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Leo Doyle and his younger sister Ginny are being raised in Ohio by their father after their mother's death. The mother had been a teacher and had benefits, but the father is a carpenter who does not always get enough work, so the family is struggling. Leo plays for a YMCA soccer team, and when his coach has the team play the Columbus Tigers, a scout approaches Mr. Doyle about Leo's prospects. He's from the London Dragons, and offers Leo a spot at their summer training camp. There will be about ten players out of 200 who will be chosen to attend the regular academy and be groomed to be Dragon players. Hearing that $50,000 is involved if he can get into the academy, Leo wants to go in order to help his family. His aunt agrees to pay for his airline ticket, but he must go alone. Leaving behind his friends and video games, Leo heads for London, meeting an older player, Tig, on the plane. Tig has some good advice on avoiding jet lag that Leo ignores. He takes a huge nap, then eats a lot of junk food and stays up until 4 a.m. playing video games before the initial skill assessments! His roommate, Robbie, is very intense, and is surprised that Leo hasn't been on a premier or travel team or had private coaching. Other players make fun of Leo's Cincinnati FC jersey, and he runs a foul of a bully, Brock. The coach, Zepeda, is not only looking for skill, but also character, dedication, and teamwork. Leo struggles with many aspects of camp; he's uncomfortable when they switch his positions, he'd rather play video games than do extra practice, and he maintains that he plays better after a coke and a candy bar! His coach at the camp, Samantha, thinks that he has some raw talent, but needs help. Since she is dating Tig, the two set up extra practices for Leo and another player, Garika, who is from Zimbabwe. Leo tries half heartedly to practice, but is frequently late, and even gets into fights with Brock, which Coach Zapeda and the camp director do NOT like. When Samantha and Tig break up, the extra sessions stop. Leo manages to make it through various cuts to play on the "World Cup" team, but even though his team wins the game and he has several spectacular plays, he is not accepted to the full time training program. When he returns home, however, there is a surprise that leads to book two.
Strengths: Attending a soccer camp in London? Where there is all the pizza you can eat? Meeting famous coaches and players? Getting a duffle of London Dragons clothing? This is wish fulfillment at its finest for young soccer players who really think that they will beat the odds and be able to make a career out of playing soccer. Leo is a lackadaisical Every Kid who would rather play video games than see London, has no clue about nutrition, and doesn't practice all that hard, yet still gets a lot of amazing breaks. There are lots of diverse characters, descriptions of plays and games, and plenty of hanging out during the special activities the school plans, eating pizza. Since I could paste a soccer ball on an old fashioned phone book, and some of my students would probably check it out, I will buy a copy of the first book.
Weaknesses: This was over 300 pages long, and I'm not sure how this will go over with my students who struggle to work their way through Jake Maddox or Fred Bowen books. It's great to see that this is a series, but if all the books are this long, it will be a hard sell. This needed a lot more editing. I'd be curious to see how this edition compares with the self published one. I would have preferred to see Leo mature as a character (and perhaps learn a little about nutrition!) than seeing him fighting with Brock or texting his friends back home.
What I really think: While I will buy the first book, I'm going to hold off on the second until I see how the first is received. I wish this were more like Fabbri's Back of the Net series, which my students devour. That series of six books has illustrations, and the books are just over 100 pages.