"In the story, the maiden had wings." Her mother's voice carried across the wind and the rain, and Ren felt it, like a thorn piercing her heart. "Where have my wings gone?"
The Floating World was one of the most anticipating reads of this year. I have been waiting for very long to read this book. I was all excited and giddy to meet the characters and explore the wonderful world, genuinely convinced that I will fall in love with everything.
If I said that I ended up being disappointed it would have been an understatement.
Look. I didn't know that this book is YA. I found the premise of it incredibly interesting, and c'mon, the artwork of the cover is stunning, so I didn't think twice before picking it up. I thought that I would have a great time, laughing and crying as the story progressed, but that's not what had happened. At first, I didn't catch anything wrong with it, feeling interested in both Sunho's and stories, anticipating their meeting and their journey to help their beloved ones. But it turned out, the moment I had been waiting for was the moment the story got ruined for me, and everything got worse and worse from there.
The Floating World is a typical YA book where the main characters have their own goals, at first, but then they meet each other, are instantly mesmerized with one another, the male character let's go of his goal for the sake of the female character's goal, bad guy tries to interfere, something goes wrong, the characters realize how much they mean to one another in the most helpless moment, but are suddenly separated and then boom, book one ends (jeez, I wonder what happens in the second one...).
Sunho is the typical 'don't come close to me, because I'm a monster' type of guy who is incredibly handsome and is an excellent swordsman. Ren is the typical beautiful, but troubled sunshine character who everybody either tries to protect or tries to kill (there is no in between). Both have extraordinary powers that they are hiding from the world, and, somehow, only two of them have those powers (because everybody else who ever had similar powers died). As I said, they are mesmerized with each other instantly (despite the fact that Ren wears a mask) and, despite having every reason to not trust one another, they are opening to each other basically on the first day. Sunho is a closed off character, mind you, while Ren is a character who's hunted for her powers - he NEVER had any close relationship with anybody (until he remembers that he had, but that's not the point I'm trying to make here) and she KNOWS that he was sent to capture her, but they both just throw away all their worries and are like 'hey, I know that you're a great person, let's help one another!'.
I hate when something like this happens, because 1) it's completely unnatural and 2) it's not earned in any way. It looked like none of them had any survival instincts, really (which is quite inhuman), because c'mon, how can anybody trust someone after knowing them for 2-3 days? Call me old fashioned if you want, but I like when such important things like trust, loyalty, friendship and love between the characters are built gradually through the story. It needs to be earned, otherwise it has no value and I'm not gonna be emotionally invested in such a relationship.
I'm incredibly upset, because in the beginning, I felt interested in these characters. Sunho had been battling with the fact that he didn't remember anything from two years prior. He had no idea what had happened with his only relative, his older brother named Junho, and it seemed like Sunho had been desperate to find him, which I liked a lot, because I love sibling relationships. And before Sunho met her, Ren and her family had been attacked and she left her safe place to find a poison cure for her beloved uncle. But then those goals stopped being as important as they should be for the sake of the so-called romance. Instead of racing against time to find the cure and the missing brother, we had all the time in the world for romantic scenes and side quests that brought nothing to the story (they were there to irritate me, I swear).
Also, I'm still trying to understand the author's choice to name Ren's adopted family members as Auntie, Big Uncle and Little Uncle. All three weren't much older than Ren so technically they all should be more like siblings to her than an aunt and uncles (Little Uncle is only a year older than Ren and they grew up together, c'mon). What is also very strange to me is the fact that it's not only Ren who's calling them Auntie, Big Uncle and Little Uncle, they also call each other this way. Don't they have real names or did they forget them somehow? It's not explained in any way and that bothered me a lot.
What also upset me was the fact that none of the characters had trauma, despite going through so much in their past. Sunho should have had PTSD, at least, but there is no scene that would show this. I understand that he had been struggling with a memory gap, but that's not an excuse, because he remembered enough of his past to experience trauma. He also killed people for the first time through his journey, but proceeded forward like nothing happened. If you introduce things like this in a story, it should be impactful on the character, but here it isn't. Ren's character depth isn't any better, really. All we saw from her was that she had the tendency to freeze in fear in the moments she certainly shouldn't do so, and that's it. No nightmares, nothing. How was I supposed to feel invested in their characters then? They felt more like puppets being carried by the story than actual people moving the story forward.
Now when it comes to Ren, it baffles me that she never tried to find her mother's body. Like, EVER. She had been saying that she died, but how could she be so sure if she never saw the body?! Also, she had chosen a safe life with her adopted family and didn't care about her mother and her heritage, while all the people she left behind had been struggling under the ruling of General Iljin. I was supposed to feel sorry for her and relate to her need to have a happy and safe life, but I couldn't bring myself to do so, because I knew what awful things her people (like Sunho and Junho) went through because of the absence of the rightful heir.
By the way, her journey was such a baffling thing. Why you might ask? You see:
~ she had NO IDEA where to go and if the cure even exists,
~ she had NO IDEA what the cure looks like and how it's made,
~ she KNEW she had the tendency to freeze in fear, but went on her journey alone regardless,
~ she didn't even try to collect blood from the defeated demons and experiment with it or you try to find some books about demons and demon poison,
~ the meeting with Sunho, the perfect protector material, was like a painfully convenient miracle for her,
~ there was no urgency to find the cure, no worries, no panic attacks of 'what if Little Uncle is already dead?', absolutely nothing.
The villain of this book, General Iljin, is the typical power hungry individual that you can meet basically everywhere else. He rules by a strict hand, picking fights with other countries wherever he wanted to just because he could do so. He hadn't just abused his power as a ruler, he was also abusive in his role as a father. He had been so obsessed with finding the rightful heir of the Floating World, that he completely ignored the issue that he should be really focusing on - the demons that came out of nowhere and started to attack people. He CONSCIOUSLY decided to chase after an innocent teenage girl (and having other teenage girls killed through that chase) who he believed had been a threat to his power, instead of trying to hunt demons and find out what was the deal with them. His son had been more mature than him in this matter. What a shame, really.
The son's character is the only interesting one that came out of this book. Jaeil is the only one who has the right priorities. The moment he found out about the case of multiple mysterious deaths, he jumped right into it, trying to find out what's the cause of them and illiminate the danger. He's also after Ren (who isn't in this book? *sigh*), but not for the same reasons other people are. He could be torn between his past and his duty, but it looked like his duty came first, which I liked a lot. He knew what obligations he had, and acted accordingly. And I liked his relationship with his right-hand woman (his lieutenant? I think?), Sana. They seemed distanced, at first, but you could tell how much they cared for one another. I wish they had been the main characters of the story, but oh well.
The demon case (except for Jaeil and Sana, I guess) is the only interesting thing that has been introduced in this story. I liked the mystery of it. They came literally out of nowhere and started attacking people, and nobody had any idea where they came from and what to do with it. This mystery was carried very well. Everything else, from the start to finish (especially the events that happened near the end) was painfully predictable.
I hope that I will forget that I ever read this book. It's too big of a disappointment to remember it 😔