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Rakes and Ruin
Ruined
The duke of Ashton sits at the Opera at Vauxhall Gardens, bored out of his mind, and plans murder.
He curses the day that brought the little governess, destitute and sad, at his door eight months ago, to upset his careless if a bit meaningless existence.
How could he have guessed the terrible, evil secrets she was hiding? And now that he knows all, the truth appears wilder, even more despicable than even he could have imagined. He hadn’t counted on losing his heart to her, of course, but he did.
What he doesn’t know is that a tendril of the shadows of madness and sin that followed Beatrice to his door is still out there, looking for something to devour.
The only one who can save him from the darkness is the girl herself, but he knows he’ll never see her again. He who once prided himself on his indifference to other human beings, feels his chest constrict with pain every time he even thinks of her.
Beatrice, smart, gentle, kind-hearted, lovely.
Ruined.
A perfect blend of darkness and light, this Regency retelling of Jane Eyre will break your heart as well as uplift it.
He curses the day that brought the little governess, destitute and sad, at his door eight months ago, to upset his careless if a bit meaningless existence.
How could he have guessed the terrible, evil secrets she was hiding? And now that he knows all, the truth appears wilder, even more despicable than even he could have imagined. He hadn’t counted on losing his heart to her, of course, but he did.
What he doesn’t know is that a tendril of the shadows of madness and sin that followed Beatrice to his door is still out there, looking for something to devour.
The only one who can save him from the darkness is the girl herself, but he knows he’ll never see her again. He who once prided himself on his indifference to other human beings, feels his chest constrict with pain every time he even thinks of her.
Beatrice, smart, gentle, kind-hearted, lovely.
Ruined.
A perfect blend of darkness and light, this Regency retelling of Jane Eyre will break your heart as well as uplift it.
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M.C. Frank
38 books550 followers Welcome to the world of M.C. FRANK's books, where characters aren't going to have an easy time of it: They will find themselves in icy-cold dystopian worlds where kissing is forbidden (among other things), or in green forests ruled by evil Sheriffs. If they're in Jane Austen's England, they have to be running away from a traumatic childhood, or if they are in our contemporary world, they're scared they'll die before they have finished high school. That sort of thing.
Don't worry, though, she knows we all need a little hope and joy in our lives, so there's a good dose of those as well in everything she writes.
M.C. Frank (writer, reader, designer, physicist and teacher, to name a few) has been living in a world of stories ever since she can remember (that's before she knew how to write). She started writing them down when she could no longer stand the characters in her head screaming at her to give them life, and while those first scribblings weren't exactly good (nor were they books, although she insisted on calling them that), they were enough for her to discover her passion in life.
She got her university degree in physics a few years ago (yes, she's like Sheldon, only a bit crazier!) and is now free to pursue her love of reading and writing, as well her free-lance job as editor-in-chief. She lives with her 'dude' in a home filled with candles, laptops and notebooks, where she rearranges her overflowing bookshelves every time she feels stressed.
Which is often, since (as you might have noticed) she doesn't pick the easiest subjects for her novels.
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Don't worry, though, she knows we all need a little hope and joy in our lives, so there's a good dose of those as well in everything she writes.
M.C. Frank (writer, reader, designer, physicist and teacher, to name a few) has been living in a world of stories ever since she can remember (that's before she knew how to write). She started writing them down when she could no longer stand the characters in her head screaming at her to give them life, and while those first scribblings weren't exactly good (nor were they books, although she insisted on calling them that), they were enough for her to discover her passion in life.
She got her university degree in physics a few years ago (yes, she's like Sheldon, only a bit crazier!) and is now free to pursue her love of reading and writing, as well her free-lance job as editor-in-chief. She lives with her 'dude' in a home filled with candles, laptops and notebooks, where she rearranges her overflowing bookshelves every time she feels stressed.
Which is often, since (as you might have noticed) she doesn't pick the easiest subjects for her novels.
Learn more about her and her New Adult, Young Adult, scifi, Greek mythology and historical novels at mcfrankauthor.com
Website: mcfrankauthor.com
Twitter: @mcfrank_author
Instagram: @mcfrank_author
Tumblr: @litlereddoll
Facebook Page: M.C. Frank
Goodreads: M.C. Frank
Youtube: M.C. Frank
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November 18, 2016
So, I'm a big fan of retellings, but I've only read about Cinderella and Ariel and other disney princesses.
I was beyond excited when I first heard about M.C. Frank having written a retelling of Jane Eyre.
Fast forward a few months and here I am reading it. I read it in two sittings and my God! Was it amazing! I can't even begin to explain how much I love Jane Eyre, but this book was not as much like the classic as I expected. The author kept all the good stuff in and made the book equal parts happy and sad. I immensely enjoyed myself, I cried, I laughed, I got scared shitless! I even had a dream about the book when I went to sleep for a few hours (which was a hard thing to do because who needs sleep? What I need is to finish this gorgeous book!). The language was pretty and easy to understand. It's honestly such an amazing book and everyone should read it! I'm so beyond happy that I got to!
Overall, it's a great retelling and a joyful ride, also, because of this book I've fallen in love with the name Dominic, whoopsies!
My favourite line from the book was: "Then, thinking better of it, he dropped his hand abruptly without having touched her, and took the stairs three at a time to his horses." Three at a time!
If you need me, I'll be outside, trying to take the stairs three at a time without injuring myself.
I was beyond excited when I first heard about M.C. Frank having written a retelling of Jane Eyre.
Fast forward a few months and here I am reading it. I read it in two sittings and my God! Was it amazing! I can't even begin to explain how much I love Jane Eyre, but this book was not as much like the classic as I expected. The author kept all the good stuff in and made the book equal parts happy and sad. I immensely enjoyed myself, I cried, I laughed, I got scared shitless! I even had a dream about the book when I went to sleep for a few hours (which was a hard thing to do because who needs sleep? What I need is to finish this gorgeous book!). The language was pretty and easy to understand. It's honestly such an amazing book and everyone should read it! I'm so beyond happy that I got to!
Overall, it's a great retelling and a joyful ride, also, because of this book I've fallen in love with the name Dominic, whoopsies!
My favourite line from the book was: "Then, thinking better of it, he dropped his hand abruptly without having touched her, and took the stairs three at a time to his horses." Three at a time!
If you need me, I'll be outside, trying to take the stairs three at a time without injuring myself.
March 14, 2017
What a romance! There were moments when I couldn't take my eyes off pages. I am pretty sure that once or twice even my breath quickened. Say what you want but I swoon when I think of Ashton ;-) I had a great time reading it. Passion, a little drama, pain from the past, love which shouldn't happen. Really, I can tell, M.C. Frank has a potential.
Ok, I admit the book has flaws. The Regency world isn't bad but it could be better. Beatrice fainted and cried a little too often . A complete list with deficiencies and errors could be long if one would insist. But, who cares?! I don't.
Once again, this story had so much tension and a few perfect scenes. And I can easily forgive imperfections of a young writer. I am repeating myself. ;-) Probably because I feel guilty how much I have enjoyed this book.
Give me more such kind of stories! If you can recommend me similar - do it, I'm looking forward.
Ok, I admit the book has flaws. The Regency world isn't bad but it could be better. Beatrice fainted and cried a little too often . A complete list with deficiencies and errors could be long if one would insist. But, who cares?! I don't.
Once again, this story had so much tension and a few perfect scenes. And I can easily forgive imperfections of a young writer. I am repeating myself. ;-) Probably because I feel guilty how much I have enjoyed this book.
Give me more such kind of stories! If you can recommend me similar - do it, I'm looking forward.
May 23, 2016
"It takes true courage, integrity and selflessness to turn yourself into a person that the world would be the wealthier for possessing."
Ruined is a perfect book for all the lovers of Regency or historical romance!
