King Dagobert, ca 603- 639, was a good Frank. He would have wanted a German to have his scepter.¹
I think this should have a prologe. The POV of the last King of the Merovingians as he sees the goldsmith's work.¹
The Plot. I can find no fault with the Author's imagination. French Anti-Revolutionaries take the Scepter of Dagobert to the hintermost corner of the New World to keep it safe. In our time, people want it. How do they do this? With difficulties. With a lot of difficulties. I just wish that the Author's inspiration had been different, because History². It rubs me the wrong way. Suspend your disbelief, and hold on thight, or you might drop it.
The Characters.
Oh dear...
Do you remember Mad Magazine? Spy vs Spy? This is Spy vs Spy vs Spy vs Spy...
Everyone is unique. Doesn't do what you think that they will. Has secrets. Even the walk-on parts. Everyone feels grown-up.
The Telling. The Author's way of writing takes a while to get used to. It is very precise, with a few odd words and phrases, and in the French parts, it gets histrionic, probably to feel historical.
SPOILERS AND NOTES
¹ We only read about France, but at the time of Dagobert, it was the Kingdom of the Franks. They were West Germanics, and spoke a Germanic language. I kept waiting for Germans who want to resurrect Das Heilige Römerishe Reich Deutscher Nation, but nope.
² The Author obviously loves art, and was inspired by a painting by David, The Anger of Achilles. Only. The Illiad is also known as The Song about the Wrath of Achilles. Achilles was in a snit because he had to give up his sex slave, Briseis to Agamemnon. The Illiad covers the last ten days of the Trojan War. The story about Ifigenia takes place ten years earlier. Agamemnon sacrifices his daughter Ifigenia for good wind, having lured her with a promise that she is going to get married to Achilles. He wasn't there, he was busy with his lover Patrokles... The Author must know this, but still uses the euphemistic painting. The Revolutionaires weren't happy with gay love. Just like Hollywood.
In case you don't know. Ifigenia's mother, Klytaminestra, murders Agamemnon when he comes home from the war.
³ Yellowstone and the French Revolution. It's possible that French trappeurs had been to Yellowstone. But had they written home about in enough detail for the Royalists to come up with the scatty idea of hiding Dagobert's Scepter there? Well. Maybe. It did disappear during the Revolution.
Canadian spies? Come on.
Conspiscious by their absence. The English. I kept waiting for them to show up too. Azincourt and all that...
I recommend this. You will keep guessing, and you will guess wrong.
Just because I can. Devil take the French Revolutionaires, and especially that hypocrit Napoleon. He probably did. The French go on forever about it, but in history books in a thousand years it will just be a blip. Among other blips.