"For the love of God, cut off my head." The last request in Uncle Silas's will shocks everyone speechless, everyone except his favorite niece, Anna. More than death itself, the claustrophobic Silas fears a premature burial. Will Anna's elders carry out Silas's request? Anna is certain they will not. It's up to her to do the right thing, even if it is a bit grisly. Armed with butcher knife and candle, Anna heads for the crypt underneath the church in the dead of night. All does not go according to Anna's careful planning.
Step inside a dark story in the tradition of the penny dreadful, at times humorous and horrifying, but don't close the door behind you. Someone might lock you in.
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The short story “Last Request: A Victorian Gothic” by Jeff Chapman seems to me like the beginning of a larger novel because there are details that could be clarified in a much larger book. The story is set in Victorian English. Seventeen-year-old Anna has lost her parents, her dear uncle Silas has died and his will is being read. Silas’s last wish is to have his head cut off before burial, but relatives are shocked about it. Anna is the only one who wants to fulfill his last wish because she knows that her uncle was afraid of returning from the dead. Since none of the relatives want to fulfill his last wish, she decides to take steps in this regard. But it’s a daunting task, even for a much older person than she is. Will she be able to do that terrible task? She will have to find out for herself.
It could be said that the story has small hints of horror, but in essence, this is a slightly darker story set in the Victorian era.
I would recommend the book to fans of the Victorian English era with a little hint of darkness.
Last Request: A Victorian Gothic by Jeff Chapman is a short and snappy read that I devoured in one sitting. It is a horror novella based upon the gloomy and gothic themes prevalent in Victorian literature, and as such, it is filled with the suspenseful and atmospheric sort-of terror that I was hoping to find. It is bleak in a way that all good Gothic horror should be, and the claustrophobic impression it left on me means it mostly hit the mark.
The first page was a little drab (like period-drama-drab), but this felt intentional to me, as if it were a set up for what comes next. When the last clause of Silas’s will was read out (revealing to the room that he wishes to be decapitated in his tomb for fear of being buried alive) I realised that this was a book I was going to enjoy. This twist took me by surprise and really made me laugh, serving as a complete contrast to how the novella started. From then on, I enjoyed the role that Anna played, and the conflict of the dilemma she faced in wanting to honour her uncle’s last request but also not wanting to bring down the wrath of the strict and emotionally-distant relatives whom she lived with in a large and rural manor house.
The set-up is good, and the middle is even better. I greatly enjoyed the character of the Sexton and his subtle insanity and associated mannerisms that came with him. The true horror of the story starts about halfway through, and it is quickly ramped up, putting Anna through her paces. This is the standout moment of the book: it is psychologically draining and enthralling to read, and the way Chapman delivers such a claustrophobic and damning sense of fear is truly a skill which he excels at. Books rarely make me talk out loud, but I muttered some curses at one terrifying moment (when that candle went out). Chapman moves from scene to scene with ease, upping the tension with every paragraph. This makes the horror of Anna’s situation even more terrifying and the read even more compelling. Furthermore, the writing flows nicely and the descriptions, word choices, and metaphors (especially around the human body) were an absolute delight to read.
The ending left me a little wanting. I was glad that it ended in the way that it did, but I did feel like the journey had been a little pointless. This part didn’t leave the lasting impression on me in the same way that the rest of the book did: the story just sort of fizzled out. Still, this is a wonderful short story that delivers upon its promise to captivate you in a bleak and atmospheric setting.
Jeff Chapman's writing is as atmospheric as always in this short story (novelette, technically, I guess). Diving immediately into the situation at hand, but without sacrificing character and setting, the story begins at the reading of a will with a very strange request by the deceased.
Of course this story is dark. Macabre. Makes the reader squirm a bit knowing that something disturbing is about to happen. And then throwing in a bit of a twist.
What really impresses me--as it does every time I read a story by this author--is Chapman's way of packing so much description into such a short story, and really immersing the reader.
I really enjoyed this eerie little tale. It had the perfect mix of dark humor, gothic vibes, and just the right amount of the macabre. The storyline pulled me in right away with Uncle Silas’s bizarre last request (“For the love of God, cut off my head.”), and from there, it only got stranger in the best way.