After his cousin's death, Dominic Halifax not only inherites the title of the duke of Ashton but is also obliged to take care of his young ward, Adelina. He's looking for a governess for her, however the spoiled girl scares off all candidates. Until Dominic decides to hire Beatrice Devon, who proves herself able to control careless Adelina. But Beatrice hides secrets of her past that will soon change all of their lives.
First, I would like to make a small disclaimer. I haven't had a chance to read Jane Eyre yet, so I won't be judging how good a retelling Ruined is, but I believe that I can treat it as an individual novel, separate from the inspiration source.
Once you start reading Ruined, you feel like you're immediately drawn into that era. The author managed to imitate the writing style perfectly, with all the flowery details and ornate vocabulary. It may take a short while to get used to it for readers, who like me are not native English speakers, but personally I was still quickly pulled into the story and got accustomed to the beautiful writing.
The whole cast of the characters is interesting, but I grew to like Beatrice, Dominic, Lord Burnes and Lady Augusta the most. Beatrice is a very strong, smart and a genuinely good person. She hides a dark secret from her past, which is shown through the flashbacks and which helps us understand her and her behaviour better. I admit that the theme that the author touches upon is very difficult and it was hard to read about it at times, but at the same time it made me appreciate Beatrice more. Dominic on the other hand is your almost typical dark and brooding man, but I loved it that no matter how much he tried to deny it, he couldn't help but change for the better and grow under Beatrice's influence, and she always brought out the best out of him. Their relationship, however rocky and shifting, was really enjoyable. And I don't want to post any spoilers, but I just have to say that
The plot was well paced and interesting and I liked it how the author managed to weave in light and humorous moments in between the darker ones. The story is written in dual perspective of our two main characters, which allows us to get into their minds and see the same events from different points of view. Apart from the romance, there were also bits of mystery that would kep the reader glued to the book. Even though there's a lot of dialogues and inner thoughts, I have to mention the descriptions and imagery. I absolutely loved the rich scenery of the story that made the Regency era come alive.
The only problem that I had with it was the last few chapters, the big confrontation between the villain and the main characters. Maybe it was just me, but once the action picked up I got a little lost between alternating timelines. There was a moment where the plot suddenly jumped in time without much explanation and I was rather confused up until the ending.
To sum up, if you're a fan of the Bronte sisters or Jane Austen, or maybe you like a good historical romance, Ruined is a book for you!
I have kindly received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
The review also appeared on my blog.
Ruined is a perfect book for all the lovers of Regency or historical romance!
After his cousin's death, Dominic Halifax not only inherites the title of the duke of Ashton but is also obliged to take care of his young ward, Adelina. He's looking for a governess for her, however the spoiled girl scares off all candidates. Until Dominic decides to hire Beatrice Devon, who proves herself able to control careless Adelina. But Beatrice hides secrets of her past that will soon change all of their lives.
First, I would like to make a small disclaimer. I haven't had a chance to read Jane Eyre yet, so I won't be judging how good a retelling Ruined is, but I believe that I can treat it as an individual novel, separate from the inspiration source.
Once you start reading Ruined, you feel like you're immediately drawn into that era. The author managed to imitate the writing style perfectly, with all the flowery details and ornate vocabulary. It may take a short while to get used to it for readers, who like me are not native English speakers, but personally I was still quickly pulled into the story and got accustomed to the beautiful writing.
The whole cast of the characters is interesting, but I grew to like Beatrice, Dominic, Lord Burnes and Lady Augusta the most. Beatrice is a very strong, smart and a genuinely good person. She hides a dark secret from her past, which is shown through the flashbacks and which helps us understand her and her behaviour better. I admit that the theme that the author touches upon is very difficult and it was hard to read about it at times, but at the same time it made me appreciate Beatrice more. Dominic on the other hand is your almost typical dark and brooding man, but I loved it that no matter how much he tried to deny it, he couldn't help but change for the better and grow under Beatrice's influence, and she always brought out the best out of him. Their relationship, however rocky and shifting, was really enjoyable. And I don't want to post any spoilers, but I just have to say that
The plot was well paced and interesting and I liked it how the author managed to weave in light and humorous moments in between the darker ones. The story is written in dual perspective of our two main characters, which allows us to get into their minds and see the same events from different points of view. Apart from the romance, there were also bits of mystery that would kep the reader glued to the book. Even though there's a lot of dialogues and inner thoughts, I have to mention the descriptions and imagery. I absolutely loved the rich scenery of the story that made the Regency era come alive.
The only problem that I had with it was the last few chapters, the big confrontation between the villain and the main characters. Maybe it was just me, but once the action picked up I got a little lost between alternating timelines. There was a moment where the plot suddenly jumped in time without much explanation and I was rather confused up until the ending.
To sum up, if you're a fan of the Bronte sisters or Jane Austen, or maybe you like a good historical romance, Ruined is a book for you!
I have kindly received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
The review also appeared on my blog.
March 11, 2016
A must-read for all the Jane Eyre fans!
"Ruined" tells a story of miss Beatrice Devon, who, despite of her young age, starts working as a governess of the Duke of Ashton's young ward. The Duke's bad reputation is widely known, but is it possible that sweet, kind Beatrice hides her own dark secret? And is it true that love can conquer all?
I love how the classic characters came to life in this story. They're really well-written, and thanks to the change of perspective, we can see inside both Beatrice and the Duke's minds, their feelings, motives.
As a christian, I really liked how Beatrice was portrayed. Despite of her hard experiences and being in constant danger, she didn't blame God for what humans did to her, but she was able to keep her faith and find peace in His eternal love.
The story is engrossing and from the first pages it keeps you wondering what happens next. (I went to sleep way too late because of this book. Twice :P) It also deals with some very serious issues, gradually revealing more details about Beatrice's past. It's painful to read at times, but it also makes you keep reading, to see how it all ends.
"Jane Eyre" is one of my all-time favourites, so I'm really happy I got a chance to read "Ruined". I recommend it to all the historical romance fans!
"Ruined" tells a story of miss Beatrice Devon, who, despite of her young age, starts working as a governess of the Duke of Ashton's young ward. The Duke's bad reputation is widely known, but is it possible that sweet, kind Beatrice hides her own dark secret? And is it true that love can conquer all?
I love how the classic characters came to life in this story. They're really well-written, and thanks to the change of perspective, we can see inside both Beatrice and the Duke's minds, their feelings, motives.
As a christian, I really liked how Beatrice was portrayed. Despite of her hard experiences and being in constant danger, she didn't blame God for what humans did to her, but she was able to keep her faith and find peace in His eternal love.
The story is engrossing and from the first pages it keeps you wondering what happens next. (I went to sleep way too late because of this book. Twice :P) It also deals with some very serious issues, gradually revealing more details about Beatrice's past. It's painful to read at times, but it also makes you keep reading, to see how it all ends.
"Jane Eyre" is one of my all-time favourites, so I'm really happy I got a chance to read "Ruined". I recommend it to all the historical romance fans!
February 4, 2018
Once again, I have dove into a genre I rarely read because of a book written by an author I admire, and once again I'm thoroughly impressed and glad I gave it a chance. Ruined is a perfect book for all the lovers of Regency era, or historical romance, or romance in general - not usually my cup of tea but thanks to M.C. Frank, I think they're growing on me.
After his cousin's death, Dominic Halifax suddenly inherits the title of the Duke of Ashton, and by a shocking move in the former's will, is now in charge of the man's daughter, Adelina. Headstrong and stubborn, she is impossible to control, and is ruining Dominic's bachelor lifestyle - he needs help. She has rejected every candidate he has found suitable to be her governess, until, that is, he finds Beatrice Devon. Only three years older than Adelina herself, Beatrice somehow manages to bring her under control.
