Thank you to John Jacobson, Blackstone Publishing, and NetGalley for the gifted eARC in exchange for an honest review
While it it evident that the author is capable of beautiful prose, I am sorry to say that I did not find this romantic comedy particularly romantic or comedic. The writing alternated between being lofty and being formulaic (First they did this, then they did this). It felt as if someone transcribed a teenager's diary into third person. Perhaps the writing was intended to be this way as an ode to the bard, this being a Shakespeare retelling, but it left me feeling absolutely nothing for these characters. There was no spark, no tension, and by the end, I didn't even care if they got together.
As for the comedy, everything about this story was absurd, but in a frustrating rather than funny way. Now, being a reimagining of A Midsummer Night's Dream, we should expect some absurdity, but it fairs better in the fairy woods with Puck and Oberon. The entire thing reads of immature teenagers, not grown adults nearing their thirties. There are characters that are utterly superfluous and a great deal of filler in my opinion. I also found a number of instances in which I strongly disliked the way the male characters treated or thought about the female characters. Perhaps these instances were intended to be satirical, but it didn't come across that way to me.
For great lovers of Shakespeare's comedies, especially A Midsummer Night's Dream, this book may be a wonderful modern interpretation of the beloved play, but it was not for me.