•Arman not bashing everyone’s heads together (at least not without him) •Getting the fortress built before the Mongs attack (not at the rate they’re going with all the thefts happening) •Going home without incident (also, again, not likely)
What it did not include was:
•Social reform •A child •A raiding party •Arman actually using his words
Life once again proved reality is better than fantasy, and Ren couldn’t be happier.
Except for the Mongs. He could do without the Mongs.
Tags: Homecoming, Arman actually uses his words, it’s a miracle, children, homophobic idiots, supportive brother, surprise visits from royalty, Ren would like to point out this was not his idea, words are hard, if you have to build a fortress do it right the first time, Arman promises to not beat the whole country to a pulp for scorning his marriage, maybe, no promises, parenting is hard, someone should have warned Arman, raiding parties are their jam, O’ Broín is a good bro, matchmaking, social change, Arman sucks at giving hints, absolutely no one is surprised by this, fantasy becomes reality
AJ Sherwood believes in happily ever afters, magic, dragons, good men, and dark chocolate. She often dreams at night of delectable men doing sexy things with each other. In between writing multiple books (often at the same time) she pets her cats, plays with her dogs, and attempts insane things like aerial yoga.
She currently resides in Tennessee with aforementioned cats, dogs, and her editor/best friend/sister/partner in crime.
Went more like the first book, burst of action and intriguing plot and then the next chapter is so dull you wonder if you're reading two different books.
I am not sure what to say. I didn’t dislike this book but it really wasn’t doing much for me either.
It took quite a bit of time for the story to pick up and when it did it, didn’t stay that way for long. Which was truly a shame — I would have loved a repeat of book one. But the thefts weren’t at all the focus of the plot and the romance wasn’t romancing either.
I really don’t know how to feel about this. But again, it wasn’t total shit either. There were some beautiful moments in here which is why three stars seems appropriate.
This story was good in many ways. In others it delved more than a little close to the awful "they all look alike to me" tropes of racism. It went from sweet to straight up cringe in .03 seconds flat once a certain event took place. The last several chapters become uncomfortable to read. I wholly approved of many of the laws being changed. And how many embraced opening their own personal horizons. But the constant commentary on how the one looked like their new parent just read wrong. It may not have been intended that way but it was how it came across. And this book needs trigger warnings for prostitution and enforced prostitution due to circumstances of birth. Worse, of children pressed into prostitution due to lack of options due to circumstances of birth. And that was a law that wasn't mentioned as having been changed. So this book went from feeling the love and frustrations of our focus couple on their deployment to horror and disgust, and then the running commentary of cringe and then to despair that knowing 1 child might be saved but too many others won't. Adoptions might be increasing but no one mentioned that stigma being changed. The next book in the series will focus on a known character from these 2 books. And while I'm curious to see how it goes I'm also a bit dreading to read it. This series mentions triggers that touch on topics that remind me certain parts of my past that I don't like to remember. That trigger nightmares for me. And refuses to give warnings about such. The other series don't delve such topics and it wasn't even a thought until bam, there it was on the page. Readers deserve respect to be able to avoid certain topics for their own well-being. Please post trigger on for sensitive topics.
It's been almost two years since I read the first book in this fantasy-romance series and whilst I still liked the plot and characters - I do feel there's been a distinct shift away from fantasy toward romance in this second book of the series. In fact, this is extra-light/diet fantasy; moreover the setting could be classed as historical-romance (set back a century or two) whereby Ren and Arman visits pre-industrial Japan from their now Germanic-European home/base.
The other factor that kept disrupting my reading/attention flow is the language used by the MCs (Ren more than Arman since the latter retains his tendency to use as little words in communication as possible). Examples of this include "same sex couples to marry", "pretty amazing kid", "Do no harm but take no shit" and "just icing on the cake" ... vernacular that I had some difficulty incorporating into a non-steampunk or alt-historical fantasy world setting.
I enjoyed the introduction of the Saku character but do struggled with the MCs' casual acceptance of having a child engage enemy agents in armed combat and even worse - actively encouraging her to physical attack others (on the grounds of supposedly justifiable provocation). So much for setting a higher bar for restraint and tolerance. This volume appears to conclude having Ren and Arman as MCs with the next book featuring secondary character O'Broin (Gaelic/Scottish type) which I'm likely not to be continuing/following. 2.5 stars rounded up to 3 overall; I really hated the author's Unholy Trifecta books and this series appears to be heading toward that direction.
