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Moonlight Falls #1
The Seduction of James Gray
Mystery, temptation, and risking it all.
James Gray lives a life free of complications. Even in Moonlight Falls, a town known for supernatural activity, he stays away from the more sinister magical arts, preferring the simple work of a magical electrician.
Sebastian Storm is a man James hasn’t thought about in years until he hears Sebastian inherited the haunted house north of town. Most locals avoid the place. The eccentric Sebastian moves in and requests James’s help with electrical problems.
Storm House’s shade infestation is the first hitch in the job. The second? Sebastian. He’s doing his best to get James into bed. James doesn’t want any part of Sebastian’s games, no matter how attractive he is, but James begins to wonder if there’s more going on at the haunted property than Sebastian will admit.
Uncovering secrets will only bring trouble, but James can’t help himself. There’s something about Sebastian he can’t shake. What’s the worst that could happen if he lets himself be seduced by the mystery as well as the man?
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The Seduction of James Gray is a slow-burn MM paranormal romance featuring a grumpy man with a soft heart. It is the first book in the Moonlight Falls trilogy following James and Sebastian’s story and ends in an HFN. The overarching plot continues in book two, with a full HEA and resolution to the story at the end of book three.
James Gray lives a life free of complications. Even in Moonlight Falls, a town known for supernatural activity, he stays away from the more sinister magical arts, preferring the simple work of a magical electrician.
Sebastian Storm is a man James hasn’t thought about in years until he hears Sebastian inherited the haunted house north of town. Most locals avoid the place. The eccentric Sebastian moves in and requests James’s help with electrical problems.
Storm House’s shade infestation is the first hitch in the job. The second? Sebastian. He’s doing his best to get James into bed. James doesn’t want any part of Sebastian’s games, no matter how attractive he is, but James begins to wonder if there’s more going on at the haunted property than Sebastian will admit.
Uncovering secrets will only bring trouble, but James can’t help himself. There’s something about Sebastian he can’t shake. What’s the worst that could happen if he lets himself be seduced by the mystery as well as the man?
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The Seduction of James Gray is a slow-burn MM paranormal romance featuring a grumpy man with a soft heart. It is the first book in the Moonlight Falls trilogy following James and Sebastian’s story and ends in an HFN. The overarching plot continues in book two, with a full HEA and resolution to the story at the end of book three.
296 pages, Paperback
First published July 1, 2024
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Colette Rivera
18 books81 followersColette (she/they) is an author of queer paranormal romance novels living in New Zealand. Colette loves to write couples who take care of each other and show their soft sides in love, even when they’re prickly in other facets of their lives. Sugar, spice, and magic are key ingredients in all of Colette’s books.
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October 21, 2024
B+ / 4.5 stars
The Seduction of James Gray, the first book in new-to-me author Colette Rivera’s Moonlight Falls trilogy, is a captivating story of magic, mystery and romance that bristles with a genuine sense of creepiness and foreboding. The mystery is compelling, the romance is nicely done and the ending is satisfying, but while some questions are answered and there’s an HFN for the central couple, there’s an overarching plotline running throughout the series which means the story won’t reach a conclusion or an HEA until the final book.
James Gray, magical electrician and joint owner of Gray Electrical in Moonlight Falls, is surprised to receive a letter – of all things – from Sebastian Storm (whom he hasn’t seen since their high-school days), asking if he’ll come out to Storm Manor to repair an electrical fault. It’s odd – why didn’t he just phone or send an email? - but a job is a job, and James heads out there later that afternoon to see what needs doing.
He vaguely remembers Sebastian, although as James is a couple of years older, they didn’t run in the same circles. Come to think of it, as far as James recalls, Sebastian didn’t run in any circles; he didn’t start at the high school until he was in his teens after he came to live with his uncle, he didn’t have many friends (if any) and often got into trouble. James hasn’t seen Sebastian for over a decade, so he assumes he must have only recently returned to town and is setting the house in order; from what James remembers of the place, it certainly needs some TLC.
Storm Manor proves to be much farther outside town and far more isolated than James had thought, and he arrives to find the gate at the end of the driveway locked. It’s frustrating; Sebastian’s letter hadn’t included a phone number or email address, so James had no way of letting him know when he’d arrive, but still... He ends up climbing over the wall, walking up the drive, and then banging on the front door for ages – but there’s no answer. The negative energy that hangs around the place makes him anxious and eager to be gone, but when there’s still no response to his knocking he turns to leave – just as the door opens to reveal a shirtless Sebastian Storm, his riot of ginger curls falling into his eyes and a huge, dimpled smile on his face. He looks utterly delighted to find James on his doorstep – but the feeling is definitely not mutual. James is immediately struck by the feeling that Sebastian Storm is still trouble… in more than one sense of the word.
It doesn’t take James long to suss out that the power isn’t working at all and, after a more thorough inspection, that the whole house needs rewiring. Sebastian’s reactions are… strange, to say the least; he’s not very forthcoming with relevant information and is, frankly, behaving like a total dick. One minute, he’s flirting outrageously, the next he’s withdrawn or surly, the next he’s nonchalant and then he’s just… sad. James can’t make him out at all, but asks him to find the wiring diagrams for the house and says he’ll come back the next day to look them over and work out what needs to be done.
That evening, James goes to eat at the diner where his younger brother, Eli, works while he’s studying the unique magical properties of the town and the vein of magical power running through it as part of his master’s degree. During a conversation with Eli and his boyfriend, Parker, James learns that Sebastian has actually been living at the manor for years, and the reason nobody ever sees him is that he’s a recluse. James finds that hard to believe given Sebastian’s often flirtatious behaviour towards him, but Parker assures him it’s true; they’ve been delivering groceries out there for ages. In fact, the last time Eli had taken them, Sebastian had invited him in for a drink – which he surely wouldn’t have done if he doesn’t like being around people? And why, if Sebastian has been living at the house for years, hasn’t he hired someone to fix the electricity before now?
Subsequent visits to the house and experiencing its bad energy have James becoming increasingly convinced that something really isn’t right out there – but he can’t put his finger on what that might be. Sebastian is prickly when he’s not flirting; he talks in riddles half the time, and James can’t help wondering if he’s being pranked somehow. And there’s trouble in town, too; the number of shades – creatures from beyond that draw their power from shadows and darkness – appearing in Moonlight Falls has recently increased, and while they’ve never been dangerous, their usual mischievousness is shifting towards more aggressive behaviour, and it’s becoming a serious problem.
I’m not going to say more about the plot, save that it’s fascinating and well-paced, and once James figures out why Sebastian has been so evasive and the pieces fall into place, he determines to find a way to help him. Unfortunately however, in a fabulous twist I didn’t see coming, the solution James arrives at ends up creating more problems than it solves.
I really enjoyed the story and making discoveries at the same time as James does. Ms. Rivera does a great job of infusing the narrative with a truly unsettling atmosphere, and the slow-burn romance between James and Sebastian is sexy and sweet with plenty of chemistry. Although James does go from wanting as little to do with Sebastian as possible to feeling protective of him rather quickly, the romance is well-developed, and we see them becoming closer and forging a genuine emotional connection. The story is told entirely in James’ PoV, so we understand why he struggles with a deep-seated fear of losing people he cares about and why fights his attraction to Sebastian – and his character growth as he works through those fears is plain to see. And even though we don’t get Sebastian’s perspective in this book, it’s easy to see that he genuinely cares for James, doing small things for him that make his life easier, like making sure he eats, or has clean clothes to wear.
There are a few times when James’ internal musings are a bit repetitive, although his insecurities about Sebastian and whether they’re together purely out of convenience are understandable, and I confess I liked the snippy, enigmatic Sebastian of the first part a bit more than than the Sebastian of later in the book. It’s not a personality transplant, but after (no spoilers), his demeanour and mannerisms change somewhat. That said, this is book one of a trilogy and book two is told from Sebastian’s perspective, so I’m sure there’s more character insight to come.
The Seduction of James Grey is atmospheric, well-executed and very entertaining, and I’m happy to recommend it. By the time this review is posted, the final book will have been released, so readers can pick up this one safe in the knowledge that the story is complete. I’m certainly planning to read books two and three as soon as I can.
The Seduction of James Gray, the first book in new-to-me author Colette Rivera’s Moonlight Falls trilogy, is a captivating story of magic, mystery and romance that bristles with a genuine sense of creepiness and foreboding. The mystery is compelling, the romance is nicely done and the ending is satisfying, but while some questions are answered and there’s an HFN for the central couple, there’s an overarching plotline running throughout the series which means the story won’t reach a conclusion or an HEA until the final book.
James Gray, magical electrician and joint owner of Gray Electrical in Moonlight Falls, is surprised to receive a letter – of all things – from Sebastian Storm (whom he hasn’t seen since their high-school days), asking if he’ll come out to Storm Manor to repair an electrical fault. It’s odd – why didn’t he just phone or send an email? - but a job is a job, and James heads out there later that afternoon to see what needs doing.
He vaguely remembers Sebastian, although as James is a couple of years older, they didn’t run in the same circles. Come to think of it, as far as James recalls, Sebastian didn’t run in any circles; he didn’t start at the high school until he was in his teens after he came to live with his uncle, he didn’t have many friends (if any) and often got into trouble. James hasn’t seen Sebastian for over a decade, so he assumes he must have only recently returned to town and is setting the house in order; from what James remembers of the place, it certainly needs some TLC.
Storm Manor proves to be much farther outside town and far more isolated than James had thought, and he arrives to find the gate at the end of the driveway locked. It’s frustrating; Sebastian’s letter hadn’t included a phone number or email address, so James had no way of letting him know when he’d arrive, but still... He ends up climbing over the wall, walking up the drive, and then banging on the front door for ages – but there’s no answer. The negative energy that hangs around the place makes him anxious and eager to be gone, but when there’s still no response to his knocking he turns to leave – just as the door opens to reveal a shirtless Sebastian Storm, his riot of ginger curls falling into his eyes and a huge, dimpled smile on his face. He looks utterly delighted to find James on his doorstep – but the feeling is definitely not mutual. James is immediately struck by the feeling that Sebastian Storm is still trouble… in more than one sense of the word.
It doesn’t take James long to suss out that the power isn’t working at all and, after a more thorough inspection, that the whole house needs rewiring. Sebastian’s reactions are… strange, to say the least; he’s not very forthcoming with relevant information and is, frankly, behaving like a total dick. One minute, he’s flirting outrageously, the next he’s withdrawn or surly, the next he’s nonchalant and then he’s just… sad. James can’t make him out at all, but asks him to find the wiring diagrams for the house and says he’ll come back the next day to look them over and work out what needs to be done.
That evening, James goes to eat at the diner where his younger brother, Eli, works while he’s studying the unique magical properties of the town and the vein of magical power running through it as part of his master’s degree. During a conversation with Eli and his boyfriend, Parker, James learns that Sebastian has actually been living at the manor for years, and the reason nobody ever sees him is that he’s a recluse. James finds that hard to believe given Sebastian’s often flirtatious behaviour towards him, but Parker assures him it’s true; they’ve been delivering groceries out there for ages. In fact, the last time Eli had taken them, Sebastian had invited him in for a drink – which he surely wouldn’t have done if he doesn’t like being around people? And why, if Sebastian has been living at the house for years, hasn’t he hired someone to fix the electricity before now?
