“it’s not the act but the intention that separates good from evil.”
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ok. well. good news is i liked this one a little better, but i still had problems with it.
writing
the writing is just straight up bad. the pacing is off, there’s a lot of info dumps, and it seems to me that the author just… doesn’t know what to do with the characters sometimes.
one example i have is in the beginning of the book, the fmc, faythe, is hanging out with another character. they’re walking through the gardens and in the inner dialogue (it’s in third person but idrk what else to call it) it’s just a full on info dump about the princess’ past that faythe is walking with. and like instead of being like “yeah the princess’ family was slaughtered and she’s here seeking refuge from the evil army”, it would have been nice if us, readers, were left in a bit of suspense as to why the princess was there, and then eventually it is revealed through a moment of bonding between faythe and the princess.
another thing that bothered me it feels like the author had no idea what to do with the romance between faythe and nik, one of the love interests from the first book. at the end of the first book, nik and faythe break it off, but it’s insinuated that nik is completely in love with her. now, in the second book, apparently nik wasn’t really in love with faythe at all and was actually in love with tauria, the princess i referred to earlier, the entire time. it just makes no sense, seems so messy, and it feels like the author just didn’t know what to do with faythe and nik, so she was just like yeah nik actually wasn’t that in love with her and was actually kinda using her to drown out all his numb feelings. which is just such lazy writing.
moving on, the book took forever to pick up as well. in the beginning of the book, it’s discussed that the kings from different kingdoms are coming to visit, but that doesn’t actually happen until 130 pages into the book. along with this, faythe was supposed to be looking for this ruin in the castle the entire time, but she doesn’t actually start doing it until like half way through the book where she stumbles upon some passage. that’s one, lazy writing, and two, it’s stuff like that that just made the pacing feel really off. idk how to describe it, but the pacing was just really weird and all over the place to me.
oh and finally, with the different character pov’s, they’re always talking about faythe in them rather than whatever they’re supposed to be focusing on. like when we get different character pov’s, we want to see what’s happening through their perspective, not hearing about the main character. on top of that, one of the characters kept talking about faythe while having sex with his girlfriend, so.
characters
characters were meh. faythe was still a little annoying, tauria is still my fav, and reylan, the new love interest that was introduced this book, is also my new fav. the problem i had with a lot of characters though is they seemed kinda… inconsistent. especially faythe.
in the first book, faythe is kinda a boring character. she’s stubborn and whiny and reckless. in this book though, she’s still stubborn and whiny and reckless, but suddenly there’s like a shift and for some reason she’s more sarcastic and snarky. it seems to me like the author was trying to make her more bad ass, but it just didn’t meet the mark because instead it just made her character seem inconsistent. and it could have been character development, but it happened so quickly and nothing really happened that could have sparked this character development.
it also happened with another character, marlowe, who is one of faythe’s friends. marlowe is depicted as very sweet and kind and selfless, but at one point in the book she suddenly just snaps and is mad at faythe for being selfish and stuff. which yeah she has a right to it, but it just came out of no where and wasn’t super consistent with her character. and yeah, again, it could be character development, but there were other moments earlier in the book where she had to opportunity to express herself and get angry like she did, but she didn’t, and the timing of it just felt really abrupt and weird.
plagiarism
soooo when this series was promoted as a series for people who really enjoyed throne of glass by sarah j maas and was inspired it, i didn’t realize it was practically fucking plagiarism. this series is so similar to throne of glass by sarah j maas, it actually blows my mind that the author didn’t at least try to change a little more than what was already different (which btw wasn’t that much). like come on. some half fae girl is born and destined to destroy these evil god like forces that infect her world (that’s why she’s so powerful). the evil king who she works for as a spy turns out to not actually be horrible but was actually just infected by the evil things that i mentioned before that he awakened, and the entire time he was just a pawn to the bad guys and was stuck and couldn’t be freed. along the way she gets help from a goddess, finds out she’s the descendant of another goddess, and that she’s the lost heir to some kingdom. and her love interest has greyish/white hair. sounds really familiar doesn’t it. oh yeah. that because it’s the plot of throne of glass series by sarah j maas. like be so serious right now. it is one thing to be inspired by someone else’s work, but this is just too similar for it to be considered “inspiration”. there are aspects that were definitely different from throne of glass, but a lot of the main plot points were super similar to throne of glass. i mean i knew what was going to happen because i had seen this plot before. if i’m able to guess what’s going to happen because i’ve seen the plot somewhere else, then it’s too similar and something needs to be changed.
things i liked
i liked the romance between faythe and reylan. it was cute and i’m excited to see their relationship develop more. i also really like the found family between all the characters. i love a good found family so this was a more positive aspect to the book for me. finally, i’d be lying if i said some parts didn’t leave me excited or shocked. so there’s that.
overall, the book was still meh to me. there’s more to it that i didn’t like, but i feel like if i keep going i’d just be nit picking. yeah. i’m gonna keep reading because i am intrigued to see what happens next, and also because once i start reading a series, i have to finish it.
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→ 2 stars ‧ ₊˚ ⋆