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The Empty Couple: A Thriller
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"The Empty Couple" showcases how an unhealthy relationship can destroy people's lives. It's a page-turner that will have you guessing what happens until the end.
Embark on Ruth's harrowing journey through a collection of evocative poems. When her boyfriend, Michael, loses his job, an unsettling transformation begins. His aggression and violence shatter the normalcy Ruth craves. Police intervention urges separation, leading Ruth to find solace in her coworker, Ashley. As their bond deepens, Ruth unveils the truth through poetic revelations, forging a powerful female friendship.
Arriving at Ruth's vandalized home, Ashley urges police involvement, but Ruth opts to confront Michael alone. Inside their bedroom, suspense lingers. What unfolds next? Will remorse prevail, or will violence persist? Can Ruth break free?
Just when Ruth thinks she has escaped the nightmare, an unexpected revelation turns her world upside down again.
Dive into this poetic psychological thriller and experience a compelling tale of resilience and courage.
"The Empty Couple" showcases how an unhealthy relationship can destroy people's lives. It's a page-turner that will have you guessing what happens until the end.
Embark on Ruth's harrowing journey through a collection of evocative poems. When her boyfriend, Michael, loses his job, an unsettling transformation begins. His aggression and violence shatter the normalcy Ruth craves. Police intervention urges separation, leading Ruth to find solace in her coworker, Ashley. As their bond deepens, Ruth unveils the truth through poetic revelations, forging a powerful female friendship.
Arriving at Ruth's vandalized home, Ashley urges police involvement, but Ruth opts to confront Michael alone. Inside their bedroom, suspense lingers. What unfolds next? Will remorse prevail, or will violence persist? Can Ruth break free?
Just when Ruth thinks she has escaped the nightmare, an unexpected revelation turns her world upside down again.
Dive into this poetic psychological thriller and experience a compelling tale of resilience and courage.
110 pages, Paperback
Published March 31, 2021
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Oneal Walters
3 books8 followersOneal Walters is the Canadian author behind The Empty Couple, a psychological thriller in verse that reached #1 on Amazon in the Domestic Relations category. His work blends domestic suspense with the precision of verse, centering coercive control, survival, and the cost of love. Based in Toronto, Walters holds a BA in Film Studies (York University) and a Communications Certificate (George Brown College). He has published three books in verse, Frozen Stare, The Age Begins, and The Empty Couple) and shares new series and a monthly short story in The Blue Snowsuit newsletter.
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September 15, 2025
“Why should I need to be with a man who hurts me?" -Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
Review of The Empty Couple by Oneal Walters, a literary thriller.
I’ll start by saying this: I don’t usually pick up thrillers written in verse. It’s not that I don’t like poetry, but my shelves are mostly stacked with romance, dystopia, a few family dramas, and the odd nonfiction title. But The Empty Couple by Oneal Walters pulled me in from the first page and did not let me go. It’s one of those books that’s heavy and heartbreaking but also strangely beautiful, the kind of story that hurts while you’re reading it but stays with you in a way that feels important.
“You turned your back on a kneeling woman. - Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
The story centres on Ruth, a woman who seems to have everything in order on the outside: she’s smart, hardworking, respected at her job. But behind closed doors she’s living a different reality, one where her partner Michael controls her through anger, alcohol, and intimidation. What Walters does so brilliantly is capture not just the “what” of abuse, but the how it feels from the inside. You get fragments, prayers, half-thoughts, moments of denial and moments of clarity. It feels messy, because Ruth’s life is messy. And that’s why it works.
Michael is not written as some cartoon villain. He’s a sad figure in some ways: jobless, insecure, full of excuses but also terrifying in others. The way he smashes plates, shouts over nothing, or destroys something precious like Ruth’s Bible, shows how his need for control infects every corner of their life. He’s a man who should’ve been building something, maybe even once had potential, but instead he’s spiralled into bitterness.
What makes him so chilling is that you probably know someone like him. Walters makes him real, and that’s what makes the threat he represents feel so present.
SPOILERS
But this isn’t just Ruth and Michael’s story. There’s Ashley, Ruth’s co-worker, who to me became the heartbeat of the book. Ashley is young, confident, successful, and self-assured. She doesn’t play games with men, she knows her worth, and she brings that perspective into Ruth’s life like fresh air in a suffocating house. At first, she seems like a side character, almost comic relief with her souvenirs and chatty presence. But as the story goes on, she becomes the counter-balance to Michael: while he breaks Ruth down, Ashley builds her up. She literally gives Ruth the tools to fight back, both financially with that big check and physically with the self-defense lessons. It’s one of the things I loved most about the book, the way women’s solidarity is shown as life-saving. Women supporting women is rare to find in many of the romance books, my to-go genre. Why do I have to search in other genres to find this kind of solidarity?
And then there’s Kevin Christian, Ruth’s boss. He’s a fascinating character because he’s not abusive like Michael, but he’s not entirely uncomplicated either. He recognizes Ruth’s talent, praises her, promotes her, and in a lot of ways provides the validation she isn’t getting at home. But Walters writes him with a subtle edge, you can feel his authority in the background, the way compliments about her beauty slip in beside professional praise. For me, Kevin represented that complicated middle ground: men who aren’t “bad guys” but still benefit from having power over women’s lives. It added nuance, because abuse doesn’t just exist in isolation, it’s shaped by all the power dynamics around it.
“I’ve fought enough, can’t fight anymore. - Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
One of the things that makes The Empty Couple stand out is the symbolism woven through it. Walters uses objects as recurring markers of Ruth’s world. The beer glass with the maple leaf isn’t just something Michael drinks from, it becomes a symbol of his addiction, his control, and the way he clings to a hollow identity. The Bible is another big one: torn, desecrated, almost lost, but always present. Just like Ruth’s spirit, it gets battered but never completely disappears. There are the broken plates, the smashed glass, the knives stabbed into the mattress, each object echoing the fractured state of their relationship. Even the clothes Ruth wears take on meaning, like the emerald outfit she has on when she collapses, which feels almost like a symbol of rebirth after destruction.
And then there are the stairs. Walters returns again and again to images of stairs and steps—Michael’s boots crashing down them, Ruth fainting on them, later carrying unbearable weight up them. Stairs in this book are more than just architecture; they’re thresholds, moments where life tips into danger or grief. It’s little details like this that made me slow down as a reader, because I could sense the hidden meanings being layered in.
The writing itself is what makes this book so different. By telling the story in verse, Walters forces us to feel Ruth’s fragmented thoughts. The lines are short, sometimes clipped, sometimes spilling over, just like her emotions. In one moment she’s praying, in another she’s worrying about Michael’s temper, in another she’s just wishing for peace. It doesn’t read like a traditional novel, but that’s exactly why it works. The poetic style mirrors trauma itself—broken, repetitive, disjointed, but also occasionally filled with startling clarity and beauty.
“Why should I live each day being unloved?" -Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
Reading this, I kept thinking about how much it reminded me of Colleen Hoover’s It Ends With Us, not in terms of style but in theme. Both tackle domestic violence, but where Hoover’s book is more straightforward and romantic, Walters takes it deeper. He doesn’t soften the edges. He doesn’t romanticize Ruth’s endurance. He makes you feel the heaviness, the exhaustion, the confusion of staying when you know you should leave. And he makes you feel the relief and the terror of finally fighting back. If you liked It Ends With Us but wanted the writing to match the weight of the subject, The Empty Couple will give you that.
What I also appreciated is that the book doesn’t give us a shiny happy ending tied with a bow. When Ruth finally breaks the cycle, there's blood and she'll bleed throughout. The arrival of the police, the handcuffs, the uncertainty, it all reminds us that survival is never clean. It’s not about riding off into the sunset, it’s about still being here the next morning, scarred but breathing. And to me, that’s what made this book so powerful. It’s honest. It doesn’t lie to us with neat resolutions.