But Beatrice caries a heavy secret: a history of mental and physical abuse. But as Dominic begins falling in love with her, more is revealed about her past - can she ever move forward?
I haven't read Jane Eyre in quite a long time so I might not be a good judge of how good of a retelling Ruined is, but the plot itself is very different from what I remember - this book is definitely not a linear retelling! The relationship between Dom and Beatrice seems to be the main similar element, and it's adorable how he uses the same imagery to describe her as what I remember from studying the book in high school - frequently calling her bewitching or accusing him of casting a spell on her, for example. Highly creative!
We alternate between the points of view of Dominic and Beatrice, telling the story with secrets kept hidden. The plot was neither slow nor fast, a nice gentle evolution of the relationship with a handful of mystery thrown in. The author also carefully mimics the writing style of the era, while not losing the style her readers love. It's easy to see M.C. Frank in the pages, even while she's using a regency era turn of phrase. This might put off some readers, but I found it easy to get into and very fitting for the novel.
Beatrice shows amazing growth through the novel: I love a strong female character who has her flaws. She's smart, persistent, and somehow hasn't lost a love for humanity through all she's been through. Now I must war some readers that the flashback scenes are troubling at times, and very unsettling, but how Beatrice deals with them is masterfully done. I did get a little tired of her crying/fainting, but it was a really minor qualm I had with the book.
Dominic's evolution is a fantastic one. I loved his broodiness at the beginning, his real stubbornness he can't see in himself. But Beatrice brings the best out of him, and he out of her. I enjoyed watching their relationship grow and wishing that they end up together. Underneath that bachelor-life-loving exterior beats the heart of a true and caring gentleman.
I found the ending a little confusing, somehow - a few jumps in time that weren't clear, moving forward and back but without any guidance. I'm not sure if this is just me, and it threw me off a little, but the action picked up and I was drawn right back in.
All in all, this isn't your everyday retelling of Jane Eyre: it's a beautiful homage to the book, with a story about abuse and growth, love and strength. The author creates a beautiful story with so much to love. If you like historical romance, then you'll strike gold with Ruined!
After his cousin's death, Dominic Halifax suddenly inherits the title of the Duke of Ashton, and by a shocking move in the former's will, is now in charge of the man's daughter, Adelina. Headstrong and stubborn, she is impossible to control, and is ruining Dominic's bachelor lifestyle - he needs help. She has rejected every candidate he has found suitable to be her governess, until, that is, he finds Beatrice Devon. Only three years older than Adelina herself, Beatrice somehow manages to bring her under control.
But Beatrice caries a heavy secret: a history of mental and physical abuse. But as Dominic begins falling in love with her, more is revealed about her past - can she ever move forward?
I haven't read Jane Eyre in quite a long time so I might not be a good judge of how good of a retelling Ruined is, but the plot itself is very different from what I remember - this book is definitely not a linear retelling! The relationship between Dom and Beatrice seems to be the main similar element, and it's adorable how he uses the same imagery to describe her as what I remember from studying the book in high school - frequently calling her bewitching or accusing him of casting a spell on her, for example. Highly creative!
We alternate between the points of view of Dominic and Beatrice, telling the story with secrets kept hidden. The plot was neither slow nor fast, a nice gentle evolution of the relationship with a handful of mystery thrown in. The author also carefully mimics the writing style of the era, while not losing the style her readers love. It's easy to see M.C. Frank in the pages, even while she's using a regency era turn of phrase. This might put off some readers, but I found it easy to get into and very fitting for the novel.
Beatrice shows amazing growth through the novel: I love a strong female character who has her flaws. She's smart, persistent, and somehow hasn't lost a love for humanity through all she's been through. Now I must war some readers that the flashback scenes are troubling at times, and very unsettling, but how Beatrice deals with them is masterfully done. I did get a little tired of her crying/fainting, but it was a really minor qualm I had with the book.
Dominic's evolution is a fantastic one. I loved his broodiness at the beginning, his real stubbornness he can't see in himself. But Beatrice brings the best out of him, and he out of her. I enjoyed watching their relationship grow and wishing that they end up together. Underneath that bachelor-life-loving exterior beats the heart of a true and caring gentleman.
I found the ending a little confusing, somehow - a few jumps in time that weren't clear, moving forward and back but without any guidance. I'm not sure if this is just me, and it threw me off a little, but the action picked up and I was drawn right back in.
All in all, this isn't your everyday retelling of Jane Eyre: it's a beautiful homage to the book, with a story about abuse and growth, love and strength. The author creates a beautiful story with so much to love. If you like historical romance, then you'll strike gold with Ruined!
January 15, 2018
I received a free ARC PDF copy of the book from the author in exchange for an honest review. Ruined is a tale set in the period of Regency and is a retelling of Jane Eyre. The story revolves around Beatrice Devon, a down on her luck young lady of nineteen who sets out to seek employment in London. Lady luck smiles down on her and she is employed by His Grace, Dominic Edward Halifax, the 9th Duke of Ashton to be the Governess of his ward, the spoilt Adelina Halifax. How Beatrice deals with the disciplining of the child and manages to form new relationships despite her past is what makes up the entirety of the book.
Although it was a re-telling of a classic, the book managed to hold its own. The language is believable, as are the scenes in the story which brings to notice the amount of research that the author must have done prior to writing the book.
I am a sucker for a strong female character and Miss Devon impressed me with her presence of mind and unfaltering belief in herself. While in the beginning it felt like she was a little too prone to fainting and crying fits, as the story progresses, it became clear that she is entitled to her occasional frailties. I especially loved the way the past and the present were interwoven without confusing the reader. Each scene was analysed from the point of view of everyone that was involved in it without being repetitive.
The strength and humor that Beatrice displays despite the horrors of her past are very inspiring. But I did not love the character of Dominic. He was far too detached in the beginning to have undergone such a transformation by the end of the book. I enjoyed the tantrums of Adelina and the way it was dealt with. It was refreshing to come across the childishness amidst the dark undercurrents that ran through the story.
Although it was a re-telling of a classic, the book managed to hold its own. The language is believable, as are the scenes in the story which brings to notice the amount of research that the author must have done prior to writing the book.
I am a sucker for a strong female character and Miss Devon impressed me with her presence of mind and unfaltering belief in herself. While in the beginning it felt like she was a little too prone to fainting and crying fits, as the story progresses, it became clear that she is entitled to her occasional frailties. I especially loved the way the past and the present were interwoven without confusing the reader. Each scene was analysed from the point of view of everyone that was involved in it without being repetitive.
The strength and humor that Beatrice displays despite the horrors of her past are very inspiring. But I did not love the character of Dominic. He was far too detached in the beginning to have undergone such a transformation by the end of the book. I enjoyed the tantrums of Adelina and the way it was dealt with. It was refreshing to come across the childishness amidst the dark undercurrents that ran through the story.
October 29, 2020
Gothic inspirational historical romance with a bad but swoon worthy Duke and a good but damaged and very, very, very emotional governess.
The story and unusual old-style writing captivated me at first - there’s a scene where the hero saves the heroine from drowning that was beautifully described - but i struggled after a while, it was somewhat difficult to comprehend at times, the jumping in time was a bit confusing, the characters were not so well developed and we don’t get to really see if the hero is a bad, bad man, it’s just something the author tells; to the reader he seems a fine man.
Dark subject (sexual child abuse) that was extremely nauseating to read about even if the author handled it well, she gave us glimpses). I didn’t catch that it was a Christian novel when I picked it up but it became more apparent as the story progressed and the Duke transformed to be a better man. And did I say the heroine was emotional? She faints, trembles and cries in every scene, and almost dies twice but she grows strong and saves the Duke, so they both save each other.