Anna is such a fun narrator, bold, determined, and just the right amount of unhinged. I listened to the audio version and the narrator, Caprisha Page, truly brought the story to life. Her performance added an extra layer of charm (and chill), making it feel like I was being read a ghost story by candlelight.
My only complaint? It was over way too fast. I would’ve happily stayed in that weird little world for another couple of hours. Still, it’s a wonderfully written, creepy short story that fans of gothic horror or penny dreadfuls will definitely appreciate. Just… maybe don’t listen to it right before bed.
Description: Silas had an extreme case of claustrophobia so naturally he was terrified of being buried alive. In his Will his Last Request was to be beheaded. Will his loving niece be up for the gruesome job? What horrors will she discover in his tomb?
In Short: A wonderful horror short novelette that will chill you to your bones and leave you on the edge of your seat until it's satisfying conclusion. Anyone who likes a good scary story should grab this book!
Pros: This book is incredibly well written. It is set in Victorian England and not only is the setting realistic but the language of the book is perfect for this period. It is very descriptive, Jeff Chapman has done a wonderful job surrounding you in this world so that you feel the full effect of this chilling story. It is a wonderful length. It is longer than your typical short story, so you see a lot of unique characters with detailed personalities and there are plenty of exciting plot twists to keep you guessing. I was completely glued from the start. It is just the right amount of scary and gore, nothing too overwhelming, but enough to make you feel the thrilling tension of the plot. The ending was awesome. I honestly had no idea how the story was going to turn out as I was reading it and my predictions for the end were totally wrong.
Cons: I have no issues with this book.
Parent's Guide: Some gore and horror relating to beheading and claustrophobia that may be disturbing to some readers. No swearing, no sexual content.
I received a free copy of this book in return for my honest review.
A short, heart-thumping, delicious Gothic tale ... Last Request was such an exciting read! I don't normally read in this genre, and I wasn't sure what to expect going into it, but it proved to be a very well-written and thrilling story. I'm always impressed when someone can develop characters and scenes effectively in the small amount of time a short story allows for, but that's just what Chapman does in Last Request.
It starts with immediate intrigue - the reading of a will in which the deceased has a very strange and disturbing (to say the least!) last request. From there, one thing after another happens, and the suspense heightens right to the very end. The author uses thoughts and incidents and various points-of-view to good effect to accomplish this intensity. The heroine herself is gutsy and realistic ... although much braver (or reckless?!) than I'd ever be!
Yes, it had a bit of the horrific in it, in case you're wondering! But I wasn't bothered by any of the details. Nothing TOO over-the-top for those of you who, like me, may be a bit weak-stomached when it comes to gore.
I can see Last Request being the perfect read for a gloomy fall evening by the fireside ... or even as a read-aloud for a Halloween gathering :)
ABR received this audiobook for free from the Author, Submitted in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect our opinion of the audiobook or the content of our review.
Anna is seventeen years old and absolutely stifled by her guardian Aunt Rachel. There are so many things proper ladies do not do. Anna repeatedly gets herself in trouble due to natural intelligence and curiosity. She has, fortunately, had her Uncle Silas, a co-conspirator in bending Aunt Rachel’s rules. Due to the time they spent together, Anna knew him better than anyone else in the family. When Silas died after an illness, Anna was not the least bit surprised that the last request of his will was to have his head cut off from his body. Silas had a horrible fear of claustrophobia due to a traumatic experience. He often told Anna if his head was cut off there would be no doubt he was dead and have nothing to fear.
Anna’s family wail and scream at the family lawyer until he calmly tells them the request is not legally binding but it is considered something the family should do. As Anna’s family rages around her, she realizes the reason for the request and also realizes her family will not honor it. What is a well-bred young woman to do? Let her favorite uncle down and follow the strict etiquette of the time? Or maybe handle the last request herself without letting the family know but risk a world of trouble if they find out?
Last Request is a short listen. Perfect for a shorter trip or sitting in a waiting room. The story is very well done. Short stories are difficult to write, more difficult than a novel. In a limited space, the author must tell his story, invest us in his characters, and ultimately fulfill our need for a good story with a satisfactory ending. Mr. Chapman does it so well I would like to read more stories involving Anna and the trouble she finds. The narration by Caprisha Page was excellent. She handled the different accents from Anna’s educated one to the sexton’s lower class words equally well. The male versus female characters was also well done. I highly recommend Last Request as an enjoyable yet thrilling story, perfect for Halloween moods.