So why should you read The Empty Couple? Because it’s more than a thriller. It’s more than a story of domestic abuse. It’s about resilience, about how even in the darkest situations there can be flashes of light—through friendship, through faith, through the stubborn human will to endure. It’s raw and lyrical and unflinchingly real. Walters has written something unique here: a novel that doesn’t just tell a story, it immerses you in an experience.
If you’re looking for more of Oneal Walters’ work, or want to keep up with his poems and newsletter, I highly recommend following his Substack: The Blue Snowsuit. Short, sharp pieces of poetry and reflection that made me want to read the full book. If you liked The Empty Couple and want more of that lyrical pulse, sign up and give his newsletter a follow.
I’d recommend The Empty Couple especially if you want something outside your usual reads, something that will challenge you but also reward you. It’s the kind of book that makes you think about your own life, the people around you, and the power of words to hold both beauty and pain in the same breath.
For me, The Empty Couple is one of those rare finds. A book that’s as much about how it’s told as it is about what’s being told. It’s harrowing, yes, but it’s also deeply moving. And I can honestly say I’ve never read anything quite like it.
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
Review of The Empty Couple by Oneal Walters, a literary thriller.
I’ll start by saying this: I don’t usually pick up thrillers written in verse. It’s not that I don’t like poetry, but my shelves are mostly stacked with romance, dystopia, a few family dramas, and the odd nonfiction title. But The Empty Couple by Oneal Walters pulled me in from the first page and did not let me go. It’s one of those books that’s heavy and heartbreaking but also strangely beautiful, the kind of story that hurts while you’re reading it but stays with you in a way that feels important.
“You turned your back on a kneeling woman. - Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
The story centres on Ruth, a woman who seems to have everything in order on the outside: she’s smart, hardworking, respected at her job. But behind closed doors she’s living a different reality, one where her partner Michael controls her through anger, alcohol, and intimidation. What Walters does so brilliantly is capture not just the “what” of abuse, but the how it feels from the inside. You get fragments, prayers, half-thoughts, moments of denial and moments of clarity. It feels messy, because Ruth’s life is messy. And that’s why it works.
Michael is not written as some cartoon villain. He’s a sad figure in some ways: jobless, insecure, full of excuses but also terrifying in others. The way he smashes plates, shouts over nothing, or destroys something precious like Ruth’s Bible, shows how his need for control infects every corner of their life. He’s a man who should’ve been building something, maybe even once had potential, but instead he’s spiralled into bitterness.
What makes him so chilling is that you probably know someone like him. Walters makes him real, and that’s what makes the threat he represents feel so present.
SPOILERS
But this isn’t just Ruth and Michael’s story. There’s Ashley, Ruth’s co-worker, who to me became the heartbeat of the book. Ashley is young, confident, successful, and self-assured. She doesn’t play games with men, she knows her worth, and she brings that perspective into Ruth’s life like fresh air in a suffocating house. At first, she seems like a side character, almost comic relief with her souvenirs and chatty presence. But as the story goes on, she becomes the counter-balance to Michael: while he breaks Ruth down, Ashley builds her up. She literally gives Ruth the tools to fight back, both financially with that big check and physically with the self-defense lessons. It’s one of the things I loved most about the book, the way women’s solidarity is shown as life-saving. Women supporting women is rare to find in many of the romance books, my to-go genre. Why do I have to search in other genres to find this kind of solidarity?
And then there’s Kevin Christian, Ruth’s boss. He’s a fascinating character because he’s not abusive like Michael, but he’s not entirely uncomplicated either. He recognizes Ruth’s talent, praises her, promotes her, and in a lot of ways provides the validation she isn’t getting at home. But Walters writes him with a subtle edge, you can feel his authority in the background, the way compliments about her beauty slip in beside professional praise. For me, Kevin represented that complicated middle ground: men who aren’t “bad guys” but still benefit from having power over women’s lives. It added nuance, because abuse doesn’t just exist in isolation, it’s shaped by all the power dynamics around it.
“I’ve fought enough, can’t fight anymore. - Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
One of the things that makes The Empty Couple stand out is the symbolism woven through it. Walters uses objects as recurring markers of Ruth’s world. The beer glass with the maple leaf isn’t just something Michael drinks from, it becomes a symbol of his addiction, his control, and the way he clings to a hollow identity. The Bible is another big one: torn, desecrated, almost lost, but always present. Just like Ruth’s spirit, it gets battered but never completely disappears. There are the broken plates, the smashed glass, the knives stabbed into the mattress, each object echoing the fractured state of their relationship. Even the clothes Ruth wears take on meaning, like the emerald outfit she has on when she collapses, which feels almost like a symbol of rebirth after destruction.
And then there are the stairs. Walters returns again and again to images of stairs and steps—Michael’s boots crashing down them, Ruth fainting on them, later carrying unbearable weight up them. Stairs in this book are more than just architecture; they’re thresholds, moments where life tips into danger or grief. It’s little details like this that made me slow down as a reader, because I could sense the hidden meanings being layered in.
The writing itself is what makes this book so different. By telling the story in verse, Walters forces us to feel Ruth’s fragmented thoughts. The lines are short, sometimes clipped, sometimes spilling over, just like her emotions. In one moment she’s praying, in another she’s worrying about Michael’s temper, in another she’s just wishing for peace. It doesn’t read like a traditional novel, but that’s exactly why it works. The poetic style mirrors trauma itself—broken, repetitive, disjointed, but also occasionally filled with startling clarity and beauty.
“Why should I live each day being unloved?" -Ruth Ezrah”
― Oneal Walters, The Empty Couple: A Thriller
Reading this, I kept thinking about how much it reminded me of Colleen Hoover’s It Ends With Us, not in terms of style but in theme. Both tackle domestic violence, but where Hoover’s book is more straightforward and romantic, Walters takes it deeper. He doesn’t soften the edges. He doesn’t romanticize Ruth’s endurance. He makes you feel the heaviness, the exhaustion, the confusion of staying when you know you should leave. And he makes you feel the relief and the terror of finally fighting back. If you liked It Ends With Us but wanted the writing to match the weight of the subject, The Empty Couple will give you that.
What I also appreciated is that the book doesn’t give us a shiny happy ending tied with a bow. When Ruth finally breaks the cycle, there's blood and she'll bleed throughout. The arrival of the police, the handcuffs, the uncertainty, it all reminds us that survival is never clean. It’s not about riding off into the sunset, it’s about still being here the next morning, scarred but breathing. And to me, that’s what made this book so powerful. It’s honest. It doesn’t lie to us with neat resolutions.
So why should you read The Empty Couple? Because it’s more than a thriller. It’s more than a story of domestic abuse. It’s about resilience, about how even in the darkest situations there can be flashes of light—through friendship, through faith, through the stubborn human will to endure. It’s raw and lyrical and unflinchingly real. Walters has written something unique here: a novel that doesn’t just tell a story, it immerses you in an experience.
If you’re looking for more of Oneal Walters’ work, or want to keep up with his poems and newsletter, I highly recommend following his Substack: The Blue Snowsuit. Short, sharp pieces of poetry and reflection that made me want to read the full book. If you liked The Empty Couple and want more of that lyrical pulse, sign up and give his newsletter a follow.
I’d recommend The Empty Couple especially if you want something outside your usual reads, something that will challenge you but also reward you. It’s the kind of book that makes you think about your own life, the people around you, and the power of words to hold both beauty and pain in the same breath.
For me, The Empty Couple is one of those rare finds. A book that’s as much about how it’s told as it is about what’s being told. It’s harrowing, yes, but it’s also deeply moving. And I can honestly say I’ve never read anything quite like it.
May 7, 2024
"The Empty Couple" by Oneal Walters is a touching exploration of the insidious nature of domestic violence and the complexities of love, loss, and resilience. Through the characters of Michael and Ruth, Walters skillfully navigates the delicate balance between happiness and despair, painting a vivid portrait of a relationship unraveled by the corrosive effects of addiction and abuse.
