one that he desperately wishes Eliza to know and understand. Abruptly driven from her home by British forces, she and her sister Kitty escape from Boston with a virtual stranger, Thomas Watson. Thomas has secrets of his own and vows to protect the beautiful daughters of his beloved mentor by sheltering them in obscurity, within the walls of his own home. Also pursuing both Eliza and Thomas; for totally different reasons, is British officer Samuel Martin, who demands love from Eliza and vengeance from Thomas. Both realize the horrific consequences of being found; not only for themselves but for the cause they support.
The ensuing chapters of this book are filled with tender moments and glimpses of historical events; events that should challenge those of us who enjoy freedoms afforded by the valiant efforts of those who bravely secured them, to be very thankful. Perry's characters are well developed; the scenes in this book are neither under-written or over-written and the reader leaves its pages with a deepened understanding of the value of serving one's heavenly King above all else.
It was tempting to banner this novel with five stars and I would have, except that I think Amber Perry is only going to get better, and the rest of this story is just waiting to be told in its upcoming sequel.
It was a pleasure to receive this novel from the author and act as an early influencer.
June 7, 2016
Beautiful Story
This is a beautiful love story that takes us back in American history. I love historical fiction and learning bits of history through fiction is definitely a plus for me. This book was riveting. I fell in love with the hero, Thomas. He was handsome, brave, and loyal to not only the cause, but to his love Eliza. Eliza was a beautiful young lady who being a bit naive because of a sheltered life began to seek the truth. I enjoyed seeing her learn from her mistakes. This book was a pleasure to read and I highly recommend it. I can't wait to read the next book in the series.
This is a beautiful love story that takes us back in American history. I love historical fiction and learning bits of history through fiction is definitely a plus for me. This book was riveting. I fell in love with the hero, Thomas. He was handsome, brave, and loyal to not only the cause, but to his love Eliza. Eliza was a beautiful young lady who being a bit naive because of a sheltered life began to seek the truth. I enjoyed seeing her learn from her mistakes. This book was a pleasure to read and I highly recommend it. I can't wait to read the next book in the series.
October 24, 2016
4.5 Stars!
So Fair a Lady is intriguing, delightful and keeps you on the edge of your seat! Perry brings to life this very important time in our nations history. You are hearkened to this tumultuous time, your heart beating rapidly at moments, as if you too are caught up in the movement and the danger. And while spinning this thread, she also weaves in moments of faith, romance and friendship. I was completely fascinated and eagerly sped through this novel today. In fact, I am quiet eager to begin Book 2 when I get the chance!
Completely wonderful, and a read I can most definitely recommend!
So Fair a Lady is intriguing, delightful and keeps you on the edge of your seat! Perry brings to life this very important time in our nations history. You are hearkened to this tumultuous time, your heart beating rapidly at moments, as if you too are caught up in the movement and the danger. And while spinning this thread, she also weaves in moments of faith, romance and friendship. I was completely fascinated and eagerly sped through this novel today. In fact, I am quiet eager to begin Book 2 when I get the chance!
Completely wonderful, and a read I can most definitely recommend!
February 3, 2017
My attention was captured from the first paragraph! Imagine learning upon his death that your respected Tory father is actually a patriot! It is hard to believe So Fair a Lady is Amber Lynn Perry's debut novel! This revolutionary era book is fast-paced with strong main characters! Set in the Boston to Barnstable, Massachusetts area, the book contains plenty of action. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys American historical fiction. I won So Fair A Lady in a giveaway by Loraine Nunely.
August 12, 2014
I found the plot okay... but the love story (and the grand finale) were just a little too over the top for me...
Also - (this was not the cause for my rating as it's not necessarily the author or book's fault...) the editing was terrible. I'm not a great speller/proofreader, but I was able to locate many errors in sentence structure, spelling, and layout... Disappointing.
Also - (this was not the cause for my rating as it's not necessarily the author or book's fault...) the editing was terrible. I'm not a great speller/proofreader, but I was able to locate many errors in sentence structure, spelling, and layout... Disappointing.
May 3, 2017
This was such a good book! I loved the bit of history, the suspense that kept building through the book because you just knew it was all going to hit the roof, the growing attraction between the main characters, . . . Just so good. The forward momentum was fantastic. I'm looking forward to the next book! Which I have. Yay!
Content: Mild violence, Christian fiction elements, kissing
Content: Mild violence, Christian fiction elements, kissing
September 14, 2018
Hero's of the Past
As more documents of the past emerge, authors are writing very good stories incorporating people and historical events. This is one of them. This is a sweet romance with danger, mystery, betrayal and some honest mistakes interwoven into the plot. This is a clean yet realistic story of the times.
As more documents of the past emerge, authors are writing very good stories incorporating people and historical events. This is one of them. This is a sweet romance with danger, mystery, betrayal and some honest mistakes interwoven into the plot. This is a clean yet realistic story of the times.
July 16, 2016
I haven't read much in this era and after becoming obsessed with Hamilton I thought it might be fun. The book was enjoyable but there were also some things about it I thought were weird and the American Revolution content was pretty light.
August 2, 2016
I love this period of American History. Perry did a great job telling the story of two everyday people finding love and truth in such chaotic and confusing times. I felt like I was in the thick of it of Boston and the colonies.
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