Subsequent visits to the house and experiencing its bad energy have James becoming increasingly convinced that something really isn’t right out there – but he can’t put his finger on what that might be. Sebastian is prickly when he’s not flirting; he talks in riddles half the time, and James can’t help wondering if he’s being pranked somehow. And there’s trouble in town, too; the number of shades – creatures from beyond that draw their power from shadows and darkness – appearing in Moonlight Falls has recently increased, and while they’ve never been dangerous, their usual mischievousness is shifting towards more aggressive behaviour, and it’s becoming a serious problem.
I’m not going to say more about the plot, save that it’s fascinating and well-paced, and once James figures out why Sebastian has been so evasive and the pieces fall into place, he determines to find a way to help him. Unfortunately however, in a fabulous twist I didn’t see coming, the solution James arrives at ends up creating more problems than it solves.
I really enjoyed the story and making discoveries at the same time as James does. Ms. Rivera does a great job of infusing the narrative with a truly unsettling atmosphere, and the slow-burn romance between James and Sebastian is sexy and sweet with plenty of chemistry. Although James does go from wanting as little to do with Sebastian as possible to feeling protective of him rather quickly, the romance is well-developed, and we see them becoming closer and forging a genuine emotional connection. The story is told entirely in James’ PoV, so we understand why he struggles with a deep-seated fear of losing people he cares about and why fights his attraction to Sebastian – and his character growth as he works through those fears is plain to see. And even though we don’t get Sebastian’s perspective in this book, it’s easy to see that he genuinely cares for James, doing small things for him that make his life easier, like making sure he eats, or has clean clothes to wear.
There are a few times when James’ internal musings are a bit repetitive, although his insecurities about Sebastian and whether they’re together purely out of convenience are understandable, and I confess I liked the snippy, enigmatic Sebastian of the first part a bit more than than the Sebastian of later in the book. It’s not a personality transplant, but after (no spoilers), his demeanour and mannerisms change somewhat. That said, this is book one of a trilogy and book two is told from Sebastian’s perspective, so I’m sure there’s more character insight to come.
The Seduction of James Grey is atmospheric, well-executed and very entertaining, and I’m happy to recommend it. By the time this review is posted, the final book will have been released, so readers can pick up this one safe in the knowledge that the story is complete. I’m certainly planning to read books two and three as soon as I can.
February 23, 2025
This one was good. It had a slow start but as the pace straightened out it also got better. I'm glad I'm reading it in the bundle because I already started book two, I didn't want to stop
February 21, 2025
I liked this, but I can't say it was all that special.
I liked how there wasn't much drama or extremely complex world-building, but I was also a bit bored at times?
I liked how there wasn't much drama or extremely complex world-building, but I was also a bit bored at times?
July 1, 2024
The combination of his annoyingly high cheekbones, enough freckles for James to get lost in, a pointy little nose, and lips that looked tender had James admitting Sebastian had grown out of his cuteness and into something more dangerous.
Trouble, this was going to be nothing but trouble.
❥ Single POV
❥ MM Romance
❥ HFN
❥ Paranormal
❥ Grumpy/Sunshine
❥ Forced Proximity
❥ Slow Burn
❥ Haunted House
❥ Small Town
❥ Bisexual MCs
I’ve been looking forward to the beginning of this trilogy since I read the prequel last month, The Fall of Elijah Gray. I had a lot of questions about what’s going on in Moonlight Falls. I still do.
So, a lot of weird things are happening in this book, starting off with James Gray receiving a letter from Sebastian Storm, asking for his skills as a magical electrician at Storm Manor, the place Sebastian has inherited after his uncle. The weird thing about this is the letter, because why not a phone call?
James shows up at Storm Manor and more questions appear. Sebastian has been back in town for 6 years, but has he lived without electricity for all this time? And why are the shades, ghost-like creatures from Beyond, acting more territorial and aggressive here? Actually, why are the shades in general acting more aggressive, also in town, and does it have something to do with the bad energy surrounding Storm Manor?
And why is Sebastian acting so shady? Playing games with James and speaking in almost riddles, unable to answer questions and doing devious things to make James stuck at Storm Manor. The questions are many, and we do get some answers along the way, and also a blossoming romance between James and Sebastian, despite James’ anxiety and insecurities about losing people in his life, not wanting to add more people to lose to that.
I really loved both James and Sebastian. I have a weakness for grumps, and James is a bit of a grumpy dude, but he’s also super caring, helpful and selfless. Sebastian comes off as a bit of a weirdo at first, but we find out why later in the book, and you’ll see why his efforts in trying to seduce James might pay off.
I’m super intrigued by all the mysteries, and I can’t wait to read the next book where we’ll hopefully get some more answers, because I have so many questions!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
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June 26, 2024
"He had to know if Sebastian would choose him when all this was behind them."
I totally loved this series opener! The storyline kept me guessing right along with James about the mystery of what was really going on. It was fun putting all the clues together and wondering if I was thinking in the right direction. Sebastian did not make things easy for James, but there was a very good reason why. I'll be honest, at first, I thought Sebastian may just be a jerk. But as the story progressed, I realized something definitely wasn't quite right with the way he could flip from fun and flirty to the complete opposite seemingly at random. It was no wonder James kept getting confused by the mixed signals.
Relationship wise, this one was a semi-slow burn. I didn't mind because, like I mentioned, I was pretty invested in figuring out what was going on. Why was Sebastian was so reluctant to leave his home and why had he hired James to investigate the reason for his electrical issues? This makes me laugh thinking back because electrical issues are likely the LEAST of Sebastian's pressing problems. That is not to say I wasn't thrilled when their relationship finally ventured into the steamy sort.
"You look so hot on your knees, Sebastian. So pretty. Oh fuck, I'm going to be thinking about this forever."
I felt for James when it came to him being worried that Sebastian was only with him because he thought James was his only option. It's not like visitors and friends were lining up to visit the believed to be haunted Storm House Sebastian resided in. On the other hand, I was pretty positive their connection was genuine on both their parts, even though the story is told exclusively from James POV. It was in Sebastians actions, like how he always made sure to cook for them so James had something to eat. Or how he made sure James had clothes he would feel comfortable in. These two could be very domestic and sweet.
The ending of this book would be more of a HFN than an HEA. This was expected to me as it is only the first book in a planned trilogy. A major hurdle has been jumped, but I'm afraid the mystery isn't over yet. From reading the foreboding blurb of The Cursed Sebastian Storm, it seems there are many more to come before these two can have their happily ever after.
I totally loved this series opener! The storyline kept me guessing right along with James about the mystery of what was really going on. It was fun putting all the clues together and wondering if I was thinking in the right direction. Sebastian did not make things easy for James, but there was a very good reason why. I'll be honest, at first, I thought Sebastian may just be a jerk. But as the story progressed, I realized something definitely wasn't quite right with the way he could flip from fun and flirty to the complete opposite seemingly at random. It was no wonder James kept getting confused by the mixed signals.
Relationship wise, this one was a semi-slow burn. I didn't mind because, like I mentioned, I was pretty invested in figuring out what was going on. Why was Sebastian was so reluctant to leave his home and why had he hired James to investigate the reason for his electrical issues? This makes me laugh thinking back because electrical issues are likely the LEAST of Sebastian's pressing problems. That is not to say I wasn't thrilled when their relationship finally ventured into the steamy sort.
"You look so hot on your knees, Sebastian. So pretty. Oh fuck, I'm going to be thinking about this forever."
I felt for James when it came to him being worried that Sebastian was only with him because he thought James was his only option. It's not like visitors and friends were lining up to visit the believed to be haunted Storm House Sebastian resided in. On the other hand, I was pretty positive their connection was genuine on both their parts, even though the story is told exclusively from James POV. It was in Sebastians actions, like how he always made sure to cook for them so James had something to eat. Or how he made sure James had clothes he would feel comfortable in. These two could be very domestic and sweet.
The ending of this book would be more of a HFN than an HEA. This was expected to me as it is only the first book in a planned trilogy. A major hurdle has been jumped, but I'm afraid the mystery isn't over yet. From reading the foreboding blurb of The Cursed Sebastian Storm, it seems there are many more to come before these two can have their happily ever after.
September 5, 2024
This was my first read by Colette Rivera and I really enjoyed The Seduction of James Gray.
Moonlight Falls is not the kind of place I would like to live, the shades alone would have me well and truly freaked out, especially once they start behaving aggressively and out of character like they have started to do.
James Gray is a magical electrician who cares about his town, his brother, and his two friends. He has no desire to let anyone else get close because he is afraid he will lose them and doesn't want to deal with more grief. He was so grumpy when he first attended Sebastian's spooky house after receiving a letter asking him to come and do work. Whereas Sebastian's behaviour was pretty odd off and on and he really frustrated James.
James was attracted to Sebastian when they were younger despite never really knowing him and now he is finding himself frustratingly attracted to him again, as well as starting to really care about this odd man. When they get stuck on the property together, the attraction is mutually instant and things move pretty quickly as they both try to work out what is going on and how they can fix it.
James' plight was pretty sad and he has ended up in a situation he had no control over due to his family. I really felt for him as his story was uncovered.
There are plenty of weird things occurring both in town and on Sebastian's property and a few twists and turns along the way to the HFN ending. I am looking forward to reading the second book in this trilogy.
Moonlight Falls is not the kind of place I would like to live, the shades alone would have me well and truly freaked out, especially once they start behaving aggressively and out of character like they have started to do.
James Gray is a magical electrician who cares about his town, his brother, and his two friends. He has no desire to let anyone else get close because he is afraid he will lose them and doesn't want to deal with more grief. He was so grumpy when he first attended Sebastian's spooky house after receiving a letter asking him to come and do work. Whereas Sebastian's behaviour was pretty odd off and on and he really frustrated James.
James was attracted to Sebastian when they were younger despite never really knowing him and now he is finding himself frustratingly attracted to him again, as well as starting to really care about this odd man. When they get stuck on the property together, the attraction is mutually instant and things move pretty quickly as they both try to work out what is going on and how they can fix it.
James' plight was pretty sad and he has ended up in a situation he had no control over due to his family. I really felt for him as his story was uncovered.
There are plenty of weird things occurring both in town and on Sebastian's property and a few twists and turns along the way to the HFN ending. I am looking forward to reading the second book in this trilogy.
July 4, 2024
Thank you for the review copy Colette Rivera
Another five star from one of my favourite authors. I loved how spooky this one was. With her last series, Love & Magic, was all about cute characters and witches and spells but nothing too haunting, Moonlight Falls series takes a complete turn. The first half has enough suspense to keep you hooked and slowly when things start unraveling in the second half it gets the perfect amount of thrill.
And the love story...there is still so much waiting to happen between them and I can't wait to read the second book soon but it was already so cute and domesticated. I loved James and Sebastian together.
While we get to know a lot about James, Sebastian is still a bit of a mystery so hopefully the next book will have more focus on him.