Michael and Ruth embody the epitome of a perfect couple, basking in the glow of their shared success and affection. Their once idyllic existence, characterized by lavish possessions and unwavering devotion, slowly unravels as Michael's demons begin to surface. His descent into alcoholism and subsequent loss of employment serve as catalysts for a dramatic shift in their dynamic, as the once loving partnership devolves into a battleground fraught with tension and fear.
Walters' narrative is punctuated by moments of quiet introspection, inviting readers to delve beneath the surface and unravel the intricate layers of human emotion and motivation. Through nuanced character development and evocative prose, the author challenges readers to confront uncomfortable truths about the fragility of relationships and the devastating impact of unchecked addiction.
What sets "The Empty Couple" apart is Walters' mastery of language, weaving a narrative that is at once devastatingly raw and achingly beautiful. Through his deft use of imagery and symbolism, the author brings the story to life, immersing readers in a world fraught with heartache and redemption.
Michael and Ruth embody the epitome of a perfect couple, basking in the glow of their shared success and affection. Their once idyllic existence, characterized by lavish possessions and unwavering devotion, slowly unravels as Michael's demons begin to surface. His descent into alcoholism and subsequent loss of employment serve as catalysts for a dramatic shift in their dynamic, as the once loving partnership devolves into a battleground fraught with tension and fear.
Walters' narrative is punctuated by moments of quiet introspection, inviting readers to delve beneath the surface and unravel the intricate layers of human emotion and motivation. Through nuanced character development and evocative prose, the author challenges readers to confront uncomfortable truths about the fragility of relationships and the devastating impact of unchecked addiction.
What sets "The Empty Couple" apart is Walters' mastery of language, weaving a narrative that is at once devastatingly raw and achingly beautiful. Through his deft use of imagery and symbolism, the author brings the story to life, immersing readers in a world fraught with heartache and redemption.
November 26, 2021
*book review*
The Empty Couple is a very short read (about 80 pages). It talks about domestic violence (lightly).
The book starts off with the "perfect couple" - Ruth and Michael. They are deeply in love with each other and lead a very luxurious and peaceful life. Everything comes crashing down when Michael loses his job. It really changes him and that becomes a little too much for Ruth.
The whole story is conveyed through poems, which was way more effective than I thought it would be.
“I am praised so much at work…I am despised so much at home. I feel the hurt more than the love."
We see how Ruth struggles to handle all of this, denial being her first resort. But denial cannot travel with us forever. I definitely want to read more of these characters' lives! I also think that the domestic abuse part could have been explored a little more. But overall, this was a worthy read!
The Empty Couple is a very short read (about 80 pages). It talks about domestic violence (lightly).
The book starts off with the "perfect couple" - Ruth and Michael. They are deeply in love with each other and lead a very luxurious and peaceful life. Everything comes crashing down when Michael loses his job. It really changes him and that becomes a little too much for Ruth.
The whole story is conveyed through poems, which was way more effective than I thought it would be.
“I am praised so much at work…I am despised so much at home. I feel the hurt more than the love."
We see how Ruth struggles to handle all of this, denial being her first resort. But denial cannot travel with us forever. I definitely want to read more of these characters' lives! I also think that the domestic abuse part could have been explored a little more. But overall, this was a worthy read!
December 16, 2021
✳️Oneal Walters's 'The Empty Couple' addresses the critical issue of domestic violence that women face in the household. If you love a short read or if you are in a reading slump, then this book will definitely work for you. Even though we can read this book within 30 minutes, what the story transmits is something we must think about in depth.✳️
🔹"𝑩𝒆𝒂𝒖𝒕𝒚 𝒃𝒚 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒂𝒓𝒅𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒊𝒔 𝒃𝒐𝒏𝒅𝒂𝒈𝒆"🔹
✳️Michael and Ruth, they have been engaged for years. They lived a happy life with a luxurious house, car and a great relationship. Ruth worked in a law firm and Michael at a Mechanic company. But then things change. When he lost his job due to his drinking behavior, it turned him into a violent and dangerous man. They were the perfect couple once. But now, their relationship is toxic and How much do you think Ruth can handle it by holding onto the past?✳️
🔹“𝑰 𝒈𝒖𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝑰 𝒇𝒂𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒅 𝒅𝒖𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒈,”🔹
✳️The plot was so good. The writer wrote this in a simple and clear language. There are many things that we need to think from our imagination, like how they were in the past and what made him change. Actually, all the characters were helpful to Ruth in some way. They all stood by her in her difficulties. Even the boss was a decent guy. And Ashley, she was flawless.✳️
🔹"𝑾𝒉𝒚 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝑰 𝒏𝒆𝒆𝒅 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒆 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒂 𝒎𝒂𝒏 𝒘𝒉𝒐 𝒉𝒖𝒓𝒕𝒔 𝒎𝒆?" 𝑹𝒖𝒕𝒉 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌𝒔.
"𝑾𝒉𝒚 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝑰 𝒍𝒊𝒗𝒆 𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉 𝒅𝒂𝒚 𝒃𝒆𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒖𝒏𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒅?"🔹
✳️As I have already said in one of my reviews, Whatever reasons, domestic abuse is not the answer. Marriage/love never gives the authority to beat a person. If beating your woman is considered a part of your love, then this person should be put into a psychiatric hospital. Seriously, when are people going to learn? When you cling to your past thinking that once he has loved you so much, and tries to cope with it - This is what which is giving him more control over you. Once you start feeling like he was not the man you fell in love with, then it means that the relationship has become toxic now. Just call the authorities, when the man starts abusing you !! That's the only way to be safe.✳️
🔹"𝑩𝒆𝒂𝒖𝒕𝒚 𝒃𝒚 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒂𝒓𝒅𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒊𝒔 𝒃𝒐𝒏𝒅𝒂𝒈𝒆"🔹
✳️Michael and Ruth, they have been engaged for years. They lived a happy life with a luxurious house, car and a great relationship. Ruth worked in a law firm and Michael at a Mechanic company. But then things change. When he lost his job due to his drinking behavior, it turned him into a violent and dangerous man. They were the perfect couple once. But now, their relationship is toxic and How much do you think Ruth can handle it by holding onto the past?✳️
🔹“𝑰 𝒈𝒖𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝑰 𝒇𝒂𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒅 𝒅𝒖𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒈,”🔹
✳️The plot was so good. The writer wrote this in a simple and clear language. There are many things that we need to think from our imagination, like how they were in the past and what made him change. Actually, all the characters were helpful to Ruth in some way. They all stood by her in her difficulties. Even the boss was a decent guy. And Ashley, she was flawless.✳️
🔹"𝑾𝒉𝒚 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝑰 𝒏𝒆𝒆𝒅 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒆 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒂 𝒎𝒂𝒏 𝒘𝒉𝒐 𝒉𝒖𝒓𝒕𝒔 𝒎𝒆?" 𝑹𝒖𝒕𝒉 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌𝒔.
"𝑾𝒉𝒚 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝑰 𝒍𝒊𝒗𝒆 𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉 𝒅𝒂𝒚 𝒃𝒆𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒖𝒏𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒅?"🔹
✳️As I have already said in one of my reviews, Whatever reasons, domestic abuse is not the answer. Marriage/love never gives the authority to beat a person. If beating your woman is considered a part of your love, then this person should be put into a psychiatric hospital. Seriously, when are people going to learn? When you cling to your past thinking that once he has loved you so much, and tries to cope with it - This is what which is giving him more control over you. Once you start feeling like he was not the man you fell in love with, then it means that the relationship has become toxic now. Just call the authorities, when the man starts abusing you !! That's the only way to be safe.✳️
March 10, 2022
"The Empty Couple" is a domestic thriller written by Oneal Walters.
The whole story revolves around the hollow and abusive relationship between the protagonists Ruth and Michael.
Marriages aren't always happy going & It requires efforts from both the ends to make it work. Domestic violence is a serious threat to the society. Oneal Walters has very bravely portrayed the story and brought reader's attention towards domestic violence.