The story and unusual old-style writing captivated me at first - there’s a scene where the hero saves the heroine from drowning that was beautifully described - but i struggled after a while, it was somewhat difficult to comprehend at times, the jumping in time was a bit confusing, the characters were not so well developed and we don’t get to really see if the hero is a bad, bad man, it’s just something the author tells; to the reader he seems a fine man.
Dark subject (sexual child abuse) that was extremely nauseating to read about even if the author handled it well, she gave us glimpses). I didn’t catch that it was a Christian novel when I picked it up but it became more apparent as the story progressed and the Duke transformed to be a better man. And did I say the heroine was emotional? She faints, trembles and cries in every scene, and almost dies twice but she grows strong and saves the Duke, so they both save each other.
March 22, 2020
This book was beautifully written; every last gut wrenching, anxiety inducing, butterfly creating part of it. My only issue is that I need more now, so much more. I full heartedly recommend this book to both my Jane Eyre lovers and anyone who loved historical fiction romance. *Please note that there are triggers of of sexual abuse. It was handled in a sensitive way and was necessary for the story.
February 9, 2017
"A slip of a girl, ruined, but not broken, who brought light and love into the life of a dark and troubled duke".
- I have deliberately not included a synopsis as I want to include as few spoilers as possible, however, there may be some below, so fair warning! -
M.C. Frank has created a wonderful homage to the classic Jane Eyre, in her 'Regency retelling', Ruined.
It's clear she is an avid fan, as she has chosen some beautiful aspects of the original story to incorporate; my favourite being the many times Dominic refers to Beatrice as "bewitching". It is this subtle, but passionate flirtation that I loved in Jane Eyre, which has had me fall hard, for Ruined. The blossoming romance between the protagonists is paced very well, such that nothing is rushed, and the reader is consequently swept along with the love story.
From the first chapter, it is very clear that M.C. has a thorough and enviable knowledge of language, and in particular, the syntax used in classic British novels. It's rare to find an author who can pull off this genre of storytelling as naturally as M.C. has in Ruined.
Furthermore, I have to commend M.C. for her choice of narrative technique; the change of narrator affords the reader the opportunity to get to know Beatrice and Dominic even more so, and in turn, we can appreciate the different perspectives of storytelling, whilst keeping the novel well-paced and interesting.
M.C.'s decision to include descriptions of child abuse is somewhat of a risky one, however, she handles the subject appropriately; it adds elements to the story that bring about well-rounded characters and plot lines, without exploiting victims of abuse.
The only negatives I have with this novel are that some scenes, typically those involving an argument between Beatrice, Dominic or Adelina, were a little rushed at times. This meant whoever hurried off in anger or acted out violently because of it, came across unjustified. However, this may reflect the authors desire to quicken the pace, and make the disputes more believable.
Overall, Ruined is a wonderful homage to Jane Eyre, that adopts several classic details of the original story, and incorporates them in a new, beautiful plot. Dominic and Beatrice have a love that is passionate, and full of suspense. At it's heart, Ruined is a story of hope and redemption, set beautifully to a backdrop of 19th century England, that will sit fittingly on my shelves along with my other classics.
- My Book And I
In lieu of writing this review, the author has kindly sent me a copy of Ruined.
- I have deliberately not included a synopsis as I want to include as few spoilers as possible, however, there may be some below, so fair warning! -
M.C. Frank has created a wonderful homage to the classic Jane Eyre, in her 'Regency retelling', Ruined.
It's clear she is an avid fan, as she has chosen some beautiful aspects of the original story to incorporate; my favourite being the many times Dominic refers to Beatrice as "bewitching". It is this subtle, but passionate flirtation that I loved in Jane Eyre, which has had me fall hard, for Ruined. The blossoming romance between the protagonists is paced very well, such that nothing is rushed, and the reader is consequently swept along with the love story.
From the first chapter, it is very clear that M.C. has a thorough and enviable knowledge of language, and in particular, the syntax used in classic British novels. It's rare to find an author who can pull off this genre of storytelling as naturally as M.C. has in Ruined.
Furthermore, I have to commend M.C. for her choice of narrative technique; the change of narrator affords the reader the opportunity to get to know Beatrice and Dominic even more so, and in turn, we can appreciate the different perspectives of storytelling, whilst keeping the novel well-paced and interesting.
M.C.'s decision to include descriptions of child abuse is somewhat of a risky one, however, she handles the subject appropriately; it adds elements to the story that bring about well-rounded characters and plot lines, without exploiting victims of abuse.
The only negatives I have with this novel are that some scenes, typically those involving an argument between Beatrice, Dominic or Adelina, were a little rushed at times. This meant whoever hurried off in anger or acted out violently because of it, came across unjustified. However, this may reflect the authors desire to quicken the pace, and make the disputes more believable.
Overall, Ruined is a wonderful homage to Jane Eyre, that adopts several classic details of the original story, and incorporates them in a new, beautiful plot. Dominic and Beatrice have a love that is passionate, and full of suspense. At it's heart, Ruined is a story of hope and redemption, set beautifully to a backdrop of 19th century England, that will sit fittingly on my shelves along with my other classics.
- My Book And I
In lieu of writing this review, the author has kindly sent me a copy of Ruined.
October 25, 2016
I have stumbled across this book by pure accident. I haven’t read Jane Eyre, so I didn’t really know what to expect from it, but I had high hopes.
The book tells the story of Beatrice and Dominic, both of them complex characters, fighting with their demons. After his cousin’s death, Dominic inherits the title of Duke of Ashton, but it is also obliged to take care of Adelina. With Ashton looking for a governess for Adelina and Beatrice looking for a place to hide, she accepts the job and carries on, being the only one capable of putting up with the stubborn and spoiled Adelina. The story takes a dark twist as you read more into it, Beatrice holding dark and terrible secrets.
The book drew me from the very first pages, the author portraying perfectly the atmosphere of the era; the abundance of descriptions and meticulous details creating a perfect setting. I just adore the way she writes and describes all the aspects during the entire book. The emotions are raw and powerful, described in a certain way to make them feel extremely real. It tells the story of pain and lost innocence, of healing and finding love in the most unexpected places and people. The characters are strong, complex, alive and real, flawed and struggling with their own demons.
I simply loved the relationship between Beatrice and Dominic, as bumpy and as complicated as it was. Both of them have faults, not being portrayed as perfect characters willing to save the world, but rather themselves, embracing the fact that they’re both "ruined". They accept and fight for one another against all odds, reflecting a more realistic and complicated relationship. Beatrice is not the damsel in distress and Dominic is clearly not the price to come at rescue and they rather save themselves in the end, not beg others to do it or pity themselves.
I truly recommend this book to everybody. I am not a big fan of regency and historical fiction, but this book is really good.
The book tells the story of Beatrice and Dominic, both of them complex characters, fighting with their demons. After his cousin’s death, Dominic inherits the title of Duke of Ashton, but it is also obliged to take care of Adelina. With Ashton looking for a governess for Adelina and Beatrice looking for a place to hide, she accepts the job and carries on, being the only one capable of putting up with the stubborn and spoiled Adelina. The story takes a dark twist as you read more into it, Beatrice holding dark and terrible secrets.
The book drew me from the very first pages, the author portraying perfectly the atmosphere of the era; the abundance of descriptions and meticulous details creating a perfect setting. I just adore the way she writes and describes all the aspects during the entire book. The emotions are raw and powerful, described in a certain way to make them feel extremely real. It tells the story of pain and lost innocence, of healing and finding love in the most unexpected places and people. The characters are strong, complex, alive and real, flawed and struggling with their own demons.
I simply loved the relationship between Beatrice and Dominic, as bumpy and as complicated as it was. Both of them have faults, not being portrayed as perfect characters willing to save the world, but rather themselves, embracing the fact that they’re both "ruined". They accept and fight for one another against all odds, reflecting a more realistic and complicated relationship. Beatrice is not the damsel in distress and Dominic is clearly not the price to come at rescue and they rather save themselves in the end, not beg others to do it or pity themselves.