I am all in with series. Ren and Arman take things to the next level...SO WORTH IT! It's great seeing how the world shifts with knowledge and awakening. I loved the Empress . Alexandria and Rosalind and the Queen return in this installment. YAY!
My questions might include SPOILERS....read at your own risk
I'm so curious about: •How Sakura grows up to be a leader in her own right/how she comes into her own...I think she will be strong and compassionate with epic character •What happens with O'Broin and Keller-either their paths align and/or they become great friends •Robert....
I adore 4th Pt.of Contact, so I knew I would love this sequel. Revisiting Ren and Arman was thoroughly satiating. Highly recommend this series. These guys are beautiful and their stories are interesting adventures.
The good + Arman. He's so adorable + Ren. I love how he is unapologetically himself all the time + The first time Saku fed Arman. My heart just melted. And Arman sharing food right back. So adorable + Arman's soft heart + The men being in a homophobic country, and instead of the focus being on the homophobia, the focus lying on the changes they brought on + All their friends coming to their aid. I love how they could get through this with people they trusted, instead of having to work with foreigners who resented them and they couldn't really trust + + The queen claiming as her new Warden for the future when Ren retires + Ren punching that asshole in the face + Arman using his words + People's surpise at Arman using his words + + + Both fathers fully supporting their child, even though they're scared shitless a lot of the time + + Ren and Arman's happily ever after
The neutral o There were a few more people whose heads deserved to be bashed by Arman (), but I understand the way this was dealt with in the book
The bad - I was really confused by how much time passed. I could have used a few more hints to how far into their planned year they were every now and then
I would definitely recommend this book and Fourth Point of Contact. They're just awesome. This book was even better than the first.
Zone of Action is the sequel to Arman and Ren's storyarc in Legends of Lobe den Herren series and the end of their story. HEA. MM Romance. Fantasy, Historical, Military. Best friends to lovers.
Multiple POV, 3rd person, past tense. This kindle edition 306 pages, 11th June 2021.
The next book in the series will have other main characters and at least one we got to know in here.
This story was a good read and especially great to read right after the first book. It's after-HEA, so it's not that exciting as the first one. Still it's a good read that I thoroughly enjoyed going through at one sitting style. It's as well written and only adds more to Armin and Ren's story. If I have to dig for anything negative it's that this sequel's story in certain things was overoptimistic and unrealistic as anyone reading it surely sees, but it's a lot about if wishes were horses and things only were that easy, as they ought to. If only wishes were horses ...
If you loved reading the first story, you should love reading this one too. I did. Looking forward to the next one.
The truth is I did love this story. My only complaint is that it's a little too perfect. It's a fantasy world so epic change can happen quickly, but things felt just a little too easy at times for Ren and Arman. At the same time, I do just love these two guys. And they were absolutely adorable as they fell for little Sakura. I loved seeing both men just bowled over by the little spitfire. She was such fun. This was a lovely continuation of the love that Ren and Arman found in the first story.
This story really is just the optimal case that people would hope for challenging the status quo. People weren't comfortable, but change was coming and those in power were determined to see it through. Don't we all wish we had leaders determined to do the best for all of their people.
I am looking forward to seeing this series continue. I love these characters and it's a beautifully rich world.
The first book in this set did not necessarily require a follow-up, but I thoroughly enjoyed revisiting these characters and this world. However, the world narrows a bit in this installment, with the focus on Ren’s homeland and its culture. It is directly evocative of Japan, but I am not familiar enough with the country to determine where Sherwood’s fictional interpretation falls on the spectrum from accurate to idealized to stereotypical.
I was invested in how Sherwood tackles the subjects of bias and discrimination in this series, even if the results are much easier and more simplistic than is often the case in reality. But this isn’t reality, so we’re also allowed to celebrate successes with our heroes. Ren and Arman are true heroes in every sense of the word, and we get a better look at their military experience and how well they work together (outside of their romance) in this story. The external conflict features an excellent blend of military and political shenanigans, especially the tangles of bureaucracy and “hurry up and wait” punctuated by moments of excitement and danger.
The internal conflict of Ren and Arman’s relationship arc in this book is more subtle. Their love is never in question. However, the theme of this book is family, and I loved seeing how this particular pairing embraces multiple variations of that subject. I’m ridiculously picky about child characters in my romance books, but Saku even won me over in the end.
This novel is worth reading if you enjoyed the first book. I always enjoy Sherwood’s light narrative style and characters who effortlessly blend humor and depth.