Ruth and Michael were madly in love and were the perfect couple. Life was perfect but Michael lost his job which makes the happy situation adverse. Ruth was unable to manage the bills and other things.
Will they workout things? What happens next? The mind blowing plot will keep you hooked to the storyline from the beginning till the end. Do give it a read! I am sure you'll love it
The whole story revolves around the hollow and abusive relationship between the protagonists Ruth and Michael.
Marriages aren't always happy going & It requires efforts from both the ends to make it work. Domestic violence is a serious threat to the society. Oneal Walters has very bravely portrayed the story and brought reader's attention towards domestic violence.
Ruth and Michael were madly in love and were the perfect couple. Life was perfect but Michael lost his job which makes the happy situation adverse. Ruth was unable to manage the bills and other things.
Will they workout things? What happens next? The mind blowing plot will keep you hooked to the storyline from the beginning till the end. Do give it a read! I am sure you'll love it
March 13, 2022
The Empty Couple by O'Neal Walters is a great thriller for someone to start this genre with.
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“It’s a monster,” Ruth says. “It’s asleep.”
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The story ended in a great twist.. the book follows Ruth and Michael who shows to everyone that they have a perfect relationship going on but well... They are not !
The book was so different from the usual kind of books that I read.. some of the chps were written in verse form but not any specific rhyming scheme. And I guess to this is why it's such a short read.
The book isn't easy to read as it wasn't for me because of its dark elements, Michael's behaviour after he is unemployed... Took me days to complete since I didn't wanted to see what's coming but I finished it enjoyed the book !
Not giving it a full 5 stars since I had a hard time getting into the rhythm of it but like the plot and the ending nonetheless.
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“It’s a monster,” Ruth says. “It’s asleep.”
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The story ended in a great twist.. the book follows Ruth and Michael who shows to everyone that they have a perfect relationship going on but well... They are not !
The book was so different from the usual kind of books that I read.. some of the chps were written in verse form but not any specific rhyming scheme. And I guess to this is why it's such a short read.
The book isn't easy to read as it wasn't for me because of its dark elements, Michael's behaviour after he is unemployed... Took me days to complete since I didn't wanted to see what's coming but I finished it enjoyed the book !
Not giving it a full 5 stars since I had a hard time getting into the rhythm of it but like the plot and the ending nonetheless.
December 14, 2021
Book Name : Empty Couple
Author : Oneal Walters
Publisher : Redtail Turtle Publishing Inc.
Pages : 105
Review :
It's a short story of Ruth and her boyfriend Michael. Both live together. Ruth is an accomplished and successful Lawyer and Michael was an authomobile engineer. They both had a luxurious lifestyle until Michael lost his job.
He is now turned into an alcoholic person who vent his frustration on Ruth in the form of domestic violence. Ruth however tries her best to be patient and hopeful. The luxurious life is now buried under countless debts.
🔷 The book is too short, can be completed under an hour.
🔷 Language is lucid and book is quite fast paced.
🔷 The starting is good and would make you keep reading the book in order to know more.
🔷 The reason why her employer keeps giving her promotion so frequently is also not so digestible.
🔷 However, there could have been more explanation about the couple's past and their love story.
🔷 The main highlight was that even though each one of us is well aware that it's best to get out of a toxic relationship as soon as possible but the truth is, it's not as simple as it seems.
Author : Oneal Walters
Publisher : Redtail Turtle Publishing Inc.
Pages : 105
Review :
It's a short story of Ruth and her boyfriend Michael. Both live together. Ruth is an accomplished and successful Lawyer and Michael was an authomobile engineer. They both had a luxurious lifestyle until Michael lost his job.
He is now turned into an alcoholic person who vent his frustration on Ruth in the form of domestic violence. Ruth however tries her best to be patient and hopeful. The luxurious life is now buried under countless debts.
🔷 The book is too short, can be completed under an hour.
🔷 Language is lucid and book is quite fast paced.
🔷 The starting is good and would make you keep reading the book in order to know more.
🔷 The reason why her employer keeps giving her promotion so frequently is also not so digestible.
🔷 However, there could have been more explanation about the couple's past and their love story.
🔷 The main highlight was that even though each one of us is well aware that it's best to get out of a toxic relationship as soon as possible but the truth is, it's not as simple as it seems.
November 14, 2021
“I am praised so much at work…I am despised so much at home. I feel the hurt more than the love.”
This book was very different than the books I’ve ever read. Each chapter is a poem but combines to tell the story of Ruth and Michael. Ruth and her boyfriend, Michael seemed to have the perfect relationship. They own a beautiful home and drive expensive luxury cars. Life is good for them. But when Michael loses his job, he becomes a different person. He becomes angry, violent. He disappears for hours at a time. Soon, Ruth finds herself trapped in an emotionally abusive nightmare.
This was a heavy story but I liked how it is told. This book encompasses all the elements of a domestic thriller and it is short so I’ll recommend reading it in those reading slump days. The characters are brilliantly developed in the book, you start to sympathize with Ruth and also feel the emotions with them.
This book was very different than the books I’ve ever read. Each chapter is a poem but combines to tell the story of Ruth and Michael. Ruth and her boyfriend, Michael seemed to have the perfect relationship. They own a beautiful home and drive expensive luxury cars. Life is good for them. But when Michael loses his job, he becomes a different person. He becomes angry, violent. He disappears for hours at a time. Soon, Ruth finds herself trapped in an emotionally abusive nightmare.
This was a heavy story but I liked how it is told. This book encompasses all the elements of a domestic thriller and it is short so I’ll recommend reading it in those reading slump days. The characters are brilliantly developed in the book, you start to sympathize with Ruth and also feel the emotions with them.
November 19, 2021
The Empty Couple by Oneal Walters
Ruth and Michael are the perfect couple, they just bought a new house, a car, everything is going well until it isn't.
When Michael loses his job, everything changes putting a strain in their relationship.This is a story of how a perfect relationship turns into a toxic and abusive one, how strong is the grip of toxic partner.
I felt for Ruth she's successful, beautiful and lovely she did everything for Michael, he was her life, and when it turned to something ugly she went into denial. It was devastating to see her so helpless.
The portrayal of broken and abusive relationship is spot on.
The plot is fast paced, so I breezed through the book.I read it one sitting.
It made me so angry and made me realise the importance of friendships, how everyone needs a support system other than their partner.
I only have one issue though it was really short read of 72 pages and I wanted more I wanted to see know more about Ruth and her Journey.
Ruth and Michael are the perfect couple, they just bought a new house, a car, everything is going well until it isn't.
When Michael loses his job, everything changes putting a strain in their relationship.This is a story of how a perfect relationship turns into a toxic and abusive one, how strong is the grip of toxic partner.
I felt for Ruth she's successful, beautiful and lovely she did everything for Michael, he was her life, and when it turned to something ugly she went into denial. It was devastating to see her so helpless.
The portrayal of broken and abusive relationship is spot on.
The plot is fast paced, so I breezed through the book.I read it one sitting.
It made me so angry and made me realise the importance of friendships, how everyone needs a support system other than their partner.
I only have one issue though it was really short read of 72 pages and I wanted more I wanted to see know more about Ruth and her Journey.
August 26, 2025
Recently I joined Substack, not so much to write (though that has crossed my mind), but to take a break from my never-ending romance to-read list and discover a world outside my usual Kindle Unlimited reads. While searching for authors to follow, I found a treasure on Substack: The Blue Snowsuit by genius author @onealwalters 
There's poetry and magic in that newsletter, so I looked up his work on Amazon and grabbed a copy of his thriller-in-verse *The Empty Couple*. I read a lot of romance, and while love stories often move me, it’s rare for writing to stir my soul the way Oneal Walters’ poetry did. His voice actually inspires me to write — and to experiment with this same poetic-prose style.