I truly recommend this book to everybody. I am not a big fan of regency and historical fiction, but this book is really good.
June 27, 2024
This just didn't work for me.
It's apparently supposed to have Gothic vibes, but I most definitely missed that somewhere.
I'm setting aside the abuse and trauma that Beatrice went through because I don't want any of that to influence my review of this book.
Beatrice was hard for me to like. He was constable fainting, or collapsing, and crying. And running. In almost every scene with the Duke she was running away from him.Dominic was supposed to come off as dark and brooding, but he just came off as an insufferable ass and I really did not like him whatsoever. It doesn't help that there's no real character development in this book, nor do you see any part of the characters other than what's occurring on the page at that moment. What does the Duke do when he's not taking a second out of his week to basically fight with Beatrice? No idea.
Their relationship was a joke. There was nothing to it. There was no banter. If we're pretending that them fighting at every interaction was banter, then fine. But other than him calling her a witch and saying that she's spelled him or whatever, I wouldn't have known he was into her as he spent more time ignoring her than not. On top of that, there are no sparks. None. There is no lingering flame. No, nothing. I couldn't stand these two together.
It's apparently supposed to have Gothic vibes, but I most definitely missed that somewhere.
I'm setting aside the abuse and trauma that Beatrice went through because I don't want any of that to influence my review of this book.
Beatrice was hard for me to like. He was constable fainting, or collapsing, and crying. And running. In almost every scene with the Duke she was running away from him.Dominic was supposed to come off as dark and brooding, but he just came off as an insufferable ass and I really did not like him whatsoever. It doesn't help that there's no real character development in this book, nor do you see any part of the characters other than what's occurring on the page at that moment. What does the Duke do when he's not taking a second out of his week to basically fight with Beatrice? No idea.
Their relationship was a joke. There was nothing to it. There was no banter. If we're pretending that them fighting at every interaction was banter, then fine. But other than him calling her a witch and saying that she's spelled him or whatever, I wouldn't have known he was into her as he spent more time ignoring her than not. On top of that, there are no sparks. None. There is no lingering flame. No, nothing. I couldn't stand these two together.
June 5, 2017
That last retelling of Jane Eyre I tried to read, was terrible. I could not find one redeeming quality about it, other than the cover was gorgeous.
This book however does not suffer from that same fate. There are some strong triggers in this book about sexual abuse. It's told through flashbacks, and not overly graphic. But worthy of a mention. This was my first M.C. Frank book, I came across her on Instagram and luckily she was searching for book bloggers to read and review her book.
It's beautiful and lyrical, and so creatively written. Very reminiscent of The Bronte sisters, and Jane Austen, that the author should be extremely proud if herself.
I loved Beatrice. She was strong, classy, sassy, and tenacious. She was a fighter, and I admired th at about her.
I want to get the physical copies of this series because the covers are so gorgeous, I feel they need to be owned and displayed. Read this guys, you won't be disappointed.
This book however does not suffer from that same fate. There are some strong triggers in this book about sexual abuse. It's told through flashbacks, and not overly graphic. But worthy of a mention. This was my first M.C. Frank book, I came across her on Instagram and luckily she was searching for book bloggers to read and review her book.
It's beautiful and lyrical, and so creatively written. Very reminiscent of The Bronte sisters, and Jane Austen, that the author should be extremely proud if herself.
I loved Beatrice. She was strong, classy, sassy, and tenacious. She was a fighter, and I admired th at about her.
I want to get the physical copies of this series because the covers are so gorgeous, I feel they need to be owned and displayed. Read this guys, you won't be disappointed.
September 3, 2017
A re-imagining of Jane Eyre, set in the Regency and with roles reversed (i.e. the Jane character has the secret past, not the Rochester). I found Beatrice's motivations difficult to follow - sometimes it was clear that her past and everything she had been told during it was breaking her down; other times it seems as though you were supposed to assume that her strength of character always let her rise above it. The jumps in time in the plot were also confusing to follow; I genuinely thought I had skipped ahead too far at one point and missed a scene or chapter that explained what was going on. The religious overtones of Jane Eyre were undertones here instead, but to make it so misses an essential component of Jane Eyre (both the book and the character). There were also some errors related to the Regency period. The book just needs a good edit. When Frank hits the beats of Jane Eyre well, it's great, but the whole needs to hold together better.
June 1, 2023
I enjoyed this story but I was a bit frustrated by what was included and excluded from the narrative. What I mean is, sometimes there are gaps where we're just told something has happened -- and I think seeing it in progress would have added to the story and made it feel less choppy -- but on the other hand there are some repetitions that (in my opinion) don't add much. I would have liked more detail on the hero's character development as the story progresses. We see him beginning to change, but I would have liked to see the process more, to make the ending more satisfying. There's also something very significant that happens in the heroine's life while they're apart in the last act, but we only hear about it in dialogue.
February 20, 2020
Likable, but wanted to slap the heroine silly!
I'm a huge fan of Charlotte Bronte and Jane Eyre. So, when this book came up on a list of alternative takes on the story of Jane Eyre I jumped on reading it. I have mixed feelings about this book. While the characters are compelling, the heroines continual lapse into tears and constant running away from the hero drove me to shrieking out loud. she kept crying and kept running and honestly it was driving me nuts. I get that she's sweet and demure and good, but good God does she lack in sense sometimes. A good light read if you can keep from getting bogged down by the annoying heroin in parts.
I'm a huge fan of Charlotte Bronte and Jane Eyre. So, when this book came up on a list of alternative takes on the story of Jane Eyre I jumped on reading it. I have mixed feelings about this book. While the characters are compelling, the heroines continual lapse into tears and constant running away from the hero drove me to shrieking out loud. she kept crying and kept running and honestly it was driving me nuts. I get that she's sweet and demure and good, but good God does she lack in sense sometimes. A good light read if you can keep from getting bogged down by the annoying heroin in parts.
January 18, 2018
First of all thanks to the author for the review copy
This book is a regency retelling of Jane Eyre. As I haven't finished Jane Eyre, I can only that the characters are similar. I enjoyed the banter between Dominic & Beatrice. The narrative which is interspersed with Beatrice's past adds a level of mystery to the story.
Recommended for romance readers
This book is a regency retelling of Jane Eyre. As I haven't finished Jane Eyre, I can only that the characters are similar. I enjoyed the banter between Dominic & Beatrice. The narrative which is interspersed with Beatrice's past adds a level of mystery to the story.
Recommended for romance readers
September 10, 2016
Loved it, loved it, loved it!
First M.C. Frank book I've read and it was a wonderful experience.
First M.C. Frank book I've read and it was a wonderful experience.
March 17, 2017
This book is exquisite! If you are a fan of Jane Eyre, Jane Austen or historical fiction in general, I highly recommend this book.
May 11, 2025
I was given a copy of this book to read and provide an honest review
The book was well written, and I liked the way she handled the story itself by interspersing the epistolary method as well as 3rd person. Every other chapter was a letter to Jo's sister Beth And I felt that that was a good unique way to handle the story. And she had done the whole book like that I possibly would have liked it better. What I didn't like was during all or most of the action -- especially at the beginning of the book -- there was too much introspective thinking. And after a while it made me want to slap the main character. I'm pretty sure that the first third of the book took place on the same night during the same few hours. the middle third of the book was entertaining and the last 3rd were most of the action happened it was really well written but I'm not sure that she actually captured the Jo and Laurie from the original book. However it has also been a long time since I read Little Women.
I did not hate the book. I think it is great for a summer beach read, or any type of light reading. the romance was well executed. It just didn't give me that Jo and Laurie vibe.