Read this if you like:
👻 MM paranormal romances
👻Bi4Bi
👻Small town
👻 Forced proximity
👻Slow Burn
👻 Haunted house
Another five star from one of my favourite authors. I loved how spooky this one was. With her last series, Love & Magic, was all about cute characters and witches and spells but nothing too haunting, Moonlight Falls series takes a complete turn. The first half has enough suspense to keep you hooked and slowly when things start unraveling in the second half it gets the perfect amount of thrill.
And the love story...there is still so much waiting to happen between them and I can't wait to read the second book soon but it was already so cute and domesticated. I loved James and Sebastian together.
While we get to know a lot about James, Sebastian is still a bit of a mystery so hopefully the next book will have more focus on him.
Read this if you like:
👻 MM paranormal romances
👻Bi4Bi
👻Small town
👻 Forced proximity
👻Slow Burn
👻 Haunted house
June 21, 2024
This might just have been my favourite Colette Rivera book so far, even though it's less cosy than her previous books. It took me a little while to get into this because I wasn't sure why Sebastian was acting so strangely. But then the mystery of Sebastian and his house quickly became so intriguing, and I became incredibly invested in solving Sebastian's problems, because I felt for him so much. I loved James and Sebastian together and I'm very glad they're getting more books together, which I'm super excited to read!
June 29, 2024
First part of a trilogy. I especially want to compliment the end which doesn't involve a painful cliffhanger but a very satisfying HFN. The magical world building and specifically Sebastian's situation were really quite unusual and didn't need great detail to be easy to understand. There's plenty to think about and to look forward to.
September 12, 2024
This was a great start to a new series. Sebastian has been trapped in his house and unable to tell anyone about it. When James comes to try to fix the electricity in Sebastian's house, the two come closer. This had a really interesting premise. There is magic in this world, and it kept me really engaged throughout. I'm very interested in seeing how this trilogy plays itself out.
July 9, 2024
This book was something else. From the beginning it was interesting. I struggled to figure it out so each page was a surprise. I enjoyed the characters very much and the storyline. Reading it was an experience. I voluntarily reviewed an arc of this book.
May 21, 2025
2.5 rounded down
Better than the prequel novella, but only barely. The concept here was interesting, but I just didn't find the writing to be very polished, and neither of the characters particularly appealed. I don't think I'll bother continuing with this series.
Better than the prequel novella, but only barely. The concept here was interesting, but I just didn't find the writing to be very polished, and neither of the characters particularly appealed. I don't think I'll bother continuing with this series.
July 8, 2024
MYSTERY, SOME MAGIC, PESKY CURSES, & WHOLE LOT OF HEART-WARMING DOMESTICITY
I liked the main couple of the prequel more, but I enjoyed this better only because the story was more rounded and it gives a better sense of closure—even if it is still technically a cliffhanger, at least the book's main conflict (the curse) was resolved (or so we're made to think; for now). As it is, I'd read anything MM(+) but throw in a hearty gothic-themed mystery into it, and I'm definitely sold. This was delightfully well-executed, with lots of character development (especially on James' part), and while it's a slow-burn, the pacing was not too drawn out nor too rushed. There were times when James' mullings got redundant, but it's all part of his struggles—not to mention, a relatable trauma response—and I liked that those were handled with utmost care. While my interest did lag at the beginning (for reasons I'll enumerate in detail below), as soon as the plot started to thicken with Sebastian's puzzling behaviour, the oddities of Storm Manor itself coming to light (er, or "to dark"?)(and yes, I don't insist on being rude—if Sebastian says it's a manor, I will respect that, doing otherwise would be like ignoring someone's pronouns just to spite them), and James finally catching on, I was hooked. Honestly, I was so close to giving this a perfect 5 stars because I was so into this it had me in a trance; there were so many times when I genuinely envied them in their peaceful phases, the hardcore introvert and closet recluse in me longed to be in their shoes that if only I had an ounce of magic in me, I'd have offered myself as the "sacrificial" lamb (I volunteer as tribute!)—and of course, because it's so special in its uniqueness – I haven't experienced a story quite like this, even if the themes echoed similarities with some other paranormal-mystery romances I've read, but there were just several discrepancies and head-scratchers that left me confused and hanging: some inconsistencies, a few typos, and the fact that the characters alienated me at points.
That basically sums up the short version of my review if you don't want to read the longer, more detailed list of why I decked a star. If you do read on, however, let me be clear that as always, despite being an editor, I don't claim to possess the expertise to dish out a purely objective critique and accordingly don't attempt to mimic being a professional book critic. My reviews will always be more subjective, as I read books for pleasure and therefore only ever strive to review a book as a reader—as reader reviews should be. With that said, here goes:
1.) I found it a bit ridiculous that locked gates and closed doors would be such an impediment in a magic-filled world. I'm not suggesting that James or anyone else destroy other people's property or break the law using magic, but if magic here worked in such a way that he could draw sunlight from outside into a different space indoors, then why could he have not done the same thing with sound? At first I wondered why he did not simply shout out (as one does in such cases) and thought that maybe the house was too far; but then later on, we find out that it isn't, because even while inside the house, they could actually hear people from the main gate calling out to them. It means, James could have simply yelled or used his truck's horn to get attention or, yes, used some of his matter-teleporting powers to project an audible signal or verbal message to the house (even if, again, that wasn't necessary, after all). It made the magic element of this world feel somewhat plot-device-y.
2.) James describes the manor as "foreboding", then in the same paragraph says it isn't creepy. That… is confusing. How can something be foreboding and not creepy? Later on, he, in fact, refers to the place as "creepy" (many, many times).
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6.) They discuss they're negative and have been sexually inactive since, right before they perform oral on each other; but then they still use a condom for penetrative sex. I mean, what's the point? Whatever they might have had (if any), they most likely already passed on to each other when they blew each other, right? It just comes off as hypocritical, and I can't help feeling it was just shoehorned into the story to pander to those who militantly police how *fictional* characters in ADULT FICTION bonk, because apparently in this day and age, compartmentalising between *fantastical* adult fiction and a rated-G educational documentary doesn't make right sense anymore.
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10.) Other typos: Spelling "aww" or "aw", as "awe".
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12.) He has one single feeling that is “mixed”? Or was this supposed to be “feelings” (plural)?
13.) Hmm. I wonder if this is yet another Americanism on the rise.
14.) This sentence could definitely have been less confusing:
15.) As for the characters: Sebastian Storm sometimes acts more like a woman than a man. I found him more interesting pre-[OMITTED DUE TO SPOILERS] release, because his personality was sharper and more distinct. Post [OMITTED DUE TO SPOILERS] release, his mannerisms, speech, and overall demeanour just leaned more heavily on the female side (like, it really required some hefty mental gymnastics for me to force my imagination to keep picturing a man talking and acting the way he did), making a lot of scenes with James feel more MF than MM. It wouldn't have been so alienating if he was established as an effeminate man or a deliberate femme boy of sorts from the onset (and I doubt his prior predicament made him act more masculine), but he wasn't. Yet that's the vibes I got later on, so it kind of threw me off.
16.) James Gray made me a sad many times. This is perhaps the biggest, most consequential reason. I liked James in the prequel (as much as I did Sebastian) and thusly, was so looking forward to reading this. But there were so many things he did here that made me feel disappointed. First off, he didn't seem to have any respect for Sebastian in the beginning, and for the shallowest of reasons too (if you could even count them as "reasons"). It's not even that James has had any particularly negative first-hand experience with Sebastian but from the get-go, even before he got on his truck to service Sebastian, he was already dead-set on feelings of disdain and condescension for the man, and it kind of crushed me to learn that the sweet and caring James I got to know could be so judgemental. It could be forgiven if he were a teenager or young adult (as youth tends to make people stupid like that), but he's 28 years old and supposedly on a job assignment, ergo he was going to get paid for his troubles so he could have been more professional about it or showed some customer-service warmth at the very least, instead he acted like a sulky brat from the start. It definitely did not paint a respectable nor mature image of him. Case in point:
– James’ initial irritation at arriving to a locked property seemed shockingly disproportionate to the situation. I mean Sebastian had no idea he’d be there that day at that specific time, and so how could he take the locked gate and closed front door so personally and maliciously? This clearly showed that he was not as above being influenced by everyone else’s discrimination of Sebastian as he thought. Sure, he can think what he wants of others—it's anyone's prerogative. But I guess, I just thought better of James? It's not a very charming trait to favour rumours over first-hand experience when passing judgement on others; given what I've seen in the prequel, I was expecting him to be kinder and more emotionally intelligent than this (which is why I like Parker better, I suppose). James himself said that he valued the more practical uses of magic, yet he didn't seem interested in thinking constructively to solve the minor problem at all, and instead was more over-eager to jump at the very first reason to find fault with Sebastian to justify his biases against him. I know this is likely intentional since realistic characters are not without flaw—and he does make up for this in spades later on, but this left me wary of him and it was a wariness that wasn't easy to shake off (largely due to his own actions as well), and such behaviour still undeniably screams red flags, no matter how tiny. The worst part is…
– This trend of James being passively rude and judgey towards Sebastian goes on for some time, to a point of pettiness (the fact that he persists in calling the place Storm House in spite of Sebastian correcting him that it was Storm Manor and making a point to say it was rude to call it otherwise – which James obviously did not think important enough to take seriously—sure, it seems trivial, but it really isn't. It's still disrespect). He doesn't come around until the librarian not-so-subtly knocks some sense into him, a mistake he acknowledges but does not feel the need to apologise to Sebastian for, by the way – which further goes to show how little his regard was for Sebastian and his feelings, and it makes whatever kind acts he does for Sebastian seem merely obligatory and out of guilt, at first—which might not even be far from the truth. Again, he makes up for this with his greater sacrifices (although still not entirely unselfishly), but just when I was finally starting to forget how unfair he had been and was on the verge of forgiving him, he has a huge-arse ugly relapse where in a fleeting fit of rage, he caustically accuses Sebastian of being nefarious enough to have planned the… "unfortunate turn of events" (sorry, I'm trying to avoid the most revealing spoilers)—which tragically effectively diminishes the selflessness and value of the noble sacrifice he just made before this. That had me cringing so hard, and almost—almost—turned me off from the book entirely. As much as I really wanted to love James wholly, it only made me even more afraid of him than I already was. But again, this is in part fuelled by his own actions because…
– Throughout the book, even when he realises for good that he has it bad for Sebastian, his suspicion of Sebastian would still keep rearing its ugly head; he would still have those little bouts of cowardice where he would be more concerned with self-preservation and safeguarding his own feelings, which made him essentially blind and less appreciative time and time again of how much Sebastian likes him and takes care of him, and other things. Now, again, I know this is by design and of course I'm just too relieved and overjoyed that James finally got his head out of his arse towards the end, but all I'm saying is, it made me repeatedly insecure and doubtful when it came to his subliminal intentions and feelings, and ultimately, it robbed me of the usual warm and fuzzy feelings of trust and comfort I normally want to have for my MM romance prince charmings; it kept me constantly scared that James might have more relapses at any moment—though, I want to believe he'll grow past all that.
Since this is just part one of a trilogy, there's a chance that some of these uneasy feelings of mine towards James may be resolved in the succeeding books—I'm hoping so hard it will be; and when they are, I'll definitely come back to adjust my rating accordingly because I sincerely want to give this 5 stars.