Ruth thought she had found happiness: a steady job, a loving home, and a partner to share it all with. But when Michael loses his way, drowning in alcohol, anger, and despair, the man she once loved transforms into her greatest fear. She can’t even enjoy music or dance in her own living room without the shadow of Michael’s return looming over her.
Told through hauntingly evocative verse, The Empty Couple is a psychological thriller that pulls the reader deep into Ruth’s struggle for survival. As Michael’s abuse escalates, Ruth hides her pain behind a mask of normalcy, until one night her spirit itself seems to drift beyond her body, searching for a place where only positivity exists. Yet even there, her cries go unheard.
With the support of her steadfast coworker, Ashley, Ruth begins to reclaim her strength.
I’m still early in the book, but already it combines the intensity of a psychological thriller with the lyricism of poetry. The tone is raw, emotional, and suspenseful, moving between fear, despair, resilience, and the fragile possibility of liberation. The verse form amplifies Ruth’s inner turmoil, immersing us in her fragmented, visceral experience.
The language is accessible yet beautiful, and moments of poetic flourish add depth and poignancy. Scenes like Ruth’s encounter with spirits or the desecration of her Bible elevate the story beyond a straightforward domestic drama.
Raw, lyrical, and unflinchingly honest, The Empty Couple is more than a story of domestic violence. It is a testament to resilience, solidarity, and the human spirit’s capacity to rise from devastation.
Have you read It Ends With Us? Many readers say its domestic violence theme is powerful, but that the writing doesn’t quite rise to the depth of its subject. I love that book, but the writing cannot compare to what Oneal Walters delivers here: truly harrowing poetry.
I’m pausing my writing now because I’d love it if some of the QT’s buddy read club could join me. This is outside of our usual Kindle Unlimited romance reads, but it’s powerful, beautifully written, and worth experiencing. Who’s with me?
Edit. I finished already, it's such a fast-paced read, I loved it. My full spoiler review and profound analysis below. I highly recommend this book.
May 7, 2024
"The Empty Couple" serves as a poignant reminder of the harrowing reality of domestic violence, shedding light on the transformative power of love and the complexities of human relationships. Through the characters of Michael and Ruth, the author, Oneal Walters, masterfully navigates the intricacies of an initially idyllic partnership descending into toxicity.
At the onset, Michael and Ruth epitomize the image of a perfect couple, adorned with material wealth and seemingly unshakeable affection. Ruth's successful career juxtaposed with Michael's steady job at a mechanic company paints a picture of stability and contentment. However, the narrative takes a stark turn when Michael's descent into alcoholism and subsequent loss of employment catalyze a drastic change in his demeanor. His once endearing traits give way to volatility and aggression, plunging their relationship into a state of turmoil.
The subtle nuances in Walters' storytelling compel readers to contemplate the underlying factors contributing to Michael's transformation. Was it the loss of his job that triggered his abusive behavior, or were there deeper-rooted issues simmering beneath the surface? By leaving certain aspects open to interpretation, Walters invites readers to engage in introspection, encouraging them to consider the complexities of human nature and the multifaceted dynamics of interpersonal relationships.
Throughout Ruth's tumultuous journey, the support of secondary characters serves as a beacon of hope amidst the darkness. From her compassionate boss to the unwavering solidarity of friends like Ashley, each character contributes to Ruth's resilience in the face of adversity. Their unwavering support underscores the importance of community and solidarity in combating domestic violence, emphasizing the transformative power of empathy and human connection.
Moreover, Walters' choice of language adds depth to the narrative, employing a simple yet evocative prose that resonates with readers on a profound level. By eschewing convoluted language in favor of clarity and directness, the author ensures that the story's emotional impact remains undiluted, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in Ruth's journey.
In conclusion, "The Empty Couple" transcends its brevity to deliver a powerful exploration of the insidious nature of domestic violence and the enduring strength of the human spirit. Through compelling characters and a thought-provoking narrative, Oneal Walters compels readers to confront uncomfortable truths and contemplate the transformative power of love, resilience, and solidarity in the face of adversity.
At the onset, Michael and Ruth epitomize the image of a perfect couple, adorned with material wealth and seemingly unshakeable affection. Ruth's successful career juxtaposed with Michael's steady job at a mechanic company paints a picture of stability and contentment. However, the narrative takes a stark turn when Michael's descent into alcoholism and subsequent loss of employment catalyze a drastic change in his demeanor. His once endearing traits give way to volatility and aggression, plunging their relationship into a state of turmoil.
The subtle nuances in Walters' storytelling compel readers to contemplate the underlying factors contributing to Michael's transformation. Was it the loss of his job that triggered his abusive behavior, or were there deeper-rooted issues simmering beneath the surface? By leaving certain aspects open to interpretation, Walters invites readers to engage in introspection, encouraging them to consider the complexities of human nature and the multifaceted dynamics of interpersonal relationships.
Throughout Ruth's tumultuous journey, the support of secondary characters serves as a beacon of hope amidst the darkness. From her compassionate boss to the unwavering solidarity of friends like Ashley, each character contributes to Ruth's resilience in the face of adversity. Their unwavering support underscores the importance of community and solidarity in combating domestic violence, emphasizing the transformative power of empathy and human connection.
Moreover, Walters' choice of language adds depth to the narrative, employing a simple yet evocative prose that resonates with readers on a profound level. By eschewing convoluted language in favor of clarity and directness, the author ensures that the story's emotional impact remains undiluted, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in Ruth's journey.
In conclusion, "The Empty Couple" transcends its brevity to deliver a powerful exploration of the insidious nature of domestic violence and the enduring strength of the human spirit. Through compelling characters and a thought-provoking narrative, Oneal Walters compels readers to confront uncomfortable truths and contemplate the transformative power of love, resilience, and solidarity in the face of adversity.
November 16, 2021
Difficult Times Define Your Character!
Okay a very busy week and hell lot of work, I'm sure all of you are able to relate to me, while I write this review my room is still the mess Rachel had when she does the dishes (which means never) so yeah....
But yeah, you gotta do what you gotta do...
Without wasting a teeny tiny second of your ultra max precious time here it goes.
The review in a nutshell.
72 pages
Two characters
One couple
And when I say The Couple it means that couple you get jealous on while you watch them being all cute and cuddly for me it's Sam and Monica, pick yours too.
So this so called perfect couple has everything anyone would wish for.
They have the luxurious cars , and they have this lavish homes everyone dreams of, but not everything is hunky and dory in this paradise.
Story revolves around Ruth and Michael, Ruth being this successful beautiful woman who every man would dream of , and she will try her best to save this relationship from falling apart.
But what happens when Michael loses his job, he turns into a beast, he continues hurting Ruth, dominates her life. She is cut off from her entire circle.
Now I know it's easy to say that lady could have just left but, it's true very true that people are at times blinded by love and it's quite alright to be blinded because that's what makes us human.
Somehow I would have liked the tougher part of Ruth's journey to be more intricately and expansively elaborated in this book, but it was so short that it ended in a single seating, yeah my washed laundry is still calling me to get themselves folded. In that very span I could finish this book🙂 it was that gripping.
So go and get it, don't stay here for long🙂.
Okay a very busy week and hell lot of work, I'm sure all of you are able to relate to me, while I write this review my room is still the mess Rachel had when she does the dishes (which means never) so yeah....
But yeah, you gotta do what you gotta do...
Without wasting a teeny tiny second of your ultra max precious time here it goes.
The review in a nutshell.
72 pages
Two characters
One couple
And when I say The Couple it means that couple you get jealous on while you watch them being all cute and cuddly for me it's Sam and Monica, pick yours too.
So this so called perfect couple has everything anyone would wish for.
They have the luxurious cars , and they have this lavish homes everyone dreams of, but not everything is hunky and dory in this paradise.
Story revolves around Ruth and Michael, Ruth being this successful beautiful woman who every man would dream of , and she will try her best to save this relationship from falling apart.
But what happens when Michael loses his job, he turns into a beast, he continues hurting Ruth, dominates her life. She is cut off from her entire circle.
