I want to like this series so much because I can tell the author put a lot of time and effort into this story, but at times the characters seem to be lacking interest.
The background information is great it’s the characters development that has me bored, uninterested, and at times rolling my eyes. For instance, a vampire essentially has eternal life, so why hasn’t this vampire discovered anything about his new self and abilities? What is his mission, his purpose, his goal? The male character has appointed himself to the role of protector of a group of people, yet he knows nothing about his enemy, nor does he know how to protect the people he claims to be protecting, from said enemy.
I don’t like indecisive, non-assertive men, IMO it makes them appear weak and untrustworthy, so I have no invested interest in this character.
The love story is juvenile and uninteresting. The smallest disagreement has lead to decades of longing, loneliness, isolation, and heartache, which is crazy because I feel like the characters relationship is barely there. The relationship hasn’t progresses enough to warrant this type of drama.
I do want to know how this story ends, and the author can definitely write, I’m just hoping Avery Mans-up and gets some purpose in his life.