I never leave actual reviews, but had to for this book (as well as the first in the series) Ren and Arman are my perfect sort of pairing and their military prowess and exploits reminded me sharply of Revolution’s Bass & Miles. Since they are my OTP, that made reading both of the Legends of Lobe den Herron a true delight. I probably was picturing Bass & Miles in my head rater than the descriptions of Ren & Arman, but I loved the way Sherwood blended culture and geopolitics into both the recognizable and novel - it could *almost* be set on Earth as we know it - you can identify most representative cultures, but it’s still an entirely new world without our actual history. The admittedly somewhat anachronistic awareness of LGBTQ+ issues to the point of requesting pronouns for at least one character was woven so well into the story that you ceased being surprised at their inclusion. I’m hopeful there will be more books to branch out to othe characters and keep p,saying in this world - I’m curious about several characters’ hunts for husbands and how that might develop with what awakenings of fluidity in sexuality. In short, these 2 books hit all my trope buttons and I have already recommended them to several friends.
I've been waiting for some time for this book to be released, and it did not disappoint. Ren and Arman set out for Ren's country of birth, where their marriage will not be accepted. They have an important job to do, so they don't let prejudice stop them. Along the way they change the attitudes of the people, by courage and sheer bullheadedness.
The characters and their relationships are why I love these books. Ren and Arman shine together, each with their own strengths and frailties. I enjoy the other characters around them, and I particularly like how the female characters are written. They have depth and strength. I find that lacking in many other gay romances.
I recommend this book to any reader that enjoys reading about solid relationships. It helps that it humorous, too. I do love Arman being puzzled over communication.
AJ Sherwood does it again! I loved this book as much as the first one. Armon and Ren are truly a blessing to read and Sakura, WOW! Such a perfect fit for both men. So happy to have so many returning characters to! I love the way AJ Sherwood not only weaves a truly heart warming story and well built characters, but how she addresses and handles social injustices and old out dated thinking is truly magical. I'm sad this is the end of Ren and Armons story as I feel there is so many more adventures they still have in them. But I am excited for O`Briens story and do hope all the same characters we've come to love make appearances in the next book. I highly recommend reading these stories!
I enjoy all of Ms. Sherwoods books but when I stumbled on the first Legends story I found my favorite and as much as I enjoyed any subsequent books it remained my favorite. When I saw that she was writing a sequel, I was beyond excited. Not only do Ren and Arman continue there amazing journey but we get to hear from others that played an important part in it. Plus we are introduced to new characters that we know will be important right away and some that I believe will come into play in the next book. Let's just hope it doesn't take as long for the next one. Pretty please?!
"Is she your secret love child?" *Queen slaps Princess over the head*
This sequel was everything I needed right now and well worth the wait. It was amazing. Funny, and witty banter. Outrageous scenarios. And heartfelt love between people. We get so much for Ren and Arman in this story. We get to see them interact in a new environment. We get new characters to fall for. And we get the adorebleness that is Sakura. This child character has definitely become a favorite. I'm sad this is it for Arman and Ren's story but I'm excited to learn more about O' Broín. I highly recommend reading this series!
Don't let Ren's angst-fest in the first couple of chapters deter you from reading the whole story. Our story picks up right after the end of the first book and takes place almost entirely in Ren's birth country. Many support characters make a return appearance and I just loved Sakura. Although it would be a departure from the main theme, I would love a side story about the adventures of Sakura and Princess Roslyn. (I bet they'd run poor Ren ragged.) I have no hesitation recommending this tale to anyone who enjoys this author and for those in the mood for a light, playful read.
I LOVE THIS STORY!! 2 books about Ren and Arman - they are fun and oh, so sexy MC's and so very, very perfect for each other. The world the author has created is unique and fascinating and the storylines flowed throughout each book with keeping me riveted, turning the page and just not wanting to put the book down. Full of entertaining and fascinating secondary characters that really enhance the stories. The first book had it's HEA but the 2nd book just gives you MORE.
And, there will be a 3rd book about O'Brion who deserves his own HEA (and I'm definitely hoping for appearances from Ren & Arman!!).
Can't wait to delve back into this fascinating world :-)
Yay! More of Arman and Ren! I adored the original story Fourth Point of Contact and was thrilled to get another book. These two are adorable together and oh… all the feels when Ren goes back to his homeland to build a fortress at Mizuno Harbor. Only these two would cause such reform and change in a foreign country, as well as adopt a mini-Ren in the process. I LOVED this book and can’t wait for the audio. I look forward to O’Broin’s story too but I will miss these two lunatics.
