DNF; stopped at 38% due to herky-jerky style
Some parts of the story intrigued me, mostly the scenes with Malik. However, the scenes with Penrose annoyed me due to the stilted narration: too many mundane details, overstated emotions, jumps from one POV to another with poor transitions or no transitions, heavy-handed dramatics, and awkward plot developments. It’s like reading in a car on a bumpy road—one wonders if something was missed or skipped. It’s just not a pleasant reading experience due to having my critical editor brain triggered most of the time. The book needs serious developmental editing.