Thanks so much to the author and Booksprout for letting me claim this ARC! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing James and Sebastian's love story (and hopefully more of Parker and Eli's too?) through to their much-deserved HEA.
I liked the main couple of the prequel more, but I enjoyed this better only because the story was more rounded and it gives a better sense of closure—even if it is still technically a cliffhanger, at least the book's main conflict (the curse) was resolved (or so we're made to think; for now). As it is, I'd read anything MM(+) but throw in a hearty gothic-themed mystery into it, and I'm definitely sold. This was delightfully well-executed, with lots of character development (especially on James' part), and while it's a slow-burn, the pacing was not too drawn out nor too rushed. There were times when James' mullings got redundant, but it's all part of his struggles—not to mention, a relatable trauma response—and I liked that those were handled with utmost care. While my interest did lag at the beginning (for reasons I'll enumerate in detail below), as soon as the plot started to thicken with Sebastian's puzzling behaviour, the oddities of Storm Manor itself coming to light (er, or "to dark"?)(and yes, I don't insist on being rude—if Sebastian says it's a manor, I will respect that, doing otherwise would be like ignoring someone's pronouns just to spite them), and James finally catching on, I was hooked. Honestly, I was so close to giving this a perfect 5 stars because I was so into this it had me in a trance; there were so many times when I genuinely envied them in their peaceful phases, the hardcore introvert and closet recluse in me longed to be in their shoes that if only I had an ounce of magic in me, I'd have offered myself as the "sacrificial" lamb (I volunteer as tribute!)—and of course, because it's so special in its uniqueness – I haven't experienced a story quite like this, even if the themes echoed similarities with some other paranormal-mystery romances I've read, but there were just several discrepancies and head-scratchers that left me confused and hanging: some inconsistencies, a few typos, and the fact that the characters alienated me at points.
That basically sums up the short version of my review if you don't want to read the longer, more detailed list of why I decked a star. If you do read on, however, let me be clear that as always, despite being an editor, I don't claim to possess the expertise to dish out a purely objective critique and accordingly don't attempt to mimic being a professional book critic. My reviews will always be more subjective, as I read books for pleasure and therefore only ever strive to review a book as a reader—as reader reviews should be. With that said, here goes:
1.) I found it a bit ridiculous that locked gates and closed doors would be such an impediment in a magic-filled world. I'm not suggesting that James or anyone else destroy other people's property or break the law using magic, but if magic here worked in such a way that he could draw sunlight from outside into a different space indoors, then why could he have not done the same thing with sound? At first I wondered why he did not simply shout out (as one does in such cases) and thought that maybe the house was too far; but then later on, we find out that it isn't, because even while inside the house, they could actually hear people from the main gate calling out to them. It means, James could have simply yelled or used his truck's horn to get attention or, yes, used some of his matter-teleporting powers to project an audible signal or verbal message to the house (even if, again, that wasn't necessary, after all). It made the magic element of this world feel somewhat plot-device-y.
2.) James describes the manor as "foreboding", then in the same paragraph says it isn't creepy. That… is confusing. How can something be foreboding and not creepy? Later on, he, in fact, refers to the place as "creepy" (many, many times).
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James wasn’t surprised. Sebastian had warned him, so he didn’t expect the spike of fear that hit him.Again: a confusing contradiction; because clearly, he was surprised. Isn't that what surprise means i.e. not expecting something?
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Another story was about a prince of light concurring shades that—as James remembered—was very heavy-handed with its metaphors and not a good depiction of the realities of shades.Maybe I am dumb or missing something here, but I have no idea what "concurring shades" means. Does "concurring" mean something entirely different in this universe's lore? Or was this a typo and that was meant to be "conjuring"?
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Really wish you hadn’t picked a wooden one. I guess I can keep the knife if I sterilize it.First off, that was such a thankless thing to say after all the pains James went through – like the bowl mattered more (maybe I am just missing context here, but it didn't enamour me to Sebastian in those moments). Secondly, I don't get why the knife can't be used anymore. Again, maybe I'm just dumb, maybe it's a lack of context, or maybe it's a cultural thing, but is Sebastian just this obsessively fastidious with his cutlery? To the point of going out of his way to bitch about crockery after what had just transpired? Seriously? Wasn't he the guy who said there's nothing he won't give up and very few lines he wouldn't cross? It's not even like he can't buy a hundred more knives. Hells, he didn't even bother to actually thank James for what he did.
6.) They discuss they're negative and have been sexually inactive since, right before they perform oral on each other; but then they still use a condom for penetrative sex. I mean, what's the point? Whatever they might have had (if any), they most likely already passed on to each other when they blew each other, right? It just comes off as hypocritical, and I can't help feeling it was just shoehorned into the story to pander to those who militantly police how *fictional* characters in ADULT FICTION bonk, because apparently in this day and age, compartmentalising between *fantastical* adult fiction and a rated-G educational documentary doesn't make right sense anymore.
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Sebastian picked up his head.Somehow, that paints a very morbid picture, but… that's Americanism for you?
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Even with Sebastian’s pension for going against the grain, it was hard to imagine him embracing the creepiest house in a town known for what lurked in the shadows.Pension? Does "pension" mean something else in this universe other than a retirement income? Or was that an eggcorn for "penchant"?
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James ran a hand through his hair, trying to peace it all together.Isn’t this supposed to be "piece it all together"?
10.) Other typos: Spelling "aww" or "aw", as "awe".
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He was too involved already, worrying and promising to solve problems it wasn’t his job to fix.
12.) He has one single feeling that is “mixed”? Or was this supposed to be “feelings” (plural)?
James was wearing a button-down teal-and-white bowling shirt that he had mixed feeling about.
13.) Hmm. I wonder if this is yet another Americanism on the rise.
As the night got later, James was no closer to sleep.
14.) This sentence could definitely have been less confusing:
Main Street ran in a circle around an eight-foot-tall gray stone marking the founding of Moonlight Falls that stuck out of a landscaped patch of grass.
15.) As for the characters: Sebastian Storm sometimes acts more like a woman than a man. I found him more interesting pre-[OMITTED DUE TO SPOILERS] release, because his personality was sharper and more distinct. Post [OMITTED DUE TO SPOILERS] release, his mannerisms, speech, and overall demeanour just leaned more heavily on the female side (like, it really required some hefty mental gymnastics for me to force my imagination to keep picturing a man talking and acting the way he did), making a lot of scenes with James feel more MF than MM. It wouldn't have been so alienating if he was established as an effeminate man or a deliberate femme boy of sorts from the onset (and I doubt his prior predicament made him act more masculine), but he wasn't. Yet that's the vibes I got later on, so it kind of threw me off.
16.) James Gray made me a sad many times. This is perhaps the biggest, most consequential reason. I liked James in the prequel (as much as I did Sebastian) and thusly, was so looking forward to reading this. But there were so many things he did here that made me feel disappointed. First off, he didn't seem to have any respect for Sebastian in the beginning, and for the shallowest of reasons too (if you could even count them as "reasons"). It's not even that James has had any particularly negative first-hand experience with Sebastian but from the get-go, even before he got on his truck to service Sebastian, he was already dead-set on feelings of disdain and condescension for the man, and it kind of crushed me to learn that the sweet and caring James I got to know could be so judgemental. It could be forgiven if he were a teenager or young adult (as youth tends to make people stupid like that), but he's 28 years old and supposedly on a job assignment, ergo he was going to get paid for his troubles so he could have been more professional about it or showed some customer-service warmth at the very least, instead he acted like a sulky brat from the start. It definitely did not paint a respectable nor mature image of him. Case in point:
– James’ initial irritation at arriving to a locked property seemed shockingly disproportionate to the situation. I mean Sebastian had no idea he’d be there that day at that specific time, and so how could he take the locked gate and closed front door so personally and maliciously? This clearly showed that he was not as above being influenced by everyone else’s discrimination of Sebastian as he thought. Sure, he can think what he wants of others—it's anyone's prerogative. But I guess, I just thought better of James? It's not a very charming trait to favour rumours over first-hand experience when passing judgement on others; given what I've seen in the prequel, I was expecting him to be kinder and more emotionally intelligent than this (which is why I like Parker better, I suppose). James himself said that he valued the more practical uses of magic, yet he didn't seem interested in thinking constructively to solve the minor problem at all, and instead was more over-eager to jump at the very first reason to find fault with Sebastian to justify his biases against him. I know this is likely intentional since realistic characters are not without flaw—and he does make up for this in spades later on, but this left me wary of him and it was a wariness that wasn't easy to shake off (largely due to his own actions as well), and such behaviour still undeniably screams red flags, no matter how tiny. The worst part is…
– This trend of James being passively rude and judgey towards Sebastian goes on for some time, to a point of pettiness (the fact that he persists in calling the place Storm House in spite of Sebastian correcting him that it was Storm Manor and making a point to say it was rude to call it otherwise – which James obviously did not think important enough to take seriously—sure, it seems trivial, but it really isn't. It's still disrespect). He doesn't come around until the librarian not-so-subtly knocks some sense into him, a mistake he acknowledges but does not feel the need to apologise to Sebastian for, by the way – which further goes to show how little his regard was for Sebastian and his feelings, and it makes whatever kind acts he does for Sebastian seem merely obligatory and out of guilt, at first—which might not even be far from the truth. Again, he makes up for this with his greater sacrifices (although still not entirely unselfishly), but just when I was finally starting to forget how unfair he had been and was on the verge of forgiving him, he has a huge-arse ugly relapse where in a fleeting fit of rage, he caustically accuses Sebastian of being nefarious enough to have planned the… "unfortunate turn of events" (sorry, I'm trying to avoid the most revealing spoilers)—which tragically effectively diminishes the selflessness and value of the noble sacrifice he just made before this. That had me cringing so hard, and almost—almost—turned me off from the book entirely. As much as I really wanted to love James wholly, it only made me even more afraid of him than I already was. But again, this is in part fuelled by his own actions because…
– Throughout the book, even when he realises for good that he has it bad for Sebastian, his suspicion of Sebastian would still keep rearing its ugly head; he would still have those little bouts of cowardice where he would be more concerned with self-preservation and safeguarding his own feelings, which made him essentially blind and less appreciative time and time again of how much Sebastian likes him and takes care of him, and other things. Now, again, I know this is by design and of course I'm just too relieved and overjoyed that James finally got his head out of his arse towards the end, but all I'm saying is, it made me repeatedly insecure and doubtful when it came to his subliminal intentions and feelings, and ultimately, it robbed me of the usual warm and fuzzy feelings of trust and comfort I normally want to have for my MM romance prince charmings; it kept me constantly scared that James might have more relapses at any moment—though, I want to believe he'll grow past all that.
Since this is just part one of a trilogy, there's a chance that some of these uneasy feelings of mine towards James may be resolved in the succeeding books—I'm hoping so hard it will be; and when they are, I'll definitely come back to adjust my rating accordingly because I sincerely want to give this 5 stars.