Now I know it's easy to say that lady could have just left but, it's true very true that people are at times blinded by love and it's quite alright to be blinded because that's what makes us human.
Somehow I would have liked the tougher part of Ruth's journey to be more intricately and expansively elaborated in this book, but it was so short that it ended in a single seating, yeah my washed laundry is still calling me to get themselves folded. In that very span I could finish this book🙂 it was that gripping.
So go and get it, don't stay here for long🙂.
December 13, 2021
The Empty Couple
Oneal Walters
Rating: 🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐/5 (4.7/5)
“A pretty flower should not bend to the ground.”
Review:
Ruth and Michael have it all, the luxurious life with their own house and two cars but things aren't always what they seem to be right? The author has shown how people live fake lives in the world, we see Ruth who's a hardworking lady at her job and looks like success is always at her doorstep but in her personal life things are falling apart and she doesn't know how to stop it than pretending those never happened.
When Michael loses his job everything goes straight to hell he becomes resentful and aggressive but Ruth can always justify his actions and stay with him. The author has shown us in poetic lines how she always defends him and protects him while he really should be doing that! The abusive relationship zone is light so it's not actually going to be a trigger warning for most people.
Oneal Walters has done an amazing job of writing this book! He's written poetically but also in the form of fictional lines and the character development is also good!! This short book will take only one sitting to read and you'll be totally invested in Ruth and Michael's relationship that I can guarantee you. The plot is lucid and clear and since it's a short book it's easier for anyone to read and that's the beauty of fiction!
Oneal Walters
Rating: 🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐/5 (4.7/5)
“A pretty flower should not bend to the ground.”
Review:
Ruth and Michael have it all, the luxurious life with their own house and two cars but things aren't always what they seem to be right? The author has shown how people live fake lives in the world, we see Ruth who's a hardworking lady at her job and looks like success is always at her doorstep but in her personal life things are falling apart and she doesn't know how to stop it than pretending those never happened.
When Michael loses his job everything goes straight to hell he becomes resentful and aggressive but Ruth can always justify his actions and stay with him. The author has shown us in poetic lines how she always defends him and protects him while he really should be doing that! The abusive relationship zone is light so it's not actually going to be a trigger warning for most people.
Oneal Walters has done an amazing job of writing this book! He's written poetically but also in the form of fictional lines and the character development is also good!! This short book will take only one sitting to read and you'll be totally invested in Ruth and Michael's relationship that I can guarantee you. The plot is lucid and clear and since it's a short book it's easier for anyone to read and that's the beauty of fiction!
August 11, 2025
Well-organized and easy to follow. This book makes the buying process clear, practical, and stress-free. Highly recommended for anyone making an important purchase
November 28, 2021
Book:- The Empty Couple
Author:- Oneal Walters
Format:- Kindle
Ratings:- 4.5/5
Here's another mind blowing "Domestic Thriller"authored by Oneal Walters.
The storyline is set around the hollow and abusive relationship between the protagonists Ruth and Michael.
Marriages doesn't always seem happy going & is it's not Domestic violence arises. This issues is a serious threat to the society. The author had very bravely brought out the context driving reader's attention towards domestic violence.
Ruth and Michael; the perfect couple welcomes their newly bought house & car. Life seems to be smooth. But, here is the twist! Michael loses his job which makes the then happy situation adverse.
Will their perfect relationship be perfect? What happens next? Know it all yourselves by just diving deep into the storyline. The mind blowing plot will keep you hooked to the storyline from the beginning till the end.
Thank You.
Happy Reading 📚
Author:- Oneal Walters
Format:- Kindle
Ratings:- 4.5/5
Here's another mind blowing "Domestic Thriller"authored by Oneal Walters.
The storyline is set around the hollow and abusive relationship between the protagonists Ruth and Michael.
Marriages doesn't always seem happy going & is it's not Domestic violence arises. This issues is a serious threat to the society. The author had very bravely brought out the context driving reader's attention towards domestic violence.
Ruth and Michael; the perfect couple welcomes their newly bought house & car. Life seems to be smooth. But, here is the twist! Michael loses his job which makes the then happy situation adverse.
Will their perfect relationship be perfect? What happens next? Know it all yourselves by just diving deep into the storyline. The mind blowing plot will keep you hooked to the storyline from the beginning till the end.
Thank You.
Happy Reading 📚
December 17, 2021
Omg I loved it.
It has a very gripping storyline, is beginner-friendly and took only one hour for me to complete. What do I love the most is the way the author portrayed the story, it was really simple to read & got the hang of the story even without any introduction. Kept me hooked till the end.
The empty couple is a story of Michael and Ruth who are in a live-in relationship. The story starts with Michael getting annoyed with her & Ruth being in constant fear.
Ruth works hard for their future whereas Michael was fired from his work.
What went wrong and why was he fired? How will Ruth mend her relationship? These questions were constantly bugging me until I got satisfactory answers.
The Thriller genre is one of my favourite genres, so reading this was enjoyable. And we all need a friend like Ashley. :)
It has a very gripping storyline, is beginner-friendly and took only one hour for me to complete. What do I love the most is the way the author portrayed the story, it was really simple to read & got the hang of the story even without any introduction. Kept me hooked till the end.
The empty couple is a story of Michael and Ruth who are in a live-in relationship. The story starts with Michael getting annoyed with her & Ruth being in constant fear.
Ruth works hard for their future whereas Michael was fired from his work.
What went wrong and why was he fired? How will Ruth mend her relationship? These questions were constantly bugging me until I got satisfactory answers.
The Thriller genre is one of my favourite genres, so reading this was enjoyable. And we all need a friend like Ashley. :)
December 19, 2021
Review:
This book revolves around Ruth and Michael who are engaged and living in a lavish house and own all the luxury one can think of! But as Michael got unemployed, he started to show his true colors! Life is complete hell for Ruth.
My opinion:
Thie book started off on a good note for me and I was expecting quite a lot from this book.
I felt that the book should have been more elaborative and the plot was really good but wasn't given much justice.
As for now I have mixed feelings for this one.
It felt that I only watched the climax scene from a whole movie.
The story could have been much more elaborative if would have been started from showing the setting up of good life of Ruth and Michael and then getting slowly to the point when things got worst. In this way the impact of this book could have been more deeper.
Points I liked:
1. Plot
2. Climax
Suggestion:
More elaboration
This book revolves around Ruth and Michael who are engaged and living in a lavish house and own all the luxury one can think of! But as Michael got unemployed, he started to show his true colors! Life is complete hell for Ruth.
My opinion:
Thie book started off on a good note for me and I was expecting quite a lot from this book.
I felt that the book should have been more elaborative and the plot was really good but wasn't given much justice.
As for now I have mixed feelings for this one.
It felt that I only watched the climax scene from a whole movie.
The story could have been much more elaborative if would have been started from showing the setting up of good life of Ruth and Michael and then getting slowly to the point when things got worst. In this way the impact of this book could have been more deeper.
Points I liked:
1. Plot
2. Climax
Suggestion:
More elaboration
December 17, 2021
The author weaved a poetic tale narrating the emotional distress caused by domestic violence.
It is a short story which was narrated in a hard-hitting manner. My heart went out to Ruth and made me wonder how many women suffer abuse in relationships.
Empty Couple is a story of despair, hope and fighting spirit.
It is a short story which was narrated in a hard-hitting manner. My heart went out to Ruth and made me wonder how many women suffer abuse in relationships.
Empty Couple is a story of despair, hope and fighting spirit.
November 30, 2024
Great book! I recommend it for all potential readers to read and learn from this book.
November 13, 2025
The Empty Couple is a psychological thriller in verse that captures the quiet disintegration of a relationship through one person’s perspective. Told entirely from the mind of a single narrator, the book traces an emotional descent marked by doubt, isolation, and the search for meaning after betrayal. The poetic nature of the writing gives the story a refreshing and original feel, turning raw emotion into language that feels both delicate and piercing. Each poem carries the weight of reflection, revealing fragments of thought that, together, form a portrait of heartbreak and confusion.
