James Patterson is starting off 2025 with a sequel to his new mystery series based around three private investigators – named after Brenda “Sherlock” Holmes, Margaret “Miss Jane” Marple, and August “Edgar Allen” Poe – who form a firm together to solve crime in New York City. The have mysterious pasts and each is carrying seriously hid secrets that threaten to destroy them, either physically or emotionally.
That’s definitely an interesting pitch for a book series, especially for the mystery genre. Last year’s debut novel introducing the team – “Holmes, Marple, and Poe” was a popular bestselling hit for Patterson and Sitts.
Readers wanting more now have it with - “Holmes is Missing” – which brings the big three back for another case to solve. Or at least two of them since when we last left them, Holmes left to check himself into a private recovery center to deal with his long-term addiction to heroin.
This one starts off with Marple and Poe being called in by Detective Lieutenant Helene Grey of the New York Policed Department (and Poe’s girlfriend) to the scene of an unusual, but serious crime. When they arrive at St. Michaels hospital Maternity Ward to find that six newborn babies have gone missing.
Law enforcement leadership doesn’t want Marple or Poe involved in any manner, but the parents of the missing babies remember how the three investigators solved a big crime the prior summer, and immediately hire them to find their babies. Marple and Poe’s initial review of the crime scene tells them the newborns were taken by unknown professionals who knew that they were doing.
Marple and Poe realize they cannot find the kidnappers by themselves. They need the unique skills and help of their partner and friend, Holmes to solve this one. Their first move is to go find their friend and convince him to come back and help them take on their biggest case yet…
As I started reading this book, I remembered that my thoughts on the first one were rather mixed. There were some good things to say about it, but I also had some concerning constructive feedback. I felt like it worked best when it focused on the individual characters, their unique individual skillsets, interactions between themselves and with others throughout the book.
I feel the same way about the second novel. The primary mystery involving the taking of newborn babies and children from other locations became more of a secondary storyline to the individual sub-plots of the three main characters. More time and focus were spent on Holmes struggles with recovery and wanting to quit and Poe’s personal relationship developments with Helene Grey, and Maple’s spending most of her time dealing with and babysitting her two business partners and friends. Even though Holmes spent most of the book whining and wanting to quit, I found myself enjoying his own mystery plotline more than I did the baby stealing one, even though I could see who the killer was almost immediately. That secret was pretty much given away from the start. I also enjoyed the expanded use and development of Virginia’s character, which was a refreshing addition to the mix.
All of these other storylines and activities really took away from the main mystery, which in itself, didn’t provide as much suspense or drama as it should have. It felt there should have been more layers and complexity to it, but it felt superficial and without real urgency because of the subplots. For me, it started out with potential, slowed down and almost got lost, and then ended with more of a whimper than a bang. Also, I was not pleased with the authors turning Holmes, Margaret, and Poe into Marvel universe super-heroes at the end. For me, having someone who hasn’t flown a helicopter in over 15 years suddenly fly a million-dollar advanced law enforcement helicopter all over New York without getting caught was quite frankly, ridiculous. I get that we have to suspend some sense of reality with Patterson novels, but that was way too over the top for me.
Like the prior book, the characters also felt a bit messy and inconsistent. As much as I enjoyed their wit and banter (with the exception of Captain Duff’s one dimensional and cliche dislike for the three investigators), they never seemed to be fully fleshed out and consistent in their actions. I would explain further, but it would give crucial things away that should be left to the reading experience itself. Let’s just say, that their actions leaned one way for most of the book, and then suddenly took 180 degree turns that came across as baffling and confusing.
On the positive side, I found it interesting that each of the three main characters had their own private weaknesses and situations that they tried so hard to hide from each other and yet considered themselves all best friends. That is dysfunction functioning at a high professional level. On a personal note, I find myself being drawn to the character of NYPD detective, Helene Grey, the most. I think it’s because she comes across as knowing what she wants, being decisive and refusing to complain about what challenge’s life has thrown her and has her act together. I really connected with her and the tough decisions she made without any regret.
Overall, there was so much going on with personal lives of Holmes and Poe, that it overshadowed a primary mystery that was rather weak in its execution. Two books into this series and it feels like the writers are still trying to find their rhythm and flow. The ingredients are mostly there, but they’re disjointed and not mixed well yet.
Since the public reception has been good, and the way that this one ended with a big set-up for the next book, I am sure that we’ll see a third one coming out sometime next year. However. I am hopeful that the recipe gets worked on more, starting with cleaning up the plotting elements, creating more consistency with the characters, and creating stronger mysteries that really the power trio, as well as exciting the readers.
My review is 2.5 out of 5-stars (and yes, Goodreads rounds it up, but don’t be deceived).