Thanks so much to the author and Booksprout for letting me claim this ARC! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing James and Sebastian's love story (and hopefully more of Parker and Eli's too?) through to their much-deserved HEA.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 16, 2024
This is book one of the Moonlight Falls series and the main characters are James Gray, a magical electrician, and Sebastian Storm, who lives in what most residents call a haunted house, north of the town itself. Sebastian is a bit of a recluse and whilst James can remember him being a few years behind him in high school, he wasn’t from the town, only coming to live in the old house with his uncle after spending summers there as a kid. James never felt the urge to leave Moonlight Falls, like his younger brother Elijah, who has recently returned and fell in love, which was told in the prequel. He set up his own company, Gray Electrical, in town as a magical electrician, with one of his friends Hazel. They have a power station attached to the shop, with permission to use a particular spell which allows them to refill magical energy in items for customers. The actual technology is owned by a huge company, Nelson Power, which allows them to use the spell. He had heard that Sebastian had inherited the house after his uncle died and that he had actually been in town for a while, but James never saw him as he didn’t come into town at all, even his groceries are delivered. When James gets an actual handwritten letter, asking him to come to the house as Sebastian wishes to engage his services, but there was no phone or email address shown, so the only thing James can do, is go up to the house. He hates driving up that road, as his parents died out there in a car accident when he was young. The sight of the house gives him a real ‘off’ feeling and he sensation of being watched, with more shades in the vicinity. Something he had noticed since his brother came back at the start of the summer and actually got attacked by one, which was very unusual shade behaviour.
But he can’t get to Storm House itself, as the drive is closed off with a gate and a padlock. He ends up having to climb over the wall and walk down the drive, then knocking for ages before a partly clad Sebastian comes to the door! Sebastian caught him looking at his bare chest and started acting really flirty, something James wasn’t interested in, or so he tells himself. There are no lights on inside the house, just a few gas lanterns and lots of candles everywhere. He tries asking Sebastian if there is any power working, but gets pretty much single word answers, which aren’t really helpful. The only wiring seems to have been there since the house was built a few hundred years ago. James agrees to come back the next afternoon with some more equipment and check out the rest of the house, hoping this time Sebastian will have the gate open for him. That leads to him having to check under the house to see where the wiring goes, only to be attacked by a large group of shades. His magical shade light seems to have been drained and he has to use a lot of magic to produce a light with his magic to repel them! The house itself was warded by an ancestor, against things such as the shades, but outside of the house certainly isn’t and Sebastian never goes out there at night. He has lived without any electricity for six years and is quite used to it, but hasn’t explained why he has chosen now for any work to be done on the electrics.
James is going to find out soon enough, that any electrical fix is going to bring him more hassle than he could have ever imagined and leaving the house and Sebastian even harder. Sebastian seems to swing form being extra flirty and very forward about getting James into his bed, to very abrupt and almost angry at James when he does something like offer to take him to the diner, since he has no transport out at the house. When James returns to town, he hears of some more unusual shade behaviour, with some even crashing into the special lights they had put up over the front of stores in town, especially to keep the shades away from their customers. Something was changing about their behaviour, as normally shining a light on them, or them being exposed to sunlight, made them return to the Beyond. Another strange thing is the incomplete set of children’s stories, the Magical Tales, with one missing, that seems to follow them to different parts of the house! It all makes sense in the end as the truth about Sebastian’s reclusive nature comes out, but also catches James in its snare. James starts to realise he has feelings for Sebastian and wants to look after and care for him, sad to see what he has suffered from for so long, but also enjoying their time together. Uncovering the secrets behind the Storm family line and its links to the magical veins that run straight through the town. Sebastian had asked James to the house to fix things for him, it was just that he wasn’t exactly clear what it was that needed fixing, because it certainly isn’t what James thought he was there for!
Loads of twists and turns in this book, with nothing being quite as it seems, as we soon find out. Magic and family curses are all intertwined together into a spooky looking house and a history of shades behaving strangely, unlike elsewhere in town until now. He figured that James would be the man to fix things for him and he was right. So much more life in Moonlight Falls to be explored together hopefully. I received an ARC copy of this book from BookSprout and I have freely given my own opinion of the book above.
But he can’t get to Storm House itself, as the drive is closed off with a gate and a padlock. He ends up having to climb over the wall and walk down the drive, then knocking for ages before a partly clad Sebastian comes to the door! Sebastian caught him looking at his bare chest and started acting really flirty, something James wasn’t interested in, or so he tells himself. There are no lights on inside the house, just a few gas lanterns and lots of candles everywhere. He tries asking Sebastian if there is any power working, but gets pretty much single word answers, which aren’t really helpful. The only wiring seems to have been there since the house was built a few hundred years ago. James agrees to come back the next afternoon with some more equipment and check out the rest of the house, hoping this time Sebastian will have the gate open for him. That leads to him having to check under the house to see where the wiring goes, only to be attacked by a large group of shades. His magical shade light seems to have been drained and he has to use a lot of magic to produce a light with his magic to repel them! The house itself was warded by an ancestor, against things such as the shades, but outside of the house certainly isn’t and Sebastian never goes out there at night. He has lived without any electricity for six years and is quite used to it, but hasn’t explained why he has chosen now for any work to be done on the electrics.
James is going to find out soon enough, that any electrical fix is going to bring him more hassle than he could have ever imagined and leaving the house and Sebastian even harder. Sebastian seems to swing form being extra flirty and very forward about getting James into his bed, to very abrupt and almost angry at James when he does something like offer to take him to the diner, since he has no transport out at the house. When James returns to town, he hears of some more unusual shade behaviour, with some even crashing into the special lights they had put up over the front of stores in town, especially to keep the shades away from their customers. Something was changing about their behaviour, as normally shining a light on them, or them being exposed to sunlight, made them return to the Beyond. Another strange thing is the incomplete set of children’s stories, the Magical Tales, with one missing, that seems to follow them to different parts of the house! It all makes sense in the end as the truth about Sebastian’s reclusive nature comes out, but also catches James in its snare. James starts to realise he has feelings for Sebastian and wants to look after and care for him, sad to see what he has suffered from for so long, but also enjoying their time together. Uncovering the secrets behind the Storm family line and its links to the magical veins that run straight through the town. Sebastian had asked James to the house to fix things for him, it was just that he wasn’t exactly clear what it was that needed fixing, because it certainly isn’t what James thought he was there for!
Loads of twists and turns in this book, with nothing being quite as it seems, as we soon find out. Magic and family curses are all intertwined together into a spooky looking house and a history of shades behaving strangely, unlike elsewhere in town until now. He figured that James would be the man to fix things for him and he was right. So much more life in Moonlight Falls to be explored together hopefully. I received an ARC copy of this book from BookSprout and I have freely given my own opinion of the book above.
July 7, 2024
While I've delved a lot and familiarized myself a lot with the paranormal sub-genre, I'm still not the hugest fantasy fan. But I gotta say, this series has me intrigued. "The Seduction of James Gray" is the first full-lengthened novel in Colette Rivera's Moonlight Falls series.
["Mystery, temptation, and risking it all.
James Gray lives a life free of complications. Even in Moonlight Falls, a town known for supernatural activity, he stays away from the more sinister magical arts, preferring the simple work of a magical electrician.
Sebastian Storm is a man James hasn’t thought about in years until he hears Sebastian inherited the haunted house north of town. Most locals avoid the place. The eccentric Sebastian moves in and requests James’s help with electrical problems.
Storm House’s shade infestation is the first hitch in the job. The second? Sebastian. He’s doing his best to get James into bed. James doesn’t want any part of Sebastian’s games, no matter how attractive he is, but James begins to wonder if there’s more going on at the haunted property than Sebastian will admit.
Uncovering secrets will only bring trouble, but James can’t help himself. There’s something about Sebastian he can’t shake. What’s the worst that could happen if he lets himself be seduced by the mystery as well as the man?"]
I'm not sure if I knew there was more to Sebastian because of the prequel or because I saw the title of his novel, but that poor boy! D: He deserves sooooo much more than the hand he was dealt. He's loving and kind and sassy and resilient (and cursed). He's also scared of being alone.
James is used to people leaving him so he just doesn't let himself get attached to anyone but his two best friends and his brother. He's caring and loves taking care of people and likes feeling wanted, but he's a grump (Sebastian is the sunshine). He doesn't (necessarily) want to add Sebastian to the list of people he cares about, but he doesn't exactly have a choice in that matter (for sooo many reasons ;) ).
Title Reference: "Sebastian gave him a sly smile. 'You wanted me to explain things more plainly, so here: I'm considering seducing you.'"
Though, it is advertised, I'm a little :| about the HFN (the HEA is in the second book...which I want now).
Trigger Warnings: off-page past death of loved ones and associated grief, mentions of a past fatal car accident, character exhibiting signs of an unspecified mental health condition, discussion of taking care of a dying relative in the past, anxiety, on-page panic attack, isolation and imprisonment, discussion of blood-magic rituals and on-page blood-magic, characters cutting/bleeding each other in a semi-erotic situation connected to magic, blood-magic ritual involving an animal (the animal isn’t killed; its blood is taken with care to prevent pain), characters in a stampede-like situation where they are almost crushed, magical violence, and more.
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["Mystery, temptation, and risking it all.
James Gray lives a life free of complications. Even in Moonlight Falls, a town known for supernatural activity, he stays away from the more sinister magical arts, preferring the simple work of a magical electrician.
Sebastian Storm is a man James hasn’t thought about in years until he hears Sebastian inherited the haunted house north of town. Most locals avoid the place. The eccentric Sebastian moves in and requests James’s help with electrical problems.
Storm House’s shade infestation is the first hitch in the job. The second? Sebastian. He’s doing his best to get James into bed. James doesn’t want any part of Sebastian’s games, no matter how attractive he is, but James begins to wonder if there’s more going on at the haunted property than Sebastian will admit.
Uncovering secrets will only bring trouble, but James can’t help himself. There’s something about Sebastian he can’t shake. What’s the worst that could happen if he lets himself be seduced by the mystery as well as the man?"]
I'm not sure if I knew there was more to Sebastian because of the prequel or because I saw the title of his novel, but that poor boy! D: He deserves sooooo much more than the hand he was dealt. He's loving and kind and sassy and resilient (and cursed). He's also scared of being alone.
James is used to people leaving him so he just doesn't let himself get attached to anyone but his two best friends and his brother. He's caring and loves taking care of people and likes feeling wanted, but he's a grump (Sebastian is the sunshine). He doesn't (necessarily) want to add Sebastian to the list of people he cares about, but he doesn't exactly have a choice in that matter (for sooo many reasons ;) ).
Title Reference: "Sebastian gave him a sly smile. 'You wanted me to explain things more plainly, so here: I'm considering seducing you.'"
Though, it is advertised, I'm a little :| about the HFN (the HEA is in the second book...which I want now).
Trigger Warnings: off-page past death of loved ones and associated grief, mentions of a past fatal car accident, character exhibiting signs of an unspecified mental health condition, discussion of taking care of a dying relative in the past, anxiety, on-page panic attack, isolation and imprisonment, discussion of blood-magic rituals and on-page blood-magic, characters cutting/bleeding each other in a semi-erotic situation connected to magic, blood-magic ritual involving an animal (the animal isn’t killed; its blood is taken with care to prevent pain), characters in a stampede-like situation where they are almost crushed, magical violence, and more.