The strength of this book lies in its voice. The narrator is both revealing and guarded, allowing glimpses of truth to surface only to be clouded again by uncertainty. Through this shifting inner dialogue, the reader is drawn into an experience that feels deeply personal yet unsettlingly universal. The verses are lean and deliberate, and their rhythm mirrors the uneven pulse of a mind struggling to make sense of loss. Rather than relying on external events, the tension builds through emotion, through hesitation, repetition, and the silences between words that speak louder than the lines themselves.
Finely crafted imagery gives the story its atmosphere. The sparse language and careful pacing make each word count, creating a feeling of emptiness that mirrors the emotional void at the center of the relationship. There is a strong sense of isolation that deepens as the story progresses, as though the narrator is drifting further into their own thoughts, unable to distinguish memory from imagination. The suspense grows quietly, not from action or revelation, but from the reader’s realization that the truth may never fully surface.
The ending offers no simple resolution. Instead, it leaves room for reflection, inviting readers to interpret what remains unsaid and to sit with the ambiguity of human emotion. This open conclusion feels true to the book’s spirit, where closure is less important than understanding.
The Empty Couple is a bold and absorbing work that blends poetry and psychological tension in a way that feels both intimate and new. It challenges the conventions of the thriller genre, trading quick twists for emotional honesty and restraint. The result is a moving exploration of love, loss, and the fragile boundaries between truth and perception—one that lingers long after the final line.
Loved it!
The strength of this book lies in its voice. The narrator is both revealing and guarded, allowing glimpses of truth to surface only to be clouded again by uncertainty. Through this shifting inner dialogue, the reader is drawn into an experience that feels deeply personal yet unsettlingly universal. The verses are lean and deliberate, and their rhythm mirrors the uneven pulse of a mind struggling to make sense of loss. Rather than relying on external events, the tension builds through emotion, through hesitation, repetition, and the silences between words that speak louder than the lines themselves.
Finely crafted imagery gives the story its atmosphere. The sparse language and careful pacing make each word count, creating a feeling of emptiness that mirrors the emotional void at the center of the relationship. There is a strong sense of isolation that deepens as the story progresses, as though the narrator is drifting further into their own thoughts, unable to distinguish memory from imagination. The suspense grows quietly, not from action or revelation, but from the reader’s realization that the truth may never fully surface.
The ending offers no simple resolution. Instead, it leaves room for reflection, inviting readers to interpret what remains unsaid and to sit with the ambiguity of human emotion. This open conclusion feels true to the book’s spirit, where closure is less important than understanding.
The Empty Couple is a bold and absorbing work that blends poetry and psychological tension in a way that feels both intimate and new. It challenges the conventions of the thriller genre, trading quick twists for emotional honesty and restraint. The result is a moving exploration of love, loss, and the fragile boundaries between truth and perception—one that lingers long after the final line.
Loved it!
November 16, 2021
Domestic violence has always been a massive concern to society and no matter how strong the steps are taken against it; it could never be terminated till now. Being brave enough to put every piece together and coming out from the toxicity hence can be considered as the only way out.
Ruth and Micheal have everything in their life, from prestigious jobs to expensive cars. They are living happily and setting dreams for others to achieve. As we always see when everything seems to be fine life decides to show its worst and the same happens with them too. Micheal loses his job but instead of trying to fix the situation he chooses to create obscenity; he becomes alcoholic and starts to torment Ruth. Ruth on the other is left alone to suffer and fight her helplessness. But she can’t be squandering her life with this situation so she is on her way to withstand this end.
A very special thing about the book is it’s written in poems which are describing the incidents and I have read a story through poems for the first time. I never knew this could be executed with clarity so I am giving the stars for this. But overall the portrayal of domestic violence should have been taken more intensely in the book. If the author wants to put light on the matter then proper research and mentioning the eye-opening facts are needed. The topic is taken lightly and it ends with something bizarre. Ruth was shown powerful but her character needed to be blossomed a bit more to make the book gripping. Even though it was a short read for me it wasn’t a pleasing one. Hope to read more from the author next time.
Ruth and Micheal have everything in their life, from prestigious jobs to expensive cars. They are living happily and setting dreams for others to achieve. As we always see when everything seems to be fine life decides to show its worst and the same happens with them too. Micheal loses his job but instead of trying to fix the situation he chooses to create obscenity; he becomes alcoholic and starts to torment Ruth. Ruth on the other is left alone to suffer and fight her helplessness. But she can’t be squandering her life with this situation so she is on her way to withstand this end.
A very special thing about the book is it’s written in poems which are describing the incidents and I have read a story through poems for the first time. I never knew this could be executed with clarity so I am giving the stars for this. But overall the portrayal of domestic violence should have been taken more intensely in the book. If the author wants to put light on the matter then proper research and mentioning the eye-opening facts are needed. The topic is taken lightly and it ends with something bizarre. Ruth was shown powerful but her character needed to be blossomed a bit more to make the book gripping. Even though it was a short read for me it wasn’t a pleasing one. Hope to read more from the author next time.
December 13, 2025
The Empty Couple tells the story of a troubled pair going through some particularly challenging times.
The title is very fitting, because it feels like you're sitting down with friends or family and witnessing them have an argument that has gotten so big that they're not even trying to act nice around you, but when there's no argument, there's nothing, just an emptiness that's almost tangible. There is something cosy and familiar about the many slice-of-life scenes while at the same time building up angst, frustration, excitement and uncertainty at what will happen next.
I like that for the most part the narrative style steers clear of "dumping" all the information at once and that many things are inferred by the way people choose to react or to speak in the book, I liked this "show, don't tell" approach. The story itself uses some seemingly mundane situations to convey heavy topics like abuse, emancipation, faith, having the dilemma of choosing between one's well being or others' comfort, as well as having difficulties in reaching out and being vulnerable when facing adversity. There's an overall thread of strength being showcased throughout the story and I liked that. I hope there will be a sequel.
I have received this book through the kindness of the author via Booktasters, in exchange for my honest opinion on it.
The title is very fitting, because it feels like you're sitting down with friends or family and witnessing them have an argument that has gotten so big that they're not even trying to act nice around you, but when there's no argument, there's nothing, just an emptiness that's almost tangible. There is something cosy and familiar about the many slice-of-life scenes while at the same time building up angst, frustration, excitement and uncertainty at what will happen next.
I like that for the most part the narrative style steers clear of "dumping" all the information at once and that many things are inferred by the way people choose to react or to speak in the book, I liked this "show, don't tell" approach. The story itself uses some seemingly mundane situations to convey heavy topics like abuse, emancipation, faith, having the dilemma of choosing between one's well being or others' comfort, as well as having difficulties in reaching out and being vulnerable when facing adversity. There's an overall thread of strength being showcased throughout the story and I liked that. I hope there will be a sequel.
I have received this book through the kindness of the author via Booktasters, in exchange for my honest opinion on it.
October 28, 2025
This story is definitely a powerful and raw masterpiece about survival, strength, and breaking free from abuse. It really stands out with its fresh approach and unique storytelling through poetry. It’s a powerful look at how a seemingly perfect relationship can slowly unravel into something toxic and damaging. Each chapter weaving together the intense tale of Ruth and Michael. At first, they seem like the perfect couple, but everything changes when Michael loses his job, and his behavior shifts dramatically. The book dives deep into the harsh reality of emotional abuse, showing how Ruth gets caught in a nightmare of manipulation and violence. Despite its heavy themes, the poetic format adds an intriguing layer, turning the story into a domestic thriller that keeps you hooked from beginning to end. Ruths journey really pulls you in, making you feel for her and understand the weight of what she’s going through. The way the author captures the hold of a toxic partner feels raw and real, making it a compelling and emotional read. This book offers a gripping look at domestic struggles, blending poetry and prose in a way that stays with you long after you finish. Definitely a must-read if you’re after a story that’s both captivating and emotionally charged.
