*I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
There's a reason there are so many reality dating shows out there. People are easily captivated by them, because most people are suckers for that sweep you off your feet fairytale romance. And let's not forget the draw a competition adds. Throw in some drama too, and suddenly you have an entranced audience. I'm not faulting this book for this reason its more like I'm explaining its appeal. I couldn't help but to be a captivated member of this book's audience. When I read the blurb, I was hooked at the mere mention of the competition.
I can't deny that I have my own weaknesses when it comes to the idea of a fairytale romance, but I have also been searching for a book like The Selection. The Selection happened to be the first book I read like this, and I loved it. This concept is, as I mentioned, more of a reality TV kind of thing. So as a concept for a book, it is very intriguing to me. I couldn't shake the curiosity. I wanted to know what a modern, real world version would be like in book form.
If I said I didn't like this, I would be lying. It kept my interest. I didn't think about it when I put it down and I didn't crave the next second I'd have again to read it, but I did enjoy it. The novel had a lot of potential. There were technical errors that caused some confusion while I was reading: spelling mistakes, wrong words, and bad sentence structuring. Also at one point Zoe talks about Connor telling her his feelings when really it was supposed to be Kyle. It is in need of editing, but the story is strong and it definitely helps overshadow those things.
The reason this is a two star book for me is simply because of the fact I couldn't identify with or connect to the characters. Sure I wanted to know what happened, and I certainly rooted for the blooming romance, but in the end I didn't care. Dante had moments of arrogance that really hurt his character for me. I couldn't stand it when he told Zoe what to do (it was the way he would say it that really got to me) and the constant threat he threw at her was over used. But on the flip side Zoe's bull headedness and obliviousness was just as annoying, if not more so. I felt like I needed more character background and depth to become fully invested in these characters.
I enjoyed the spin on things. It was the same spin in The Selection. Zoe stays in the competition as merely a friend, but of course friendship is only one thing that develops between the two main characters: Zoe and Dante. Just to make it more fun, Kyle (the host) becomes a third party in this madness, and tries to woe Zoe. And the creator of the show, Connor (Dantes best friend), tries to force Dantes focus away from Zoe. It was definitely a drama filled novel.
The situation with the girls was downplayed. Actually for the most part it took a backseat to literally everything else. Jennifer, one of the girls, gets a chance at a POV from time to time to spice things up, but really the story with the girls wasn't explored as much as I would have liked.
For me, this was a book with great potential, but it felt unfinished. I think that it'd benefit from being expanded even. Just a thought.