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July 31, 2024
The magical system, setting, and mystery in this novel are the shining stars. I thoroughly enjoyed how different the plotline was, both with how magic works in this world, but also the setting and bringing in just enough gothic horror elements without actually being scary. James's vulnerabilities are both so universal and so rarely given space in a character that I truly loved it. And Sebastian... where to even begin with him? The hurdles he's attempting to overcome in this story make him so wildly complex and it was fascinating to watch him. While I do think the climactic events and ending were weak compared to how strong the rest of the story is, I still absolutely enjoyed and will be reading the second book when it comes out.
Knowing what I know now about this book, would I still read it if I went back in time?
Definitely.
See below for the four criteria I use to decide whether and when to read a book
CHARACTERS: James and Sebastian are lovely. Easy to see the chemistry between them as it grows. The side characters are also brilliant and I had fun in this town with them. If you're looking for an easy read with lovable characters, that feel complex rather than cliched, you're good to go!
PLOT: As mentioned, there's a bit of mystery involved with this one, coupled then with an actual magical quest to overcome. In my experience, I haven't seen the like in a supernatural MM before and it was wonderfully refreshing. And at times, I think it could have been quite scary and/or triggering, but the author handles the predicament the MMCs find themselves in with such aplomb. Kudos! I did find the ending to be weak, however. Not everything is fully wrapped up (even the things that would make sense to wrap up in book one). But it was only a mild frustration and I hope we'll get to see what isn't in the ending in book two.
EMOTIONAL INTENSITY: There is no good/bad here. Sometimes I just want a low-investment entertainment read whereas other times a high-stakes 'I need a therapist to recover' is what I need.
2/5: low. Perfect, honestly. The author's choice to temper the potentially high emotional stakes works for this story. Wander around some creepy spooky without needing a therapist afterwards. A great read for in between high intensity books!
CATHARTIC FULFILLMENT: Is the emotional journey worth it? Do I finish this book feeling that I've crested the wave of the climactic moment and everything has been settled, leaving me settled and fulfilled?
50%. While I wouldn't say I was frustrated, I wished for more denouement and the moment that I'd personally been waiting for between James and the rest of his family/the side characters sadly isn't given to us. That was hugely disappointing. I'm holding out hope we'll see it in the beginning of book two. But because this book wasn't incredibly high intensity, I didn't walk away feeling frustrated, so we're good!
Knowing what I know now about this book, would I still read it if I went back in time?
Definitely.
See below for the four criteria I use to decide whether and when to read a book
CHARACTERS: James and Sebastian are lovely. Easy to see the chemistry between them as it grows. The side characters are also brilliant and I had fun in this town with them. If you're looking for an easy read with lovable characters, that feel complex rather than cliched, you're good to go!
PLOT: As mentioned, there's a bit of mystery involved with this one, coupled then with an actual magical quest to overcome. In my experience, I haven't seen the like in a supernatural MM before and it was wonderfully refreshing. And at times, I think it could have been quite scary and/or triggering, but the author handles the predicament the MMCs find themselves in with such aplomb. Kudos! I did find the ending to be weak, however. Not everything is fully wrapped up (even the things that would make sense to wrap up in book one). But it was only a mild frustration and I hope we'll get to see what isn't in the ending in book two.
EMOTIONAL INTENSITY: There is no good/bad here. Sometimes I just want a low-investment entertainment read whereas other times a high-stakes 'I need a therapist to recover' is what I need.
2/5: low. Perfect, honestly. The author's choice to temper the potentially high emotional stakes works for this story. Wander around some creepy spooky without needing a therapist afterwards. A great read for in between high intensity books!
CATHARTIC FULFILLMENT: Is the emotional journey worth it? Do I finish this book feeling that I've crested the wave of the climactic moment and everything has been settled, leaving me settled and fulfilled?
50%. While I wouldn't say I was frustrated, I wished for more denouement and the moment that I'd personally been waiting for between James and the rest of his family/the side characters sadly isn't given to us. That was hugely disappointing. I'm holding out hope we'll see it in the beginning of book two. But because this book wasn't incredibly high intensity, I didn't walk away feeling frustrated, so we're good!
September 7, 2024
I liked the general premise of the book and story but got frustrated after .
There were so many little things that obviously were purposefully not done, or people truly are this strange and then I don't want to know. In hindsight, the book would have been a lot shorter or maybe the trilogy would have been a 2 book affair if the stupidity would have been left out. Like
So yeah, I was a tinsy bit frustrated reading.
There also, more often than not, seem to be no gradual changes in mood or feelings. Just, bam, I know I only remember you negatively and didn't like you because you were a loner and strange, but now that I am attracted to you and want to give that a go I might just have feelings for you. Sounds harsh, and yes, James is the helper bee type, but this is how it reads when there is no development. I think this author is struggling with portraying emotion in general. Developing feelings, anxiety, stress, etc.
The author obviously wants the characters to be ones to have panic attacks, anxious bouts and slight depression but these bouts are over too quickly to feel real and have no real consequence or after effects.
That all being said, I like all the characters so far and for now I'm still invested after reading the prequel and the first book. And maybe, when/if I reread this book in the future I might not read it so literally and will focus on other things. So 2nd book here we come.
There were so many little things that obviously were purposefully not done, or people truly are this strange and then I don't want to know. In hindsight, the book would have been a lot shorter or maybe the trilogy would have been a 2 book affair if the stupidity would have been left out. Like
So yeah, I was a tinsy bit frustrated reading.
There also, more often than not, seem to be no gradual changes in mood or feelings. Just, bam, I know I only remember you negatively and didn't like you because you were a loner and strange, but now that I am attracted to you and want to give that a go I might just have feelings for you. Sounds harsh, and yes, James is the helper bee type, but this is how it reads when there is no development. I think this author is struggling with portraying emotion in general. Developing feelings, anxiety, stress, etc.
The author obviously wants the characters to be ones to have panic attacks, anxious bouts and slight depression but these bouts are over too quickly to feel real and have no real consequence or after effects.
That all being said, I like all the characters so far and for now I'm still invested after reading the prequel and the first book. And maybe, when/if I reread this book in the future I might not read it so literally and will focus on other things. So 2nd book here we come.
June 26, 2024
The Seduction of James Gray is the first in the Moonlight Falls series by @colette_rivera and what a way to fully dive in!
We met James (and briefly Sebastian) in the novella. But James runs the local magical electricity store, and Sebastian is the reclusive owner of Storm House, the “haunted” house on the outskirts of town.
One morning James gets a letter from Sebastian asking for help. Assuming a problem with the electricity, James scopes out the job and determines the house needs full reworking because it hasn’t been changed since Storm House was built. He quickly learns that there has never been power at Storm House, and grows frustrated with Sebastian’s constant flirting and avoidance of James’ questions about why nothing with electric works on the property.
After James gets stuck on the property with Sebastian for 24 hours when his truck dies, he starts to suspect that there is something preventing Sebastian from telling him the truth, and he is determined to uncover the reason and help Sebastian.
This was a fun start to the series. James is the grumpy to Sebastian’s sunshine, both having reasons for their demeanour. But a spell gone wrong forced them into close proximity where they must work together to escape the property.
The slow burn romance here wasn’t as frustrating as some others are, and the way James’ thoughts and feelings were written gives great clarity in terms of his grumpiness and how Sebastian starts to break through. Sebastian’s flirty playfulness is at odds with his mood when talking about town and family but is balanced well enough that you can see the struggles he has with being trapped on the property.
While part of me was hoping for a Scooby-esque gang coming to the rescue and figuring out the problem, I really enjoyed seeing how James used his knowledge of magical energy to come up with a solution.
After that ending I am interested to see what happens next. Will the veins cause problems? Why are the shades becoming more trouble? And will James and Sebastian get their happy ending? (Well more than those they’ve already given each other 😉)
The Seduction of James Gray is out July 1!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️
We met James (and briefly Sebastian) in the novella. But James runs the local magical electricity store, and Sebastian is the reclusive owner of Storm House, the “haunted” house on the outskirts of town.
One morning James gets a letter from Sebastian asking for help. Assuming a problem with the electricity, James scopes out the job and determines the house needs full reworking because it hasn’t been changed since Storm House was built. He quickly learns that there has never been power at Storm House, and grows frustrated with Sebastian’s constant flirting and avoidance of James’ questions about why nothing with electric works on the property.
After James gets stuck on the property with Sebastian for 24 hours when his truck dies, he starts to suspect that there is something preventing Sebastian from telling him the truth, and he is determined to uncover the reason and help Sebastian.
This was a fun start to the series. James is the grumpy to Sebastian’s sunshine, both having reasons for their demeanour. But a spell gone wrong forced them into close proximity where they must work together to escape the property.
The slow burn romance here wasn’t as frustrating as some others are, and the way James’ thoughts and feelings were written gives great clarity in terms of his grumpiness and how Sebastian starts to break through. Sebastian’s flirty playfulness is at odds with his mood when talking about town and family but is balanced well enough that you can see the struggles he has with being trapped on the property.
While part of me was hoping for a Scooby-esque gang coming to the rescue and figuring out the problem, I really enjoyed seeing how James used his knowledge of magical energy to come up with a solution.
After that ending I am interested to see what happens next. Will the veins cause problems? Why are the shades becoming more trouble? And will James and Sebastian get their happy ending? (Well more than those they’ve already given each other 😉)
The Seduction of James Gray is out July 1!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️
July 1, 2024
Colette Rivera kicks off her new Moonlight Falls series with a delightfully creepy, eerie tale of witchcraft and dark magic. If you’re in the mood for paranormal romance paired with light mystery and suspense, look no further.
Like most small towns, Moonlight Falls is the kind of place where everyone knows everyone and the residents stick together and support one another. It’s also a place full of paranormal peculiarities where magic is a staple of everyday life and vital to the community. Rivera creates a world full of charm, nuance, and complexity; there are rules and structure, but they leave plenty of room for creativity and flexibility as the story unfolds.
James Gray is a local electrician serving the community like his ancestors before him. He’s dedicated and devoted to his career and his family, trying to live in the moment and never think too hard about the future or what lies ahead.
Sebastian’s a reluctant recluse who keeps to himself, quietly passing his days alone at Storm Manor. His absence from town means he’s mysterious and misunderstood. Until one day, when he reaches out for a favor from James Gray, and the two of them will never be the same.
I enjoy how this story unfolds with tons of mystery and secrecy. Arriving at Storm Manor, James unknowingly steps into an enormous paranormal puzzle; nothing makes sense, and if he’s going to help Sebastian, he’ll have to learn Sebastian’s clues from his quirks. Not an easy task! Ultimately, I love how they work together to find a solution.
While I was easily swept up in the mystery and suspense, that wasn’t the case with the romance between James & Sebastian. The attraction between them is undeniable, but I never really felt the depth or intensity of their connection the way I expected. Most emotion is conveyed through telling rather than showing, and as a reader, I find it harder to engage with those emotions on the page. This story ends in a HFN, so I’m hopeful that connection will continue to flourish as the series continues.
Overall this is a great, entertaining read, and I’ll definitely be checking out more in this series. There’s bound to be more magical mystery and mayhem to come!
*I voluntarily read a complimentary copy of this book*
Like most small towns, Moonlight Falls is the kind of place where everyone knows everyone and the residents stick together and support one another. It’s also a place full of paranormal peculiarities where magic is a staple of everyday life and vital to the community. Rivera creates a world full of charm, nuance, and complexity; there are rules and structure, but they leave plenty of room for creativity and flexibility as the story unfolds.