The book was well written, and I liked the way she handled the story itself by interspersing the epistolary method as well as 3rd person. Every other chapter was a letter to Jo's sister Beth And I felt that that was a good unique way to handle the story. And she had done the whole book like that I possibly would have liked it better. What I didn't like was during all or most of the action -- especially at the beginning of the book -- there was too much introspective thinking. And after a while it made me want to slap the main character. I'm pretty sure that the first third of the book took place on the same night during the same few hours. the middle third of the book was entertaining and the last 3rd were most of the action happened it was really well written but I'm not sure that she actually captured the Jo and Laurie from the original book. However it has also been a long time since I read Little Women.
I did not hate the book. I think it is great for a summer beach read, or any type of light reading. the romance was well executed. It just didn't give me that Jo and Laurie vibe.
May 27, 2024
Take a chance, you'll love it!
When I saw all of the reviews for Ruined: A Jane Eyre Enemies to Lovers Retelling, I thought to myself, "Absolutely no way am I going to destroy my love for the classic by reading a knock-off novel." Boy, was I wrong!
M. C. Frank not only has the period language down pat but is able to believably create the ambience of the era, the gossipy interplay of low-level court Society with it's catty meanness and enough of the original Jane Eyre environment to hook you into the story.
After that, it's all hand's on deck. Ruined kept me guessing from beginning to end as to the disposition of Beatrice's end. Duke Ashton was everything a reader would want in a Victorian rake ; languid, nonchalant and full of ennui yet brimming with untapped passion.
Nothing will ever surpass the original Jane Eyre in my heart. However, Ruined, is a close second and will definitely be a book I will revisit again. Congratulations to the author for an extremely well deserved hurrah. Don't pass up the opportunity to read this book.
When I saw all of the reviews for Ruined: A Jane Eyre Enemies to Lovers Retelling, I thought to myself, "Absolutely no way am I going to destroy my love for the classic by reading a knock-off novel." Boy, was I wrong!
M. C. Frank not only has the period language down pat but is able to believably create the ambience of the era, the gossipy interplay of low-level court Society with it's catty meanness and enough of the original Jane Eyre environment to hook you into the story.
After that, it's all hand's on deck. Ruined kept me guessing from beginning to end as to the disposition of Beatrice's end. Duke Ashton was everything a reader would want in a Victorian rake ; languid, nonchalant and full of ennui yet brimming with untapped passion.
Nothing will ever surpass the original Jane Eyre in my heart. However, Ruined, is a close second and will definitely be a book I will revisit again. Congratulations to the author for an extremely well deserved hurrah. Don't pass up the opportunity to read this book.
January 5, 2025
I love Jane Eyre & I'm planning to reread it soon. This caught my eye because I love a good retelling, and the premise was interesting. I couldn't put this down. Read it within 24 hours. The banter was excellent and it captured that exhaustingly heart wrenching forbidden love aura the original has.
I loved the idea of Beatrice being the one "married" but honestly by the end of it I wanted to throttle her. Girl, if you do not let this man just kill your rapist already, omg. He was molesting you as an 11 year old? Please allow Dominic to kill him, on page if possible, and brutally.
I will say as much as I liked Dominic, he def got on my nerves at times. Which is good really bc it's what is both endearing and annoying about Rochester. He's impulsive and haughty, but still likable and charming as a morally grey MMC.
I was also happy that it never got truly "spicy". I don't mind spice, but it's not always needed in every story. This is one of those stories I feel doesn't need to be explicit, most of the allure of the Jane/Rochester relationship is how close to the line they always get without going overboard. I'm def gonna read more by this author bc hell yeah, I loved this.
I loved the idea of Beatrice being the one "married" but honestly by the end of it I wanted to throttle her. Girl, if you do not let this man just kill your rapist already, omg. He was molesting you as an 11 year old? Please allow Dominic to kill him, on page if possible, and brutally.
I will say as much as I liked Dominic, he def got on my nerves at times. Which is good really bc it's what is both endearing and annoying about Rochester. He's impulsive and haughty, but still likable and charming as a morally grey MMC.
I was also happy that it never got truly "spicy". I don't mind spice, but it's not always needed in every story. This is one of those stories I feel doesn't need to be explicit, most of the allure of the Jane/Rochester relationship is how close to the line they always get without going overboard. I'm def gonna read more by this author bc hell yeah, I loved this.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 26, 2025
I had a hard time with this book. The author's narrative style (at least in this book) and the dialogue was just very stilted and sometimes hard to read. I almost quit after 5 chapters but kept going. It did get somewhat better about halfway through but ultimately I feel the book just didn't work for me.
The male main character is kind of a dick throughout nearly the entire book. Even when he starts to have feelings for her he expresses them by being a jerk. And then other times he's melodramatic. And always icky to me when a character starts having feelings for someone and then has sex with someone else.
And when he realizes his feelings for her -- AND knows that she is in danger -- what does he do? He goes away on a European tour for TWO MONTHS!!! This was the second time I almost stopped reading.
There is A LOT of focus on sexual abuse, which does not work for me in what's supposed to be a romance.
This also is supposed to be a Jane Eyre retelling but I don't really see it.
Sorry I wouldn't recommend this.
The male main character is kind of a dick throughout nearly the entire book. Even when he starts to have feelings for her he expresses them by being a jerk. And then other times he's melodramatic. And always icky to me when a character starts having feelings for someone and then has sex with someone else.
And when he realizes his feelings for her -- AND knows that she is in danger -- what does he do? He goes away on a European tour for TWO MONTHS!!! This was the second time I almost stopped reading.
There is A LOT of focus on sexual abuse, which does not work for me in what's supposed to be a romance.
This also is supposed to be a Jane Eyre retelling but I don't really see it.
Sorry I wouldn't recommend this.
November 9, 2025
This was a slower read than I anticipated but it was very good - Jane Eyre retelling with a darker twist. I enjoyed the story but definitely struggled through some of Beatrice’s flash backs. What she went through and the struggle of guilt and feeling like it was somehow her fault hit a bit too close to home for me but she gets her HEA which was nice to see. The British society and talk of the Ton was very Bridgerton vibes and at times the writing style felt weird like 3rd person narration that didn’t feel like 3rd person. Overall it was a good story and will probably read other books in this world of retellings the author has created.
May 1, 2024
I'm a huge fan of Charlotte Bronte and Jane Eyre. So, when this book came up on a list of alternative takes on the story of Jane Eyre I jumped on reading it. I have mixed feelings about this book. While the characters are compelling, the heroines continual lapse into tears and constant running away from the hero drove me to shrieking out loud. she kept crying.
April 26, 2023
Pretty good!
I enjoyed this Jane Eyre retelling, and read it in a day. At times I found myself frustrated with Beatrice and Dominic, just as I was frustrated with Jane and Rochester 😂
I am looking forward to reading M.C.'s other books!
I enjoyed this Jane Eyre retelling, and read it in a day. At times I found myself frustrated with Beatrice and Dominic, just as I was frustrated with Jane and Rochester 😂
I am looking forward to reading M.C.'s other books!
April 7, 2017
This review originally appeared on my book review blog: justonemorepaige.wordpress.com.
*I really want to give it 3.5 stars, but Goodreads doesn't allow that...it's too bad because sometimes you just really need that half star option.*
I've read Jane Eyre so many times, watched all the movie reproductions, and devour any retelling or spinoff that I find. Bearing that bias in mind, I really enjoyed this retelling. In fact, after picking it up yesterday for the first time, I had trouble putting it down and ended up finishing it in less that 24 hours.
