“First Strike” by Stephen Leather (2024)
Overall Rating – Struck out (See Below)
Plot
Set from the onset of the Palestinian attack against Israel on the 7th October 2023, the story follows the tribulations of an M15 analyst who was at the music festival with his two daughters when Hamas attacked. He witnesses one daughter shot and the other stripped, raped then murdered. After he returns to the UK, he goes rogue in revenge – can Dan “Spider” Shepherd track him down before he exacts his revenge?
Writing Style
Very modern, Easy, flowing sentences. Detailed prose but no excessive flowering. Very easy to watch the “movie” unfold in your mind’s eye as you read.
Point of View/Voice
Written in the 3rd Person / Past Tense (standard convention)
Critique
So, a number of immediate observations;
Firstly, the book has been self-published and is not produced by Leather’s publishers, “Hodder & Stoughton”.
Secondly, it is riddled with typographical errors.
Thirdly, it is only available in paperback.
And, lastly, he has used the Hamas attack on the Israelis as the entire story for his plot (with a fictional rogue M15 agent seeking retribution – well, I assume that aspect was fictional because everything else appeared to be precisely what actually happened).
The author’s decision to write this story is (very obviously) divisive. Imagine that a noted actor might stand on a podium and spew forth their political views (you don’t have to imagine it; many do it all the time). The same actor always expects you to agree with their political views, often spitting some vitriol out against those who might not. In their mind, it seems to appear to them that, because they are a noted celebrity, they somehow know more about politics than “you” or “me” and that we should be grateful to them for their voice. Of course, when an actor does this, they immediately divide their fan base into folk who agree with them and folk who do not. What the actor fails to see (and I find this remarkable) is that they can only stand to LOSE fans (and therefore their kudos with production companies). I am afraid that Stephen Leather has done precisely the same thing with this book.
I looked at his Wikipedia page for information to discover what was going on (ie. why he has self-published) and also to discover his political/religious views – but, sadly, there was nothing there. However, I also visited his website, and there I read that (his words) Hodder & Stoughton had declined to publish the book because they thought it would offend some people. Perhaps his publishers knew that they could only be damaged by appearing to take one side over the other?
I do like Dan “Spider” Shepherd, and I hope the author has not become a Pariah.
... It did have a brilliant (unexpected) ending though ...