James Gray is a local electrician serving the community like his ancestors before him. He’s dedicated and devoted to his career and his family, trying to live in the moment and never think too hard about the future or what lies ahead.
Sebastian’s a reluctant recluse who keeps to himself, quietly passing his days alone at Storm Manor. His absence from town means he’s mysterious and misunderstood. Until one day, when he reaches out for a favor from James Gray, and the two of them will never be the same.
I enjoy how this story unfolds with tons of mystery and secrecy. Arriving at Storm Manor, James unknowingly steps into an enormous paranormal puzzle; nothing makes sense, and if he’s going to help Sebastian, he’ll have to learn Sebastian’s clues from his quirks. Not an easy task! Ultimately, I love how they work together to find a solution.
While I was easily swept up in the mystery and suspense, that wasn’t the case with the romance between James & Sebastian. The attraction between them is undeniable, but I never really felt the depth or intensity of their connection the way I expected. Most emotion is conveyed through telling rather than showing, and as a reader, I find it harder to engage with those emotions on the page. This story ends in a HFN, so I’m hopeful that connection will continue to flourish as the series continues.
Overall this is a great, entertaining read, and I’ll definitely be checking out more in this series. There’s bound to be more magical mystery and mayhem to come!
*I voluntarily read a complimentary copy of this book*
June 18, 2024
The Seduction of James Gray is the first book of Colette Rivera's MM paranormal romance series, Moonlight Falls. There is a prequel novella for this series that I absolutely adored, The Fall of Elijah Gray, and I've been looking forward to getting into this series.
This is a dark paranormal romance set in contemporary middle America. This is a world of magic, with people that have the ability to manipulate power, and their are dangers in both the magic and the creatures that are drawn to it. The titular character, James Gray, is an electrician and co-owner his own repair company with his best friend. His little brother has recently returned to town and found love with one of James's friends (kind of happens on page, but for the full story you need to read Elijah's story). Then one day he gets a letter summoning him to the home of the local recluse, who isn't that much older than James anyway. Sebastian Storm lives in his family's old house. A house with zero power and a lot of secrets. Sebastian has hopes that James could him, but the guy is going to enigmatic AF about it.
The relationship between James and Sebastian is interesting. Because of the things happening at Storm House, they aren't entirely free to get to know each other, yet they still begin to create a strong bond together. They start with a fantastic rapport that develops into friendship and more. The story ends on a HFN. I'm not sure where we go from here, but I trust Rivera and can't wait for more from the Moonlight Falls trilogy.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This is a dark paranormal romance set in contemporary middle America. This is a world of magic, with people that have the ability to manipulate power, and their are dangers in both the magic and the creatures that are drawn to it. The titular character, James Gray, is an electrician and co-owner his own repair company with his best friend. His little brother has recently returned to town and found love with one of James's friends (kind of happens on page, but for the full story you need to read Elijah's story). Then one day he gets a letter summoning him to the home of the local recluse, who isn't that much older than James anyway. Sebastian Storm lives in his family's old house. A house with zero power and a lot of secrets. Sebastian has hopes that James could him, but the guy is going to enigmatic AF about it.
The relationship between James and Sebastian is interesting. Because of the things happening at Storm House, they aren't entirely free to get to know each other, yet they still begin to create a strong bond together. They start with a fantastic rapport that develops into friendship and more. The story ends on a HFN. I'm not sure where we go from here, but I trust Rivera and can't wait for more from the Moonlight Falls trilogy.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 6, 2024
4.5 stars rounded up
One of my favorite things about getting ARCs from GRR is finding new authors. Colette Rivera has created this fascinating new world where magic is a part of everyday life in Moonlight Falls. There are some people who don’t have magic, but it is not a secret. In The Seduction of James Grey we meet James, the local electrician (as well as magic user), who is called to Sebastian Storm’s house to help.
For most of the story, Sebastian is this mysterious person and I couldn’t quite figure out his intentions. I don’t want to say too much because it is far more interesting to figure it out as you read. James and Sebastian knew each other in school but only in passing. They are attracted to each other, but James does not want to let anyone in. There are also some mysterious things happening in Moonlight Falls with the shades (shadowy creatures that exist in darkness). Everything happening at Storm Manor and the town has to be connected.
I was intrigued from chapter 1 and I could not put this book down. Colette does a tremendous job of worldbuilding without bogging us down in extraneous details. This is book 1 of a trilogy so while the book does end happily (rather abruptly I might add) it is not a HEA yet. It also was told in a single POV (James) and I want so badly to get into Sebastian’s mind. I don’t know if book 2 will continue with James or if we will finally get a glimpse into Sebastian’s life.
I am definitely going back to read the prequel with Eli (James’ brother) and Parker (James’ bf), and I will for sure be reading book 2.
I received an ARC from GRR for my honest review
One of my favorite things about getting ARCs from GRR is finding new authors. Colette Rivera has created this fascinating new world where magic is a part of everyday life in Moonlight Falls. There are some people who don’t have magic, but it is not a secret. In The Seduction of James Grey we meet James, the local electrician (as well as magic user), who is called to Sebastian Storm’s house to help.
For most of the story, Sebastian is this mysterious person and I couldn’t quite figure out his intentions. I don’t want to say too much because it is far more interesting to figure it out as you read. James and Sebastian knew each other in school but only in passing. They are attracted to each other, but James does not want to let anyone in. There are also some mysterious things happening in Moonlight Falls with the shades (shadowy creatures that exist in darkness). Everything happening at Storm Manor and the town has to be connected.
I was intrigued from chapter 1 and I could not put this book down. Colette does a tremendous job of worldbuilding without bogging us down in extraneous details. This is book 1 of a trilogy so while the book does end happily (rather abruptly I might add) it is not a HEA yet. It also was told in a single POV (James) and I want so badly to get into Sebastian’s mind. I don’t know if book 2 will continue with James or if we will finally get a glimpse into Sebastian’s life.
I am definitely going back to read the prequel with Eli (James’ brother) and Parker (James’ bf), and I will for sure be reading book 2.
I received an ARC from GRR for my honest review
August 21, 2024
ARC received from the author, thanks!
I quite enjoyed this first full book in this series. I had read the prequel novella prior to this, so I already had a slight introduction to the town and the characters in this book (and the rest of the series).
James Gray is an electrician who gets a mysterious letter in the mail from the town recluse, Sebastian Storm, asking to help to rewire his super creepy house. As soon as James arrives things don't seem quite right and Sebastian is acting kind of weird. Throughout the book we learn that maybe Sebastian isn't as reclusive as everyone thinks he is and that maybe there is more to his haunted house than meets the eye.
I really enjoyed the magic in this book, I liked how it works and how it's explained. I think the author did a really good job of creating a unique, but wholly understandable magical system. And I like how it works in the story.
I liked both characters in this one, though this is told from James' POV because it's his book. I appreciated that it wasn't a dual bi-awakening, that both characters were openly bi right from the start, but that they came to realize how much they had been attracted to each other, even in high school. So, maybe they were each other's bi-awakenings in high school, but that's not what the book is about.
This one ends on a really positive note, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress in book two!
I quite enjoyed this first full book in this series. I had read the prequel novella prior to this, so I already had a slight introduction to the town and the characters in this book (and the rest of the series).
James Gray is an electrician who gets a mysterious letter in the mail from the town recluse, Sebastian Storm, asking to help to rewire his super creepy house. As soon as James arrives things don't seem quite right and Sebastian is acting kind of weird. Throughout the book we learn that maybe Sebastian isn't as reclusive as everyone thinks he is and that maybe there is more to his haunted house than meets the eye.
I really enjoyed the magic in this book, I liked how it works and how it's explained. I think the author did a really good job of creating a unique, but wholly understandable magical system. And I like how it works in the story.
I liked both characters in this one, though this is told from James' POV because it's his book. I appreciated that it wasn't a dual bi-awakening, that both characters were openly bi right from the start, but that they came to realize how much they had been attracted to each other, even in high school. So, maybe they were each other's bi-awakenings in high school, but that's not what the book is about.
This one ends on a really positive note, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress in book two!
June 20, 2024
James Gray is just trying to have a quiet life. He's content with his job and the people he cares about in his life. Or so he thought. When the mysterious Sebastian Storm reaches out by letter, of all means, to help him fix some problems around his mansion, James suddenly finds himself caring more and more for the eccentric recluse.
But some things about the house and the man just aren't adding up and soon, James is in for way more than he originally thought.
After reading the "Moonlight Falls" novella "The Fall of Elijah Gray" I was really curious about Sebastian and his story. And oh boy, did I not get disappointed. His story and how it pulls James in? Fantastic!! It's kind of hard to write a review without spoiling anything. Just let me say, that I adore James and Sebastian and how their relationship evolved throughout the book. The magical mystery seems far from solved, even if there's a "happy for now" at the end of the book. I can't WAIT to see where Sebastian's and James's story will lead them after that ending!!
If you like caring, sweet characters, a healthy dose of forced proximity, a big, BIG magical mystery and a cow called "Miss Moo", then start your journey to Moonlight Falls on July 7th. The prequel-novella is already out and on KU, if you want to get to know the characters already ☺️
But some things about the house and the man just aren't adding up and soon, James is in for way more than he originally thought.
After reading the "Moonlight Falls" novella "The Fall of Elijah Gray" I was really curious about Sebastian and his story. And oh boy, did I not get disappointed. His story and how it pulls James in? Fantastic!! It's kind of hard to write a review without spoiling anything. Just let me say, that I adore James and Sebastian and how their relationship evolved throughout the book. The magical mystery seems far from solved, even if there's a "happy for now" at the end of the book. I can't WAIT to see where Sebastian's and James's story will lead them after that ending!!
If you like caring, sweet characters, a healthy dose of forced proximity, a big, BIG magical mystery and a cow called "Miss Moo", then start your journey to Moonlight Falls on July 7th. The prequel-novella is already out and on KU, if you want to get to know the characters already ☺️
June 20, 2024
I am loving this series! I’m so excited to see where the rest of James and Sebastian’s story goes! Colette is so good at cresting these magical worlds that have so many moving parts without it being too complicated. This is just the first in a trilogy, so the happy for now makes me nervous!!! But she’s promised a HEA so I’m not too nervous.
Both James and Sebastian had a lot of depth. Sebastian has been alone for years, and finally is getting the help he’s desperately needed AND his growing feelings for James is exciting and so confusing. And James has such a fear of people leaving, and he doesn’t want to get close to anyone because of that. But watching them be forced together (but also LIKE being together at the same time) and facing some of their feelings head on was so interesting especially since reality is a little wonky for now!
And the mystery paranormal elements were fun! The Shades are so odd and we still don’t know a ton about them other than they’re just of pests but also seemingly getting out of hand in town?? So I can’t wait to see where that is still going. And the entire curse and magic related to Sebastian’s home is still very much a mystery, so that will be interesting to see unraveled!
As always thank you so much Colette Rivera for this ARC in exchange for an honest review!