There were many things about this version of the story that I just adored. First, the pacing was perfect. Though it read much faster than the original, the slow growth of feelings and affections, the inhibitions on both sides that were the cause of that followed perfectly with the backgrounds presented for each character here. I loved the parts of the story that paralleled Jane Eyre, the pieces that popped out here and there with deja vu and harkened back so well to the original - the governess role, the fancy love interest/lover for Dominic/Rochester, the culminating fire. I found myself smiling each time I noticed one. And, in fact, I loved the places where the stories diverged too. The changed circumstances of Beatrice's background, in some ways similar to Jane's and in many ways much darker, put a more modern day spin on the story. There are things she faced that Bronte likely would never have dared writing about so openly, but represent such horribly common childhood trauma, and I respect that addition by the author. Dominic's ghosts are also similar to Rochester's, but changed enough to create new intrigue. Plus, the changes to the secret marriage and its role in the plot were a creative twist. Lady Augusta was a phenomenal new character and I loved her relationship with Beatrice (who, along with Jane, frankly needed a confidant badly and I'm glad she got one this time around). And the dialogue between B and D was a well done homage to Jane and Rochester - she was still a meek but honest speaker and he was still a bit of a verbal bully with an emerging soft side in consideration of her reactions. At points I think it got a little caught up/overdone to the point of being slightly stilted, but overall I enjoyed the sparring and felt that it honored the original nicely.
There were, of course, a few things that sort of rubbed the wrong way. Honestly, I just wasn't a fan of the names: Beatrice and Dominic. For some reason, maybe the number of syllables?, I had a hard time adjusting to them and they didn't seem to flow correctly in the story. I also felt that there were maybe a few too many times that either Beatrice or Dominic asked the other to go and then pulled them back - it's a plot device that I think could have been used more sparingly. And the last thing was that each of the tender moments the characters had, until the end, were after a large tragedy. The number of close calls stretches the imagination some, as well as makes one question the depth of the connection, if something like that needs to happen for it to come out. I mean maybe the first time, to kickstart things, but after that it either needed to unfurl a bit more naturally or one/the other (or both) would have ended up giving up for good. Though I guess they did both try that...and their hearts overruled their minds. So who knows?
My overall thoughts: I definitely recommend this if you are looking for a timeless love story with odds overcome, the redemption we all crave, and that happy ending feeling, all packaged up in a nice, quick read. Though there are some small iffy spots, the overall feel, the pacing, the development of the love story, and the intrigue/secret revealing are all on point enough to create the right ambiance for the story. You won't want to put it down until you get to the perfect ending that you know is coming.
*I really want to give it 3.5 stars, but Goodreads doesn't allow that...it's too bad because sometimes you just really need that half star option.*
I've read Jane Eyre so many times, watched all the movie reproductions, and devour any retelling or spinoff that I find. Bearing that bias in mind, I really enjoyed this retelling. In fact, after picking it up yesterday for the first time, I had trouble putting it down and ended up finishing it in less that 24 hours.
There were many things about this version of the story that I just adored. First, the pacing was perfect. Though it read much faster than the original, the slow growth of feelings and affections, the inhibitions on both sides that were the cause of that followed perfectly with the backgrounds presented for each character here. I loved the parts of the story that paralleled Jane Eyre, the pieces that popped out here and there with deja vu and harkened back so well to the original - the governess role, the fancy love interest/lover for Dominic/Rochester, the culminating fire. I found myself smiling each time I noticed one. And, in fact, I loved the places where the stories diverged too. The changed circumstances of Beatrice's background, in some ways similar to Jane's and in many ways much darker, put a more modern day spin on the story. There are things she faced that Bronte likely would never have dared writing about so openly, but represent such horribly common childhood trauma, and I respect that addition by the author. Dominic's ghosts are also similar to Rochester's, but changed enough to create new intrigue. Plus, the changes to the secret marriage and its role in the plot were a creative twist. Lady Augusta was a phenomenal new character and I loved her relationship with Beatrice (who, along with Jane, frankly needed a confidant badly and I'm glad she got one this time around). And the dialogue between B and D was a well done homage to Jane and Rochester - she was still a meek but honest speaker and he was still a bit of a verbal bully with an emerging soft side in consideration of her reactions. At points I think it got a little caught up/overdone to the point of being slightly stilted, but overall I enjoyed the sparring and felt that it honored the original nicely.
There were, of course, a few things that sort of rubbed the wrong way. Honestly, I just wasn't a fan of the names: Beatrice and Dominic. For some reason, maybe the number of syllables?, I had a hard time adjusting to them and they didn't seem to flow correctly in the story. I also felt that there were maybe a few too many times that either Beatrice or Dominic asked the other to go and then pulled them back - it's a plot device that I think could have been used more sparingly. And the last thing was that each of the tender moments the characters had, until the end, were after a large tragedy. The number of close calls stretches the imagination some, as well as makes one question the depth of the connection, if something like that needs to happen for it to come out. I mean maybe the first time, to kickstart things, but after that it either needed to unfurl a bit more naturally or one/the other (or both) would have ended up giving up for good. Though I guess they did both try that...and their hearts overruled their minds. So who knows?
My overall thoughts: I definitely recommend this if you are looking for a timeless love story with odds overcome, the redemption we all crave, and that happy ending feeling, all packaged up in a nice, quick read. Though there are some small iffy spots, the overall feel, the pacing, the development of the love story, and the intrigue/secret revealing are all on point enough to create the right ambiance for the story. You won't want to put it down until you get to the perfect ending that you know is coming.
November 25, 2017
This book ruined me, in the best way.
Ruined is a regency retelling of Jane Eyre. Jane is now known as Beatrice and Rochester is now Lord Ashton (Dominic). Dominic is a scoundrel, a rascal, the talk of the ton, who has inherited his cousin's daughter. So, he places an add for a Governess to care for the spoiled, uncultured, teenage girl. Beatrice is in hiding from a terrible past and eagerly jumps at the position.
The two are headstrong, passionate, and prone to hiding from their feelings. From start to finish you can feel their desire for each other, the heat building, their restrained electricity.
There were many things about this novel that touched the heart. Gut-wrenching emotion and horrific back stories. This is no straight retelling, be surprised by cunning changes and new plot twists. Ashton may be a scoundrel, but it is Beatrice who holds the darkest secret. One that threatens to destroy them both.
At first, Ashton comes across as arrogant and cold hearted; however, as we begin to learn more about him, the reader can see that he has a caring, loving soul, which has been trapped in heartache, bitterness and loneliness. He is indifferent towards his charge, Adelina, but begins to soften as he sees his own neglect and tries to be a better man (mostly through knowing Beatrice).
Beatrice is fierce, determined, a broken soul trying to find a better life for herself. After all of her hardships, she is still selfless, loving, and kind. She is smart and will do anything to protect those she comes to care for, even at the expense of her own life.
Fantastically written, with rich descriptions that pull the reader into the past; as though we have become a character in the novel, watching the story unfold, in the ballrooms of the ton, at the Opera, or event at the country estate of Lord Burns. The prose are often imbued with poetry, filling the readers heart with the romance of that era. An example, and my favourite line: "Ashton's laughter, muffled though it was, rang all around them, following the night to the star-studded heavens."
I could not put this book down, which meant passing out with my ereader falling on my face, but it was worth the sudden jolt. The pace was quick, even when I wanted the romance to bloom faster, and at the end I was sad there was not more to read. However, the conclusion perfectly suited the story.
So, if you are a fan of classic love stories, a Bronte fan, a fan of Gothic romance, or just a romance fan in general, I suggest picking up this beautiful book. You will be engrossed until the very end, be intrigued by the fashion, the history, the magic of another time. You will feel the passion between Beatrice and Dominic, and feel a surge of hate and disgust towards one character. You will also come to love the wonderful secondary characters, who work to lighten the mood, fill the book with laughter, and create drama of their own. Fantastically done, M. C. Frank!
