✰ 2.5 stars ✰
“Sometimes the right people come into your life at the wrong time. They teach you lessons, too, and you’ll thank God for the gift of them, even if they can’t stay forever.”
To be a Grinch or a Grouch? That is the question. 😔 I do like the title; I'm always a sucker for a play on words, and Inheriting Miss Fortune was a clever one and nicely done. And, maybe I'm still new to MM romances two years since my foray into it, so perhaps more experienced readers are familiar with the writing style of Lucy Lennox; much like I've pretty much mastered the formula of Lily Morton. 😅 The thing that set me off right from the get-go was the lack of challenge of having the readers discern the challenge of having it blatantly obvious that Devon McKay was the certified choice for raising his daughter. 🥺
I mean, that opening was almost farcical in the way those righteous homophobes of grandparents were presented that it just seemed so unnecessary a conflict to exist. 🙆🏻♀️ From their attitude, to their respective professions, to their objections to Devon, to the way they behaved upon their first meeting. I mean, the mouth on that Pastor! And the nonsensical actions of the mother - the attempts they made to derail Devon, I was like, woah. It was upsetting to the point of being ridiculously cartoonish! It leaves so little room for some actual development to occur that I cannot decide if it is intentionally minimal angst or low-stakes drama with just some slight absurdities to act as obstacles for Tully and Devon not to be together, when in fact, they were pretty much destined to be. 🙍🏻♀️
“He’d been part of her life—an important part —from the beginning, and he’d want to stay in her life as much as possible.
Now, I just had to convince him there was a way for him to stay in mine, too.”
Especially when said conflict about how Tully has to choose his profession over his burgeoning attraction and affection for Devon becomes a moot point towards the end, one where I did not even see Tully have that breakthrough moment of deciding it for himself. It just happened, followed by in steady succession, his acceptance of Devon's sustainable wealth after some subtle surprises, and then the dissolution of any said hindrances of any legalities threatening them from being separated. 😕
I'm also not a father, let alone a parent, but aside from one uncomfortable run to the grocery store, Devon was pretty much a natural of a loving, responsible father with Lellie, despite his own personal reservation. I liked that he did have certain qualms about it, and finally accepted he was the only one he wanted to raise her, but I think some troubles would have been nice, if not believable to see. 😮💨 But, my rational side argues or well, remembers that scene from Three Men and Little Baby? When Jack arrives home after Peter and Michael have labored in anguish taking care of Mary, and well, after one disastrous first diaper change, she embraces him wholeheartedly. I always chalked it up to the fact that he skipped the whole hassle of not knowing what works and what doesn't, but maybe there is a natural bond between father and child that cannot be denied. 👨🏻🍼
Well, anyway..
“It took two lonely years, years in which I tried to forget him and failed, before my prayer was answered.”
Devon and Tully's chemistry and attraction stemmed from one explosive hook-up that sadly ended on a note of no fruition - on Tully's hopeful and wishful part, anyway. I'm glad there was a short story that gave a glimpse into that fateful night for all; Tully's eagerness to pursue a relationship was tangible, as well as his heartbreak at Devon's pained reluctance of not relenting because of his own personal struggles. 😞 But, neither forgot just how special that moment was - holding out on their romantic liaisons in order to not taint that magical night that sparks fly, but failed to be rekindled. Until now.
I liked Tully Bowman a bit more than Devon; well, I did not like that he judged to conclusions and assumptions a little too easily, or that he was still so hopelessly smitten with Devon so much so, that even when he had to choose between his job or his heart, there was very little stopping him from proving where his loyalty lay. 'I’m a onetime hookup and the man who’s never forgotten the taste of your friend’s skin…' 😟 He was a man on a mission, but he believed in right or wrong, which earned points for me. He was kindhearted and optimistic, a doting and loving parent to Lellie and he genuinely cared about his conscience. He took his job as a lawyer seriously, just as much as he valued his friendship with Katie and wanted what's best for her daughter. 'Sexy as fuck, and he can sit a horse', I liked that he did not hesitate to share his knowledge about being a ranch hand - even if he wanted to leave that part of his past behind him. It's facts and talents that don't fade that made him even more attractive to Devon for being a part of Fletcher Farms. 😊
“I want you in every way. I’ll do better at trying to be open with you. I promise.”
Devon was a bit of an ambivalent character for me to grow affectionate towards. The whole hiding his billions was not so much of a problem, as much as him overcoming his rational fear of not being the right person to raise Lellie. I felt for him for wanting to have a family of his own, and for one to just land into his lap like that may be of a surprise, but it became a welcome one - one he slowly envisioned building a life and future with. 👨🏻❤️👨🏻 'Just talk to me. I want to know you— the real you, not the one in my head.' I'm glad there were some who showed him sense that he shouldn't shoulder the guilt for so long, just as much as Lellie's warmth and presence made it harder to let go of her. I felt a bit uncomfortable at the decision Katie made regarding something of his parents; even now I'm not sure if I approved of how it was handled, but again, what do I know? 🙄
Their reunion immediately set off warnings in my head that we were heading in the direction of misunderstandings of assumptions of each other before the sparks would really hit it off. 'I’d hoped he’d tell me he’d missed me desperately all along. I’d wanted him to want me.' 🥲 Fortunately, it did not wade in those waters for too long, as Devon and Tully were forced to be together. But through some intense connections, some, some honest heart-to-hearts, and once they accepted that the fierce attraction they felt then was still very much present now, it was impossible to deny how deeply they felt for each other. Although the confrontation of said desire was a bit too abrupt for me! 😅
But, they were happy with each other, so why should I rain on their parade. 🥰 Devon grew to love and respect and trust Tully with his secrets and did not hesitate to prove that Tully was it for him, even when Tully doubted if he returned his feelings just as much as he did. 'I already knew he was it for me. I wanted it all. Him. Lellie. Majestic.' There was one moment that I really liked, though after Devon met his own parents and Katie's, which well, ended on disastrous results. That tender scene between them - it felt real - the comfort was palpable and I basked in how much they needed each other then. ❤️🩹❤️🩹
While I cared about Majestic and about the success of this great place, right now, I didn’t want to hear about any of it.”
Took the words right out my mouth, Tully. I am so ready to kick it into high gear out of this town that - okay, no disrespect to it for being so idyllic and welcoming for everyone - warm, inviting, vibrant, and fun' but... Call me paranoid, but there seemed to be a lot of extraneous name dropping for new characters and faces that I did not know why they were garnering so much attention. Almost as if LL was setting the stage for the potential of making a series out of this town by introducing these new faces so that they can also find their destined soulmate. 🙍🏻♀️
Perhaps it is not deliberate, but it is noticeable; maybe it is a test trial to see how readers respond to them, especially with the way the billionaire brotherhood is making their presence known in this quaint and hospitable Wyoming town. Indigo was a handful at first, but he earned his keep, Taza was peculiar, and well, maybe Foster does need his happily ever after all... and then that slight mention of Brady... Oh well, maybe I'm just reading too much into it. 😐 Like I said, what do I know? Even the inclusion of the brotherhood felt forced and just a segue into the next couple. I get that realistically they can't always be around, much like Devon has acknowledged, but that connection felt missing. Their friendship lacked the same spark that made them so endearing before.
There was Katie - ah, I'll keep mum about her, because once again, I've written too much as it is.
And of course, there's Kenji, the Q to their shenanigans and keeper of secrets - I'm sticking out for the Billionaires Brotherhood series (we finally have a name! 🥳) - just for him, because I am most curious to see how your possible romance will be brought to life. 💟