Both James and Sebastian had a lot of depth. Sebastian has been alone for years, and finally is getting the help he’s desperately needed AND his growing feelings for James is exciting and so confusing. And James has such a fear of people leaving, and he doesn’t want to get close to anyone because of that. But watching them be forced together (but also LIKE being together at the same time) and facing some of their feelings head on was so interesting especially since reality is a little wonky for now!
And the mystery paranormal elements were fun! The Shades are so odd and we still don’t know a ton about them other than they’re just of pests but also seemingly getting out of hand in town?? So I can’t wait to see where that is still going. And the entire curse and magic related to Sebastian’s home is still very much a mystery, so that will be interesting to see unraveled!
As always thank you so much Colette Rivera for this ARC in exchange for an honest review!
August 5, 2024
This series was my entry point into Colette Rivera's books, and I don't regret it at all. I read the prequel, The Fall of Elijah Gray, before this one and it definitely piqued my interest for James and Sebastian's story.
I loved James and Sebastian together, because they're both totally different characters, though both have underlying vulnerabilities that they're afraid to show anyone else but each other. Sebastian is brash, sassy, and comes across like he really doesn't give a damn about anything, but deep down he just wants comfort, affection, and for the most part, company. James has a perma-scowl and he's a bit prickly, but he cares so deeply for his family and friends, and has so much anxiety over their wellbeing. He would absolutely take a bullet for any of those he cares about, which is often detrimental to his own wellbeing, but his best feature is absolutely how much he empathises with others.
I loved the magic system and the little world of Moonlight Falls that the author created, and the mystery of Sebastian Storm and the odd happenings around town really intrigued me. I love that this wasn't just about the romance between Sebastian and James, because there's a really good plot that's building and building up to something huge.
I loved James and Sebastian together, because they're both totally different characters, though both have underlying vulnerabilities that they're afraid to show anyone else but each other. Sebastian is brash, sassy, and comes across like he really doesn't give a damn about anything, but deep down he just wants comfort, affection, and for the most part, company. James has a perma-scowl and he's a bit prickly, but he cares so deeply for his family and friends, and has so much anxiety over their wellbeing. He would absolutely take a bullet for any of those he cares about, which is often detrimental to his own wellbeing, but his best feature is absolutely how much he empathises with others.
I loved the magic system and the little world of Moonlight Falls that the author created, and the mystery of Sebastian Storm and the odd happenings around town really intrigued me. I love that this wasn't just about the romance between Sebastian and James, because there's a really good plot that's building and building up to something huge.
September 11, 2024
Rating: ★★★★
Started: 10 September 24
Finished: 11 September 24
POSSIBLE SPOILERS:
Thank you Colette Rivera for gifting me an E-ARC in exchange for an honest review (I actually read this book on KU though because the book has already been released and it was my fault I hadn’t read and reviewed it before then with my ARC)
I loved learning more about Moonlight Falls and all the mysteries that are happening in this small town.
Sebastian is a very eccentric man and I really liked learning more about him and why he is the way he is. I think he and James compliment each other a lot with their personalities and they fit great together.
James learning and growing in such a short space of time worked really well. His fear that he’s grown up with for so long helped you understand why he is the way he is. I’m glad to see that Sebastian helps him come out of his shell a bit more and I can’t wait to read more about these two in the next book!
I also still have questions about the magic going-ons in this town more specifically the shades. Can’t wait to solve this mystery.
Colette’s writing always flows really well and makes for a great read. Can’t wait to the next two books in this series, on to the next now!
All books in the Moonlight Falls series by Colette Rivera are out on KU + paperback now!
Started: 10 September 24
Finished: 11 September 24
POSSIBLE SPOILERS:
Thank you Colette Rivera for gifting me an E-ARC in exchange for an honest review (I actually read this book on KU though because the book has already been released and it was my fault I hadn’t read and reviewed it before then with my ARC)
I loved learning more about Moonlight Falls and all the mysteries that are happening in this small town.
Sebastian is a very eccentric man and I really liked learning more about him and why he is the way he is. I think he and James compliment each other a lot with their personalities and they fit great together.
James learning and growing in such a short space of time worked really well. His fear that he’s grown up with for so long helped you understand why he is the way he is. I’m glad to see that Sebastian helps him come out of his shell a bit more and I can’t wait to read more about these two in the next book!
I also still have questions about the magic going-ons in this town more specifically the shades. Can’t wait to solve this mystery.
Colette’s writing always flows really well and makes for a great read. Can’t wait to the next two books in this series, on to the next now!
All books in the Moonlight Falls series by Colette Rivera are out on KU + paperback now!
July 3, 2024
I read the prequel last month (The fall of Elijah Gray) and I was intrigued to find out more about the creepy town Moonlight Falls and find out more about Jason's love interest (Jason is Elijah's brother).
Jason is a magic electrician who loves Moonlight falls and is happy with the life he has and without getting himself into any serious relationships. However, one day, he receives a letter from Sebastian Storm requesting his services at his big Manor. Jason is intrigued and annoyed by the request and shows up to Sebastian's Manor to help out. However, things are not what it seems and what seemed like a simple job ends up being a whole ordeal that will push these two together and test there new found companionship.
Wow, this book kept me reading because I needed to know what was going on and what would happen with this too! At the very beginning I didn't understand Sebastian and wanted to strangle him. As we go along, we get to know what is going on and get to care for him (along with Jason, who is a grump with a heart of gold).
I ended up really enjoying this book and can't wait to read the next two books in the series to see how things evolve, both between this two and with Moonlight falls.
Read this if you are looking for a romance story with a side of mystery, small and creepy town vibes and closed proximity.
Jason is a magic electrician who loves Moonlight falls and is happy with the life he has and without getting himself into any serious relationships. However, one day, he receives a letter from Sebastian Storm requesting his services at his big Manor. Jason is intrigued and annoyed by the request and shows up to Sebastian's Manor to help out. However, things are not what it seems and what seemed like a simple job ends up being a whole ordeal that will push these two together and test there new found companionship.
Wow, this book kept me reading because I needed to know what was going on and what would happen with this too! At the very beginning I didn't understand Sebastian and wanted to strangle him. As we go along, we get to know what is going on and get to care for him (along with Jason, who is a grump with a heart of gold).
I ended up really enjoying this book and can't wait to read the next two books in the series to see how things evolve, both between this two and with Moonlight falls.
Read this if you are looking for a romance story with a side of mystery, small and creepy town vibes and closed proximity.
July 8, 2024
James Gray is happy working as a magical electrician in Moonlight Falls, a small town known for its supernatural activity. When he receives a letter from Sebastian Storm requesting his help with some electrical problems, he is surprised. It seems Sebastian has inherited the old haunted house and needs his help. Upon arriving, James finds himself facing shade problems and a man seemingly intent on seducing James. The more time he spends there, the more questions he has. Storm House is hiding more secrets than James thought possible.
This is first book in the series Moonlight Falls (There is also a prequel). James tries very hard to help Sebastian but finds himself thwarted in a variety of ways. Sebastian has a habit of being evasive and vague when questioned by James. Feeling there is more than one mystery, he does a great job of thinking outside the box and trying solutions. Sebastian is quirky, the epitome of mysterious, but willing to do whatever James needs. With all this going on, the two men find themselves drawn to each other, but so much is needed before they can act. Exciting, different and filled with mystery, The Seduction of James Gray is sure to be a winner.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book and this is my very own opinion.
This is first book in the series Moonlight Falls (There is also a prequel). James tries very hard to help Sebastian but finds himself thwarted in a variety of ways. Sebastian has a habit of being evasive and vague when questioned by James. Feeling there is more than one mystery, he does a great job of thinking outside the box and trying solutions. Sebastian is quirky, the epitome of mysterious, but willing to do whatever James needs. With all this going on, the two men find themselves drawn to each other, but so much is needed before they can act. Exciting, different and filled with mystery, The Seduction of James Gray is sure to be a winner.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book and this is my very own opinion.
August 15, 2024
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.25 stars
The Seduction of James Gray is the first full-length book in the Moonlight Falls series. The prequel, The Fall of Elijah Gray, introduced us to the town of Moonlight Falls, the Gray family, and some of the magical happenings plaguing the town. James likes his life, although he can be a little lonely, and the letter from Sebastian is exhilarating, annoying, and perplexing. James never understood Sebastian, not that he ever tried as a teen, and his impression of Sebastian is based on teenage notions. When James first arrives at Storm Manor, he knows something is truly off, but Sebastian isn’t speaking and, while James finds himself infuriated with Sebastian most of the time, he also feels completely drawn to him.
This series has a storyline that will continue throughout all of the books. The men will get their full HEA at the end and this book definitely concludes with a “to be continued” situation and there is a lot more for the men to unravel and possibly battle.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
4.25 stars
The Seduction of James Gray is the first full-length book in the Moonlight Falls series. The prequel, The Fall of Elijah Gray, introduced us to the town of Moonlight Falls, the Gray family, and some of the magical happenings plaguing the town. James likes his life, although he can be a little lonely, and the letter from Sebastian is exhilarating, annoying, and perplexing. James never understood Sebastian, not that he ever tried as a teen, and his impression of Sebastian is based on teenage notions. When James first arrives at Storm Manor, he knows something is truly off, but Sebastian isn’t speaking and, while James finds himself infuriated with Sebastian most of the time, he also feels completely drawn to him.
This series has a storyline that will continue throughout all of the books. The men will get their full HEA at the end and this book definitely concludes with a “to be continued” situation and there is a lot more for the men to unravel and possibly battle.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
September 1, 2024
This sounded like it had promise in the character of Sebastian, but the character fell flat towards the end.
The first part of the book (according to my Kindle notes, more than 40% into the book) has Sebastian acting either creepy or extremely annoying, or some perverse combination of both. There is indeed a rationale for this, but it took too long for that to be revealed - way too long. I would have throttled the guy long before that. 🙄
Unfortunately, Sebastian didn't improve a whole lot even after we found out what was going on. He could still be extremely annoying. I'm just not sure what his deal is with regards to having an actual relationship with James. I would have thought we'd have proof of some real attachment by book's end (note: I know it ends with HFN vs HEA, but still . . . ) but he still feels like a cipher - a sometimes extremely annoying cipher at that. I was really hoping he'd be more of a silky, luscious, femme type, but he's really not (dang it).
I will be reading the next book to see how the story advances and see if Sebastian grows on me (fingers crossed). I also find the whole deal with the Shades quite interesting and would like to know more about them.
The first part of the book (according to my Kindle notes, more than 40% into the book) has Sebastian acting either creepy or extremely annoying, or some perverse combination of both. There is indeed a rationale for this, but it took too long for that to be revealed - way too long. I would have throttled the guy long before that. 🙄
Unfortunately, Sebastian didn't improve a whole lot even after we found out what was going on. He could still be extremely annoying. I'm just not sure what his deal is with regards to having an actual relationship with James. I would have thought we'd have proof of some real attachment by book's end (note: I know it ends with HFN vs HEA, but still . . . ) but he still feels like a cipher - a sometimes extremely annoying cipher at that. I was really hoping he'd be more of a silky, luscious, femme type, but he's really not (dang it).
I will be reading the next book to see how the story advances and see if Sebastian grows on me (fingers crossed). I also find the whole deal with the Shades quite interesting and would like to know more about them.
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