the hidden princess at all-boys alpha academy: Chap 147-213

by Caroline Above Story

(Sequel of Accidental Surrogate For Alpha. Can be read alone. ) Ariel was looking forward to her arranged marriage as the perfect princess, only to discover that she was being seen merely as a surrogate. Determined to escape the impending wedding, Ariel found herself with nowhere to turn. Her brothers helped her disguise as a boy, and she entered the mysterious and formidable Alpha Academy. To her surprise, Ariel stumbled upon her mate within its walls, and not just one … but more? However, her outward identity remained that of a young man… Will her true identity be uncovered, and can Ariel survive the harsh trials of Alpha Academy?

Genres: Romance, Fantasy

394 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 22, 2024

Reviews

[Marley]

SPOILERS - ALMOST DNF
I just finished chapter 363, and I can’t begin to express how infuriating this book is. Apparently it’s unfinished, but I’m SOOOO done.
When it first started out, I was pretty enthralled with the story. But as the story goes on, the author sends you into a tailspin on WTF IS GOING ON. I have never felt like I was being gaslit by a fucking book before, but here we are. I feel so damn bad for Luca, one of our MMC’s, who halfway through the book, the author just starts picking on him. Like maybe the author just decided they didn’t like him anymore? He is treated so unfairly, I am basically cheering for his to break this stupid bond. The FMC, Ari, is a selfish, childish brat who has unimaginable limitless magic power, and manages to be top in her class, despite being the absolute worst espionage student of all time. I could go on and on about the strange dynamics between her and entire family and Luca. They all treat him like shit and even Ari is clearly favoring Jackson to the point where she’s treating Luca like shit and giving him only Jackson’s leftover scraps of attention. And everyone is surprised when Luca finally loses it? Like Ariel and Jackson can do no wrong and everyone should just be grateful to be in Ari’s orbit? Nah. She ain’t that great.

This story had so much potential, but the author is writing it into the dirt.

[Bon Fee]

Team Jackson through and through! Of anyone knows when I could read the rest! Please let me know 😭 and where!

[Kalyn]

Goes to Chpt 213 (aka 313), ends on a cliff hanger wish there was more chapters available.

Goodnovel shows up to 400 chapters but with those pay to read apps, they split chapters into small chunks to get more out. I'll just wait till Novel Drama or Ocean of PDF upload more.

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https://oceanofpdf.com/authors/caroli...

[Shannon]

Talk about a cliffhanger… I need more

[Ta]

I’m not really one for a 300 or 400 chapter book but I wanted to give this a trial because of the snippet that I saw online. I really wanted to DNF this book, but I stuck with it due to her brother cousin Jackson and Luca. Her brother and cousin were really nice and supportive and I really did like that. However, she made the wrong decision all the way around over and over again and she was the one causing a lot of confusion. She was supposed to be the super smart FL but she really wasn’t. She had too much pride and arrogant about what she thought. Her choices were confusing and not very good or bright at all. While they did have pros and cons, both of her mates, I hated how they made Luca do a whole 180 on his personality just so people could dislike him and focus on Jackson. It’s like each mate at the beginning, took a turn being in the background. I’m not really going to focus on the side characters because it becomes so convoluted and filled with a lot of them. And then all the side quest that were happening was confusing as well, lol. I really hate how she did Luca because he could’ve had real character development and I think he was turning into a sweet guy for her. And even Jackson was learning to open up to her and I could see how just like any other wolf story both mates complement her and bring different things to the table and learn how to work together. The author doesn’t seem to know how the traditional wolves inmates work, but I guess nowadays is a new genre of wolf stories and mates. It seems like the mate is not an end all B all. What’s the use of having a mate if you can pick and choose who you want and people are just breaking bonds left and right, lol. Other than that, her family was really nice and supportive, but I really wish her family would call her out on her behavior and check her because she wasn’t being fair and I don’t wanna hear anything about oh God it was a bad decision. Girl put your big girl panties on and face the music, LOL. SHE JUST CAUSED A LOT OF DRAMA FOR HERSELF BY BEING SELFISH. Another thing that I did like was her really cute and cuddly interactions with her mates individually. They were written so cute and I love that! I really think it is unfair how it seems the author chose Jackson to be her main mate and just really dropped the ball on Luca. They could’ve really given him great character development. It was unnecessarily cruel to try to make us hate him, knowing how they started out.. She really let him wrong and played with his emotions.