So this story starts with an interesting macabre premise. An uncle of the protagonist, a teenage Victorian lady, has an unusual request after he dies. He wants his head cut off, for reasons related to a trauma in his youth. None of the family seem eager to carry out the request, so it falls to our young heroine to do the honorable thing! But of course, things do not go as planned, (btw I love the heroine's, and by proxy the author's) commitment to planning this task out.
The last 40 minutes are pure suspense. I couldn't put the story down at that point, and had to listen through to the end. The narrator does an excellent job of building upon the text and really bringing out its creepiness.
I think my only quibble is that this short story is too short. I know how that sounds, but I wanted a little more of the aftermath with Anne and her potential parallels to Uncle Silas. But for what this story is, it's delightfully creepy.
I received a free copy of this audiobook in exchange for a fair review.
I listened to the audiobook version and I really enjoyed the reader. I think she gave the book the perfect atmospheric touch. This story has a great, slightly old-fashioned feel. The main character's plight pulled me in immediately. She has a strong connection to her grandfather and was determined to honor his last request, but of course things begin to go terribly wrong. I remember hearing about an American who was locked up in the Tower of London, and when he came home he had this last request because of his experiences at the Tower, so that's kind of fun. While this story was super appealing, I kept wondering how the writer was going to pull off a satisfying ending. It was all heading along at such a furious, gripping pace and I couldn't wait to see a final twist. That's what kept me glued to the audiobook. But in the end the hero is . . . well I don't want to give it away but I wasn't really satisfied with how it was resolved. Anyway, a good atmospheric tale and I'll be interested to see what this writer does next. Hopefully more within this style.
Anna's Uncle Silas dies and his last request is revealed at the reading of his will: "Please cut off my head". While this seems a macabre and strange request, Anna knows that her Uncle's greatest fear is of being buried alive due to his severe claustrophobia.
However, his family members don't seem to take his request seriously. At least, nobody but Anna. She decides that she simply has to do the deed herself.
This was a quick, enjoyable read. A little bit gothic, a little bit macabre, pithy British humor and a few scares. Just what you would like to read/listen to for quick entertainment without graphic gore, sex or language.
The narrator does a great job and her reading added a lot to the book. Perfect upper crust British for the characters.
I was given a copy of the Audible version of this book by the author/publisher/narrator and chose to review it.
So, I actually received a free copy of the audiobook thru AudioBoom. The description of it had me curious. Being under 2 hours, I thought I'd give it a whirl. I was a little (ok, a lot) surprised at how much I enjoyed it. Jeff Chapman wrote a great short story. Believe it or not the whole "Please cut off my head", makes perfect sense and left me wondering if I should put that in my living will.
I only had one complaint, I love a happy ending as much as the next person. I think it was expected and little too predictable. I would have loved to see a little more dark humor being used and be even a little more "Poe-ish". Maybe the good guy doesn't always come out a-head. (sorry)
All in all a good, quick read. I look forward to reading/listening to more rom Jeff Chapman.
The story’s time and setting was well placed. I think all that was written could truly have happened at one time. The characters were believable, and the main character Anna was endearing. All she wants to do is fulfill the last wish of a beloved uncle despite the difficulties.
This is the first book I’ve read/listened to by this author and I would listen to another.
This is the first book I’ve listened to by this narrator (Caprisha Page) and I would listen to another. She brought out the essence of the time nicely.
There are no explicit sex scenes, excessive violence or swearing.
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and voluntarily left this unbiased review
Jeff Chapman is a brilliant writer! This short story is entertaining, easy to read and so well written that you can picture everything (and every character) in great detail. Anna has resolved to fulfill her Uncle Silas' last request by severing his head from his body, but she has to go down to the family crypt to do so. The ensuing action is a mixture of horror, humour, and drama with a little twist. The narration by Caprisha Page really adds to the story, as she reads with good expression and her voice is easy to listen to. I received an audiobook copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Engaging Gothic Tale! Anna’s attempt to honor her favorite Uncle Silas’s last wish shows she has exceptional spunk for a Victorian maiden and provides us with a wonderfully humorous tale. I received a free audiobook copy and found the English accents of the narrator delightful. It definitely added flavor to the drama and dark humor. I hope Mr Chapman writes more of Anna’s adventures and maybe even a story about the Sexton who speaks to ‘ghosties’. Enjoy!