If I could give this book more than 5 stars, I would do it in a heartbeat. I cannot accurately express how much I love this series and Ren and Arman in general. These two will have you sitting there with a silly smile on your face while reading their banter. One of my favorite things about this book was seeing Arman be more vocal. There is never a moment throughout and I lost almost an entire night’s sleep because I just had to read one more chapter. If you liked the first book at all, do yourself a favor and snatch this one right up.
Ren and Arman are my favorite! I love Fourth Point of Contact and was so happy when I found out another book was coming! This time Ren and Arman are in Ren’s native country. I liked that Ren got to see his brother and family, and that old and new friends showed up. I especially loved see how their family grew and that one seemingly little personal thing changed a several countries. So worth the wait and it’s going on my list of favorites and comfort reads.
I've been waiting for what seems like forever for this sequel, it was cruel to leave us hanging with that teaser at the end of Fourth Point of Contact for so long! But thankfully it was worth the wait. This was a great read and lovely story of hope, love, and change that reminds us that love and leading by example really do make a difference even if we don't always know it at the time.
Such a great continuation and if only these issues could almost be fixed in a year, although the prejudice against a certain career is a little harsh as it has many layers and is a definite required service; but I'm so glad this author loves a happy ending as it could have gone wrong in so many ways - also good at tying up loose ends but as it's #2 I have hope this is at least a trilogy aesthetes so much more adventures to look forward to with these characters
I loved this. Though, to be honest, not as much as the first one. I was hoping to have a lot more of their relationship but this is pretty much a kidfic, with the occasional sex scene thrown in when the mc's get some alone time. A great story, would recommend, just a bit sad that it went the way of acquiring kids right after they got together. But that is a me thing and not anything wrong with the story.
Zone of Action concludes the fantastic story of the evolving relationship between Shiirei General Sho Renjimantoro (now Aart Warder Ren Brahms) and Aart General Arman Brahms.
The story opens with the epilogue from Fourth Point of Contact, which has the men already married, and getting ready for a big wedding celebration at Fort Brahms with family and friends. Until an urgent call comes from the King with another message from the Emperor of Shiirei.
That sees both Ren and Arman sailing back to Ren’s homeland on a mission of international security , one that has both stressed over the threats for war and those of a personal one, as same sex relationships aren’t culturally tolerated within the Shiirei nation.
Sherwood moving the narrative out of the tolerant society of Aart back to the intolerant world of Shiirei adds a great deal of new tension to the storytelling. It sharpens the sense of potential danger for the characters in even the most mundane situations to the benefit of the novel.
Not that there’s many of those. It’s a constant struggle to rebuild a fortress under siege by, at first, an unknown number of enemies who are deliberately targeted the them in their efforts to build.
A number of various countries/kingdoms are involved with this conflict as they don’t want a return to the war they fought. Many of the “countries” Sherwood has created have recognizable counterparts in real life nations today. Whether it’s by names, cultural elements, clothing���I’m sure some of not all will be guessing if it’s a composite or something similar. Either way, I found it a wonderful way to ground each nation in the various characters and cultures.
The POVs have expanded from two to three characters as well. For me, I was divided by this aspect of the story format.
First, I love these characters. All three. The interaction between them was heartwarming and added so much depth to each personally as well as to the whole relationship between the men and then them as a family. Seeing it from each person’s perspective was important for the situation and what it represents for them as a couple. And for this child. So for that reason, yes, I did like the idea and decision to have a 3-person narrative.
However, for me it also took away from the whole storyline. There was so many scenes that were a bit “off page” as far as activity because there just wasn’t enough time to cover it all.
The child herself , Sakura , had a great backstory, and, frankly, frightening current situation that as a reader we were never able to get a good grasp of. All we ever saw or heard of her was when he/she appeared before Arman or Ren. What happened to her in between those occasions was a complete mystery. That’s a shame because when her history becomes known, the tragedy of her life is a narrative goldmine that’s been left behind.
I did love her character, and her interactions with her new family, especially Arman. She’s a gem who had more potential than the length allowed.
The story goes through the events, seeing them through the eyes of each character, which considering we are talking over a year, is sped up considerably. For me it feels just too shortened.