Ruined is a regency retelling of Jane Eyre. Jane is now known as Beatrice and Rochester is now Lord Ashton (Dominic). Dominic is a scoundrel, a rascal, the talk of the ton, who has inherited his cousin's daughter. So, he places an add for a Governess to care for the spoiled, uncultured, teenage girl. Beatrice is in hiding from a terrible past and eagerly jumps at the position.
The two are headstrong, passionate, and prone to hiding from their feelings. From start to finish you can feel their desire for each other, the heat building, their restrained electricity.
There were many things about this novel that touched the heart. Gut-wrenching emotion and horrific back stories. This is no straight retelling, be surprised by cunning changes and new plot twists. Ashton may be a scoundrel, but it is Beatrice who holds the darkest secret. One that threatens to destroy them both.
At first, Ashton comes across as arrogant and cold hearted; however, as we begin to learn more about him, the reader can see that he has a caring, loving soul, which has been trapped in heartache, bitterness and loneliness. He is indifferent towards his charge, Adelina, but begins to soften as he sees his own neglect and tries to be a better man (mostly through knowing Beatrice).
Beatrice is fierce, determined, a broken soul trying to find a better life for herself. After all of her hardships, she is still selfless, loving, and kind. She is smart and will do anything to protect those she comes to care for, even at the expense of her own life.
Fantastically written, with rich descriptions that pull the reader into the past; as though we have become a character in the novel, watching the story unfold, in the ballrooms of the ton, at the Opera, or event at the country estate of Lord Burns. The prose are often imbued with poetry, filling the readers heart with the romance of that era. An example, and my favourite line: "Ashton's laughter, muffled though it was, rang all around them, following the night to the star-studded heavens."
I could not put this book down, which meant passing out with my ereader falling on my face, but it was worth the sudden jolt. The pace was quick, even when I wanted the romance to bloom faster, and at the end I was sad there was not more to read. However, the conclusion perfectly suited the story.
So, if you are a fan of classic love stories, a Bronte fan, a fan of Gothic romance, or just a romance fan in general, I suggest picking up this beautiful book. You will be engrossed until the very end, be intrigued by the fashion, the history, the magic of another time. You will feel the passion between Beatrice and Dominic, and feel a surge of hate and disgust towards one character. You will also come to love the wonderful secondary characters, who work to lighten the mood, fill the book with laughter, and create drama of their own. Fantastically done, M. C. Frank!
July 14, 2016
Jane Eyre is probably my favorite classic, so when I saw this on Tumblr I picked up a Kindle copy, interested to see where it would go.
The writing starts off a little jumbled – Beatrice says she’s 19 and two pages later says she just had her 18th birthday, for example. But it improves very quickly as the story progresses and by the end I was so enthralled that I barely took notice of the style.
There’s an incredible amount of fainting. And it feels weird to have the love interest refer to her as “child” and “little” on almost every page. I would’ve liked to see more conversations between them – more growing together than instant attraction because the person is “different from everyone else I know”.
I know I’m making it sound like I didn’t enjoy this book, but just wait.
The supporting characters were excellent when they got any page time. Beatrice and Dominic are both focused extremely inward and on each other, but Lord Burns and Lady Augusta were downright charming and supportive in the best ways. Adelina was… more like a plot device.
M.C. Frank has a really good handle on this style of writing. I guess the style would be called regency? It was really well balanced - obviously inspired by Austen and Bronte, but modern enough that it was easy to understand without spending an extra minute reading long, convoluted sentences (like this one!).
(Spoilers and triggering things discussed next.)
The writing starts off a little jumbled – Beatrice says she’s 19 and two pages later says she just had her 18th birthday, for example. But it improves very quickly as the story progresses and by the end I was so enthralled that I barely took notice of the style.
There’s an incredible amount of fainting. And it feels weird to have the love interest refer to her as “child” and “little” on almost every page. I would’ve liked to see more conversations between them – more growing together than instant attraction because the person is “different from everyone else I know”.
I know I’m making it sound like I didn’t enjoy this book, but just wait.
The supporting characters were excellent when they got any page time. Beatrice and Dominic are both focused extremely inward and on each other, but Lord Burns and Lady Augusta were downright charming and supportive in the best ways. Adelina was… more like a plot device.
M.C. Frank has a really good handle on this style of writing. I guess the style would be called regency? It was really well balanced - obviously inspired by Austen and Bronte, but modern enough that it was easy to understand without spending an extra minute reading long, convoluted sentences (like this one!).
(Spoilers and triggering things discussed next.)
November 24, 2017
So let me tell this first. I haven't even read Jane Erye...yet. But what piqued my interest was this is a Historical Romance book.
I am fond of anything in the New Adult or Adult Fiction category (as long as it's under the Romance Genre ). I have read M.C. Franks YA series titled No Ordinary Star series. I fell in love with it and her style of writing which has the right amount of fluff. So I took the opportunity to apply to read and review this book.
So this book is a retelling of Jane Erye though I haven't read that but after reading this book I might just read it soon. The story is about a young girl named Beatrice who applied for a job as governess for the ward of Dominic, the Duke of Ashton.
Dominic as I see is the typical Rake or Bachelor, but he is discreet on his liaisons. And I can relate to him. He doesn't like the parties of the ton where you gossip about but he has to go out of duty since well he is a Duke.
Beatrice was hired by the Duke to be the governess of his spoiled brat of a ward. Well the girl is definitely a spoiled miss.
What I like about this book...
I haven't read a good historical romance book in months and I am very particular on the books I read in the genre of Romance but again M.C. Frank didn't disappoint!
This book ticked every box of what I am looking for in a historical romance. (But if the setting is in Scotland then that is different category ). I just love how the story was beautifully written. Like in the authors other works that I have read this has the right amount of fluff and tension between the characters.
I was expecting something beyond canoodling between the characters, like in some (or maybe all) of the historical reads I have encountered but nope! The author spectacularly written the book without the explicit bed scenes and other heated canoodling.
You can still feel the emotions of the characters as you read throughout the book.
Overall impression
5/5 stars!
Yep this book got me back to the historical genre hype again. This will be add to my list of Historical Romance books that are worthy to be reread over and over, I am like that. If I so love a book I will get back to reading it again.
Fans of historical romance should definitely give this book a try. It's just beautiful.
I am fond of anything in the New Adult or Adult Fiction category (as long as it's under the Romance Genre ). I have read M.C. Franks YA series titled No Ordinary Star series. I fell in love with it and her style of writing which has the right amount of fluff. So I took the opportunity to apply to read and review this book.
So this book is a retelling of Jane Erye though I haven't read that but after reading this book I might just read it soon. The story is about a young girl named Beatrice who applied for a job as governess for the ward of Dominic, the Duke of Ashton.
Dominic as I see is the typical Rake or Bachelor, but he is discreet on his liaisons. And I can relate to him. He doesn't like the parties of the ton where you gossip about but he has to go out of duty since well he is a Duke.
Beatrice was hired by the Duke to be the governess of his spoiled brat of a ward. Well the girl is definitely a spoiled miss.
What I like about this book...
I haven't read a good historical romance book in months and I am very particular on the books I read in the genre of Romance but again M.C. Frank didn't disappoint!
This book ticked every box of what I am looking for in a historical romance. (But if the setting is in Scotland then that is different category ). I just love how the story was beautifully written. Like in the authors other works that I have read this has the right amount of fluff and tension between the characters.
I was expecting something beyond canoodling between the characters, like in some (or maybe all) of the historical reads I have encountered but nope! The author spectacularly written the book without the explicit bed scenes and other heated canoodling.
You can still feel the emotions of the characters as you read throughout the book.
Overall impression
5/5 stars!
Yep this book got me back to the historical genre hype again. This will be add to my list of Historical Romance books that are worthy to be reread over and over, I am like that. If I so love a book I will get back to reading it again.
Fans of historical romance should definitely give this book a try. It's just beautiful.
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