Fun gothic short story for those who enjoy slightly creepy tales. An old man's desperate fear of being buried alive leads to an unusual last request in his will. A young lady takes it into her head to obey, at the risk of finding out what it's like to actually be buried alive.
Short story, well told. Not too ghoulish or ghostly, just fun.
This was a very enjoyable Audible book to listen to, with a Young lady who grew up with a Uncle she adored. The Uncle reels from Severe Claustrophobia via a accident that happened in his youth. The Story highlights how severe the Claustrophobia affected many of his decisions. Narrator did a lovely job on the characters in this Story.
The reading of the will. A last request. Chop off the deceased's head!?! Who will grant his wish? His young niece, Anna using a butcher knife. Creepy. Scary. Claustrophobic. Funny! I listened to Audible. The narrator's accent took a little getting use to, but it was perfect for this novel. Very entertaining. I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book from Story Origin.
Amusing and odd in equal measure. I’m not quite sure how to categorize this story. It’s about a young woman trying to carry out the very unusual last request of her deceased great-uncle. When she steels herself and finally gets to doing things take a strange twist. A quick read and as I said amusing and odd in equal measure. I received a copy of this book via StoryOrigin this is my honest opinion and review.
Jeff Chapman is a new author for me. For fans of gothic horror Last Request shouldn't be missed. The story is great and Caprisha Page does an excellent job narrating. I look forward to enjoying more of Jeff Chapman's work.
Very well written--smooth, seamless, excellent word choice. The descriptive language was vivid without being pretentious, the dialog felt authentic, and the characters were well drawn. Very realistic Victorian setting. I can't say anything about the plot for fear of spoilers. I'll just say I was a bit disappointed. Great choice for people who like period literature and good, solid prose
When I began reading this, I decided I was smart enough to figure out the why behind Uncle Silas' strange LAST REQUEST...to sever his head from his dead corpse. Being an avid reader of Vampire Lore, I concluded Uncle Silas must be a vampire, weary of his long, blood sucking life. Why else would he want his head removed?
Okay I KNOW what Jeff Chapman told us was the reason...claustrophobia...but still that just seemed...
Anna, his great niece spent a lot of time listening to Silas repeat the source story explaining his claustrophobia, but still...his LAST REQUEST seemed more than a tad bizarre with a capital B.
This is a short Gothic Tale...written so well you can feel poor Anna's goose bumps...or maybe you're feeling and seeing your own goosebumps from reading Jeff Chapman's rich selection of bone-chilling words.
You HEAR the sound of metal wailing, wood chipping, and stone steps clinking, shallowly beneath Anna's teen aged feet.
You FEEL the inebriated meanderings and delusions of the Church's Sexton as he talks to his ghosties...the only friends he truly has after forty years living in his small cell tending to the care and upkeep of all things attached to the Church.
LAST REQUEST by Jeff Chapman is so well written to give it less than FIVE STARS would be a travesty.
Well Done Mr. Chapman...This is Ladybug Lin and Kitty Kat saying we can see your name up in ghoulish lights somewhere in the not too distant future.
I don’t read historical fiction very often, but I’m so glad I read this one! The premise captured me from the first instant. Why on earth would someone want his head cut off? Little by little, the puzzle unravels, and it all starts to make sense.
There were so many things I loved about this story. The main character is as sweet as she is brave. Even though she must defy the customs of the time and endanger herself, she's so ethical and loyal that she doesn't back down from her duty. All the characters are vibrant, quirky-but-realistic people who made me feel right at home. I could have read an entire novel featuring these characters and enjoyed every minute. The most delightful thing was the attention paid to the time period. All the details -- the dress, morals, and mode of speech -- were perfect. Even the settings were perfect, from drawing rooms, to servants’ quarters, to an eerie cemetery. This is a soft-toned horror story, shaded in velvety hues, like the sepia prints of the Victorian Gothic time period. Everything blends perfectly to create a wonderful reading experience. I can’t wait to read more by this author!