December 17, 2021
Book: The Empty Couple
Author: Oneal Walter
The book starts off with the "perfect couple" - Ruth and Michael. They are sincerely in love with each one other and advantage a fantastically deluxe and peaceful life. the whole lot comes deafening down as Michael loses his job. It in actual fact changes him and that becomes a not sufficiently in addition a good deal for Ruth.
This is a story of how a perfect bond turns into a contaminated and abusive one, how deep is the grip of contaminated partner.The picture of destroyed and abusive connection is see on.
The totality story is conveyed through poems, which was direction other operational than I idea it would be.
We set eyes on how Ruth struggles to see to every part of of this, defiance personality her to begin with resort. But turning down cannot move with us forever. I positively fancy to interpret extra of these characters' lives! I additionally deem that the domestic mistreatment fraction may possibly own been explored a small more.
The plot is immediate paced, subsequently I breezed through the book.I figure out it one sitting.
Author: Oneal Walter
The book starts off with the "perfect couple" - Ruth and Michael. They are sincerely in love with each one other and advantage a fantastically deluxe and peaceful life. the whole lot comes deafening down as Michael loses his job. It in actual fact changes him and that becomes a not sufficiently in addition a good deal for Ruth.
This is a story of how a perfect bond turns into a contaminated and abusive one, how deep is the grip of contaminated partner.The picture of destroyed and abusive connection is see on.
The totality story is conveyed through poems, which was direction other operational than I idea it would be.
We set eyes on how Ruth struggles to see to every part of of this, defiance personality her to begin with resort. But turning down cannot move with us forever. I positively fancy to interpret extra of these characters' lives! I additionally deem that the domestic mistreatment fraction may possibly own been explored a small more.
The plot is immediate paced, subsequently I breezed through the book.I figure out it one sitting.
May 7, 2024
The book revolves around Ruth, who lives under common law with her abusive boyfriend, Michael. Despite enduring his mistreatment, Ruth maintains her diligent work ethic. One day, Ruth experiences a transformative encounter when she momentarily leaves her body and interacts with positive spirits unable to hear her distress. This event prompts her to return to her body and face the reality of her abusive relationship. When Michael destroys her Bible and she wakes to find her spirit crushed, paramedics and police intervene, recognizing signs of abuse. Ruth seeks refuge with her coworker, Ashley, who empowers her with self-defense skills. Upon returning home, Ruth faces a terrifying scene of destruction and confronts Michael, who attacks her. In self-defense, Ruth fatally stabs Michael before the police arrive, ultimately finding relief from her torment. This surely is a page turner and will keep you guessing what happens till the end. Get this book now and you won’t regret it as this book is worth all your money and time. I highly recommend this book and therefore I give it a 5 star rating.
October 27, 2025
Since my retirement from active duty in the diplomatic service, I read an average of two novels a week. I retired in 2017, so that's quite a list. During that time, I've read a ton of really great works. However, Oneal Walters, "The Empty Couple," may be the most unique book that I've ever read during this time. It's also the kind of book that is as brilliant as it is original. Writing in poetic form, Walters spins a remarkably tense portrayal of an intense romantic relationship in total, heart wrenching free fall. Using short chapters and raising the tension ante, Walters gets you to know, and feel for the main character and the seeming unavoidable climax. The old cliche of "watching a car accident in slow motion" and being unable to stop it is fitting here. Walters ensures that the book is as compact as it is intense. It can be devoured in one sitting, I found it impossible to put down. It's also a book that will stay with you a long time after you've put it down. Can't recommend it enough.
April 16, 2024
This book highlights the pervasive issue of domestic violence in society, emphasizing that despite efforts to address it, the problem persists. Ruth and Michael initially appear to have a perfect life, with successful careers and material wealth. However, their lives take a dark turn when Michael loses his job and spirals into alcoholism, abusing Ruth in the process. Ruth, faced with the reality of her situation, decides to confront the toxicity of her relationship and break free from it.
What sets the book apart is its unique narrative style, written in the form of poems that vividly describe the unfolding events. This innovative approach provides clarity and insight into the characters' experiences, offering a fresh perspective on the issue of domestic violence. I love everything written in this book, the writing was clear and understandable, didn’t encounter any errors while reading and I highly recommend this book.
April 16, 2024
"The Empty Couple" by Oneal Walters presents a compelling narrative that tackles the critical issue of domestic abuse. The story revolves around Michael and Ruth, initially portrayed as a happy and loving couple striving for a luxurious and comfortable life. However, Michael's alcohol addiction leads to the loss of his job, triggering a dark transformation marked by violence and toxicity. The book delves into Ruth's struggle to cope with domestic abuse, shedding light on the pervasive cycle of pain and normalization experienced by many women in similar situations.
The author skillfully portrays the emotions and thought processes of women trapped in toxic relationships through engaging and straightforward writing. Supporting characters, such as Ashley, are also well-crafted, adding depth to the narrative. Overall, "The Empty Couple" is recommended as an engaging and thought-provoking read that offers insight into the complexities of domestic abuse.
The author skillfully portrays the emotions and thought processes of women trapped in toxic relationships through engaging and straightforward writing. Supporting characters, such as Ashley, are also well-crafted, adding depth to the narrative. Overall, "The Empty Couple" is recommended as an engaging and thought-provoking read that offers insight into the complexities of domestic abuse.
October 22, 2025
When I saw the cover for this, I was intrigued. I thought the cover design and illustration were both eye-catching and thought-provoking, and it definitely looked like something that would catch my attention in a bookshop or library.
"The Empty Couple" is a thriller written in verse rather than traditional prose, following Ruth and Michael. At times, this felt a little bit raw and emotional to read, and I think the verse format intensified that further. Poetry always speaks to the emotions, and to those who appreciate it, it can be thought-provoking, beautifully ambiguous and open to interpretation. The story has themes that some readers may find upsetting, such as domestic violence. The story also speaks to the power of friendship, and the difference it can make to us. While I connected with the poetry, I felt the book still had all of the nail-biting, page-turning energy that I would expect from a good thriller.
I really enjoyed this, as I found it original and very clever.
"The Empty Couple" is a thriller written in verse rather than traditional prose, following Ruth and Michael. At times, this felt a little bit raw and emotional to read, and I think the verse format intensified that further. Poetry always speaks to the emotions, and to those who appreciate it, it can be thought-provoking, beautifully ambiguous and open to interpretation. The story has themes that some readers may find upsetting, such as domestic violence. The story also speaks to the power of friendship, and the difference it can make to us. While I connected with the poetry, I felt the book still had all of the nail-biting, page-turning energy that I would expect from a good thriller.
I really enjoyed this, as I found it original and very clever.
December 17, 2021
Rating- 3.5
Domestic violence is a happening crime and many women just bear it but many women stand up to it and fight against it too.
It is a love story but more like a story on domestic abuse in a poetic way. Story of Ruth and Michael. All is well in their life but soon Michael loses his job and due to his unemployment, things take an ugly turn in their relationship and falls into an abusive one.
The author has done good work by bringing out this topic and giving this tale a poetic narration.
Although I felt it was a bit lacking in narration and the story was very short there should have been more details to it. I found a bit off the railing in narration as there was slight difficulty in catching points at times.
It is a good read for beginner readers as the language can be easily understood.
Domestic violence is a happening crime and many women just bear it but many women stand up to it and fight against it too.
It is a love story but more like a story on domestic abuse in a poetic way. Story of Ruth and Michael. All is well in their life but soon Michael loses his job and due to his unemployment, things take an ugly turn in their relationship and falls into an abusive one.
The author has done good work by bringing out this topic and giving this tale a poetic narration.
Although I felt it was a bit lacking in narration and the story was very short there should have been more details to it. I found a bit off the railing in narration as there was slight difficulty in catching points at times.
It is a good read for beginner readers as the language can be easily understood.
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