There’s high drama, some political issues and politics that make international relations seem more like modern times than the age reflected by the world there. And , being a tad nit picky, some modern phrases that occasionally sound out of place than in a world where horses and sails are the mainstays of transportation.
But did I love it? Yes, Ren, Arman, and Sakura are a hard family to resist. I adored them going home and the welcome they received.
This wraps up the story for Ren and Arman. Although I can always hope we see them again in the next couple of books to come. That’s O' Broin’s journey to love and marriage. He’s from another country that came to help Ren and Arman.
It should be quite a tale. I can’t wait. Until then, I’m highly recommending both the novels below, including this one. Read them in the order they were written.
Legends of Lobe den Herren : - [x] Fourth Point of Contact: The Warden and the General #1 - [x] Zone of Action #2
I was fine with an open end of the first book, it didn’t technically need a second. But I’m very glad to report the second complemented the adventures and didn’t detract or read as a dilution of the charm of the first.
The only thing I didn’t like about the book is much the same as the quibble I had with first. The world building is too narrow. There is one gay guy in the country? Nope. Not buying it. And we never ever even touch on lesbian women? To be honest, very few women play a role in the book at all. And you are telling me that soldiers stationed in a foreign country FOR YEARS don’t get friendly with the locals or prostitutes and produce babies? I’m not sure what fantasy cloud the author is from, but it’s not entirely realistic.
It is best to take the story from a set of very narrow viewpoints. The two main characters are sharing a diary of their specific adventures, and they are unaware of pretty much all else. While they have an inordinate effect on world events. ..
Anyway, it’s a charming romp and I’d like to see what else the author writes.
On the whole, I’m still a fan of Ren and Arman, so they carried the book for me. I was initially glad O’Broin was brought back into the story, as I enjoyed his character in the first book. But that was about all that worked for me.
There were so many aspects of this story that fell flat.
First, the whole element of social change throughout multiple countries didn’t seem realistic for the world the author created. It was also frustrating how frequently Arman’s country was framed as progressive. Their idea of progressive is to just believe that gay people don’t exist?
The idea that the invading country was constantly threatening to invade by sea for two years but were so far from having their ships built made no sense.
I also couldn’t believe for a moment that the Queen and princesses from Arman’s country would join the empress in an imminent war zone to discuss cultural exchange programs. It was so many pages that just didn’t make any sense.
When it became clear that O’Broin was coming back into the story I had hoped the author would find a way to pair him with someone like Keller. However, O’Broin’s motivation of finding a man to marry and then friend-zoning that spouse was all kinds of selfish BS. I regret having thought I would have liked the author to pair them when this was the mechanism she planned to use as a prelude to their “relationship”.
The whole adoption situation was mixed for me. On one hand, it was great that Sakura found a home, even if she was exhausting to read about. However, the fact that the other orphans (who were essentially indentured servants) were dismissed so easily as being valueless because they didn’t as work hard as they perceived Sakura to have worked just made me frustrated at the main characters’ views on “merit.”
All of that having been said, I think this is a creative author who created an interesting world and a solid main couple. This particular book just wasn’t a hit for me.
Adorable!!! If you want a story of two generals falling in love, being in love and adorable together this is it! Amazing side characters! Funny, well crafted dialogues, humour and light plot with enough mystery to keep the plot going. It's a heartwarming read, nothing too angsty filled with joyful moments I love when my gays not suffer for 90% of the book only to get an epilogue with love. This duology wormed my heart especially every time when main character was worried about this or that, partner's family's acceptance etc but situations were solved lovely. It's good to show that people can learn understanding based on occasion too. I love the representation of that without any major drama, or cookie points. I don't know if I'm explaining well what I mean but anyway, loved this. My heart was full of love and I was smiling the whole time .
As predicted, I enjoyed this sequel significantly less than Fourth Point of Contact. Arman and Ren didn't face any major roadblocks in their relationship, personally or socially, and the addition of Sakura to their family felt rushed and lacked emotional payoff. Being openly together in a country that doesn't look well upon that, I thought there would be more backlash from the government and those in power above them. Instead, the Empress was able to make gay marriage legal and lift the employment restrictions imposed upon gay people, with little to no effort shown to the reader. Even the Mongs' sabotage of the new fort was resolved without issue.
There was no tension to the plot or the characters' relationships, and I ended up skimming quite a bit because of how bored and emotionally unengaged I was, which is rare for me.
Unfortunately, the complete 180 my feelings took from the first book to this one discourages me from reading Starfire, so my journey with the series ends here.