Last Request is an innocent tale of horror that elicits smiles, suspense, and fear. In a few pages, Jeff Chapman spins a realistic story that could have played out at many times or places in Victorian history. It could have been your story, or mine.
The author draws us in when Anna wonders what sort of knife would cut through the bone and gristle of a human neck. So begins a journey where the question comes again and again throughout the reading: how far would I go to grant the last request of a loved one?
Chapman’s writing is vivid and delightfully descriptive, drawn between the humorous and the horrific. From “The solicitor spoke without emotion, his monotone dusted with boredom” to “A motley crowd of gravestones—angels, crosses, and rounded slabs— flanked her on either side from the lichgate to the church steps”, he paints pictures that invade the mind and drive the yarn.
Last Request is a quick read, but one you won’t soon forget, especially if you fear confined spaces. Claustrophobic readers beware! If you love being torn between revulsion, chuckles, and trepidation, this book is for you!
Jeff Chapman keeps getting better. I'm a fan of his past work (go on, look 'em up). His writing is very evocative, his plots compelling, the set pieces creepy in a fun, tingle down your spine way. Almost a throw-back to old-fashioned horror writing when it was fun and not wallowing in grue. At times, I thought Mr. Chapman seemed like a writer out-of-time, at odds with his contemporary plots and his gothic-styled prose.
In Last Request: A Victorian Gothic, throw away that last (minor) concern. Chapman has created the perfect symbiosis of style and content. A killer hook (not going to say what it is), gorgeous prose, a period piece and a horrific setting. Reminds me of Poe, Hawthorne, maybe even Faulkner. And not once does he rely on supernatural chills. If you're looking for a great psychological horror tale capable of giving you nightmares, have at it. Highly recommended.
When Anna's beloved uncle Silas passes on, he leaves a strange last request: he wants his head chopped off. Anna's relatives are shocked and appalled by such a thing, but she understands her uncle. She cannot let his last request go unanswered. With only a candle to light the way, Anna creeps into the church crypt in the middle of the night with a knife to help carry out the deed. What happens is more terrifying than the thought of what she must do to fulfill Silas' last request.
A marvelously written Victorian Gothic piece. Anna is a sympathetic character. Orphaned at a young age, she lives with her strict aunt. Silas had given her what little love and attention she had, and she only wants to do as he requested. Yet the deed looms over her and haunts her dreams. The story has great detail and atmosphere. A fantastic short read.
Chapman is a master story teller and adept in a variety of genres, but this Victorian Gothic nicely showcases his fluid prose and compelling narrative style and may represent his strong suit as a writer. Although Last Request hints at a Poe-like scenario (odd and creepy characters, mysterious crypt, an absurd request), this period tale offers an original take on our obsession with ‘life beyond.’ The denouement comes somewhat quickly, but the final reveal offered this reader at least a sense of grim satisfaction. The novella length serves this story well, and as novellas grow in popularity, Chapman’s popularity as a ghost/horror/fantasy writer will increase as well. A recommended read.
Jeff Chapman, I am in awe of you. Last Request: A Victorian Gothic was such a satisfying read. The descriptions were much appreciated. Chapman is prolific at building suspense through surroundings, and I was easily able to lose myself in the world he so masterfully crafted in this short story. I flew through the pages because I could not go without knowing what the conclusion would be.
Gothic, Victorian and Southern, are a soft spot for me. I feel like the author was able to capture the essence of the genre with this story. It worked so well for me as a fan. I cannot praise Jess Chapman enough. Without a doubt, I'll be seeking out more of his work.
**I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review. My thanks to Jeff Chapman.
I've been a fan of Edgar Allan Poe since childhood. Such a fan, in fact, that I considered naming my son "Usher" (though allusions to the R&B star, rather than the "House of," kept me from doing so). While reading this story, fond memories of reading Poe were evoked. Dark and spine-tingling, with a great twist, Last Request is an extremely well-crafted tale. While reading it, a vicious thunderstorm blew through my town, and the power went out. It was the perfect accompaniment to this excellent story.