[Dawn Wilson]

Poor translation and incomplete series

I enjoyed the first two books in the series. Once or twice there was a misspelling or an out of place word in the second book, but I dismissed it as something that would be missed if the book wasn’t actually read, because they were things spellcheck wouldn’t catch. But the amount of misspellings, repetitive words/phrases, and missing or out of place words in book three was both elementary and disappointing. What started out as a few instances here and there turned into occurrences on every freaking page by the end. I found myself having to omit words/phrases so the sentence would read correctly. NOT an acceptable version or situation, and definitely NOT acceptable when it’s a book you pay for.

The story itself was good. I started to loose interest about 2/3 through. It became very repetitive with Ari being torn between her two mates, etc. But there really should’ve been some warning or heads up that even though Amazon lists 3 out of 3 books in the series, the story itself is left unfinished and incomplete; no cliffhanger or teaser. Just an incomplete thought/chapter. I understand series can have more than 3 books, but some heads up regarding that this one was currently incomplete would have been great before investing both time and money into it.

[Annie Anderson]

Really?? 1000+ pages and STILL NO SMUT??! Id be so pissed if I was still buying it by the chapter.

I'm a little confused, I thought this was going to be fun threesomes by now and it feels like it's dragging out just to have chapters to sell. The first two books were somehow riviting to me. I ate them up so fast. But after the fight it seems like the author is just dragging it out. At first I didn't mind but by the end of book 3 I felt like I was never going to get resolution... not worth buying the next book because I'm just going to get strung along some more. Which is weird for me to feel... I mean Tolstoy is my favorite author for God's sake. it's not about the page count, it's about the story feeling odd.

I really love the banter and the characters, which is why I keep buying the books but I think I'm going to take a little break. Read something else for a bit. I'm all for Slow burn but DANG that's slow.

[Sarah Spies]

Belongs on app like dreame Unfinished story

Don't waste your money. $25 for three sets of chapters claiming to be three separate books and the story is not even finished This is the type of book style you see on reading apps where you buy coins to read and I am disappointed they published this on KU.
That said, the story was ok. The first section was intriguing enough but I was bored by the 2nd section. A lot of empty plot just to fill pages, wolves who never shift and a main character is supposed to have magic which is only mentioned twice in all 3 "books". Why even bother? I read the 3rd thinking it might get more interesting.. It could have but author is dragging the story out way too much. I won't bother reading the rest if it ever gets published

[Carolyn Parker]

amazing series

I have fallen in love with this series. The plot and characters are well written.

There are a few typos and one very over used word, but at least the word isn’t a generic one.

[Alejandra Ggil]

The story is good...andyou want to keep going

The story and main character is good.. same drama but for some reason. I want to know what's happening.. plusshell be back to school.. !!

[Sammi]

Loved this last instalment. I need more as it ends on a cliffhanger

[Neil Stefani]

love it

I love all 3book/ chapter . Super cute I can’t wait to get the next books/ chapters in kindle .

[Alicia Manolas]

PARTIAL BOOK

Pity the rest of the book is missing 😕 Enjoyed what was here though. Awaiting chapters 214 onwards to be released on Kindle!

[Zachary Logan]

Great book!

This book kept me interested, and I'm eager to read more! Very well written. I'm excited for the next book!

[Vel]

I really enjoyed this series. the characters really wiggled their way in.

[Tina Mardis]

I love Lucas and her relationship but I hate seeing where they are taking his character.

[LATISSUE BUTLER]

good story

Love it couldn’t be happier with how this is going very fun read!! But it should definitely be one book paying 9$99 per book is insane